Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQKW6Q5WX8CP82AE6X6MF5

Run Details

Duration:
13.3s
Cost:
$0.000663
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The door to The Raven’s Nest swung open with a faint creak, and Aurora Carter stepped inside, her shoulders tense beneath her usual cool composure. She paused just a moment, eyes flicking over the familiar dimness of the bar—its walls adorned with cracked photographs and faded maps, the low hum of conversations blending with the clink of glass. The neon sign above the door flickered faintly, casting a sickly green glow that seemed to seep into her bones. She wandered toward the bar, her heels echoing softly on the cracked wooden floor. Behind the counter, Silas Blackwood looked up from behind a row of bottles, his hazel eyes narrowing in curiosity as they settled on her. He recognized her instantly—those sharp features, the straight black hair—yet something had shifted in her, something harder, a flicker of something behind her eyes that wasn’t there before. “Rory,” Silas greeted, voice low and gravelly, the sort that carried weight even in its casual tone. His usual calm was layered with a cautious warmth. Aurora hesitated for just a moment before offering a small, guarded smile. “Silas.” She took a step closer, her voice light but edged with something unreadable. “Been a while.” He nodded, closing the bottle in front of him. “Too long. Last I heard, you were in Cardiff. Thought you’d be buried under law books.” His eyes flicked to her left wrist, casting a shadow over the faint crescent scar there. “Guess I was wrong.” She chuckled softly, the sound lacking its usual ease. “You know me—never quite the one to follow the beaten path.” Her gaze wandered around the dim room, taking in the familiar clutter—the maps, photographs, the quiet surveillance of a life that now felt distant, even unreal. Silas leaned on the bar, his fingers brushing against the signet ring on his right hand. “Then what brings you here? London’s a long way from Cardiff. And... you don’t usually come seeking old friends.” Aurora’s eyes flickered, briefly revealing a flicker of vulnerability. She took a deep breath, then let her expression settle into something more composed. “Needed a change. Some space. And I heard this was the place to find...” she paused, choosing her words carefully, “interesting company.” Silas studied her a moment longer, brows lifting. “Didn’t peg you for the type to suddenly run toward the shadows.” She shrugged, a half-smile ghosting her lips. “Sometimes the shadows find you, no matter how much you try to drown them out.” Her voice dropped, quieter now, as if unwinding words she’d kept buried. “Evan’s not in my life anymore. But the wounds, they stay. You know how it is.” Silas nodded once, expression unreadable. “Humans are stubborn that way.” He gestured toward a stool. “Sit. Tell me what’s really going on.” She hesitated again, then eased onto the stool. Her hands rested on her lap, betraying a flicker of tension. “I got out. Left Cardiff—left everything behind.” She paused, eyes flickering to a distant corner of the room where a small, shadowed figure might have watched. “Came here to breathe.” Silas leaned forward, elbows on the bar, studying her as if trying to decipher her new face—her new life. “And what do you see now, Rory? Does London feel different from Cardiff?” She shook her head slowly. “It’s not the city. It’s me. I’ve changed.” Her bright blue eyes flicked over him, searching for recognition, for some sign she still mattered to this world. “I’m not who I was. I’ve... been through things I didn’t see coming.” Her words hung in the air, weighty and uncertain. Silas melted into a silence that stretched uncomfortably, then finally eased into a quiet, knowing expression. “You always did have a knack for outthinking everyone—including yourself.” He paused, leaning back. “Sometimes, we change because life forces us to. Sometimes, because we want to forget.” Aurora looked away briefly, her shoulders tightening again. “It’s not just that. I learned there are things you can’t outrun. Things that stay behind, waiting. The scars—visible or not—they remind us. I’ve grown good at pretending they don’t.” His gaze softened slightly, but his voice remained steady. “Enough years and the past catches up, Rory. No matter how far you run, some ghosts have a funny way of finding you.” She took a breath, wondering if she’d fully braced herself for what came next. “I didn’t come here to spill my soul,” she said softly. “Just... needed to see if old friends can still recognize the person they once knew.” He smirked faintly, a flicker of that familiar smirk she’d once admired. “Friendship’s a strange thing, Rory. It survives a lot. But it doesn’t always survive who we become.” She looked down at her hands, eyes flickering with unspoken regret. “I know I’m not the girl I used to be. But some part of me still feels like her. Sometimes, I wonder if that girl is buried deep or just hiding behind a wall I built myself.” Silas pushed off the bar and adjusted his tie, the way he always did when attention was demanded. “What you need, what we all need, is to remember that the past is a ghost—sometimes loud, sometimes silent. But we carry it, whether we want to or not.” A long silence stretched again, filled only with the hum of the bar’s quiet life. Aurora met his gaze, searching for some truth in his hazel eyes. “Do you ever wish you’d stayed the same?” she asked suddenly, voice trembling just enough to betray her vulnerability. Silas hesitated, then shrugged. “Sometimes I do. But then I remember that change is inevitable. It’s how we handle it that counts. You’re still here, Rory. Not just in this bar, but in the pieces of who you’re becoming. That’s enough for now.” She exhaled slowly, shoulders relaxing, if only a fraction. Her fingers brushed her scar absent-mindedly, as if grounding herself. “Maybe. Or maybe I’m just trying to hold onto what little I can before everything slips away.” Silas raised his glass in a quiet toast. “To new beginnings, then. And to the ghosts we carry—may they teach us what’s worth saving.” Their eyes met, a silent acknowledgment passing between them—of past wounds, of unspoken regrets, and of the fragile hope that maybe, just maybe, they could face whatever came next. Outside, the neon flickered erratically, casting shadows that danced like memories long buried, waiting to resurface in the quiet grit of the night.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
6.45% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Her gaze wandered around [around]"
1"she said softly [softly]"
2"she asked suddenly [suddenly]"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.419
leniency0.839
rawRatio0.231
effectiveRatio0.194
54.09% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1089
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"softly"
count3
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count2
3
adverb"really"
count1
4
adverb"slowly"
count2
5
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"carefully"
2"suddenly"
3"really"
4"slowly"
5"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1089
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"familiar"
count3
1
word"flickered"
count3
2
word"echoing"
count1
3
word"flicker"
count4
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count1
6
word"unreadable"
count2
7
word"flicked"
count2
8
word"tension"
count1
9
word"silence"
count2
10
word"unspoken"
count2
highlights
0"familiar"
1"flickered"
2"echoing"
3"flicker"
4"weight"
5"warmth"
6"unreadable"
7"flicked"
8"tension"
9"silence"
10"unspoken"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences48
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences48
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences66
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1076
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
72.12% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount642
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.56
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Aurora5
Carter1
Silas10
Blackwood1
persons
0"Nest"
1"Aurora"
2"Carter"
3"Silas"
4"Blackwood"
places
0"Raven"
globalScore0.721
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences42
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"glow that seemed to seep into her bones"
1"as if unwinding words she’d kept buried"
2"as if trying to decipher her new face—her new life"
3"as if grounding herself"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.929
wordCount1076
matches
0"Not just in this bar, but in the pieces of who you’re becoming"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
47.38% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean41.38
std13.07
cv0.316
sampleLengths
078
166
226
329
445
546
635
745
820
950
1022
1149
1232
1354
1444
1538
1632
1740
1829
1948
2047
2146
2243
2336
2424
2552
90.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences48
matches
0"was layered"
1"was demanded"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs119
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences66
ratio0.076
matches
0"She paused just a moment, eyes flicking over the familiar dimness of the bar—its walls adorned with cracked photographs and faded maps, the low hum of conversations blending with the clink of glass."
1"He recognized her instantly—those sharp features, the straight black hair—yet something had shifted in her, something harder, a flicker of something behind her eyes that wasn’t there before."
2"“You know me—never quite the one to follow the beaten path.” Her gaze wandered around the dim room, taking in the familiar clutter—the maps, photographs, the quiet surveillance of a life that now felt distant, even unreal."
3"Silas leaned forward, elbows on the bar, studying her as if trying to decipher her new face—her new life."
4"Their eyes met, a silent acknowledgment passing between them—of past wounds, of unspoken regrets, and of the fragile hope that maybe, just maybe, they could face whatever came next."
66.92% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount650
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.06461538461538462
lyAdverbCount22
lyAdverbRatio0.033846153846153845
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences66
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences66
mean16.3
std8.82
cv0.541
sampleLengths
025
133
220
314
424
528
617
79
812
914
103
119
1232
134
149
1537
1616
1719
189
1914
2022
218
2212
237
2427
2516
265
2710
287
298
3011
3126
324
3319
3413
355
3627
3722
3816
3914
4014
418
4230
439
4423
4514
4611
4715
4812
4917
85.86% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.5151515151515151
totalSentences66
uniqueOpeners34
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences48
matches
0"She paused just a moment,"
1"She wandered toward the bar,"
2"He recognized her instantly—those sharp"
3"His usual calm was layered"
4"She took a step closer,"
5"He nodded, closing the bottle"
6"His eyes flicked to her"
7"She chuckled softly, the sound"
8"Her gaze wandered around the"
9"She took a deep breath,"
10"she paused, choosing her words"
11"She shrugged, a half-smile ghosting"
12"Her voice dropped, quieter now,"
13"He gestured toward a stool"
14"She hesitated again, then eased"
15"Her hands rested on her"
16"She paused, eyes flickering to"
17"She shook her head slowly."
18"Her bright blue eyes flicked"
19"Her words hung in the"
ratio0.625
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount46
totalSentences48
matches
0"The door to The Raven’s"
1"She paused just a moment,"
2"The neon sign above the"
3"She wandered toward the bar,"
4"He recognized her instantly—those sharp"
5"Silas greeted, voice low and"
6"His usual calm was layered"
7"Aurora hesitated for just a"
8"She took a step closer,"
9"He nodded, closing the bottle"
10"His eyes flicked to her"
11"She chuckled softly, the sound"
12"Her gaze wandered around the"
13"Silas leaned on the bar,"
14"Aurora’s eyes flickered, briefly revealing"
15"She took a deep breath,"
16"she paused, choosing her words"
17"Silas studied her a moment"
18"She shrugged, a half-smile ghosting"
19"Her voice dropped, quieter now,"
ratio0.958
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The neon sign above the door flickered faintly, casting a sickly green glow that seemed to seep into her bones."
1"He recognized her instantly—those sharp features, the straight black hair—yet something had shifted in her, something harder, a flicker of something behind her …"
2"Silas leaned forward, elbows on the bar, studying her as if trying to decipher her new face—her new life."
3"Silas melted into a silence that stretched uncomfortably, then finally eased into a quiet, knowing expression."
4"Her fingers brushed her scar absent-mindedly, as if grounding herself."
5"Outside, the neon flickered erratically, casting shadows that danced like memories long buried, waiting to resurface in the quiet grit of the night."
86.54% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she asked suddenly, voice trembling just enough to betray her vulnerability"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.065
leniency0.129
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
63.6668%