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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQP8ZR4MQSCTD4NSGCNAYX
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Model:
Qwen 3.5 Plus (2026-02-15)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
39.4s
Cost:
$0.005322
Provider:
Alibaba
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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Meta
AI
The rain in Soho did not wash the city clean; it merely pressed the grime deeper into the cobblestones, turning the streets into slick mirrors that
fractured
the neon glow of passing taxis. Aurora Carter pushed through the heavy oak door of The Raven's Nest, shaking the water from her straight, shoulder-length black hair. A fine mist clung to her delivery jacket, smelling of wet wool and the lingering grease of the Golden Empress kitchen where she had spent the last six hours
navigating
London's labyrinthine backstreets. Inside,
the air was thick with
the scent of aged whiskey, lemon oil, and the quiet hum of low conversation. She spotted him immediately, though five years felt like a lifetime ago. Silas Blackwood sat in his usual corner booth, the one shielded by a towering stack of old encyclopedias and a wall plastered with black-and-white photographs of places that no longer existed in the same way they once had. He
was nursing
a glass of amber liquid, his posture relaxed but alert, the way a cat rests before a pounce. The distinctive green neon sign outside cast a sickly, electric pallor across his face, highlighting the grey streaks that had colonized his auburn hair and the neatly trimmed beard that framed a jawline grown softer with age. Aurora hesitated near the entrance, her bright blue eyes scanning the room. For a moment, theghost of the girl she used to be—the pre-law student from Cardiff with stars in her eyes and a naive belief in justice—
flickered
and died. In her place stood Laila, the ghost name she sometimes wore when the past felt too heavy, or simply Rory, the delivery girl who knew which alleys to avoid after midnight. She smoothed her hand over her left wrist, her thumb brushing the small crescent-shaped scar there, a tactile anchor to a childhood accident that felt simpler than the complications of adulthood. She walked toward him, her boots silent on the worn floorboards. Silas looked up as her shadow fell across his table. His hazel eyes, sharp and assessing despite the years, widened
slightly
before settling into a look of
profound
, weary recognition. "Rory," he said, his voice a low rumble that cut through the bar's ambient noise. "I wondered if you'd ever come back." "Si," she replied, the old nickname slipping out before she could stop it. She slid into the booth opposite him, the leather seat creaking under her
weight
. "I didn't know this was still your domain." "The Nest endures," Silas said, gesturing vaguely at the room with his right hand. The silver signet ring on his finger caught the dim light, a flash of cold metal against his skin. "People need places to disappear. Or to be found, depending on their luck." He studied her, his gaze tracing the lines of her face. "You look different. Harder." "Time
does that," Aurora
said, keeping her voice level. She was cool-headed; it was her survival mechanism. If she let the emotion bleed through, the dam might break, and she couldn't
afford that here
, not in front of the man who had once taught her how to spot a tail in a crowded market. "Or maybe it's just the job. Delivering takeout to people who think the world revolves around their dinner schedule puts things in perspective." "And Evan?" Silas asked, the name dropping into the space between them like a stone into a deep well. Aurora flinched, a microscopic tightening of her jaw. "Don't." "You left in a hurry, Aurora. Eva told me you ran. Said you were terrified." "I was," she admitted, her fingers tracing the rim of the water glass the bartender had silently placed before her. "But I'm not that girl anymore. The one who needed saving." Silas leaned forward, the movement causing a slight hitch in his gait as he shifted his
weight
off his injured left leg. The limp was subtle, a ghost of the botched operation in Prague that had ended his field career, but to Aurora, it was a reminder of fragility. Even the Spymaster, as the whispers called him, was breakable. "None of us are who we were," Silas murmured. He took a slow sip of his drink. "I spent years thinking I could control the narrative, that if I pulled enough strings, I could keep the people I cared about safe. Look where it got me. Running a bar in Soho, watching the world burn from a distance." "You saved me, Si," Aurora said, her voice dropping. "When I showed up on your doorstep, shaking and bruised, you didn't ask questions. You gave me the flat above the bar. You gave me a place to breathe." "And then I pushed you away," Silas countered, his eyes darkening. "I told you to build a life, to stay away from my world. I thought I was protecting you from the shadows I cast. Instead, I just left you alone in them." The tension between them was
palpable
, a physical
weight
pressing against Aurora's chest. It was the
weight
of
unspoken
regrets, of conversations never had, of the years where silence had been easier than explanation. She remembered the night she fled Cardiff, the rain lashing against the train window, the feeling of her heart hammering against her ribs like a trapped bird. She had come to London expecting Silas to be her fortress. Instead, he had become a mirror, reflecting a reality she wasn't ready to
face: that safety
was an illusion, and everyone was capable of breaking. "I didn't need protection from the shadows," Aurora said quietly. "I needed to learn how to walk in them. You treated me like glass, Si. Like I would shatter if I saw the truth of what you did, of what this city is." "I saw what happened to your father," Silas said, his voice rough. "Brendan was a good man. He believed in the law, in the system. And the system chewed him up. I didn't want that for you. I wanted you to have a normal life. University, a career, a husband who didn't hit you." "I did go to university," Aurora reminded him, a bitter edge sharpening her tone. "Pre-Law. Just like Dad wanted. And look where it got me. Running from a man who thought he owned me, delivering noodles to pay rent, living above a bar that serves as a front for spies." She leaned in, her bright blue eyes locking onto his hazel ones. "This is my life, Silas. Not the one you planned for me. The one I survived." Silas stared at her,
really
seeing her for the first time in years. He saw the intelligence in her gaze, the quick, out-of-the-box thinking that had always been her gift, now honed into a weapon. He saw the resilience
etched
into the set of her shoulders. She wasn't the frightened child who had arrived on his doorstep; she was a woman who had
navigated
the labyrinth and found her own way out. "You're right," Silas said
softly
, the admission costing him. "I underestimated you. I let my own failures dictate your boundaries. That was my arrogance, not my care." He reached across the table, his hand hovering for a moment before resting
lightly
on hers. His palm was warm, rough with age. Aurora didn't pull away. She looked down at their hands, at the contrast between his weathered skin and her own, marked only by the small crescent scar on her wrist. "I missed you," Silas said, the words barely audible over the clink of ice in a nearby glass. "Not the idea of you. You." Aurora felt the tightness in her chest loosen, just a fraction. The regret was still there, a dull ache in the background, but it was no longer a chasm. It was a bridge they could cross, however
slowly
. "I missed you too, Si," she admitted. "Even when I was angry. Especially then." Silas withdrew his hand and signaled the bartender. "Two whiskeys," he ordered. "The good stuff. Not the swill I serve the tourists." "We can't drink on the job," Aurora teased, a faint smile touching her lips. "Yu-Fei will have my head if I show up smelling like a distillery." "Yu-Fei can wait," Silas said, a
glint
of his old mischief returning to his eyes. "Tonight, you're not the delivery girl. And I'm not the retired spy. We're just two old friends who wasted too much time pretending the other didn't exist." The bartender set the glasses down, the amber liquid catching the green neon light. Aurora picked hers up, the
weight
of the glass solid and real in her hand. She looked around the bar, at the old maps on the walls depicting empires that had crumbled, at the photographs of faces long turned to dust. Time moved forward, relentless and unforgiving, stripping away illusions and leaving only the raw truth of who people were. "To surviving," Aurora said, raising her glass. Silas clinked his glass against hers, the sound clear and bright in the dim room. "To surviving," he
echoed
. "And to doing better next time." They drank, the whiskey burning a warm path down their throats, washing away some of the chill of the rain and the years. Outside, London continued its chaotic
dance
, indifferent to the reconciliation happening in the corner of a dimly lit bar. But inside The Raven's Nest, for the first time in a long time, the shadows felt a little less heavy, and the silence between them was no longer filled with regret, but with the quiet comfort of presence.
created_at
"2026-02-17T02:44:04.167762+00:00"
2/17/2026, 2:44:04 AM
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182717
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867
tokens_completion
2315
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867
native_tokens_completion
2073
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
50.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
20
adverbTagCount
5
adverbTags
0
"Silas said, gesturing vaguely at the room with his right hand [vaguely]"
1
"she admitted, her fingers tracing the rim of the water glass the bartender had silently placed before her [silently]"
2
"Aurora said quietly [quietly]"
3
"Silas said softly, the admission costing him [softly]"
4
"Silas said, the words barely audible over the clink of ice in a nearby glass [barely]"
68.9826%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1612
totalAiIsmAdverbs
5
found
0
adverb
"lightly"
count
1
1
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
2
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
3
adverb
"softly"
count
1
4
adverb
"really"
count
1
highlights
0
"lightly"
1
"slightly"
2
"slowly"
3
"softly"
4
"really"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.7444%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1612
totalAiIsms
16
found
0
word
"palpable"
count
1
1
word
"flickered"
count
1
2
word
"glint"
count
1
3
word
"unspoken"
count
1
4
word
"profound"
count
1
5
word
"fractured"
count
1
6
word
"weight"
count
5
7
word
"dance"
count
1
8
word
"echoed"
count
1
9
word
"etched"
count
1
10
word
"navigated"
count
1
11
word
"navigating"
count
1
highlights
0
"palpable"
1
"flickered"
2
"glint"
3
"unspoken"
4
"profound"
5
"fractured"
6
"weight"
7
"dance"
8
"echoed"
9
"etched"
10
"navigated"
11
"navigating"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"air was thick with"
count
1
highlights
0
"the air was thick with"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
71
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
71
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
3
totalSentences
92
matches
0
"does that,\" Aurora"
1
"afford that here"
2
"face: that safety"
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
34
mean
47.12
std
28.79
cv
0.611
sampleLengths
0
107
1
108
2
102
3
41
4
22
5
35
6
46
7
15
8
77
9
19
10
9
11
15
12
31
13
59
14
58
15
38
16
43
17
97
18
43
19
54
20
78
21
72
22
27
23
53
24
24
25
38
26
14
27
22
28
27
29
42
30
74
31
7
32
25
33
80
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
71
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
1
totalVerbs
181
matches
0
"was nursing"
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1138
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
37
adverbRatio
0.03251318101933216
lyAdverbCount
17
lyAdverbRatio
0.014938488576449912
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
92
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
92
mean
17.41
std
10.09
cv
0.58
sampleLengths
0
33
1
21
2
33
3
20
4
12
5
38
6
21
7
37
8
12
9
28
10
31
11
31
12
11
13
10
14
20
15
15
16
7
17
13
18
14
19
8
20
14
21
19
22
13
23
11
24
4
25
9
26
8
27
37
28
23
29
19
30
8
31
1
32
15
33
20
34
11
35
22
36
27
37
10
38
9
39
8
40
41
41
9
42
29
43
11
44
32
45
13
46
21
47
27
48
11
49
25
59.4203%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
7
diversityRatio
0.40217391304347827
totalSentences
92
uniqueOpeners
37
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
20
fancyCount
16
fancyTags
0
"she replied, the old nickname slipping out before she could stop it (reply, slip out stop)"
1
"Silas said, gesturing vaguely at the room with his right hand (say, gesture vaguely)"
2
"Aurora said, keeping her voice level (say, keep)"
3
"she admitted, her fingers tracing the rim of the water glass the bartender had silently placed before her (admit, trace silently place)"
4
"Silas murmured (murmur)"
5
"Aurora said, her voice dropping (say, drop)"
6
"Silas countered, his eyes darkening (counter, darken)"
7
"Aurora said quietly (say quietly)"
8
"Aurora reminded him, a bitter edge sharpening her tone (remind sharpen)"
9
"Silas said softly, the admission costing him (say softly, cost)"
10
"she admitted (admit)"
11
"he ordered (order)"
12
"Aurora teased, a faint smile touching her lips (tease, touch)"
13
"Silas said, a glint of his old mischief returning to his eyes (say, return)"
14
"Aurora said, raising her glass (say, raise)"
15
"he echoed (echo)"
81.1263%