Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQP2Z6FABFRFS90N9T3MV7

Run Details

Duration:
26.6s
Cost:
$0.005516
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air inside the Fae Grove tasted wrong. It was too sweet, cloying like overripe bruised fruit left in the sun, masking the underlying scent of damp earth and decaying oak that should have dominated a November night in Richmond Park. Aurora Carter adjusted the strap of her delivery bag, the familiar weight of insulated canvas against her shoulder doing little to ground her. She wasn't here for an order. There were no Golden Empress dumplings destined for this pocket of reality, no hungry customers waiting in a London flat above Silas' bar. She was here because the pendant around her neck had begun to burn. The Heartstone hung heavy against her sternum, the deep crimson gemstone pulsing with a rhythm that felt less like a heartbeat and more like a countdown. Through the thin fabric of her jacket, the warmth radiating from it was intense, a feverish heat that made the fine hairs on her arms stand up. She pushed through the boundary of ancient oak standing stones, the wood rough and cold under her palm as she brushed past them. The transition was seamless, one moment the chill wind of the park whipping her straight, shoulder-length black hair across her face, and the next, a suffocating stillness. Time here was a liar. An hour inside could be minutes or days outside, a fact that usually fascinated her legal mind, but tonight it only tightened the knot in her stomach. She needed to know what the stone was leading her to. The unknown benefactor who had slipped it into her pocket weeks ago had offered no instructions, only silence. Now, the silence was breaking. Rory stepped onto the soft moss, her boots sinking slightly. Wildflowers bloomed around her, vibrant splashes of color that defied the season. In the daylight, Isolde's grove was a sanctuary, a hidden clearing where the rules of Earth bent but did not break. Tonight, the flowers seemed to watch her. Their petals were turned toward her, tracking her movement with a slow, hydraulic grace that no plant possessed. She stopped, her bright blue eyes scanning the perimeter. The standing stones formed a perfect circle, blocking out the view of the mundane world beyond. There was no moon, yet the grove was illuminated by a sourceless, grey light that cast no shadows. "You're imagining it," she whispered, her voice sounding flat and dead in the thick air. "It's just the heat from the stone playing tricks." She touched the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a habitual gesture when anxiety spiked. The skin was smooth, a reminder of a childhood accident, something real and grounded in a world that suddenly felt fluid. But the feeling of being watched didn't fade. It intensified. It started as a prickling at the base of her neck, the primal instinct that told a prey animal a predator was nearby. Then came the sounds. At first, it was just the rustle of leaves, a gentle sway that suggested a breeze. But there was no wind. The air was stagnant, heavy as water. Then the rustling became a shuffle, a dragging sound coming from behind the nearest oak stone. Rory spun around, her hand instinctively going to the pocket where she kept her phone, though she knew the signal would be dead here. Nothing was there. Just the wildflowers, their colors seeming darker now, the whites turning to a sickly grey. She took a step back, her heel catching on a root that hadn't been there a moment before. She stumbled, catching herself on a low branch. The bark felt wet, slippery like skin. She jerked her hand away, wiping it on her jeans. The Heartstone pulsed harder, a sharp throb of heat that made her gasp. It wasn't just warm anymore; it was vibrating. "Is someone there?" she called out, hating the tremor in her voice. "Show yourself." The response was not a voice, but a mimicry. From the darkness between two towering oaks, a sound emerged that was almost her own voice. *"Show yourself,"* it echoed, but the cadence was off, stretched and distorted, as if played backward and then forward again. It lacked the breath, the humanity. It was a recording scraped from the air itself. Rory's heart hammered against her ribs. She was intelligent, a woman who solved problems by thinking outside the box, who had fled an abusive past and built a new life in London through sheer force of will. But logic had no foothold here. The geometry of the grove seemed to be shifting. The distance between the stones appeared to lengthen the longer she looked at them. The path she had walked in was gone, replaced by a dense thicket of brambles that seemed to writhe slowly, like sleeping snakes waking up. She began to walk, keeping her eyes fixed on the center of the clearing, trying to maintain a straight line. Every step felt heavier than the last, as if the gravity in the grove was increasing. The edges of her vision blurred. Movement flickered there, quick and jerky. When she snapped her head to look, there was nothing but the swaying flowers. But when she looked away, the motion returned, closer this time. Something was circling her, staying just outside her focal point, exploiting the limitations of her human sight. The temperature dropped abruptly. Her breath plumed in front of her, white and thick. The sweet smell of rot grew overpowering, making her eyes water. The Heartstone was now hot enough to be painful, searing the skin beneath her shirt. It glowed with a faint inner light, casting a bloody red reflection on the moss below her feet. Then she saw it. Not a shadow, but an absence. A patch of the grey light simply vanished, a hole in the world that was darker than the space between the stars. It stood near the eastern stone, roughly human-sized but too tall, too thin. It didn't move, yet it seemed to be advancing. The wildflowers around it wilted instantly, turning to black dust that scattered on a wind that still did not blow. Rory froze. Her mind raced, searching for an explanation, a loophole, a legal precedent for surviving a supernatural ambush. There was none. The entity didn't have a face, but she felt its attention fixate on her with the weight of a physical blow. It was hungry, not for food, but for something else. For time, perhaps. Or memory. A whisper brushed against her ear, so close she could feel the chill of it. *"Rory."* It wasn't the distorted echo from before. It was Evan's voice. Her ex. The man she had fled, the man whose violence had driven her from Cardiff to London. The voice was calm, reasonable, the way he sounded before he hit her. *"You can't run forever, Laila. You think changing your name changes what you are?"* She squeezed her eyes shut, shaking her head violently. "No. You're not real. He's not here." *"Look at me,"* the voice commanded, shifting now to her mother's tone, gentle and disappointed. *"Why did you leave us, Aurora? Why are you always running?"* The psychological assault was worse than any physical threat. It picked at the fractures in her armor, the guilt she carried for leaving her family, the fear that she was still the victim. The entity was using her own history as a weapon. She could feel the presence closing in, the air pressure dropping until her ears popped. The wrongness of the place had coalesced into a singular intent: to unmake her. Rory opened her eyes. The dark void was inches away. She could see the individual petals of the dying flowers turning to ash as the entity passed. The Heartstone screamed against her skin, a silent vibration that rattled her teeth. It wasn't just a beacon; it was a key, or maybe a shield. She didn't know which, and she didn't have time to deduce it. She reached up, her fingers trembling, and gripped the crimson gem. It burned her palm, blistering the skin, but she held on. She thought of Silas' bar, the smell of stale beer and polished wood. She thought of Eva's laugh, the sound of rain on the roof of her flat, the mundane, beautiful boredom of a safe life. She anchored herself to those memories, to the reality of Earth, rejecting the sweet rot of the Fae Grove. "I am not yours," she said, her voice steady despite the terror clawing at her throat. "And I am not alone." She didn't know if it was true. The grove was empty of friends, of allies. But the statement felt like a spell in itself. The entity paused. The dark void seemed to ripple, uncertain. The whispering stopped. For a heartbeat, the only sound was her own ragged breathing and the furious pulsing of the stone. Then, the ground beneath her lurched. The standing stones groaned, a deep, tectonic sound that vibrated through the soles of her boots. The grey light fractured, splintering into shards of darkness. The entity didn't attack; it dissolved, unraveling into the shadows like smoke in a gale. The wildflowers snapped back to life, vibrant and aggressive, their stems lengthening rapidly, reaching for her ankles. Rory didn't wait. She turned and ran, blindly charging toward where she remembered the entrance being. The brambles tore at her legs, the air thick with the sound of laughing whispers that sounded like a hundred different people she had ever known. She didn't look back. She focused on the heat in her hand, on the pain, on the reality of the scar on her wrist. She ran until her lungs burned and the sweet smell of rot was replaced by the clean, cold stench of London rain. She burst through the oak stones and collapsed onto the wet grass of Richmond Park, the city lights of London shimmering in the distance, distant and indifferent. The Heartstone cooled instantly, the crimson glow fading to a dull, dormant red. Rory lay there, gasping, staring up at the smoggy sky, waiting for the morning, knowing that the isolation of the grove had ended, but the feeling of being watched might never truly go away.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
66.6667% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"it echoed, but the cadence was off, stretched and distorted, as if played backward and then forward again [backward then again]"
76.6219% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1711
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"suddenly"
3"truly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
29.8656% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1711
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"beacon"
count1
1
word"sanctuary"
count1
2
word"lurched"
count1
3
word"throb"
count1
4
word"searing"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"fractured"
count1
7
word"weight"
count2
8
word"echo"
count1
9
word"echoed"
count1
10
word"unraveling"
count1
highlights
0"beacon"
1"sanctuary"
2"lurched"
3"throb"
4"searing"
5"flickered"
6"fractured"
7"weight"
8"echo"
9"echoed"
10"unraveling"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences129
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount7
narrationSentences129
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"appeared to"
2"began to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences133
matches
0"whispers that sounded"
82.2527% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean63.26
std27.7
cv0.438
sampleLengths
0106
1103
266
3111
424
574
686
764
814
960
1091
1190
1258
1374
1458
1516
1656
1716
1826
1972
2065
2177
2221
2355
2463
2588
2674
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences129
matches
0"was illuminated"
1"was gone"
2"was replaced"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs275
matches
0"was leading"
1"was breaking"
2"was vibrating"
3"was circling"
4"was using"
94.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1652
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount51
adverbRatio0.030871670702179176
lyAdverbCount19
lyAdverbRatio0.011501210653753027
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences133
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences133
mean12.84
std7.37
cv0.574
sampleLengths
08
133
223
36
423
513
626
727
823
927
105
1127
1211
1318
145
1510
1612
1721
187
1918
209
2116
2218
2315
249
2516
2621
278
282
2923
304
3116
325
337
3416
3524
363
3715
3818
398
407
4110
4213
438
4412
452
469
4716
4820
496
34.9624% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.2781954887218045
totalSentences133
uniqueOpeners37
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she whispered, her voice sounding flat and dead in the thick air (whisper, sound)"
1"it echoed, but the cadence was off, stretched and distorted, as if played backward and then forward again (echo, is off, stretch distort, play backward then forward again)"
2"the voice commanded, shifting now to her mother's tone, gentle and disappointed (command, shift disappoint)"
3"she said, her voice steady despite the terror clawing at her throat (say, claw)"
81.4335%