| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said aloud [aloud]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |
| 87.42% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1192 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "completely" | | 2 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 11.91% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1192 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "stark" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "echo" | | 6 | "pulsed" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "sentinel" | | 9 | "gleaming" | | 10 | "footsteps" | | 11 | "could feel" | | 12 | "resolving" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 105 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 47.62% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 7 | | narrationSentences | 105 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "tried to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 107 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 7 | | markdownWords | 48 | | totalWords | 1204 | | ratio | 0.04 | | matches | | 0 | "The Grove. Midnight. Answers about who sent the pendant." | | 1 | "Keep moving" | | 2 | "You came here for a reason." | | 3 | "Don't scratch it" | | 4 | "Don't draw attention to it." | | 5 | "Time moves differently here" | | 6 | "A day in the hollow hills might be a year outside. Or a hundred years. Or just a moment." |
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| 83.33% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "*Keep moving*, she told herself." |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 22 | | wordCount | 1173 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.51 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 6 | | Park | 1 | | Eva | 4 | | Isabella | 1 | | Plantation | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Silas | 2 | | London | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Cornwall | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Silas" |
| | places | | 0 | "Park" | | 1 | "Isabella" | | 2 | "Plantation" | | 3 | "London" | | 4 | "Richmond" | | 5 | "Cornwall" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "quite see" | | 1 | "darkness that seemed to have texture, depth, weight" | | 2 | "quite see in the gathering dark" | | 3 | "Something between the two, a susurration that m" | | 4 | "felt like forty minutes at most" | | 5 | "looked like a reaching arm — it had been" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.831 | | wordCount | 1204 | | matches | | 0 | "not standing stones, exactly, but ancient oaks" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 41 | | mean | 29.37 | | std | 21.71 | | cv | 0.739 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 56 | | 1 | 40 | | 2 | 61 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 76 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 48 | | 7 | 34 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 87 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 37 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 43 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 48 | | 18 | 36 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 59 | | 22 | 27 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 58 | | 25 | 51 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 39 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 55 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 38 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 35 | | 36 | 46 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 10 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 171 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 107 | | ratio | 0.084 | | matches | | 0 | "Richmond Park had closed an hour ago, but she'd found the gap Eva had mentioned — the one near the Isabella Plantation that the groundskeepers never seemed to notice or repair." | | 1 | "The trees in the park still held most of their leaves — she'd noticed them on her walk from the station, russet and gold against the grey sky." | | 2 | "The park should have been full of sound — the distant rumble of traffic from the A307, the rustle of deer moving through the undergrowth, the last calls of birds settling in for the night." | | 3 | "Stone formations rose from the earth in a rough circle — not standing stones, exactly, but ancient oaks that had somehow petrified, their bark transformed to grey-white stone that gleamed faintly in the last dregs of light." | | 4 | "The sensation was subtle — a pressure change, like descending in a fast lift, or the moment before a storm breaks." | | 5 | "The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist — the one from the accident she could never quite remember — began to itch." | | 6 | "The walk to the station, the train to Richmond, the hike through the park — it shouldn't have taken nearly two hours." | | 7 | "The one to her right, the one with the twisted shape that almost looked like a reaching arm — it had been at least ten meters away when she'd entered the clearing." | | 8 | "Then, from somewhere behind her — from the darkness that had swallowed the gap between the stones — came a sound." |
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| 86.98% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1166 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "physical, pressing against her" |
| | adverbCount | 56 | | adverbRatio | 0.048027444253859346 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012006861063464836 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 107 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 107 | | mean | 11.25 | | std | 8.81 | | cv | 0.783 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 31 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 28 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 35 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 37 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 22 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 34 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 65.42% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.4485981308411215 | | totalSentences | 107 | | uniqueOpeners | 48 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, the silence pressed against" | | 1 | "Just the stone oaks standing" | | 2 | "Just the flowers swaying in" | | 3 | "Then, from somewhere behind her" | | 4 | "Then the light faded, and" |
| | ratio | 0.055 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "She shouldn't be here." | | 1 | "It had been pulsing all" | | 2 | "She'd tried to ignore it." | | 3 | "She pulled out her phone." | | 4 | "*You came here for a" | | 5 | "Her ears popped." | | 6 | "She turned to look back" | | 7 | "she said aloud, and her" | | 8 | "She turned back to face" | | 9 | "She didn't know where that" | | 10 | "It came from everywhere and" | | 11 | "She let it out slowly," | | 12 | "It hadn't been this cold" | | 13 | "She checked her phone again." | | 14 | "She'd left Silas's at ten." | | 15 | "It had felt like forty" | | 16 | "She hadn't thought Eva had" | | 17 | "She was certain of it." | | 18 | "she said to the empty" | | 19 | "She could feel eyes on" |
| | ratio | 0.242 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 63 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "The last light bled from" | | 1 | "Richmond Park had closed an" | | 2 | "She shouldn't be here." | | 3 | "The thought surfaced and she" | | 4 | "Answers about who sent the" | | 5 | "The Heartstone hung against her" | | 6 | "It had been pulsing all" | | 7 | "She'd tried to ignore it." | | 8 | "The ancient oaks rose around" | | 9 | "The word whispered through her" | | 10 | "The trees in the park" | | 11 | "Aurora stopped walking." | | 12 | "The park should have been" | | 13 | "She pulled out her phone." | | 14 | "The battery, which had been" | | 15 | "The screen flickered once, twice," | | 16 | "*You came here for a" | | 17 | "The clearing appeared between one" | | 18 | "Stone formations rose from the" | | 19 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground despite" |
| | ratio | 0.692 | |
| 54.95% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "Now it stood perhaps five" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 65.22% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Stone formations rose from the earth in a rough circle — not standing stones, exactly, but ancient oaks that had somehow petrified, their bark transformed to gr…" | | 1 | "Blues and purples and deep crimson that reminded her, uncomfortably, of the pendant against her skin." | | 2 | "Something between the two, a susurration that might have been words if she could only strain her hearing enough to catch them." | | 3 | "The crunch of frost-rimed grass that hadn't been frosted a moment before." | | 4 | "Could feel the weight of attention, vast and patient and hungry in a way that had nothing to do with appetite." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |