| 85.7143% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "said DC Marcus Lyle, crouched near the far wall by the victim’s body, his pale face illuminated only by the weak glow of a handheld torch [only]" | | 1 | "Eva said softly, her voice tight but determined [softly]" |
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| 23.2982% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked) | | wordCount | 1043 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "quickly" | | 2 | "sharply" | | 3 | "slowly" | | 4 | "softly" | | 5 | "very" |
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| 80.0000% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.0000% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.0000% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked) | | wordCount | 1043 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "tangible" | | 1 | "tinged" | | 2 | "resonance" | | 3 | "flicked" | | 4 | "trembled" | | 5 | "quivered" | | 6 | "unspoken" | | 7 | "unsettled" | | 8 | "intricate" | | 9 | "furrowed" | | 10 | "weight" | | 11 | "footsteps" | | 12 | "echoed" | | 13 | "etched" |
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| 100.0000% | Cliche density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.0000% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Filter word density | Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 44 | | mean | 23.3 | | std | 13.5 | | cv | 0.58 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 74 | | 1 | 38 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 45 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 46 | | 8 | 30 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 44 | | 12 | 30 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 36 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 34 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 27 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 26 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 32 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 27 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 37 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 28 | | 34 | 24 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 30 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 24 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 32 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 9 |
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| 100.0000% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤5% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | |
| 100.0000% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 124 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.4087% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 663 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "lost under strange circumstances" |
| | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.04072398190045249 | | lyAdverbCount | 18 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.027149321266968326 | |
| 100.0000% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 94 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 94 | | mean | 10.9 | | std | 6.98 | | cv | 0.64 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 32 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 34 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 30 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 22 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 67.7305% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.425531914893617 | | totalSentences | 94 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 14.2857% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 14 | | fancyCount | 9 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "said DC Marcus Lyle, crouched near the far wall by the victim’s body, his pale face illuminated only by the weak glow of a handheld torch (say crouch handhold)" | | 1 | "she muttered, recognition steadying her voice (mutter, steady)" | | 2 | "Quinn asked, glancing toward the entrance where the rusted turnstile stood locked, a pile of bone tokens strewn nearby (ask, glance rust stand lock, strew)" | | 3 | "Eva said softly, her voice tight but determined (say softly)" | | 4 | "she said, brushing ash from the chalk lines with tentative fingers (say, brush line)" | | 5 | "Quinn muttered (mutter)" | | 6 | "Eva said, pointing (say, point)" | | 7 | "Quinn said, voice low and steady (say, voice)" | | 8 | "Quinn concluded (conclude)" |
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