Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
566
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
23
adverbRatio
0.04063604240282685
lyAdverbCount
8
lyAdverbRatio
0.014134275618374558
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
61
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
61
mean
12.23
std
6.23
cv
0.509
sampleLengths
0
27
1
5
2
12
3
21
4
27
5
31
6
10
7
4
8
21
9
21
10
12
11
8
12
14
13
8
14
18
15
14
16
10
17
8
18
10
19
4
20
17
21
15
22
10
23
10
24
11
25
21
26
13
27
2
28
20
29
7
30
15
31
8
32
17
33
8
34
18
35
9
36
9
37
6
38
10
39
17
40
9
41
3
42
13
43
9
44
10
45
3
46
7
47
5
48
16
49
11
86.8852%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
2
diversityRatio
0.5409836065573771
totalSentences
61
uniqueOpeners
33
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
11
fancyCount
9
fancyTags
0
"Rory said, voice tight even as she shut the door behind him, annoyance warring with something hotter and rawer beneath the surface (say, voice shut war)"
1
"she said, the words clipped but not loud (say, clip)"
2
"he said quietly, voice dropping to something closer to a confession than a demand (say quietly, voice dropping)"
3
"he murmured, a teasing glint flickering through his eyes (murmur, flicker)"
4
"she said finally, gesturing at the cluttered couch (say finally, gesture)"
5
"he began, voice tight with restraint (begin, voice)"
6
"she whispered (whisper)"
7
"he said, voice barely a breath (say, voice barely)"
8
"she said, voice steadier than she felt (say, voice feel)"