| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 69.36% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 979 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "cautiously" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "sharply" | | 3 | "suddenly" | | 4 | "carefully" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 979 | | totalAiIsms | 27 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "sentinel" | | 1 | "loomed" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "scanning" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "almost alive" | | 6 | "could feel" | | 7 | "echo" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "flicker" | | 10 | "uncanny" | | 11 | "footsteps" | | 12 | "sense of" | | 13 | "pulsed" | | 14 | "warmth" | | 15 | "whisper" | | 16 | "shattered" | | 17 | "tension" | | 18 | "sinister" | | 19 | "resolve" | | 20 | "flickered" |
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| 33.33% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 3 | | maxInWindow | 3 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
| | 2 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes widened" | | 1 | "clenched her jaw" | | 2 | "The air was thick with" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 960 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 11 | | wordCount | 960 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.21 | | worstName | "Heartstone" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 0.5 | | worstWindowName | "Heartstone" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Eva | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Eva" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "as if listening" | | 1 | "seemed subdued as if listening" | | 2 | "quite peg" | | 3 | "sounded like something whispering her name" | | 4 | "Not quite human, not quite something else, but certainly not alone" | | 5 | "not quite something else, but certainly not alone" | | 6 | "not quite words but a promise or a threat" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 5 | | per1kWords | 5.208 | | wordCount | 960 | | matches | | 0 | "Not a breeze, but a slow, deliberate movement, like a ripple sliding across th" | | 1 | "Not quite human, not quite something else, but certainly not alone" | | 2 | "not quite something else, but certainly not alone" | | 3 | "not quite words but a promise" | | 4 | "not with fear, but with something sharper: a thrilling, terrifying clarity" |
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| 67.16% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "screamed that this" | | 1 | "insinuating that the" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 27 | | mean | 35.56 | | std | 19.57 | | cv | 0.55 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 67 | | 1 | 63 | | 2 | 68 | | 3 | 55 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 51 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 44 | | 9 | 58 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 53 | | 12 | 42 | | 13 | 47 | | 14 | 30 | | 15 | 33 | | 16 | 42 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 43 | | 19 | 26 | | 20 | 28 | | 21 | 30 | | 22 | 36 | | 23 | 44 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 41 | | 26 | 24 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 162 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 20 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 16 | | totalSentences | 67 | | ratio | 0.239 | | matches | | 0 | "Beyond that, the standing stones loomed—silent, shadowed monoliths that marked the entrance to the Fae Grove, a place whispers refused to forget." | | 1 | "The faint pulse of her Heartstone Pendant—wrapped securely around her neck beneath her jacket—felt warmer now, almost alive, thrumming softly against her skin." | | 2 | "She’d promised Eva she’d come—promised herself she’d do this—to look for the truth, even if it meant venturing somewhere she could feel the wrongness clawing at her from the inside out." | | 3 | "The grove was quiet at first, too quiet—too still." | | 4 | "No, not whispers—more like a muffled hum, a faint echo of voices that shouldn't be there." | | 5 | "A flicker—just a flicker at the edge of her vision." | | 6 | "She knew it—the edges of her awareness tingled with the sense of unseen eyes, of something lurking just behind the veil of reality." | | 7 | "The trees stood silent, their ancient limbs unmoving, but that ripple—like a finger just dipped into the fabric of the world—suggested something watched." | | 8 | "When she drew her hand back, she felt it—faint warmth seeping through her fingertips, a whisper of reassurance, or perhaps warning." | | 9 | "A sharp sound shattered the night—soft, but distinctive: the faint scrape of stone against stone." | | 10 | "No panic—just the acute awareness that she was on the cusp of something, and retreat was no longer an option." | | 11 | "The flicker had vanished for a moment, but the feeling remained—alive, watching, waiting." | | 12 | "A flickering outline—a figure, barely perceptible, shifting at the edge of her vision." | | 13 | "Then, the shadow moved again, lingering just behind the stones—more defined now, rippling like disturbed water." | | 14 | "A whisper brushed her ear, cold and near—something that was not quite words but a promise or a threat." | | 15 | "And somewhere behind the shadows, something watched her with eyes that flickered like dying embers, waiting—and maybe, just maybe—hoping she’d stay a little longer." |
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| 74.35% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 981 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 68 | | adverbRatio | 0.06931702344546381 | | lyAdverbCount | 18 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01834862385321101 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 67 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 67 | | mean | 14.33 | | std | 7.92 | | cv | 0.552 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 31 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 28 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 23 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 23 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 20 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 22 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 39.55% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.29850746268656714 | | totalSentences | 67 | | uniqueOpeners | 20 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "Then came the sounds." | | 1 | "Then, a shadow shifted." | | 2 | "Of course it did." | | 3 | "Naturally, the place that defied" | | 4 | "Just quiet observation." | | 5 | "Then, the shadow moved again," |
| | ratio | 0.09 | |
| 58.81% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "She hesitated just for a" | | 1 | "Her bright blue eyes darted" | | 2 | "She’d promised Eva she’d come—promised" | | 3 | "She pulled her jacket tighter," | | 4 | "Her ears strained but no" | | 5 | "She froze, shoulders tense, eyes" | | 6 | "She was alone." | | 7 | "She took a shallow breath," | | 8 | "Her footsteps crunched softly on" | | 9 | "She knew it—the edges of" | | 10 | "It wasn’t just her imagination." | | 11 | "Her breath hitched." | | 12 | "Her eyes widened, scanning the" | | 13 | "She instinctively reached for the" | | 14 | "It pulsed faintly, warm now," | | 15 | "She turned sharply, every muscle" | | 16 | "It came from behind the" | | 17 | "Her breath came faster now," | | 18 | "She moved stealthily, limbs trembling" | | 19 | "Her skin prickled as if" |
| | ratio | 0.403 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 47 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "The air was thick with" | | 1 | "The ancient oak stood sentinel" | | 2 | "She hesitated just for a" | | 3 | "Her bright blue eyes darted" | | 4 | "The faint pulse of her" | | 5 | "She’d promised Eva she’d come—promised" | | 6 | "The grove was quiet at" | | 7 | "The wildflowers beneath her feet," | | 8 | "She pulled her jacket tighter," | | 9 | "Her ears strained but no" | | 10 | "She froze, shoulders tense, eyes" | | 11 | "A flicker—just a flicker at" | | 12 | "She was alone." | | 13 | "She took a shallow breath," | | 14 | "The grove’s boundaries always held" | | 15 | "Tonight, it felt alive in" | | 16 | "Her footsteps crunched softly on" | | 17 | "Something was wrong." | | 18 | "She knew it—the edges of" | | 19 | "It wasn’t just her imagination." |
| | ratio | 0.701 | |
| 74.63% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "No matter how carefully she" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 21.28% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Beyond that, the standing stones loomed—silent, shadowed monoliths that marked the entrance to the Fae Grove, a place whispers refused to forget." | | 1 | "Her bright blue eyes darted around, scanning the shadows that played tricks with her vision, flickering at the edge of her focus like half-remembered nightmares…" | | 2 | "The wildflowers beneath her feet, usually resilient even in the dead of night, seemed subdued, as if listening." | | 3 | "She pulled her jacket tighter, her hand instinctively brushing the scar on her left wrist, the crescent-shaped scar that reminded her of childhood accidents, of…" | | 4 | "The grove’s boundaries always held an uncanny stillness, a kind of watchfulness that went beyond the usual quiet." | | 5 | "Her skin prickled as if her own shadow had suddenly stretched long and sinister, reaching out from her form beneath her coat." | | 6 | "No matter how carefully she crept closer, no matter how strong her resolve, the grove had already begun to claim her, whispering secrets that were not hers to k…" | | 7 | "And somewhere behind the shadows, something watched her with eyes that flickered like dying embers, waiting—and maybe, just maybe—hoping she’d stay a little lon…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |