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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQKNS9S8F31KY0HRP5QFYZ
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Model:
Writer: Palmyra X5
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
26.0s
Cost:
$0.010855
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
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Meta
AI
The green glow of *The Raven’s Nest* cut through Soho’s damp evening like a secret signal, pulsing faintly against the wet pavement. Inside,
the air was thick with
the scent of aged whiskey, cedarwood polish, and the faintest trace of cigarette smoke clinging to old
velvet
curtains. Aurora sat at the far end of the bar, nursing a glass of ginger beer with lime—no alcohol tonight, not after the long ride across town on her delivery moped. She’d pulled her black hair back into a loose low ponytail, but a few strands had escaped, trailing along her cheek like spilled ink. Her jacket was still damp from the drizzle outside, and she kept running her thumb over the small crescent scar on her left wrist, a nervous habit she’d carried since childhood. Silas stood behind the bar, polishing a tumbler with deliberate care, his movements economical, precise. He paused when the door opened, the bell above jangling
softly
, and looked up. And froze. Not much made Silas flinch—years in the field had stripped reflexes of theatrics—but something about the woman who stepped inside, shaking water from her coat, stopped him mid-motion. She had her head down, wiping her face with the back of her hand, but when she looked up and their eyes met, the room
seemed to
contract. “Aurora,” he said, and his voice, usually so controlled, cracked like dry timber. “Silas,” she replied, her voice steady, but her fingers tightened around the strap of her bag. “Didn’t think you’d remember my real name.” He set the glass down
slowly
, the soft *clink*
echoing
in the sudden quiet. The few patrons—a couple in the corner booth, a man reading by the fireplace—
were absorbed
in their own worlds. It was nearly closing time, the hour when the Nest belonged more to ghosts than people. “You didn’t look like you were in a rush,” he said, recovering. “Thought I’d find you here eventually. Just not like this.” She took a seat three stools down from where she’d been. A buffer. A test. “Eva said you were running the bar. Didn’t tell me it was *this* bar.” Silas limped around the end of the counter, his left leg betraying the old injury with a subtle hitch. He stopped a few feet from her, studying her like he
was reading
a classified file he wasn’t supposed to have. The signet ring on his right hand caught the low light,
glinting
silver. “You look different,” he said. “You too,” she said. “The auburn’s gone mostly grey.” “A privilege of age. You’ve got that same sharp look in your eyes, though. Like you’re always five steps ahead.” She gave a small, humorless smile. “Survival instinct.” He gestured to the stool beside him. “Sit. Or are we doing this like soldiers across a trench?” She moved, but
slowly
. Took her time. When she sat, she kept her back straight, hands in her lap. “I don’t know what there is to say, Silas. It’s been… what? Seven years?” “Eight,” he said. “Since Prague.” The word landed like a stone in water. Aurora didn’t react outwardly, but her jaw tightened, just a fraction. Prague. The botch. The fallout. The night Silas disappeared from the agency—and from her life—after the op went sideways. He’d pulled her out, dragged her bleeding through the tunnels beneath the castle district, and then vanished without a word. She’d spent months wondering if he’d died. “You left,” she said quietly. “So did you,” he replied. “Six months later. Dropped off the grid. No warning. Just… gone.” “I had my reasons.” “I heard about Evan.” Aurora looked away, toward the wall of old photographs—faces half-forgotten, missions buried under layers of red tape and denial. One showed her, younger, barely twenty, standing beside Silas in Istanbul, both of them laughing into the sun. She hadn’t known the photo was even taken. “You never called,” she said. “After Prague. After the debrief. After *everything*.” “And you think I wanted to cut ties?” He leaned against the bar, his voice low. “They were watching you, Aurora. MI5, internal review, half of Six—they wanted you as a scapegoat. I pulled you out because I knew what they’d do. And the safest thing for you was to disappear. So I let them think you were compromised. Let them write you off.” Her eyes snapped to his. “You *sacrificed* me?” “I *saved* you,” he said, firm. “And I disappeared because if they couldn’t find me, they couldn’t force me to testify. The fewer connections, the safer we both were.” Silence stretched between them, thick with years and choices made in shadows. “You could’ve told me,” she said at last. “And say what? ‘Sorry, Rory, your career’s over, but hey, at least you’re alive’? You were twenty-two. You had plans. Law school. A future that didn’t involve dodging bullet reports in Eastern Europe.” “I *
chose* that work
,” she said, voice rising
slightly
. “I wasn’t some recruit you could just—” “I know what you chose,” he interrupted. “But choices change when someone holds a knife to your throat. And I wasn’t going to let them turn you into a warning.” She exhaled, long and slow. Then, softer: “I thought you were dead.” “I thought the same about you, when you vanished.” They looked at each other, and for the first time, something cracked—not anger, not blame, but grief. The quiet, aching kind that comes from loving someone who was never
really
gone but might as well have been. Aurora reached for her glass, took a sip. “I deliver food now. For a Chinese place in Hackney.” Silas raised an eyebrow. “You hate spicy food.” “I don’t deliver the noodles. I deliver the invoices. And the threats, when clients don’t pay. Yu-Fei says I’ve got a ‘convincing aura.’” He almost smiled. “She’s not wrong.” “And you? Running a bar? Playing bartender to drunk tourists and bad poets?” “This bar is clean. Legit. But it’s also a listening post. A relay. I don’t field anymore, but I still move information. Still keep an eye on the game.” “Still playing spymaster.” “Someone has to.” Another silence. But different now—lighter, edged with the familiar rhythm of old trust. “You could’ve reached out,” she said again, not accusing, just weary. “I did,” he said. “Once. A year ago. Sent a message through Eva. She said you weren’t ready.” Aurora looked down at her scarred wrist. “Maybe I wasn’t.” Silas reached into his jacket, pulled out an envelope—thin, unmarked, sealed with wax stamped with a raven. He set it on the bar between them. “This isn’t a recruitment,” he said. “It’s an acknowledgement. Your file was expunged six months ago. No blame. No record. You’re clean.” She didn’t touch the envelope. “I don’t want back in.” “I know. But you should know the truth. About what happened. About why I left. About why I stayed away.” She looked up, her bright blue eyes searching his face. “And now?” “Now,” he said quietly, “you’re here. And I’m here. And the Nest’s still open. For you, always.” Outside, the neon sign
flickered
, then steadied, casting its green glow over the wet street. Inside, two ghosts from the same war sat across from each other, not whole, not healed—but present. And for the first time in years, Aurora let her shoulders relax, just a little. She picked up the envelope. Didn’t open it. Just held it. “Keep the change,” she said, pushing a few coins across the bar. Silas nodded. “Always do.”
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2/17/2026, 2:42:25 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
22.2222%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
18
adverbTagCount
6
adverbTags
0
"he said, and his voice, usually so controlled, cracked like dry timber [usually so]"
1
"she replied, her voice steady, but her fingers tightened around the strap of her bag [around]"
2
"she said quietly [quietly]"
3
"she said, voice rising slightly [slightly]"
4
"she said again, not accusing, just weary [again, just]"
5
"he said quietly [quietly]"
60.5367%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1267
totalAiIsmAdverbs
5
found
0
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
1
adverb
"slowly"
count
2
2
adverb
"softly"
count
1
3
adverb
"really"
count
1
highlights
0
"slightly"
1
"slowly"
2
"softly"
3
"really"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
68.4294%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1267
totalAiIsms
4
found
0
word
"flickered"
count
1
1
word
"glinting"
count
1
2
word
"velvet"
count
1
3
word
"echoing"
count
1
highlights
0
"flickered"
1
"glinting"
2
"velvet"
3
"echoing"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"air was thick with"
count
1
highlights
0
"the air was thick with"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
77
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
77
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
112
matches
0
"chose* that work"
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
57
mean
21.93
std
21.45
cv
0.978
sampleLengths
0
132
1
29
2
2
3
56
4
13
5
23
6
49
7
22
8
29
9
53
10
5
11
9
12
20
13
8
14
18
15
33
16
5
17
65
18
5
19
16
20
4
21
4
22
45
23
12
24
64
25
8
26
29
27
12
28
8
29
33
30
16
31
30
32
12
33
9
34
37
35
18
36
8
37
23
38
6
39
13
40
29
41
3
42
3
43
13
44
11
45
18
46
10
47
25
48
22
49
10
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
77
matches
0
"were absorbed"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
1
totalVerbs
138
matches
0
"was reading"
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
776
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
31
adverbRatio
0.03994845360824742
lyAdverbCount
12
lyAdverbRatio
0.015463917525773196
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
112
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
112
mean
11.16
std
8.48
cv
0.76
sampleLengths
0
22
1
25
2
30
3
24
4
31
5
15
6
14
7
2
8
28
9
28
10
13
11
16
12
7
13
14
14
19
15
16
16
12
17
10
18
11
19
2
20
2
21
14
22
19
23
21
24
13
25
5
26
4
27
5
28
20
29
6
30
2
31
7
32
11
33
4
34
3
35
12
36
14
37
3
38
2
39
8
40
11
41
1
42
2
43
2
44
14
45
20
46
7
47
5
48
5
49
11
55.3571%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
8
diversityRatio
0.375
totalSentences
112
uniqueOpeners
42
63.8889%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
18
fancyCount
8
fancyTags
0
"she replied, her voice steady, but her fingers tightened around the strap of her bag (reply, tighten around)"
1
"he said, recovering (say, recover)"
2
"she said quietly (say quietly)"
3
"she said, voice rising slightly (say, voice rising slightly)"
4
"he interrupted (interrupt)"
5
"she said again, not accusing, just weary (say again, does not accuse)"
6
"he said quietly (say quietly)"
7
"she said, pushing a few coins across the bar (say, push)"
86.4961%