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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQMBA68MW961KZHNRDA9SV
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Model:
Qwen 3.5 Plus (2026-02-15)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
31.8s
Cost:
$0.004897
Provider:
Alibaba
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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Meta
AI
The rain in Soho didn't wash things clean; it just made the grime slicker, turning the pavement into a black mirror that
fractured
the city's neon heartbeat. Aurora Carter pushed through the heavy oak door of The Raven's Nest, shaking her umbrella with a sharp, practiced flick of her wrist. The distinctive green neon sign above the entrance buzzed with a low, electric hum, casting a sickly emerald glow over the wet cobblestones before she stepped inside and left the weather behind. The air in the bar was thick, a familiar cocktail of aged whiskey, lemon oil, and the damp wool of coats left too long on hooks. It was quiet for a Tuesday, the kind of hushed atmosphere Silas Blackwood cultivated intentionally. He didn't run a place for rowdy students or tourists looking for a pint; he ran a listening post disguised as a pub. The walls, papered in peeling maps of forgotten empires and black-and-white photographs of men who looked like they knew too much,
seemed to
lean in, absorbing the sparse conversation. Aurora
navigated
the room with the ease of someone who knew where the floorboards creaked. She wasn't here for a deli
very
tonight; Yu-Fei's Golden Empress had closed early, and the flat above the bar felt too small, too filled with the ghost of a life she was still trying to outrun. She needed the noise, or rather, the specific silence Silas provided. She spotted him immediately. Silas sat in his usual corner booth, the one shielded by a towering stack of encyclopedias that served as a poor disguise for the hidden bookshelf door behind it. He
was nursing
a glass of something amber, his posture rigid despite the slight, permanent tilt of his left leg extended under the table. The injury from Prague, the one that had ended his career and gifted him this limp, anchored him to the spot. His grey-streaked auburn hair
was combated
back, and his beard, neatly trimmed, framed a face that had settled into lines of permanent assessment. He looked up as she approached, his hazel eyes narrowing
slightly
before widening in recognition. For a heartbeat, the mask of the retired spymaster slipped, revealing the man who had once watched a teenager study law textbooks at this
very
table while he smoothed out intelligence reports. "Rory," he said, his voice a low rumble that cut through the jazz playing
softly
overhead. "I hadn't expected you until Friday. Did Eva send you?" Aurora stopped at the edge of the booth. She felt
suddenly
exposed, her straight shoulder-length black hair damp against her cheeks, her bright blue eyes searching his face for the approval she used to crave. "No. No Eva. Just... needed to get out of the flat." Silas gestured to the seat opposite him with a hand adorned by his silver signet ring. "Sit. You look like you've been walking through the Thames." She slid into the booth, the leather creaking under her
weight
. At twenty-five, she felt older than the boy she had been when she first started coming here, yet in Silas's presence, she shrank back into that frightened girl fleeing Cardiff, fleeing an abusive ex named Evan, fleeing the expectations of a barrister father and a teacher mother who wanted a lawyer, not a runaway. "You're staring," Silas noted, taking a slow sip of his drink. His gaze was clinical, dissecting. "You've changed." "Haven't we all?" Aurora deflected, tracing the grain of the wooden table. Her fingers brushed the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a souvenir from a childhood fall she barely remembered but touched whenever she
was anxious
. "It's been three years, Silas. People change in three years." "Not like this." He set his glass down with a deliberate click. "The last time I saw you, you were carrying a stack of Pre-Law essays and talking about Oxford. You had a fire in you, Rory. A direction. Now you look like you're waiting for the other shoe to drop." The accusation
hung in the air
, heavier than the smoke that used to fill the room before the smoking ban. Aurora flinched, the cool-headed intelligence she prided herself on faltering. She had built a life in London on quick, out-of-the-box thinking, on surviving day to day delivering noodles for Yu-Fei and hiding in the shadows of Silas's empire. But hearing him say it aloud stripped the defense away. "I couldn't do it, Silas," she whispered, the words tasting like ash. "Law. It wasn't me. And then... e
very
thing with Evan happened so fast. I had to leave." "I know about Evan," Silas said
softly
. The tenderness in his voice was more disarming than his critique. "I kept tabs. Old habits. But knowing you left him doesn't explain why you've stopped moving forward. You're hiding, Aurora. You're using my bar as a bunker." "I'm safe here," she countered, her voice硬ening. "That's what matters." "Safe is a relative term," Silas murmured, his eyes drifting to the old map of Prague pinned to the wall behind her. "I
learned that the
hard way. Safety is often just a pause before the next catastrophe. You think I don't see it? The way you check the exits e
very
time you walk in? The way you flinch when the door opens too loudly? You're not living, Rory. You're surviving. And there is a
weight
to that which will crush you eventually." Aurora looked down at her hands. They were rougher now, stained occasionally with soy sauce and grease from the deli
very
bags, a far cry from the clean, manicured hands of the daughter of Brendan and Jennifer Carter. She thought of her mother in Wales, probably grading papers, and her father in Cardiff, likely arguing a case in court, both of them wondering where their clever daughter had gone. The regret was a physical ache in her chest, a hollow space where her ambition used to be. "What was I supposed to do?" she asked, the frustration finally bleeding through. "Go back? Pretend none of it happened? I lost e
very
thing, Silas. My degree, my confidence, my... myself." "You didn't lose yourself," Silas corrected, leaning forward. The limp in his leg shifted as he adjusted his position, a reminder of his own botched operation, his own forced retirement. "You misplaced it. There's a difference. I spent years thinking my knee meant the end of my usefulness. I thought I was broken goods. But look around you." He swept his hand toward the dimly lit room, the secret door hidden in plain sight. "I built something new. It's not what I planned, but it's mine. And it's enough." He reached across the table, his silver ring catching the low light. "You have a mind that cuts through nonsense faster than anyone I've ever met. You saved my ass more than once just by noticing details others missed. Don't tell me that delivering food is the peak of your potential. It's a bridge, Aurora. Not a destination." Aurora looked up, meeting his hazel eyes. The tension between who she had been—the promising scholar, the hopeful friend—and who she was now—the wary survivor, the deli
very
girl—felt like a taut wire ready to snap. But beneath the regret, beneath the fear of Evan's shadow still lurking in her periphery, something else stirred. It was faint, a ember buried under ash, but it was heat. "I don't know how to start again," she admitted, her voice barely audible. Silas sat back, the ghost of a smile touching his lips. "You don't start again. You just start. You take the next step. Maybe it's
finishing that degree
part-time. Maybe it's using that brilliant head of yours for something other than
navigating
London traffic in the rain. But you stop hiding in my back room." The jazz track changed, a slower, melancholic saxophone filling the silence that followed. Aurora took a deep breath, the scent of old paper and whiskey grounding her. She looked at her wrist, at the crescent scar, and then at Silas. The
weight
of the
unspoken
years hadn't vanished, but it felt lighter, shared now. "Alright," she said, the word feeling foreign but necessary. "Alright, Si." Silas nodded once, a subtle acknowledgment of a treaty signed. He signaled to the bartender, a young man who knew better than to ask questions. "Two whiskeys. The good stuff. We have some planning to do." Aurora watched him,
really
watched him, seeing not just the broken agent with the limp, but the mentor who had never actually given up on her. Outside, the rain continued to hammer against the green neon sign, washing the streets of Soho, but inside, the air felt clear for the first time in years.
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2/17/2026, 2:42:52 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
33.3333%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
10
adverbTagCount
3
adverbTags
0
"he said, his voice a low rumble that cut through the jazz playing softly overhead [softly]"
1
"Silas said softly [softly]"
2
"she admitted, her voice barely audible [barely]"
59.0164%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1464
totalAiIsmAdverbs
6
found
0
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
1
adverb
"softly"
count
2
2
adverb
"suddenly"
count
1
3
adverb
"really"
count
1
4
adverb
"very"
count
1
highlights
0
"slightly"
1
"softly"
2
"suddenly"
3
"really"
4
"very"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
52.1858%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1464
totalAiIsms
7
found
0
word
"unspoken"
count
1
1
word
"fractured"
count
1
2
word
"weight"
count
3
3
word
"navigated"
count
1
4
word
"navigating"
count
1
highlights
0
"unspoken"
1
"fractured"
2
"weight"
3
"navigated"
4
"navigating"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"hung in the air"
count
1
highlights
0
"hung in the air"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
1
narrationSentences
61
matches
0
"was anxious"
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
61
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
2
totalSentences
77
matches
0
"learned that the"
1
"finishing that degree"
97.5375%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
28
mean
51.79
std
25.45
cv
0.491
sampleLengths
0
82
1
93
2
62
3
101
4
47
5
26
6
46
7
26
8
65
9
18
10
48
11
51
12
68
13
28
14
45
15
10
16
83
17
86
18
30
19
89
20
58
21
65
22
13
23
55
24
54
25
11
26
36
27
54
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
61
matches
0
"was combated"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
1
totalVerbs
165
matches
0
"was nursing"
94.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1067
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount
38
adverbRatio
0.03561387066541706
lyAdverbCount
18
lyAdverbRatio
0.016869728209934397
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
77
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
77
mean
18.83
std
11.87
cv
0.63
sampleLengths
0
27
1
23
2
32
3
26
4
15
5
23
6
29
7
15
8
36
9
11
10
4
11
29
12
24
13
21
14
23
15
15
16
32
17
16
18
10
19
8
20
27
21
11
22
16
23
10
24
11
25
54
26
11
27
5
28
2
29
12
30
26
31
10
32
12
33
39
34
20
35
10
36
28
37
10
38
12
39
16
40
7
41
11
42
27
43
7
44
3
45
22
46
61
47
6
48
31
49
31
50.6494%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
6
diversityRatio
0.35064935064935066
totalSentences
77
uniqueOpeners
27
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
10
fancyCount
8
fancyTags
0
"he said, his voice a low rumble that cut through the jazz playing softly overhead (say, softly overhead)"
1
"Silas noted, taking a slow sip of his drink (note, take)"
2
"she whispered, the words tasting like ash (whisper)"
3
"Silas said softly (say softly)"
4
"she countered, her voice硬ening (counter, voice硬en)"
5
"Silas murmured, his eyes drifting to the old map of Prague pinned to the wall behind her (murmur, drift pin)"
6
"Silas corrected, leaning forward (correct)"
7
"she admitted, her voice barely audible (admit)"
81.5719%