| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 85.69% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1398 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "reluctantly" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "really" | | 1 | "tightly" | | 2 | "reluctantly" | | 3 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 67.81% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1398 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "wavering" | | 2 | "resolved" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "unraveling" | | 6 | "loomed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 119 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 119 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 119 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1371 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 26 | | wordCount | 1367 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.73 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | London | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Grove | 6 | | Cross | 1 | | Aurora | 10 | | Evan | 1 | | Welsh | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Yu-Fei" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 95.65% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 92 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed possible a bruise yawning out toward the clearing" | | 1 | "as if obeying some unwritten contract, she stood, slab gripped in one fist" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1371 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 42.84 | | std | 29.63 | | cv | 0.692 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 91 | | 1 | 92 | | 2 | 97 | | 3 | 70 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 90 | | 6 | 62 | | 7 | 51 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 89 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 26 | | 13 | 60 | | 14 | 50 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 51 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 91 | | 21 | 30 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 44 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 41 | | 27 | 31 | | 28 | 41 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 53 | | 31 | 55 |
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| 96.42% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | | 0 | "been exhausted" | | 1 | "being cornered" | | 2 | "was supposed" |
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| 83.04% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 228 | | matches | | 0 | "were holding" | | 1 | "were watching" | | 2 | "was pointing" | | 3 | "were breathing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 28 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 27 | | totalSentences | 119 | | ratio | 0.227 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d come as soon as her shift ended—scooted through London’s restless arteries, backpack still half-stuffed with receipts and the sour-sweet scent of Yu-Fei’s ginger sauce." | | 1 | "The Grove always breathed strange, but tonight the air felt swollen—brighter with color, heavier with silence." | | 2 | "Even the usual background hum—the distant rush of night traffic, foxes yipping from the bramble—had flattened to a peculiar, waiting quiet." | | 3 | "As her foot passed between the ancient oaks, the strangeness deepened, slow and lingering—a pressure behind her teeth, a twist in her gut." | | 4 | "But she pressed on—past the cold drip of leaves, past another standing stone haloed in starlight." | | 5 | "The message, anonymous but urgent, had come to her in the bar basement just three nights ago—a slip of paper no bigger than her palm:" | | 6 | "Shadow drifted where it shouldn’t—flitting among the trunks, crawling along the distant bramble patches." | | 7 | "The sound faded—a small reassurance, flimsy and quick." | | 8 | "One, two, three—long enough for the fear to settle, for the silence to rear up again." | | 9 | "For a second, Aurora imagined she could see something behind her—beyond the circle, in the cradle of the oaks." | | 10 | "Movement, maybe; the suggestion of a figure, pale and angular, where vision slipped." | | 11 | "She spun—but there was nothing but silver grass and swaying flowers." | | 12 | "Tree limbs clicked together overhead—deliberate, as if in conversation." | | 13 | "It was pointing at something—her feet lined up like a compass needle." | | 14 | "The wildflowers at the base of the nearest standing stone were breathing—opening and closing in unison, as if stirred by underwater currents." | | 15 | "Her heart hammered; adrenaline made her knees weak." | | 16 | "Still, she didn’t run—not yet." | | 17 | "The pendant pulsed again—warmer." | | 18 | "Then, finally, her palm slipped over a dent—smaller than a coin, but just deep enough for her finger." | | 19 | "The scent that billowed out was not earth, not rot—something sweet and cloying, sicklier than any flower." | | 20 | "A twinge—a cold prickling along her spine." | | 21 | "A hush, then breathing—not hers—close and eager." | | 22 | "Its eyes—if they were eyes—were wide and lidless, milky as river fog." | | 23 | "For an instant, the Grove turned vertiginous—gravity twisting sideways, time rippling like a dropped stone in a pond." | | 24 | "Shadows flickered at the fringe of her vision, prickling at the certainty that more things crouched just outside the clearing—waiting, maybe watching." | | 25 | "Aurora cursed under her breath—a string of Welsh and something harsher." | | 26 | "Richmond Park loomed quiet and empty under the sickle moon—but somewhere, deep inside the Grove, something had marked her passage and would remember." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1404 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "tiny crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 49 | | adverbRatio | 0.0349002849002849 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007122507122507123 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 119 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 119 | | mean | 11.52 | | std | 6.3 | | cv | 0.547 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 25 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 19 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 62.46% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.3949579831932773 | | totalSentences | 119 | | uniqueOpeners | 47 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 9 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she was sharp as" | | 1 | "Already the city’s riot of" | | 2 | "Even the usual background hum—the" | | 3 | "Too high to be a" | | 4 | "Just her eyes messing with" | | 5 | "Only the endless rise of" | | 6 | "Instead, she dropped to one" | | 7 | "Then, finally, her palm slipped" | | 8 | "Slowly, as if obeying some" |
| | ratio | 0.08 | |
| 92.57% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 36 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d come as soon as" | | 1 | "She should’ve been exhausted." | | 2 | "She ducked past the fallen" | | 3 | "She found the first oak" | | 4 | "Its shadow extended far longer" | | 5 | "She should have left." | | 6 | "Her brain screamed it in" | | 7 | "She squinted at the clearing" | | 8 | "It felt as though the" | | 9 | "She watched the tangle of" | | 10 | "She waited an extra second," | | 11 | "She studied its inner glow:" | | 12 | "She needed to move." | | 13 | "She made herself walk to" | | 14 | "Her reflection swam in the" | | 15 | "She spun—but there was nothing" | | 16 | "she muttered, shoving the pendant" | | 17 | "She told herself she could" | | 18 | "It was pointing at something—her" | | 19 | "She padded closer, working her" |
| | ratio | 0.319 | |
| 97.17% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 82 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora hesitated on the edge" | | 1 | "The moon hung low and" | | 2 | "She’d come as soon as" | | 3 | "She should’ve been exhausted." | | 4 | "She ducked past the fallen" | | 5 | "Aurora’s boots tamped new-turned earth," | | 6 | "The Grove always breathed strange," | | 7 | "She found the first oak" | | 8 | "Its shadow extended far longer" | | 9 | "Rory crossed the threshold fast," | | 10 | "The wildflowers around her boots" | | 11 | "She should have left." | | 12 | "Her brain screamed it in" | | 13 | "The message, anonymous but urgent," | | 14 | "She squinted at the clearing" | | 15 | "The moonlight glimmered off the" | | 16 | "It felt as though the" | | 17 | "Shadow drifted where it shouldn’t—flitting" | | 18 | "Nothing moved except her, but" | | 19 | "Something chittered nearby." |
| | ratio | 0.726 | |
| 44.25% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 67.10% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Beneath her palm, the stone shed a scant heat, as if it were holding its breath." | | 1 | "Purple and white, star-shaped and fluttering, they felt as if they were watching her pass." | | 2 | "The wrongness pressed harder now, as if the air inched closer for a better look." | | 3 | "Tree limbs clicked together overhead—deliberate, as if in conversation." | | 4 | "The wildflowers at the base of the nearest standing stone were breathing—opening and closing in unison, as if stirred by underwater currents." | | 5 | "The scent that billowed out was not earth, not rot—something sweet and cloying, sicklier than any flower." | | 6 | "Shadows flickered at the fringe of her vision, prickling at the certainty that more things crouched just outside the clearing—waiting, maybe watching." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she muttered (mutter)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |