Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQPXCDSCZ09FPHP9WPDK98

Run Details

Duration:
43.9s
Cost:
$0.004608
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The chain around her neck was warm. Not uncomfortably so, but a distinct, persistent heat that had Rory reaching up to touch the Heartstone pendant as she slipped through the ancient oak standing stones and into the Fae Grove. The deep crimson gem pulsed faintly against her fingertips, its inner glow casting subtle highlights on her knuckles in the darkness. Night had fallen hours ago, but in Richmond Park, the Grove was illuminated by a sliver of moonlight that cut through the canopy above. Wildflowers—impossibly vibrant for the season—carpeted the clearing, their petals catching what little light bled through the branches. They shouldn't be blooming like this in November. Nothing about this place obeyed normal rules. Rory's breath misted in front of her as she stepped deeper into the clearing, her black hair slipping over her shoulders. She'd come for answers, following a clue from one of Eva's books that suggested this place might help her understand the pendant's origins. But now, with the stone warming against her skin and the Grove feeling more watchful than welcoming, she questioned her decision. "You're being paranoid," she whispered to herself, the sound swallowed by the unnatural stillness of the space. "Just because it's a Fae-touched place doesn't mean something's waiting to eat you." The Heartstone pulsed again, stronger this time, as if disagreeing. She wrapped her fingers around the pendant, the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist catching briefly in the stone's light. The warmth had been growing since she'd entered the park, a slow, steady increase that now bordered on concerning. According to what little she knew, the stone only reacted this way when near a Hel portal. And as far as she could tell, there shouldn't be one here. A twig snapped to her left. Rory went still, her blue eyes scanning the tree line. Nothing moved. The flowers remained untouched, the standing stones silent sentinels around the clearing's perimeter. Just the wind, she told herself. Just the wind in trees that don't quite move like normal trees. Another sound—this one like the soft drag of something heavy across the forest floor, behind her now. She turned slowly, the pendant pulsing faster. The temperature seemed to be dropping, a chill that had nothing to do with the November night seeping into her bones. Her breath came out in thicker clouds, dissipating into the air too quickly. "Hello?" she called, her voice steady despite the frantic beating of her heart. "Is someone there?" No answer. But the feeling of being watched intensified, prickling across her skin like static electricity. She took a step backward, toward the standing stones marking the Grove's boundary. She could leave. She should leave. But what if the answers she sought were here? What if this presence knew something about the pendant? A shadow detached itself from the trees. Rory froze, her breath catching in her throat. It was roughly humanoid in shape but impossibly tall, its limbs too long, its proportions all wrong. It stood half-hidden in the darkness between two ancient oaks, its form shifting and indistinct, as if reality itself struggled to contain it. The Heartstone grew hot against her palm, almost painfully so now, its crimson light spilling between her fingers. The shadow-being tilted its head, a gesture that seemed too deliberate, too intelligent. She took another step back, her foot catching on a exposed root. The small stumble was enough to break the paralysis holding her in place. Rory turned and ran, not toward the standing stones and freedom, but deeper into the clearing. If this thing was guarding the boundary, her only chance might be to reach the Grove's center. The sound of pursuit followed—not footsteps exactly, but something wet and dragging, getting closer despite her speed. Wildflowers whipped at her jeans as she sprinted, their sweet cloying scent thick in the air. Time moved strangely in this place. Had she been running for seconds or minutes? Hours? The moonlight hadn't shifted, but the shadows seemed to have deepened, grown teeth. A hand—cold and impossibly strong—closed around her ankle. Rory cried out as she fell, the air knocked from her lungs. She twisted onto her back, kicking out with her free foot. The shadow-being loomed over her now, its face a void of darkness that seemed to drink the moonlight. Where its features should be was nothing but endless night, and from that darkness came a low, guttural sound that vibrated in her bones. The Heartstone blazed between them, its crimson light cutting through the gloom. The being recoiled, releasing her ankle with a hiss like tearing fabric. Rory scrambled backward, putting distance between them as she climbed to her feet. The pendant's light illuminated the Grove in stark relief, revealing details that hadn't been visible before—symbols carved into the standing stones, a circle of darker earth at the clearing's center that seemed to absorb the light rather than reflect it. The portal. It had to be. The shadow-being circled her now, keeping its distance but never taking its featureless gaze off her. Other shapes moved at the edge of her vision—more shadows, more watchers, drawn by the light of the pendant or the scent of her fear. "I don't want any trouble," she said, her voice shaking despite her efforts to keep it steady. "I just came for information." The guttural sound came again, this time from multiple directions. The shadows were converging. Rory took a deep breath, centering herself as she had been taught to do in stressful situations back in her Pre-Law days. Cool-headed, she reminded herself. Intelligent. Quick thinking. She held up the Heartstone pendant, letting its light blaze forth. The shadows hissed and retreated a step, their forms wavering in the crimson glow. "I don't know who or what you are," she said, her voice stronger now, "but I'm not your enemy. I'm looking for answers about this stone. About where it came from. Who gave it to me." The largest shadow-being—the one that had first approached her—extended a limb that was less an arm and more a tendril of darkness. Rory flinched but held her ground as it pointed not at the pendant but at the circle of dark earth at the Grove's center. "The portal?" she guessed. "You want me to go through it?" The shadow-being tilted its head again, an almost bird-like gesture that seemed to indicate agreement. Rory looked from the portal to the circle of shadows, then back to the standing stones marking the exit. Safety lay in one direction, answers in the other. The pendant continued to pulse warmly in her hand, its light unwavering. "Will you follow me?" she asked. The shadows seemed to pulse in response, a silent communication passing between them that she couldn't comprehend. Time to make a choice. Rory took a step toward the portal, then another. The shadows remained where they were, watching but not pursuing. As she approached the circle of dark earth, the air grew thick, heavy with the scent of ozone and something ancient, something that spoke of realms beyond human understanding. The Heartstone pulsed faster now, almost humming with energy. She looked back one last time at the Grove, at the wildflowers and standing stones, at the shadow-beings who watched her with their faces of night. Whatever lay on the other side of this portal, she would face it with the same cool-headed determination that had gotten her through worse. With a deep breath, Aurora Carter stepped across the threshold and into the unknown.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
76.4706% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1275
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"warmly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"slowly"
2"warmly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
52.9412% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1275
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"sentinels"
count1
1
word"wavering"
count1
2
word"loomed"
count1
3
word"unwavering"
count1
4
word"stark"
count1
5
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"sentinels"
1"wavering"
2"loomed"
3"unwavering"
4"stark"
5"footsteps"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences90
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount7
narrationSentences90
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean33.89
std20.21
cv0.596
sampleLengths
060
156
265
330
410
568
66
743
817
941
1016
1153
127
1348
1431
1558
1661
178
1865
1924
2053
216
2241
2322
2414
2529
2625
2736
2846
2911
3015
3140
326
3317
3453
3559
3614
81.4815% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount7
totalSentences90
matches
0"was illuminated"
1"being tilted"
2"being loomed"
3"being recoiled"
4"being circled"
5"been taught"
6"being tilted"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs188
matches
0"was guarding"
1"were converging"
2"were, watching"
94.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1202
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"same cool-headed determination"
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.036605657237936774
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.012479201331114808
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean13.34
std7.83
cv0.587
sampleLengths
07
132
221
324
417
58
67
721
823
921
1017
1113
1210
1320
1419
1517
1612
176
1810
192
2013
216
2212
2317
247
2521
2613
2713
283
292
3014
3113
323
333
349
359
367
378
3817
3923
4018
4113
4212
4313
4416
4517
4617
4716
486
498
54.2553% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3829787234042553
totalSentences94
uniqueOpeners36
50.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she whispered to herself, the sound swallowed by the unnatural stillness of the space (whisper)"
1"she said, her voice shaking despite her efforts to keep it steady (say, shake keep)"
2"guessed (guess)"
88.7734%