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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQJQATD70N70WYAC5N9GD9
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Model:
Qwen 3.5 397B A17B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
2m 6s
Cost:
$0.022094
Provider:
Alibaba
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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Meta
AI
The green neon sign above the entrance buzzed with a low, insectile hum, casting a sickly emerald glow over the wet pavement of Soho. Aurora Carter pushed open the door of The Raven's Nest and stepped out of the London drizzle. Inside,
the air was thick with
the scent of old wood, polished brass, and the faint, metallic tang of raincoat wool. She paused on the threshold, her bright blue eyes adjusting to the dim interior. The walls were cluttered with faded maps and black-and-white photographs of people who
look
ed like they had secrets buried in their shoe heels. She was not here for a drink. She was here because the flat above felt too small tonight, the walls pressing in like the sides of a coffin. She moved toward the bar, her shoulder-length black hair damp at the ends. She wore a dark jacket that hid the shape of her, hiding everything she could. Behind the bar, Silas Blackwood
was polishing
a glass. He moved with a deliberate, quiet authority, his grey-streaked auburn hair catching the low light. He wore his silver signet ring on his right hand, the metal clicking
softly
against the stem of the glass. He
look
ed up, his hazel eyes meeting hers. There was a slight limp in his left leg as he shifted his
weight
, an old souvenir from Prague that never
truly
healed. He did not smile. He simply nodded, ac
know
ledging her presence without demanding anything in return. Rory took a stool at the far end, away from the shadows where the secret room lay hidden behind the bookshelf. She rubbed her left wrist, fingers tracing the small crescent-shaped scar there. A childhood accident. That was the story she told. It was easier than the truth of some nights. She ordered a tonic water. Silas poured it without a word, his movements economical. He knew better than to ask why she was down here at this hour. He knew about Evan. He knew about Cardiff. He knew she
was supposed
to be studying Pre-Law, not delivering noodles for Yu-Fei Cheung and living above a spy's front. Then the door opened again. The bell chime cut through the low murmur of jazz playing from a corner speaker. A woman stepped in. She shook a umbrella, sending a spray of droplets onto the floorboards. She
was wearing
a coat that cost more than Rory made in three months. She turned, scanning the room, and her gaze locked onto the stool at the end of the bar. Rory froze. The glass in her hand felt
suddenly
slippery. Eva. It had been three years. Three years since Rory had fled Cardiff in the middle of the night, leaving her phone, her books, and her life on the kitchen counter. Three years since Eva had handed her the cash for the train ticket and told her to run. Eva walked over. She
look
ed the same, yet entirely different. The softness around her eyes had hardened into something sharper, more weary. She wore the life Rory had left behind like a heavy coat. Rory, Eva said. Her voice was quiet, barely audible over the ice settling in Rory's glass. Rory turned on the stool. She kept her face cool, the mask she had perfected since arriving in London. Hello, Eva. I heard you were here. Eva did not sit. She stood close, invading the personal space Rory guarded fiercely. I heard you were alive. I am. You
look
different. Eva's eyes scanned Rory's face, lingering on the bright blue eyes that no longer held the same light they had in university. You
look
like someone else. People change. Do they? Eva glanced at Silas. He had stopped polishing the glass. He watched them with the neutral expression of a man who had seen too many reunions end in blood. He set the glass down and moved away, giving them the illusion of privacy while staying close enough to intervene. His limp was more pronounced when he was tired. Eva reached out, her hand hovering near Rory's arm. Rory flinched, just
slightly
. Eva pulled back. I went back to Cardiff, Eva said. I saw your father. He is still
look
ing for you. He should stop. He thinks you are dead. Let him. The words
hung in the air
, heavy and cruel. Rory felt the
weight
of them settle in her stomach. She
look
ed down at her left wrist, at the crescent scar. She remembered the day she got it. She was seven. She had fallen off a bike. Her father had carried her inside. Her mother had kissed the knee. That life felt like it belonged to a different species. You left everything, Eva said. You left me. I had to. Because of him. Evan. Rory did not answer. She took a sip of the tonic water. The bitterness coated her tongue. She had changed. The girl who wanted to be a barrister
was gone
. In her place was a woman who delivered food in the rain and lived above a bar owned by a retired spymaster. She had aliases now. Laila. Malphora. Names she used when the past came too close. I am not the same person who left Cardiff, Rory said. Her voice was steady. I am not the victim you remember. No. Eva
look
ed around the bar, at the maps on the walls, at the shadows that
seemed to
stretch too long in the corners. You are something else now. I
look
at you and I do not
know
who you are. That is the point. Is it? Eva stepped closer again. Her voice dropped. I
know
what you are doing here, Rory. I
know
who owns this place. Silas Blackwood. He is not just a bartender. Rory set the glass down. The clink was sharp. Be careful, Eva. I am worried. You fled one monster only to walk into the den of another. Silas is not a monster. He is a spymaster. He uses people. He burns them out and moves on. Eva reached into her coat pocket. She pulled out a photograph. She slid it across the bar. It was a picture of Rory, taken from a distance, outside the Golden Empress restaurant. You are being watched. Not by him. By someone else. Rory
look
ed at the photograph. She did not touch it. She felt the cold creep up her spine. She had thought she was safe. She had thought the aliases worked. Who? Rory asked. I do not
know
. But they are
look
ing for Aurora Carter. Not Rory. Not the delivery girl. The daughter of Brendan Carter. Rory stood up. The stool scraped against the floor. She needed to leave. She needed to go upstairs and lock the door. She needed to check the windows. You should go, Rory said. I came to help. You helped me once. You got me out. Now you need to let me stay out. Eva
look
ed at her for a long moment. The regret was visible in the set of her shoulders, in the way her hands clenched at her sides. She had stayed. She had faced the fallout. She had dealt with Evan. She had dealt with the parents. She carried the
weight
of the life Rory had abandoned. I miss my friend, Eva said
softly
. She
is gone
. That is a tragedy. It is survival. Eva nodded. She took the photograph back. She tucked it into her pocket. She
look
ed at Silas, who
was watching
them from the other end of the bar. He gave a barely perceptible nod. He knew the cost of survival better than anyone. I will not tell them you are here, Eva said. But you cannot hide forever, Rory. The past has a long reach. I
know
. Eva turned and walked toward the door. The green neon sign
flickered
as she passed under it. She did not
look
back. The door closed, sealing the bar off from the street again. Rory stood alone at the bar. She
look
ed at her reflection in the mirror behind the bottles. The woman staring back had straight black hair and eyes like ice. She
look
ed strong. She
look
ed tired. She lifted her left hand and traced the scar on her wrist again. Silas walked over. He placed a fresh towel on the counter. He did not offer comfort. He did not offer advice. He simply stood there, a silent
sentinel
in the dim light. She
know
s too much, Silas said. His voice was a low rumble. She is a friend. Friends talk. Friends break. Rory picked up her glass. She finished the tonic water in one swallow. The ice clattered against her teeth. Then I will have to be someone else again, she said. Silas watched her. His hazel eyes were
unreadable
. He tapped his signet ring against the wood. Rest tonight, he said. Tomorrow we work. Rory nodded. She turned and walked toward the back, toward the stairs that led to the flat above. She walked past the bookshelf that hid the secret room. She did not
look
at it. She climbed the stairs, leaving the maps and the photographs and the ghosts below. The
weight
of time settled on her shoulders, heavy as a coat she could not take off. She was alive. She was safe. She was alone.
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2/17/2026, 2:43:33 AM
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native_tokens_completion
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
0
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
67.9898%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1562
totalAiIsmAdverbs
5
found
0
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
1
adverb
"softly"
count
2
2
adverb
"suddenly"
count
1
3
adverb
"truly"
count
1
highlights
0
"slightly"
1
"softly"
2
"suddenly"
3
"truly"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
55.1857%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1562
totalAiIsms
7
found
0
word
"sentinel"
count
1
1
word
"flickered"
count
1
2
word
"unreadable"
count
1
3
word
"weight"
count
4
highlights
0
"sentinel"
1
"flickered"
2
"unreadable"
3
"weight"
66.6667%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
2
maxInWindow
2
found
0
label
"air was thick with"
count
1
1
label
"hung in the air"
count
1
highlights
0
"the air was thick with"
1
"hung in the air"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
208
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
6
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
208
filterMatches
0
"look"
1
"know"
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
208
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
62
mean
25.1
std
23.84
cv
0.95
sampleLengths
0
99
1
56
2
90
3
51
4
57
5
20
6
48
7
10
8
1
9
48
10
34
11
16
12
21
13
24
14
2
15
30
16
2
17
60
18
16
19
17
20
3
21
5
22
2
23
68
24
8
25
3
26
4
27
67
28
22
29
41
30
4
31
31
32
12
33
15
34
5
35
56
36
30
37
3
38
22
39
28
40
5
41
4
42
16
43
56
44
7
45
3
46
4
47
3
48
43
49
22
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
3
totalSentences
208
matches
0
"was supposed"
1
"was gone"
2
"is gone"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
3
totalVerbs
306
matches
0
"was polishing"
1
"was wearing"
2
"was watching"
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1563
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
49
adverbRatio
0.03134996801023673
lyAdverbCount
13
lyAdverbRatio
0.008317338451695458
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
208
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
208
mean
7.48
std
5.46
cv
0.73
sampleLengths
0
24
1
17
2
21
3
14
4
23
5
7
6
21
7
13
8
15
9
9
10
15
11
20
12
8
13
23
14
4
15
11
16
21
17
12
18
3
19
6
20
9
21
5
22
9
23
14
24
4
25
4
26
21
27
5
28
15
29
4
30
12
31
14
32
18
33
2
34
8
35
1
36
5
37
25
38
18
39
3
40
7
41
12
42
12
43
3
44
13
45
5
46
14
47
2
48
5
49
4
25.0000%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
52
diversityRatio
0.19230769230769232
totalSentences
208
uniqueOpeners
40
100.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
0
fancyCount
0
fancyTags
(empty)
89.1084%