Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQNMJ614Z7YVSK7JYS95JJ

Run Details

Duration:
12.3s
Cost:
$0.000686
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air inside The Raven’s Nest was thick with the scent of aged wood and whispered stories. Dim amber lighting cast long shadows across the cluttered walls, where maps and black-and-white photographs jostled for space, each bearing silent witness to secrets long kept. Occasionally, a pale green neon sign flickered overhead, casting an eerie glow that seemed to pulse in time with the bar’s muted heartbeat. Rory pushed open the heavy door, the familiar creak echoing softly amid the quiet hum of muffled conversations. She hesitated for a moment, scanning the room as her eyes adjusted, the weight of years pressing into her shoulders. This was her quiet refuge—an unassuming basement loft above a London pub, yet tonight, it felt strangely unfamiliar. She was not an unfamiliar face here. Rory had delivered countless meals to the staff and regulars—an unremarkable ghost in the background. But tonight, her gaze lingered, sharp and assessing, searching for something buried beneath the veneer of routine. Her black hair fell just past her shoulders, straight and immaculate, a stark contrast against her simple gray coat. Bright blue eyes, usually quick to hide her emotions, flickered with something more guarded—caution, perhaps, or the odd flicker of anticipation. She slid into a corner, not far from the bar, her posture subtly alert despite the subdued ambiance. She’d come here chasing ghosts, but she hadn’t expected to find one sitting right across the room. The man was a silhouette against the smoky glow, his broad shoulders slumped but held with the quiet confidence of someone who knew what wariness looked like from the inside. Silas. He sat with his usual unhurried grace, a glass of dark whisky in hand, the faint smell of tobacco lingering on his grey-streaked auburn hair. His hazel eyes caught hers across the room, and for a moment, he simply watched, the same cool and observant gaze she remembered from ages past. Unbidden, her breath caught. Memories flickered—of hurried missions, whispered confidences under starless skies, the quiet trust they’d once shared. But those times had faded, replaced now by a chasm of unspoken years. She’d thought she had buried it, the ache of what she left behind, but now it stirred, restless. The moment hung between them like an unfinished sentence. Rory hesitated, then rose slowly, making her way toward him with a careful, deliberate gait. As she approached, she saw the subtle lines around his eyes—signs of age, yes, but also experiences etched deep into his expression. “Silas,” she said softly, her voice tinged with a cautious warmth. He looked up, his gaze steady, the corners of his mouth curling into a faint, knowing smile. “Rory. Or should I call you Carter now?” She winced, unfamiliar with how he sounded—calm, but edged with something that was almost a prejudice, an echo of the past. “Rory’s fine. It’s been... a while.” He signaled to the bartender, who nodded silently, pouring a fresh glass of whisky. Silas pushed it across the bar to her, the gesture simple but significant. “To what do I owe the pleasure?” She hesitated, then sat, clutching the glass in her hands. “Old friend, I didn’t come here to catch up on the weather.” A flicker of amusement crossed his face. “No? Then I’m intrigued. What’s brought you back to Soho?” Rory looked down at her drink, feeling the weight of her own words. The years had carved quiet trenches into her face, made her more guarded. The girl who had once run through Cardiff’s streets with reckless abandon was gone, replaced by someone who had learned to hide her scars—both visible and unseen. “I’m chasing something,” she said softly. “Someone. Or maybe... trying to understand why I left. Part of me thought I could outrun everything, but I guess some ghosts follow.” Silas studied her, the steady silence stretching like an insular current. His gaze was sharp, unflinching. “And did you find what you were looking for?” She shook her head slowly. “No. Not yet. But I’ve learned that some things don’t stay buried, no matter how far you run.” Her voice faltered, just briefly. “I wasn’t expecting to see you. Or... to feel this way.” His lips thinned, a trace of something unreadable. “People change. Sometimes they become someone else entirely.” The words hung in the air, weighted with the silent regret of years lost and memories that refused to stay buried. Rory watched him, noticing how the light played off his face—lines etched by time, eyes shadowed by stories he might never tell. “Have you? Changed so much that you’re unrecognizable?” He chuckled softly, a dry, almost bitter sound. “I’ve just had more time to collect my scars. The world wasn’t kind, Rory. I don’t know if we’re ever the same after what we carry.” Her fingers twitched instinctively, reaching to trace her scar—a crescent moon on her wrist, a childhood accident that had become a badge of something she could never quite shed. She looked away, then returned her gaze to him. “Maybe not. But I like to think some parts stay the same. The core, the parts you don’t let the world see.” Silas studied her anew, the way she clenched her fists around her glass, the way her eyes flicked away from his. He saw beneath the veneer—saw the fragile threads of vulnerability woven into her composed exterior. “I’ve always believed in the importance of keeping secrets,” he said softly. “But sometimes, you need to face those shadows. Otherwise, they’ll grow into something you can’t control.” She nodded, the weight of his words sinking into her chest. “I left because I was afraid. Of what I might become. Of what I already was.” He paused, then reached forward, tapping his fingers on the surface of the bar. “You’re still the same person I knew—just with more stories to tell. And scars. Everyone’s got them. But that doesn’t mean they’re unwanted. It means they’ve survived.” Rory looked down at her drink, then back up. “Survivors, I suppose. But sometimes I wonder what I’d be if I’d stayed—the kind of girl I was before I fled.” Silas studied her, his voice low and measured. “Maybe she’s still there—just buried. Maybe someday she’ll resurface. Until then, keep your guard, Rory. That’s what keeps us alive—preserving what we value, even if it’s just a flicker of who we used to be.” She offered a faint, grateful smile. “Thanks, Silas. For everything.” He nodded once, the faintest hint of a smile touching his lips. “Be careful out there. Some ghosts are better left undisturbed.” They sat in silence, two remnants of a past that refused to fade, the shadows of their history stretching long into the present. Outside, the London night continued on, indifferent to the tangled truths and unspoken regrets shared within the dim refuge of The Raven’s Nest.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"she said softly, her voice tinged with a cautious warmth [softly]"
1"she said softly [softly]"
2"he said softly [softly]"
39.4987% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1157
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"softly"
count5
highlights
0"slowly"
1"softly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1157
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"tinged"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count3
2
word"flicker"
count3
3
word"flicked"
count1
4
word"unspoken"
count2
5
word"unreadable"
count1
6
word"stark"
count1
7
word"anticipation"
count1
8
word"weight"
count3
9
word"echo"
count1
10
word"echoing"
count1
11
word"etched"
count2
highlights
0"tinged"
1"flickered"
2"flicker"
3"flicked"
4"unspoken"
5"unreadable"
6"stark"
7"anticipation"
8"weight"
9"echo"
10"echoing"
11"etched"
0.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches4
maxInWindow4
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
1
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
2
label"hung in the air"
count1
3
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her fists"
1"the weight of his words"
2"hung in the air"
3"A flicker of amusement"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences56
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences56
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"learned that some"
85.2893% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean34.55
std15.49
cv0.449
sampleLengths
066
156
239
358
447
552
650
79
837
911
1025
1127
1234
1322
1417
1553
1629
1725
1839
1916
2043
218
2234
2360
2436
2528
2627
2741
2830
2943
3010
3122
3246
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences56
matches
0"was gone"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs137
matches(empty)
96.5955% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount843
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.04389086595492289
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.017793594306049824
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences75
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences75
mean15.2
std7.31
cv0.481
sampleLengths
017
126
223
318
420
518
67
715
817
919
1021
1118
1217
1330
141
1525
1626
174
1815
1913
2018
219
2215
2322
2411
2517
268
2721
286
2914
3013
317
3210
3312
347
3510
3613
3713
3827
396
4023
4111
425
439
445
4523
4611
478
488
4921
66.2222% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.41333333333333333
totalSentences75
uniqueOpeners31
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she said softly, her voice tinged with a cautious warmth (say softly, tinged)"
1"she said softly (say softly)"
2"he said softly (say softly)"
69.8592%