Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
106
glossingSentenceCount
3
matches
0
"thrum that seemed to sync with the beating of her own heart"
1
"seemed so clear upon arrival now looked distorted, the distance stretching as she moved, like a hallway in a nightmare that grew longer with every step"
"The wildflowers blooming around her ankles were vibrant, unnatural bursts of color—violets, poppies, and marigolds all tangled together in a chaotic riot that defied the season."
1
"The time behavior of the grove was legendary; an hour inside could be minutes or days outside."
2
"She was cool-headed; that was who she was."
3
"The crickets, the night birds, the rustle of small mammals—all of it had ceased."
4
"It didn't walk; it flowed, like smoke caught in a draft."
5
"The grove didn't follow rules; it followed whims."
6
"The boundary markers weren't just stone and wood; they were alive, or at least aware."
7
"They weren't reaching for the light; they were reaching for her ankles."
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
71
technicalSentenceCount
11
matches
0
"Aurora Carter stood just beyond the boundary of the ancient oak standing stones, her boots sinking into grass that felt unnervingly soft, as if the earth beneat…"
1
"It wasn't the feverish heat of danger, but a steady, hypnotic thrum that seemed to sync with the beating of her own heart."
2
"Roughly the size of her thumbnail, the gemstone cast a weak inner glow that did little to push back the encroaching shadows of the grove."
3
"The wildflowers blooming around her ankles were vibrant, unnatural bursts of color—violets, poppies, and marigolds all tangled together in a chaotic riot that d…"
4
"Rory took a step back, her heel catching on a root that hadn't been there a moment ago."
5
"The whispering grew louder, coalescing into a single voice that sounded disturbingly like her own."
6
"The exit that had seemed so clear upon arrival now looked distorted, the distance stretching as she moved, like a hallway in a nightmare that grew longer with e…"
7
"The hand that landed on her shoulder was heavy, the grip tightening with crushing force."
8
"She drove her elbow back, aiming for the creature's midsection, relying on the muscle memory of self-defense classes she'd taken after leaving Evan."
9
"Her strike connected with something that felt like striking a bag of wet sand."
10
"The last thing Aurora saw before the earth closed over her head was the featureless face leaning down, the vertical slit widening into a grin that split the thi…"