| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he said quietly [quietly]" | | 1 | "Lucien’s amber eye softened just [just]" | | 2 | "she said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.448 | | leniency | 0.897 | | rawRatio | 0.231 | | effectiveRatio | 0.207 | |
| 86.79% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 757 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 60.37% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 757 | | totalAiIsms | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "unreadable" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "glint" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "dancing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 45 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 45 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 746 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 95.85% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 14 | | wordCount | 554 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 1.08 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 2 | | Lucien | 4 | | Rory | 6 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.958 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "as if counting the seconds before the past walked in unbidden" | | 1 | "as if touching him would shatter the fragile balance" | | 2 | "as if understanding more than she said" |
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| 65.95% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.34 | | wordCount | 746 | | matches | | 0 | "Not as the man who left, but as the one who needs you" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 99.86% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 22.61 | | std | 11.29 | | cv | 0.5 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 32 | | 1 | 60 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 42 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 40 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 36 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 26 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 27 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 32 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 38 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 24 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 11 |
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| 97.47% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 45 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 101 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 61 | | ratio | 0.131 | | matches | | 0 | "His platinum blond hair was slicked back to perfection, but his eyes told a different tale—one amber, one black, both catching the light and holding a storm." | | 1 | "The flat smelled of old paper and spiced tea—Eva’s fingerprints in every corner, her absent presence somehow sharper with him here." | | 2 | "Rory laughed—bitter, like the dregs of burnt coffee in the mug she hadn’t finished." | | 3 | "She swallowed, the small crescent scar on her wrist—a scar from years ago—suddenly feeling like a frozen pulse beneath her sleeve." | | 4 | "He stepped closer, the scent of his cologne—something sharp, mingled with smoke and something faintly unsettling—drawing her in despite herself." | | 5 | "Her fingers hovered an inch from his arm before retreating—as if touching him would shatter the fragile balance." | | 6 | "She searched his face—saw the truth tangled beneath the shadows." | | 7 | "For a long moment, they just looked at each other—two damaged souls dancing on the edge of something fragile and fierce." |
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| 99.44% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 566 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 23 | | adverbRatio | 0.04063604240282685 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014134275618374558 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 61 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 61 | | mean | 12.23 | | std | 6.23 | | cv | 0.509 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 5 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 31 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 86.89% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.5409836065573771 | | totalSentences | 61 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 44 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, the door creaked open." | | 1 | "Instead, she reached out, brushing" |
| | ratio | 0.045 | |
| 10.91% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 44 | | matches | | 0 | "His tailored charcoal suit was" | | 1 | "His platinum blond hair was" | | 2 | "she said, the words clipped" | | 3 | "He stepped inside without invitation," | | 4 | "he said quietly, voice dropping" | | 5 | "he answered, his gaze sharp" | | 6 | "She blinked, heartbeat quickening." | | 7 | "Her mind ricocheted through the" | | 8 | "She swallowed, the small crescent" | | 9 | "Her voice dipped, vulnerability cracking" | | 10 | "He stepped closer, the scent" | | 11 | "he said low" | | 12 | "Her eyes narrowed, but she" | | 13 | "he murmured, a teasing glint" | | 14 | "Her fingers hovered an inch" | | 15 | "He nodded, as if understanding" | | 16 | "She searched his face—saw the" | | 17 | "she said finally, gesturing at" | | 18 | "He eased down onto the" | | 19 | "he began, voice tight with" |
| | ratio | 0.523 | |
| 16.82% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 44 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora’s fingers hovered over the" | | 1 | "Lucien stood there, framed by" | | 2 | "His tailored charcoal suit was" | | 3 | "His platinum blond hair was" | | 4 | "Rory said, voice tight even" | | 5 | "Lucien smiled, a slow, almost" | | 6 | "The flat smelled of old" | | 7 | "Rory crossed her arms, glancing" | | 8 | "she said, the words clipped" | | 9 | "He stepped inside without invitation," | | 10 | "Ivory handle glinted under the" | | 11 | "he said quietly, voice dropping" | | 12 | "Rory laughed—bitter, like the dregs" | | 13 | "he answered, his gaze sharp" | | 14 | "She blinked, heartbeat quickening." | | 15 | "Her mind ricocheted through the" | | 16 | "The way he’d left without" | | 17 | "Lucien’s amber eye softened, just" | | 18 | "She swallowed, the small crescent" | | 19 | "Her voice dipped, vulnerability cracking" |
| | ratio | 0.886 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 44 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 80.75% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 23 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora’s fingers hovered over the worn brass doorknob, heart locking into a rhythm too slow, deliberate, as if counting the seconds before the past walked in un…" | | 1 | "Her fingers hovered an inch from his arm before retreating—as if touching him would shatter the fragile balance." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, the words clipped but not loud" | | 1 | "he answered, his gaze sharp and unreadable" | | 2 | "Her voice dipped, vulnerability cracking through the edges" | | 3 | "he murmured, a teasing glint flickering through his eyes" | | 4 | "he began, voice tight with restraint" | | 5 | "he said, voice barely a breath" | | 6 | "she said, voice steadier than she felt" |
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| 81.03% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.345 | | leniency | 0.69 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.138 | |