Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQJCPSFJCS32X0THX7G8ZE

Run Details

Duration:
16.2s
Cost:
$0.003515

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The neon green sign flickered above the doorway, casting a soft emerald glow across the worn wooden floor of The Raven's Nest. Aurora pressed her palm against the familiar door, feeling the weight of memory before stepping inside. The bar smelled of whiskey and old paper, maps and photographs blurring together on walls that seemed to hold more stories than anyone could count. She didn't notice him at first. Her eyes were adjusting to the low light, scanning the handful of patrons nursing drinks in the late afternoon stillness. The bar was nearly empty, save for a couple of regulars hunched near the far end and the bartender polishing glasses with methodical precision. "Rory?" The voice stopped her mid-stride. A voice she hadn't heard in years, but would recognize anywhere. Evan sat at a corner table, his hands wrapped around a half-empty tumbler of amber liquid. He looked different—older, certainly, but more than that. Something in his posture had changed. The confidence that once bordered on aggression had been replaced by something more brittle. Cautious. Her first instinct was to turn, to walk out. But something held her in place. Maybe curiosity. Maybe something deeper. "Hello, Evan," she said, her voice flat and controlled. He gestured to the empty chair across from him. Not a request. Not quite an invitation. Something in between. Aurora moved slowly, each step deliberate. She knew how to navigate spaces now. How to enter them on her own terms. The small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist caught the dim light as she pulled out the chair. "You look well," Evan said. It sounded like an apology and an accusation all at once. She knew what he saw. A woman who was no longer the uncertain law student he'd once controlled. Her shoulders were squared, her bright blue eyes direct and unafraid. The black hair that used to fall across her face was now cut precisely to her shoulders, framing features that had hardened with experience. "London suits you," he added. A loaded statement. They both knew why she'd left Cardiff. Why she'd fled to London so suddenly. Why her relationship with her family had become something fragile and distant. Aurora studied him. The years had not been kind. Lines carved themselves between his eyes, around his mouth. He looked tired. Defeated. Nothing like the man who had once made her feel so small. "What are you doing here?" she asked. Evan turned his glass, watching the liquid swirl. "Just passing through." But they both knew that wasn't true. Nothing in Evan's world happened by accident. From the bar, Silas Blackwood watched them. His hazel eyes narrowed slightly, taking in the tension between the two. His fingers, adorned with the silver signet ring, tapped a quiet rhythm against the bartop. Some stories, he knew, were best left uninterrupted. The conversation would unfold. The past would speak its piece. And Aurora—strong, resilient Aurora—would decide how much of that past she was willing to carry forward.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
20.7921% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount505
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"precisely"
1"slightly"
2"slowly"
3"suddenly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
20.7921% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount505
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"methodical"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"navigate"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"methodical"
2"weight"
3"navigate"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences54
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences54
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs20
mean24.95
std17.34
cv0.695
sampleLengths
063
150
21
316
445
520
69
719
839
916
1053
115
1229
1334
147
1511
1614
1734
188
1926
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences54
matches
0"been replaced"
1"were squared"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs85
matches
0"were adjusting"
1"was willing"
84.1742% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount488
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.05122950819672131
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.014344262295081968
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences56
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences56
mean8.91
std6.02
cv0.676
sampleLengths
022
116
225
36
420
524
61
75
811
916
108
116
1214
131
149
156
162
173
189
199
203
214
223
236
247
258
2618
275
2811
295
3013
3111
3224
335
343
357
367
3712
383
396
409
413
421
4312
447
458
463
477
487
497
77.3810% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.5178571428571429
totalSentences56
uniqueOpeners29
100.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he added (add)"
88.4200%