Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQRYCQ7R7Z04CZRM3JGVE0

Run Details

Duration:
1m 31s
Cost:
$0.012474
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air inside the oak standing stones was heavier than the air outside, thick with the scent of damp earth and something sweeter, like rotting lilies. Aurora Carter paused just beyond the boundary, her bright blue eyes scanning the tree line. The ancient oaks marked the entrance to the Fae Grove, their bark gnarled and twisted into shapes that looked too much like grasping fingers in the moonlight. She pulled her jacket tighter around herself. London nights were usually cold, but this chill seeped through the fabric, settling deep in her bones. Rory checked her watch, a reflex born of a life spent running on schedules, delivering orders for the Golden Empress, and dodging the past. The luminous hands on her wristwatch were still. Not broken, just still. She tapped the glass face. Nothing. She rubbed the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a nervous habit from childhood that had survived the transition from Cardiff to London, from Evan to here. The skin beneath her finger felt cold, colder than the rest of her arm. She had come here because the pendant told her to. The Heartstone hung against her sternum, hidden beneath her shirt, but its presence was a physical weight. It had begun to pulse an hour ago, a faint warmth against her skin that grew hotter the closer she got to Richmond Park. Now, inside the clearing, it burned. Rory stepped forward. The grass beneath her boots was soft, unnaturally lush. Wildflowers bloomed year-round in the Grove, according to the scant notes she had managed to decipher about this pocket between Earth and the Fae realm. But tonight, the blooms were wrong. They faced away from the moon, heads bowed toward the dark earth as if hiding from the light. Their colors were too vibrant, neon splashes of violet and crimson that hurt the eyes in the low light. Something snapped in the darkness to her left. Rory froze, her breath hitching in her throat. She was cool-headed by nature, a trait that had kept her alive through law school and an abusive relationship, but this place stripped away logic. She turned slowly, her shoulder-length black hair brushing against her collar. There was nothing there but the dense undergrowth and the looming trunks of the oaks. Probably a fox, she told herself. Or a stray dog. Richmond Park was full of them. But the silence that followed was absolute. No crickets. No wind in the leaves. Just the heavy, pressurized quiet of a room waiting for a scream. The Heartstone pulsed again, sharper this time. A spike of heat that made her flinch. She reached into her shirt and pulled the silver chain out. The deep crimson gemstone glowed with a faint inner light, casting a bloody hue on her palm. It was roughly the size of a thumbnail, but in the darkness, it seemed to dominate her vision. The codex entries she had found mentioned it pulsed near a Hel portal. She hadn't believed the folklore then. She believed it now. You are not alone. The thought wasn't hers. It settled in her mind like dust motes in a sunbeam, undeniable and intrusive. Rory spun around, her heart hammering against her ribs. The clearing was empty, yet the sensation of being watched prickled along the back of her neck. It was the same feeling she had gotten in the flat above Silas' bar when the locks changed themselves, or when shadows lengthened without a source. She took a step back toward the standing stones, toward the exit. The distance seemed to have stretched. The oaks were further away than they had been a moment ago. She walked faster, her boots sinking into the soft earth. The flowers seemed to turn as she passed, their stems creaking with the sound of dry bone. Time moves differently here. An hour inside can be minutes or days outside. Eva had warned her. Eva, who had urged her to flee Cardiff, who had brought her into this world of secrets. Rory checked her watch again. The hands hadn't moved. How long had she been standing here? Ten minutes? Ten hours? The sky above remained a static canopy of cloud, unchanged, unmoving. A sound drifted from the center of the grove. It was a whisper, soft and sibilant, like leaves skittering over pavement. Rory stopped. She knew better than to run. Running triggered the chase instinct in predators, and whatever was here, it was hunting. She forced herself to breathe, inhaling the cloying scent of the lilies. Show yourself, she thought, projecting the command with as much authority as she could muster. Her voice sounded flat, absorbed by the air before it could carry. The whisper came again, closer. It wasn't wind. It was rhythmic. A pattern. It sounded like her name, stripped of vowels, stretched out until it was unrecognizable. Rrrryyy. The Heartstone grew hot enough to sting her skin. The crimson glow intensified, illuminating the ground around her feet. The shadows cast by the flowers didn't match the light source. They stretched toward her, long and thin, converging on her boots. Rory backed away, her eyes fixed on the shadows. She bumped into something solid. She hadn't heard herself approach it, but she was standing before one of the oak standing stones. The bark beneath her hand felt like skin, warm and vibrating slightly. She snatched her hand back, wiping her palm on her jeans. The wrongness was building now, a pressure in her ears like the drop before a storm. The flowers around her began to close, petals snapping shut with audible clicks. One by one, the clearing went dark, the neon colors retreating into buds. Only the Heartstone remained bright, a dying star in her hand. She realized then that the path back to the stones was gone. The oaks had shifted. They stood in a perfect circle now, sealing her in. There was no gap, no exit. The boundary had closed. Rory stood still, her mind racing through options. She had no weapon. She had no allies within reach. She had only the artifact given to her by an unknown benefactor and her own wits. She tucked the pendant back inside her shirt, shielding the light. If the thing out there was drawn to the stone, maybe darkness would hide her. The whispering stopped. The silence returned, heavier than before. It was the silence of a held breath. Rory waited. Her blue eyes strained against the dark, searching for movement at the edge of her vision. Every shadow looked like a figure. Every sway of the branches looked like a step. She focused on the scar on her wrist, rubbing the crescent moon shape again. It was a tether to reality, to the girl she was before the magic, before the flight, before the Grove. A branch cracked directly behind her. She did not turn. Turning was an invitation. She kept her gaze forward, toward where the exit should have been. She could feel the heat of a presence at her back, radiating cold rather than warmth. The air around her dropped ten degrees in a second. Her breath plumed in front of her face, white and visible. The Heartstone burned against her chest, a warning flare. Something brushed the hair at the nape of her neck. It felt like a finger, light as a moth's wing, but solid. Rory closed her eyes. She counted to three, steady and slow, forcing her pulse to dampen. She was Aurora Carter. She was twenty-five years old. She was not prey. When she opened her eyes, the shadows had moved closer. They were no longer cast by the trees. They stood upright, forming a ring around her, cutting off the moonlight entirely. The darkness was absolute, save for the faint crimson bleed of the pendant beneath her shirt. She was not alone. She had never been alone. The Grove had been waiting for her since she stepped past the oaks. Rory tightened her fist around the stone through her shirt. If this was a portal to Hel, then she would decide who walked through it. She took a breath, the cold air biting her lungs, and stepped forward into the dark.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences0
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.72% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1373
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
30.81% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1373
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count2
4
word"warmth"
count2
5
word"looming"
count1
6
word"silence"
count3
7
word"pulsed"
count2
8
word"whisper"
count2
9
word"rhythmic"
count1
10
word"perfect"
count1
11
word"racing"
count1
12
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"chill"
2"weight"
3"pulse"
4"warmth"
5"looming"
6"silence"
7"pulsed"
8"whisper"
9"rhythmic"
10"perfect"
11"racing"
12"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences135
matches(empty)
68.78% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences135
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"managed to"
1"seemed to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences135
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1373
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Probably a fox, she told herself."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount1359
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.81
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter2
Fae2
Grove4
Golden1
Empress1
Cardiff2
London2
Evan1
Heartstone5
Richmond2
Park2
Earth1
Hel2
Aurora2
Rory11
persons
0"Carter"
1"Evan"
2"Heartstone"
3"Aurora"
4"Rory"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Cardiff"
3"London"
4"Richmond"
5"Park"
6"Hel"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences99
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"as if hiding from the light"
1"sounded like her name, stripped of vowels"
2"felt like skin, warm and vibrating slig"
3"looked like a figure"
4"looked like a step"
5"felt like a finger, light as a moth's w"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1373
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences135
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean42.91
std25.44
cv0.593
sampleLengths
092
184
257
380
48
559
616
726
884
94
1070
1157
1213
1352
1455
1527
1628
1741
1854
1953
2036
2160
223
2314
2467
256
2657
279
2851
2947
3022
3141
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences135
matches
0"was gone"
1"was drawn"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs223
matches
0"was hunting"
1"was standing"
2"was building"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences135
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount570
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.02982456140350877
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.008771929824561403
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences135
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences135
mean10.17
std6.04
cv0.594
sampleLengths
026
115
227
37
417
524
68
74
85
91
1028
1114
1210
1317
1424
156
163
179
1825
196
2018
2119
228
238
2425
2511
2615
276
284
296
307
312
325
3312
347
358
3611
3717
3818
3913
406
414
424
434
4414
459
4617
4726
4812
496
33.70% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats22
diversityRatio0.2740740740740741
totalSentences135
uniqueOpeners37
78.74% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences127
matches
0"Probably a fox, she told"
1"Just the heavy, pressurized quiet"
2"Only the Heartstone remained bright,"
ratio0.024
53.07% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount53
totalSentences127
matches
0"She pulled her jacket tighter"
1"She tapped the glass face."
2"She rubbed the small crescent-shaped"
3"She had come here because"
4"It had begun to pulse"
5"They faced away from the"
6"Their colors were too vibrant,"
7"She was cool-headed by nature,"
8"She turned slowly, her shoulder-length"
9"She reached into her shirt"
10"It was roughly the size"
11"She hadn't believed the folklore"
12"She believed it now."
13"You are not alone."
14"It settled in her mind"
15"It was the same feeling"
16"She took a step back"
17"She walked faster, her boots"
18"It was a whisper, soft"
19"She knew better than to"
ratio0.417
30.87% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount109
totalSentences127
matches
0"The air inside the oak"
1"Aurora Carter paused just beyond"
2"The ancient oaks marked the"
3"She pulled her jacket tighter"
4"London nights were usually cold,"
5"Rory checked her watch, a"
6"The luminous hands on her"
7"She tapped the glass face."
8"She rubbed the small crescent-shaped"
9"The skin beneath her finger"
10"She had come here because"
11"The Heartstone hung against her"
12"It had begun to pulse"
13"Rory stepped forward."
14"The grass beneath her boots"
15"Wildflowers bloomed year-round in the"
16"They faced away from the"
17"Their colors were too vibrant,"
18"Something snapped in the darkness"
19"Rory froze, her breath hitching"
ratio0.858
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences127
matches
0"Now, inside the clearing, it"
1"If the thing out there"
2"If this was a portal"
ratio0.024
89.55% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences67
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The ancient oaks marked the entrance to the Fae Grove, their bark gnarled and twisted into shapes that looked too much like grasping fingers in the moonlight."
1"She rubbed the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a nervous habit from childhood that had survived the transition from Cardiff to London, from Evan t…"
2"It had begun to pulse an hour ago, a faint warmth against her skin that grew hotter the closer she got to Richmond Park."
3"Their colors were too vibrant, neon splashes of violet and crimson that hurt the eyes in the low light."
4"She was cool-headed by nature, a trait that had kept her alive through law school and an abusive relationship, but this place stripped away logic."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.7414%