"She'd passed through these grounds a hundred times—daytime walks when the city felt too loud, afternoon shortcuts on her delivery runs—but never at midnight."
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"Wildflowers bloomed along its edges—poppies and foxglove and flowers she couldn't name, their colors too vivid for moonlight, as if they carried their own luminescence from within."
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"Richmond Park at night was never truly quiet—the distant hum of traffic, the rustle of nocturnal creatures, the general white noise of a city that never fully slept."
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"Two weeks ago, she'd started seeing things at the edge of her vision—shapes that dissolved when she turned."
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"If this place was connected to the Fae—and everything she'd researched suggested it was—then perhaps it could tell her what the pendant was."
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"She spun, her heart slamming against her ribs, but the path she'd taken looked the same as everything else—flowers and grass and shadow."
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"But there it sat, twenty feet ahead, a perfect circle of black water that reflected nothing—not the moon, not the stars, not her own face as she approached."
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"The features were her features—the black hair, the sharp chin, the mouth that looked too thin when she wasn't forcing it into a smile—but the eyes were different."
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"The pendant was burning now, painful against her sternum, and she realized the warmth had spread—down her arms, into her hands, through her stomach."
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"The pendant pulsed once, twice, and then—"
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"The sound wasn't human—it was the shriek of bending metal, of shattering glass, of something fundamental breaking apart."
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"The noise of the city rushed back—traffic, wind, the distant bark of a dog."
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"The oaks rose around her like sentinels, their trunks silvered by the moonlight that managed to penetrate the canopy."
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"She circled the ancient oak, running her fingers over bark that was smoother than it should have been."
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"Wildflowers bloomed along its edges—poppies and foxglove and flowers she couldn't name, their colors too vivid for moonlight, as if they carried their own lumin…"
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"Instead, the grove stretched into darkness, the wildflowers continuing in drifting clusters that disappeared into shadow."
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"Two weeks ago, she'd started seeing things at the edge of her vision—shapes that dissolved when she turned."
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"One week ago, the note had appeared under her door, handwritten on paper that smelled of woodsmoke and something sweeter."
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"But there it sat, twenty feet ahead, a perfect circle of black water that reflected nothing—not the moon, not the stars, not her own face as she approached."
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"The features were her features—the black hair, the sharp chin, the mouth that looked too thin when she wasn't forcing it into a smile—but the eyes were differen…"
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"Eva, her childhood friend who had helped her flee London."
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"Not swaying but walking, uprooting themselves, drifting across the grass on pale tendrils that might have been roots and might have been legs."
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"She couldn't see the path, couldn't find the stones, but she ran anyway, her boots pounding against the warm earth, her breath tearing in and out of her lungs."