| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.12% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1263 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "quickly" | | 2 | "warmly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 36.66% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1263 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "scanning" | | 3 | "sentinels" | | 4 | "chill" | | 5 | "footsteps" | | 6 | "loomed" | | 7 | "vibrated" | | 8 | "gloom" | | 9 | "stark" | | 10 | "wavering" | | 11 | "pulse" | | 12 | "unwavering" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 90 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 31.75% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 7 | | narrationSentences | 90 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 94 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1254 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 69.44% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "But now, with the stone warming against her skin and the Grove feeling more watchful than welcoming, she questioned her …" | | 1 | "Just the wind, she told herself." |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 35 | | wordCount | 1181 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 0.93 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 11 | | Heartstone | 6 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 8 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | November | 2 | | Eva | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Pre-Law | 1 | | Aurora | 1 | | Carter | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Carter" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "November" | | 5 | "Hel" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "as if disagreeing" | | 1 | "quite move like normal trees" | | 2 | "darkness that seemed to drink the moonlight" | | 3 | "center that seemed to absorb the light rather than reflect it" | | 4 | "gesture that seemed to indicate agreement" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 3.19 | | wordCount | 1254 | | matches | | 0 | "Not uncomfortably so, but a distinct, persistent heat" | | 1 | "not toward the standing stones and freedom, but deeper into the clearing" | | 2 | "not footsteps exactly, but something wet" | | 3 | "not at the pendant but at the circle of dark earth at the Grove's center" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 33.89 | | std | 20.21 | | cv | 0.596 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 60 | | 1 | 56 | | 2 | 65 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 68 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 43 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 41 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 53 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 48 | | 14 | 31 | | 15 | 58 | | 16 | 61 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 65 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 53 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 41 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 29 | | 26 | 25 | | 27 | 36 | | 28 | 46 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 40 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 53 | | 35 | 59 | | 36 | 14 |
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| 77.97% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "was illuminated" | | 1 | "being tilted" | | 2 | "being loomed" | | 3 | "being recoiled" | | 4 | "being circled" | | 5 | "been taught" | | 6 | "being tilted" |
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| 93.62% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 188 | | matches | | 0 | "was guarding" | | 1 | "were converging" | | 2 | "were, watching" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 94 | | ratio | 0.074 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers—impossibly vibrant for the season—carpeted the clearing, their petals catching what little light bled through the branches." | | 1 | "Another sound—this one like the soft drag of something heavy across the forest floor, behind her now." | | 2 | "The sound of pursuit followed—not footsteps exactly, but something wet and dragging, getting closer despite her speed." | | 3 | "A hand—cold and impossibly strong—closed around her ankle." | | 4 | "The pendant's light illuminated the Grove in stark relief, revealing details that hadn't been visible before—symbols carved into the standing stones, a circle of darker earth at the clearing's center that seemed to absorb the light rather than reflect it." | | 5 | "Other shapes moved at the edge of her vision—more shadows, more watchers, drawn by the light of the pendant or the scent of her fear." | | 6 | "The largest shadow-being—the one that had first approached her—extended a limb that was less an arm and more a tendril of darkness." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1202 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "same cool-headed determination" |
| | adverbCount | 44 | | adverbRatio | 0.036605657237936774 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012479201331114808 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 94 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 94 | | mean | 13.34 | | std | 7.83 | | cv | 0.587 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 32 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 23 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 54.26% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.3829787234042553 | | totalSentences | 94 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 81.30% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the wind, she told" | | 1 | "Just the wind in trees" |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "They shouldn't be blooming like" | | 1 | "She'd come for answers, following" | | 2 | "she whispered to herself, the" | | 3 | "She wrapped her fingers around" | | 4 | "She turned slowly, the pendant" | | 5 | "Her breath came out in" | | 6 | "she called, her voice steady" | | 7 | "She took a step backward," | | 8 | "She could leave." | | 9 | "She should leave." | | 10 | "It was roughly humanoid in" | | 11 | "It stood half-hidden in the" | | 12 | "She took another step back," | | 13 | "She twisted onto her back," | | 14 | "It had to be." | | 15 | "she said, her voice shaking" | | 16 | "She held up the Heartstone" | | 17 | "she said, her voice stronger" | | 18 | "She looked back one last" |
| | ratio | 0.232 | |
| 63.66% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 65 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "The chain around her neck" | | 1 | "The deep crimson gem pulsed" | | 2 | "Night had fallen hours ago," | | 3 | "Wildflowers—impossibly vibrant for the season—carpeted" | | 4 | "They shouldn't be blooming like" | | 5 | "Nothing about this place obeyed" | | 6 | "Rory's breath misted in front" | | 7 | "She'd come for answers, following" | | 8 | "she whispered to herself, the" | | 9 | "The Heartstone pulsed again, stronger" | | 10 | "She wrapped her fingers around" | | 11 | "The warmth had been growing" | | 12 | "A twig snapped to her" | | 13 | "Rory went still, her blue" | | 14 | "The flowers remained untouched, the" | | 15 | "Another sound—this one like the" | | 16 | "She turned slowly, the pendant" | | 17 | "The temperature seemed to be" | | 18 | "Her breath came out in" | | 19 | "she called, her voice steady" |
| | ratio | 0.793 | |
| 60.98% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "If this thing was guarding" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 5.01% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "Not uncomfortably so, but a distinct, persistent heat that had Rory reaching up to touch the Heartstone pendant as she slipped through the ancient oak standing …" | | 1 | "The Heartstone pulsed again, stronger this time, as if disagreeing." | | 2 | "It stood half-hidden in the darkness between two ancient oaks, its form shifting and indistinct, as if reality itself struggled to contain it." | | 3 | "The shadow-being tilted its head, a gesture that seemed too deliberate, too intelligent." | | 4 | "The shadow-being loomed over her now, its face a void of darkness that seemed to drink the moonlight." | | 5 | "The pendant's light illuminated the Grove in stark relief, revealing details that hadn't been visible before—symbols carved into the standing stones, a circle o…" | | 6 | "The largest shadow-being—the one that had first approached her—extended a limb that was less an arm and more a tendril of darkness." | | 7 | "The shadow-being tilted its head again, an almost bird-like gesture that seemed to indicate agreement." | | 8 | "As she approached the circle of dark earth, the air grew thick, heavy with the scent of ozone and something ancient, something that spoke of realms beyond human…" | | 9 | "She looked back one last time at the Grove, at the wildflowers and standing stones, at the shadow-beings who watched her with their faces of night." | | 10 | "Whatever lay on the other side of this portal, she would face it with the same cool-headed determination that had gotten her through worse." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "she called, her voice steady despite the frantic beating of her heart" | | 1 | "she said, her voice shaking despite her efforts to keep it steady" | | 2 | "she said, her voice stronger now," |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she guessed (guess)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |