| 18.18% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he said lightly [lightly]" | | 1 | "he said quietly [quietly]" | | 2 | "she said abruptly [abruptly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 33 | | tagDensity | 0.455 | | leniency | 0.909 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.182 | |
| 55.20% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1116 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 10 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "reluctantly" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "lazily" | | 1 | "lightly" | | 2 | "reluctantly" | | 3 | "sharply" | | 4 | "languidly" | | 5 | "completely" | | 6 | "softly" | | 7 | "carefully" | | 8 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 1.43% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1116 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "stark" | | 3 | "otherworldly" | | 4 | "unsettled" | | 5 | "unreadable" | | 6 | "silk" | | 7 | "unraveling" | | 8 | "reminder" | | 9 | "warmth" | | 10 | "desire" | | 11 | "unspoken" | | 12 | "tension" | | 13 | "tracing" | | 14 | "etched" | | 15 | "shimmered" | | 16 | "raced" | | 17 | "enigma" | | 18 | "eyebrow" | | 19 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 1103 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 26 | | wordCount | 869 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.92 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 2 | | Ptolemy | 3 | | Aurora | 8 | | Lucien | 7 | | Evan | 1 | | London | 1 | | Brick | 2 | | Lane | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Ptolemy" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Lucien" | | 4 | "Evan" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 59.09% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "smelled like spiced curry mixed with old p" | | 1 | "as if claiming neutral ground between them" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.907 | | wordCount | 1103 | | matches | | 0 | "not the rhythm of anyone she expected, but too purposeful to be a misstep" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 30.64 | | std | 18.33 | | cv | 0.598 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 90 | | 1 | 58 | | 2 | 53 | | 3 | 56 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 54 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 47 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 27 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 28 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 42 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 30 | | 18 | 64 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 33 | | 22 | 27 | | 23 | 28 | | 24 | 31 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 45 | | 27 | 43 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 30 | | 30 | 35 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 33 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 147 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 83 | | ratio | 0.096 | | matches | | 0 | "She kicked off her boots and leaned against the wall, eyes catching the cluttered chaos of Eva’s flat—a battered copy of *Faust*, a stack of cracked leather-bound journals, and Ptolemy flicking his tail lazily atop a mound of dusty tomes." | | 1 | "One knock—three sharp taps—not the rhythm of anyone she expected, but too purposeful to be a misstep." | | 2 | "The knock came again—same pattern, insistence edged with a kind of command." | | 3 | "The door creaked open—just a crack—to reveal a figure framed by the dim glow of the corridor light." | | 4 | "Lucien had been part of that fragile rescue—and part of the storm that followed." | | 5 | "She wasn’t sure where this would go, but she wasn’t ready to shut the door completely—not yet." | | 6 | "And Lucien—half demon, half enigma—demanded a part of her she wasn’t sure she wanted to give." | | 7 | "The pull between them was undeniable—something fierce and fragile, like glass ready to shatter." |
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| 83.20% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 884 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "cracked leather-bound journals," | | 1 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 38 | | adverbRatio | 0.042986425339366516 | | lyAdverbCount | 20 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.02262443438914027 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 83 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 83 | | mean | 13.29 | | std | 6.9 | | cv | 0.519 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 40 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 31 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 73.90% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.4578313253012048 | | totalSentences | 83 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 16.83% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "She kicked off her boots" | | 1 | "She was about to move" | | 2 | "Her heart picked up, a" | | 3 | "She walked toward the door," | | 4 | "She hesitated, breath steadying, then" | | 5 | "she breathed, voice tight, each" | | 6 | "He stepped inside without waiting" | | 7 | "he said lightly, his heterochromatic" | | 8 | "she said, trying to sound" | | 9 | "Her throat tightened." | | 10 | "He stepped further inside, reluctantly" | | 11 | "she demanded, voice low" | | 12 | "He reached into the breast" | | 13 | "he said, holding the paper" | | 14 | "he replied, eyes catching the" | | 15 | "He gave her that sardonic" | | 16 | "Her gaze dropped to the" | | 17 | "she said, eyes flickering up" | | 18 | "he said quietly" | | 19 | "she said abruptly, retreating toward" |
| | ratio | 0.508 | |
| 15.56% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora closed the door behind" | | 1 | "She kicked off her boots" | | 2 | "The flat smelled like spiced" | | 3 | "She was about to move" | | 4 | "Her heart picked up, a" | | 5 | "Aurora’s fingers brushed the small" | | 6 | "She walked toward the door," | | 7 | "The knock came again—same pattern," | | 8 | "She hesitated, breath steadying, then" | | 9 | "The door creaked open—just a" | | 10 | "A flash of platinum blond" | | 11 | "she breathed, voice tight, each" | | 12 | "He stepped inside without waiting" | | 13 | "he said lightly, his heterochromatic" | | 14 | "Aurora folded her arms protectively" | | 15 | "she said, trying to sound" | | 16 | "A ghost of a smile" | | 17 | "Her throat tightened." | | 18 | "The last unforeseen meetings between" | | 19 | "He stepped further inside, reluctantly" |
| | ratio | 0.889 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 74.83% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Dressed as always in charcoal gray, tailored to a whispering perfection that betrayed his otherworldly roots, he moved with a fluid confidence that unsettled he…" | | 1 | "Ptolemy, the tabby, slunk between their legs, brushing against Lucien’s dark trousers, tail flicking with quiet indifference." | | 2 | "Ptolemy jumped onto the windowsill, stretching languidly, as if claiming neutral ground between them." | | 3 | "He unfolded the parchment carefully, tracing the symbols etched in ink that shimmered faintly beneath the dim light." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "she breathed, voice tight, each syllable brittle and laced with history" | | 1 | "he said lightly, his heterochromatic gaze flickering with something unreadable" | | 2 | "she demanded, voice low" | | 3 | "he replied, eyes catching the light and flashing amber" | | 4 | "she said, eyes flickering up sharply" | | 5 | "he said, voice almost a murmur" |
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| 59.09% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 14 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 1 | "she demanded (demand)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 33 | | tagDensity | 0.424 | | leniency | 0.848 | | rawRatio | 0.214 | | effectiveRatio | 0.182 | |