| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.571 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 93.95% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1654 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 51.63% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1654 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "scanning" | | 3 | "echo" | | 4 | "loomed" | | 5 | "flicker" | | 6 | "rhythmic" | | 7 | "could feel" | | 8 | "perfect" | | 9 | "footsteps" | | 10 | "warmth" | | 11 | "pulsed" | | 12 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 142 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 92.56% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 142 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 145 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 3 | | totalWords | 1635 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | 0 | "Tonight. Midnight. Answers." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 34 | | wordCount | 1570 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 0.96 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 15 | | Park | 2 | | Pen | 1 | | Ponds | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pembrokeshire | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Isolde | 1 | | Tonight | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Ponds" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Heartstone" |
| | places | | 0 | "Park" | | 1 | "Pen" | | 2 | "Cardiff" | | 3 | "Yu-Fei" | | 4 | "Pembrokeshire" | | 5 | "Fae" | | 6 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 52.91% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 103 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "quite articulate even to herself" | | 1 | "appeared regardless of season—had closed their petals" | | 2 | "seemed impossibly loud in the quiet" | | 3 | "not quite human" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1635 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 74.71% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 145 | | matches | | 0 | "learned that the find that she'd" | | 1 | "see that the" | | 2 | "see that the" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 50 | | mean | 32.7 | | std | 23.42 | | cv | 0.716 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 75 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 47 | | 3 | 50 | | 4 | 76 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 51 | | 7 | 77 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 54 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 53 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 75 | | 16 | 41 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 26 | | 19 | 40 | | 20 | 61 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 41 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 50 | | 28 | 37 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 60 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 54 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 48 | | 35 | 27 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 69 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 70 | | 40 | 31 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 65 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 38 | | 46 | 25 | | 47 | 26 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 142 | | matches | | |
| 77.90% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 273 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't counting" | | 1 | "was beating" | | 2 | "was holding" | | 3 | "was still crawling" | | 4 | "was still walking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 20 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 145 | | ratio | 0.097 | | matches | | 0 | "The wildflowers that lined the path—those impossible blooms that appeared regardless of season—had closed their petals." | | 1 | "The standing stones weren't far now—she could just make out the first of them through the trees, that ancient oak pillar that marked the boundary of the grove." | | 2 | "It looked the same as always—the circle of standing stones, each one carved from oak so old it had petrified into something harder than wood." | | 3 | "The boundary crossing hit her like it always did—that subtle shift in pressure, the momentary vertigo that came from stepping into a place that existed between one world and another." | | 4 | "In daylight, they looked almost friendly—relics of a time before the world had hardened into its current shape." | | 5 | "She could have sworn she'd seen something—a flicker of movement, a shape detaching itself from the darkness between two stones—but now there was nothing." | | 6 | "So faint at first that she thought she might be imagining it—a low, rhythmic noise, like breathing." | | 7 | "The grass—" | | 8 | "The crimson gem caught the moonlight and for just a moment—a fraction of a second—she thought she saw it pulse." | | 9 | "She wanted to—felt the sound building in her throat—but some instinct kept her silent." | | 10 | "She couldn't see it—couldn't see anything—but she knew it was there." | | 11 | "Not much—barely a foot in any direction—but enough to see that the grass around her feet had been pressed flat in a perfect circle." | | 12 | "A woman—or something shaped like a woman." | | 13 | "Its warmth pulsed against her palm, steady as a heartbeat—or a warning." |
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| 97.12% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1594 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 69 | | adverbRatio | 0.04328732747804266 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01066499372647428 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 145 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 145 | | mean | 11.28 | | std | 7.63 | | cv | 0.677 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 39 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 26 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 28 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 23 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 25 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 30 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 44.52% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 18 | | diversityRatio | 0.34265734265734266 | | totalSentences | 143 | | uniqueOpeners | 49 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a photograph of the" | | 1 | "Instead she'd tucked it into" | | 2 | "So faint at first that" | | 3 | "Then the lights went out." |
| | ratio | 0.032 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 33 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | | 0 | "She should have thrown it" | | 1 | "It had been warm all" | | 2 | "She touched it through her" | | 3 | "She'd never seen them do" | | 4 | "She waited, counting heartbeats, but" | | 5 | "She'd startled deer on this" | | 6 | "She kept walking, but her" | | 7 | "It looked the same as" | | 8 | "She checked her phone." | | 9 | "Her hand drifted to the" | | 10 | "She stepped into the grove." | | 11 | "She'd learned that the hard" | | 12 | "Her voice came out smaller" | | 13 | "She cleared her throat and" | | 14 | "They didn't echo, didn't fade" | | 15 | "They simply stopped, cut off" | | 16 | "She reached the center and" | | 17 | "She could have sworn she'd" | | 18 | "Her heart was beating faster." | | 19 | "She pressed her hand flat" |
| | ratio | 0.262 | |
| 79.05% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 96 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | | 0 | "The last light of dusk" | | 1 | "Richmond Park had closed an" | | 2 | "Tonight she'd come alone, and" | | 3 | "The envelope had arrived three" | | 4 | "She should have thrown it" | | 5 | "The Heartstone pendant lay against" | | 6 | "It had been warm all" | | 7 | "She touched it through her" | | 8 | "The path through the woods" | | 9 | "Rory had walked this route" | | 10 | "Tonight the trees seemed to" | | 11 | "The wildflowers that lined the" | | 12 | "She'd never seen them do" | | 13 | "Something rustled in the bracken" | | 14 | "Rory stopped, her breath catching." | | 15 | "She waited, counting heartbeats, but" | | 16 | "A fox, probably." | | 17 | "Richmond Park was full of" | | 18 | "She'd startled deer on this" | | 19 | "She kept walking, but her" |
| | ratio | 0.762 | |
| 79.37% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | | 0 | "Whoever had sent the envelope" | | 1 | "Now, in the darkness, they" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 71.43% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "She touched it through her shirt as she walked, seeking reassurance that didn't come." | | 1 | "The wildflowers that lined the path—those impossible blooms that appeared regardless of season—had closed their petals." | | 2 | "Something that reminded her of the cellar beneath her grandmother's cottage in Pembrokeshire, where the stones had wept moisture even in high summer." | | 3 | "The boundary crossing hit her like it always did—that subtle shift in pressure, the momentary vertigo that came from stepping into a place that existed between …" | | 4 | "Each footstep made a soft squelching sound that seemed impossibly loud in the quiet." | | 5 | "The next moment there was only darkness, absolute and complete, as if someone had thrown a blanket over the entire grove." | | 6 | "They circled her position, never quite entering the pendant's glow, staying just at the threshold where darkness began." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |