Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQNB7826HAY2NFPH7WTT5V

Run Details

Duration:
1m 13s
Cost:
$0.008085
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven's Nest cast a watery glow on the wet pavement as Rory pushed through the door. Rain had started again, a drizzle that promised to become a downpour before midnight. She straightened her delivery uniform, exhausted after a long day dropping off orders for the Golden Empress restaurant. Inside, the familiar dim lighting and scent of aged wood and polished metal welcomed her. The walls were covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs, as always. A few patrons dotted the bar, nursing their drinks in the comfortable silence that Silas cultivated. Silas stood behind the bar, drying a glass with a clean cloth. His grey-streaked auburn hair and neatly trimmed beard caught the low light as he looked up, his hazel eyes crinkling at the corners when he saw her. "Rory," he said, his voice carrying the quiet authority of years past. "Long day?" "The usual," she replied with a tired smile, sliding onto a stool. "Traffic was hell, and half my deliveries couldn't find their own front doors." Silas chuckled, placing the glass upside down on the counter. "What'll it be?" "Just a Coke tonight. I'm too tired for anything stronger." As Silas moved to get her drink, the door opened, letting in a gust of wind and a new customer. Rory didn't look up immediately, but Silas's slight pause caught her attention. She turned to see a man shaking rain from his expensive coat, his presence immediately commanding despite his disheveled state. Evan. Her ex-boyfriend. The one she'd fled Cardiff to escape. Rory's breath caught. Five years had changed him. He'd filled out, his face more angular, his hair shorter than she remembered. But those eyes—she'd never forget those eyes that had once looked at her with such tenderness, then with such cruelty. His gaze swept across the bar and landed on her. Recognition flickered there, followed by surprise, then something else she couldn't quite place. Regret? Or was that just her imagination? "Aurora," he said, his voice deeper than she remembered. "Evan," she replied, her voice cool despite the tremor she felt inside. "Long time no see." "Five years, seven months," he said with a precision that unnerved her. "Not that I've been counting." Silas returned with her Coke, his eyes sharp as he glanced between them. He set the glass down, his silver signet ring glinting in the low light. "Can I get you something?" Silas asked Evan, his polite tone masking an unmistakable edge. "Scotch, neat," Evan replied, not taking his eyes off Rory. "So, London. Cardiff wasn't good enough for you anymore?" "Something like that," she said, her fingers instinctively brushing the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a reminder of a childhood accident that Evan had once found charming. Evan took the stool beside her, though several others were available. Silas moved to pour his drink, his slight limp more pronounced as he shifted his weight. "I heard you were here," Evan said. "From your mother, actually. She worries about you." Rory tensed. "You talked to my mother?" "Ran into her at the market. She's well. Asks about you constantly." Silas set the scotch in front of Evan, who barely acknowledged him. Rory could feel the protective energy radiating from Silas, who had taken her under his wing since she'd moved to London. "I should call her more," Rory said, more to herself than to Evan. "We all should," Evan replied, swirling the amber liquid in his glass. "Do more of the things we regret not doing." The weight of his words hung between them. Who were they now? The eager university students they'd been when they met? Or the people they'd become—she, a delivery girl with a Pre-Law degree she'd never use; he, whatever he was now in his expensive coat and polished shoes? "You look different," Evan said, his eyes tracing the straight black hair that fell to her shoulders. Her bright blue eyes met his in the mirror behind the bar. "Good different." "You too," she lied. He looked harder, somehow. Colder. "Life changes people," he said quietly. "I'm not the man I was." Rory couldn't stop the bitter laugh that escaped her lips. "No, you're not." Evan flinched as if she'd slapped him. Good. Let him feel a fraction of the pain she'd carried with her. "I meant what I said that last day," Evan said, his voice low enough that only she could hear. "I'm sorry. For everything." Rory's fingers tightened around her glass. She'd waited years to hear those words, and now that they were here, they meant nothing. Time had moved on, and so had she. "Why now, Evan?" she asked, turning to face him fully. "Why here?" "I'm in London for business. When I saw you come in... I had to take the chance." "The chance to what? Apologize? Get closure? Rewrite history?" "All of it," he admitted. "None of it. I don't know." Rory studied him, searching for any trace of the man she'd once loved. She found strangers in familiar features. "You hurt me," she said, the words finally spoken aloud after years of silence. "I know," he replied, his eyes meeting hers. "I hurt you, and I can't take it back. But I've changed, Rory. Really changed." "People don't change," she said, echoing words her father had once told her. "Some do," Evan insisted. "I have." Silas moved to the end of the bar, giving them space but staying within earshot. His presence was a comfort, a reminder that she wasn't alone with this ghost from her past. "What do you want, Evan?" Rory asked, her voice quieter now. "To see you happy," he said simply. "And to tell you that I'm sorry. That I was wrong." Rory looked away, her gaze falling on one of the black-and-white photographs on the wall—a young Silas in some far-off place, his face determined, his future unwritten. Who had he been then? Who was he now? Time had changed them all. "I am happy," she said, and realized with surprise that it was true. Her life wasn't what she'd planned, but it was hers. "I have work, I have a home. I have friends who care about me." "Friends like him?" Evan asked, nodding toward Silas. "Friends who don't hurt me," she corrected gently. Evan finished his scotch in one swallow, then set the glass down with a decisive click. He stood, reaching into his wallet and leaving far more than enough for his drink on the bar. "I won't bother you again, Aurora," he said, using her full name, which felt strange coming from his lips. "But I meant what I said. I am sorry. And I hope you're happy. Truly." Rory nodded, not trusting herself to speak. Evan hesitated, as if waiting for something, then turned and walked out, leaving the door to swing shut behind him. Silas approached slowly, his limp more noticeable when he was tired. He removed Evan's glass and the money, his eyes questioning. "Old friend?" he asked, his voice gentle. "Something like that," Rory replied, finally taking a sip of her Coke. It was flat, the ice melted. Time had done that too—changed something refreshing into something ordinary. Silas nodded, his silver signet ring catching the light as he picked up Evan's glass. "The past has a way of finding us, doesn't it?" "Especially when we least expect it," Rory agreed. She looked toward the door, half-expecting Evan to return, but the street outside was empty except for the falling rain and the green glow of the neon sign. Time had moved forward, and so had she. The weight of regret was still there, but it was lighter now, no longer hers alone to carry.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
33.3333% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags30
adverbTagCount9
adverbTags
0"she said, her fingers instinctively brushing the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a reminder of a childhood accident that Evan had once found charming [instinctively once]"
1"Rory said, more to herself than to Evan [more]"
2"he said quietly [quietly]"
3"Evan said, his voice low enough that only she could hear [enough only]"
4"she said, the words finally spoken aloud after years of silence [finally]"
5"she said, echoing words her father had once told her [once]"
6"he said simply [simply]"
7"she corrected gently [gently]"
8"Rory replied, finally taking a sip of her Coke [finally]"
69.3721% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1306
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"slowly"
2"really"
3"truly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.0582% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1306
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"glinting"
count1
2
word"weight"
count3
3
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"glinting"
2"weight"
3"echoing"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"The weight of his words"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences95
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences95
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences120
matches
0"like that,\" she"
1"like that,\" Rory"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean22.29
std15.6
cv0.7
sampleLengths
097
139
214
325
413
510
652
71
89
941
1030
119
1216
1317
1427
1515
1619
1728
1827
1915
207
2112
2233
2313
2421
2548
2631
279
2812
2913
3020
3123
3230
3312
3417
359
3611
3719
3814
3923
4013
416
4232
4311
4418
4541
4637
478
488
4934
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs197
matches(empty)
91.7475% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1010
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.04257425742574258
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.01287128712871287
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences120
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences120
mean10.78
std6.16
cv0.572
sampleLengths
022
114
218
315
412
516
612
727
812
92
1012
1113
1210
133
1410
1520
1612
1720
181
192
207
213
225
2313
2420
2510
2613
271
286
299
3012
314
3212
335
3413
3514
3615
3710
389
3928
4011
4116
427
438
442
455
4612
4712
4821
4913
66.6667% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.425
totalSentences120
uniqueOpeners51
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags30
fancyCount22
fancyTags
0"he said, his voice carrying the quiet authority of years past (say, carry)"
1"she replied with a tired smile, sliding onto a stool (reply slide)"
2"he said, his voice deeper than she remembered (say, remember)"
3"she replied, her voice cool despite the tremor she felt inside (reply, cool feel)"
4"he said with a precision that unnerved her (say unnerve)"
5"Evan replied, not taking his eyes off Rory (reply, does not take)"
6"she said, her fingers instinctively brushing the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a reminder of a childhood accident that Evan had once found charming (say, instinctively brush leave once find)"
7"Evan replied, swirling the amber liquid in his glass (reply, swirl)"
8"Evan said, his eyes tracing the straight black hair that fell to her shoulders (say, trace fall)"
9"she lied (lie)"
10"he said quietly (say quietly)"
11"Evan said, his voice low enough that only she could hear (say, hear)"
12"he admitted (admit)"
13"she said, the words finally spoken aloud after years of silence (say, finally speak)"
14"she said, echoing words her father had once told her (say, echo once tell)"
15"Evan insisted (insist)"
16"he said simply (say simply)"
17"she said, and realized with surprise that it was true (say, realize be)"
18"she corrected gently (correct gently)"
19"he said, using her full name, which felt strange coming from his lips (say, use feel)"
83.2458%