Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQMHS9Z899AM2ARZDE9B7M

Run Details

Duration:
49.2s
Cost:
$0.001616
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon of The Raven’s Nest sputtered in the night air, a bruised circle of light against the brickwork of Soho. For Aurora Carter, the sign was less a destination than a familiar punctuation mark in a chaotic week. She pushed the heavy glass door open, the chime of a hundred stray thoughts scattering as the cool, acrid scent of stale tobacco and floor polish hit her. It was early for a Friday, which explained the emptiness of the bar. She slid onto a stool at the far end of the counter, away from the other few solitary figures shrouded in the gloom. She hadn’t meant to come here. She was supposed to be running errands after her shift at Golden Empress, but the migraine that had been throbbing behind her eyes since Cardiff felt amplified in the gloom of The Nest. She rested her elbows on the grain of the wood, watching the condensation bead on a glass coaster. She needed a whiskey. Not for the taste—she preferred tonic—but for the burn that might knock the headache into submission. "Top shelf. Keeping it on you?" The voice was deep, gravelly, filtered through years of smoke and something harder, more cynical. It stopped the blood in Aurora’s veins. She didn't turn around immediately. She knew that voice. She hadn't heard it in nearly a decade, since the summer before her final year of law school, a summer that had dissolved into a frantic, humid panic. Slowly, she turned. Silas Blackwood stood behind the mahogany counter. He was older than she remembered—much older. The sharp, earnest boy with the unruly dark hair was gone, replaced by a man who looked carved from weathered bone. His hair was now a steel-grey streak, cut short and neat to hide the thinning at the crown, and the beard was trimmed to a precise line that mirrored the map work pinned to the walls behind him. He wore a rolled-up flannel shirt, the sleeves revealing wrists as thick and pale as cane handles. But the eyes gave him away. Hazel, deeply set, tired. They still held that same quiet authority she remembered, though it was now heavy with the weight of decades. "You remembered," Aurora said. Her voice was steadier than she felt. "I usually order a tonic water these days. Too much law school induced sleep deprivation." Silas smiled, a faint, private gesture that didn't quite reach the corners of his eyes. He set a glass down and poured two fingers of Scotch. "I know everything about sleep deprivation, Rory. Or at least, I used to. My boss tells me it’s a biologically healthy amount of hours now." He slid the drink toward her. The glass clinked against the wood. "I remember when you used to talk about becoming a judge," Silas said, leaning back against the counter, his attention drifting toward the door as if expecting others. "You’d sit on these very stools with Eva, dissecting arguments while she ate her fries. You were so... certain." "Certainty is just a lack of information," Aurora said, raising the glass to her lips. The amber liquid burned, sharp and sweet. It was good. "It's gone now. I ran." "I know." "Did you know?" Aurora asked, turning fully to face him. She rested her chin in her palm, her left wrist—the small crescent-shaped scar that she had picked at in anxiety for years—visible against the dark fabric of her sweater. "Did you know I was leaving?" "I had my suspicions. Eva called me once, three years ago. She sounded terrified." A shiver, cold and visceral, went down Aurora’s spine. She looked down at her drink. She had forgotten Eva’s voice. She had buried so much of that summer in Cardiff that she had forgotten the cracks in the foundation, the gaslighting whispers of Evan that had saturated every room she walked into. "I shouldn't have left so fast," Aurora murmured. "I just... I ran to London like a rabbit. I changed my name. Rory. I took a job delivering food. I stopped talking to everyone." Silas’s expression softened, the lines of his face relaxing just a fraction. He reached into his pocket and retrieved a polishing cloth, though no glass was immediately in front of him. He stared at the cloth instead. "I didn't expect you to stay. I didn't expect you to run into something like this, either." "This" was a euphemism for the world Silas inhabited. Or rather, the world he had retreated from. Aurora had heard rumors. A spy. An operative. It sounded like the plot of a cheap novel, but looking at Silas, seeing the tension coiled in his shoulders, she realized how absurd it was to call it a novel. His life was grit and subterfuge, a life she had chosen to completely reject. "I’m not that girl anymore," Aurora said, a defensive edge creeping into her tone. She took another drink, needing the liquid courage to ask the question she had rehearsed a thousand times. "You look... different, Silas. You look tired. Is the business good?" "It pays the bills," he said. "And it keeps people out of the hotel room next door." He paused, looking at her over the rim of the glass he’d poured for himself. "Why The Nest, Rory? You could have gone anywhere. A diner on King's Road. A wine bar." A soft, humorless laugh escaped her. "Because it’s familiar. And because I couldn't face coming back to Cardiff. London is empty. It’s loud, but it’s empty." She gestured vaguely to the empty stools. "I’m just... I’m trying to survive. I work for Yu-Fei now. When I’m not on the bike, I’m lifting boxes. I didn't think coming here would make me feel so small." "You're not small," Silas said, his voice dropping an octave, losing the casual veneer. He reached out, his hand hovering for a moment before resting gently on her forearm. His grip was warm, dry, and surprisingly strong despite the evident frailty of his left leg. He gave a slight squeeze, checking her pulse, or perhaps just anchoring her. "You ran because you had to. That takes courage. You survived." Aurora looked at his hand on her arm. He noticed the scar on her wrist. He always had a sharp eye for details. "It hurts, you know," she confessed, her voice barely above a whisper. "The silence. I didn't realize how loud it would be." She looked up at him, her bright blue eyes searching his face for a truth she wasn't sure he wanted to give. "I thought about you a lot. I wondered where you were. I thought maybe you were exactly where you wanted to be." "I am," Silas said. "But it’s quiet. Maybe too quiet." He withdrew his hand and took a sip of his Scotch. The ice cubes clinked loudly in the relative silence. "I’m just a bartender now, Rory. And before that, I was a tourist in my own life. It gets... monotonous." "You were an intelligence operative," she stated, the pieces clicking into place with a heavy thud. She didn't ask how he knew, or how he had survived. She just knew. "Theoretically," Silas amended. "Theoretically." They sat in a comfortable, terrible silence for a while. The bar was settling down. The hum of the refrigerator became the loudest sound in the room. Aurora watched the dust motes dancing in the single beam of light coming from a bulb overhead. She felt the weight of the years pressing against her ribs, the physical manifestation of Evan’s grip on her neck finally loosening, replaced by the phantom touch of the years she had run. "Did you ever find him?" Silas asked, his gaze fixed on a spot on the wall map behind the bottles. "Evan." "No. I changed my phone number, moved three times, worked under false names for the delivery gig. I dropped off the grid enough that even you might have missed it." She managed a small smile. "Though, I suspect if I called from a burner phone, you’d pick it up within ten minutes." "I would." "I believe you." Silas turned to her then, his hazel eyes locking onto hers. There was a profound sadness there, mixed with a deep, abiding affection that made Aurora’s throat tighten. He looked at the woman she had become—the sharp edges, the scars, the weary posture—and saw something worth saving. "You can’t keep running forever, Aurora," he said softly. "You outran the shadows in Cardiff. But they follow you until you stop and face them." "I’m facing them," she lied. She wasn't. She was hiding in the safe, familiar shadows of a bar with an old friend. Silas nodded slowly, as if he heard the unspoken truth in her lie. He didn't call her on it. He simply reached under the bar and pulled out a small, velvet pouch. He slid it toward her. "What's this?" "A contact number. For someone I trust implicitly," Silas said. "No debts. No strings. Just a conversation if you need one. A legal opinion. Or maybe just a place to sit if you don't want to come back to that flat above the bar tonight." Aurora stared at the pouch. It was soft, expensive. She thought of the tiny, cramped room she shared, the sound of sirens wailing outside. "I don't want to ask for help," she whispered. "You’re not asking," Silas said firmly. "You’re taking it. It’s on the house." She reached out and took it. The velvet was cool against her fingers. She placed it in her pocket, right against the scar on her wrist. "Thank you," she said. Silas finished his drink and set the glass down. He grabbed the polishing cloth again, wiping a spot on the counter that wasn't even dirty. "Get some rest, Laila. Try not to think about what you left behind. Just think about the next delivery." "Aurora," she corrected gently. "I know," Silas said. He looked at her for a long moment, the limping tension in his leg shifting as he stood up straighter, armor back in place. "Goodbye, Aurora Carter." "Goodbye, Silas," she replied. She watched him walk away, his step uneven but deliberate, disappearing into the dimness of the back room. She finished her drink in one long pull, the burn expanding in her chest, warming the cold fear that had been keeping her awake. The neon sign outside hummed, a green heartbeat in the London night, and for the first time in years, Aurora Carter didn't feel entirely alone.
created_at"2026-02-17T02:43:17.145724+00:00" 2/17/2026, 2:43:17 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
72.7273% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"she confessed, her voice barely above a whisper [barely]"
1"he said softly [softly]"
2"Silas said firmly [firmly]"
3"she corrected gently [gently]"
54.8533% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1772
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count2
2
adverb"slowly"
count2
3
adverb"softly"
count1
4
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
5
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
1"gently"
2"slowly"
3"softly"
4"barely above a whisper"
5"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.8533% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1772
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"velvet"
count2
1
word"unspoken"
count1
2
word"profound"
count1
3
word"solitary"
count1
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"dancing"
count1
highlights
0"velvet"
1"unspoken"
2"profound"
3"solitary"
4"weight"
5"dancing"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences110
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences110
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences137
matches
0"knew that voice"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean35.22
std23.43
cv0.665
sampleLengths
068
175
238
36
422
537
63
790
829
926
1051
1112
1247
1330
142
1545
1614
1752
1833
1954
2070
2143
2249
2364
2469
2523
2666
2750
2830
294
3077
3121
3252
332
343
3547
3625
3722
3837
392
4045
4133
4213
4326
444
4544
464
4731
484
4967
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences110
matches
0"was supposed"
1"was gone"
2"was trimmed"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs210
matches
0"was settling"
1"was hiding"
94.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1249
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.03282626100880705
lyAdverbCount22
lyAdverbRatio0.017614091273018415
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences137
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences137
mean12.85
std8.86
cv0.689
sampleLengths
022
118
228
313
423
56
633
718
84
916
106
1115
127
135
144
1528
163
177
187
1921
2038
2117
226
234
2419
254
267
2715
2815
2911
3025
316
326
3328
3419
3515
367
373
385
392
4010
4129
426
4314
449
456
465
4732
488
4925
32.4818% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats24
diversityRatio0.25547445255474455
totalSentences137
uniqueOpeners35
27.2727% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags22
fancyCount13
fancyTags
0"Silas said, leaning back against the counter, his attention drifting toward the door as if expecting others (say, drift expect)"
1"Aurora said, raising the glass to her lips (say, raise)"
2"Aurora murmured (murmur)"
3"Aurora said, a defensive edge creeping into her tone (say, creep)"
4"Silas said, his voice dropping an octave, losing the casual veneer (say, drop lose)"
5"she confessed, her voice barely above a whisper (confess)"
6"she stated, the pieces clicking into place with a heavy thud (state, click place)"
7"Silas amended (amend)"
8"he said softly (say softly)"
9"she lied (lie)"
10"she whispered (whisper)"
11"Silas said firmly (say firmly)"
12"she corrected gently (correct gently)"
84.4817%