Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQVZ05S6448PBS04GFCTE1

Run Details

Duration:
48.5s
Cost:
$0.006384
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven's Nest cast an eerie glow on the wet pavement of Soho. Inside, the bar was dimly lit, its walls adorned with old maps and black-and-white photographs that seemed to watch over the patrons with silent judgment. It was early evening, and only a few regulars dotted the space, nursing drinks and lost in thought. Silas Blackwood stood behind the polished mahogany bar, wiping a glass with methodical precision. At 58, his grey-streaked auburn hair and neatly trimmed beard gave him a distinguished appearance, while his hazel eyes missed nothing. He moved with a slight limp, the legacy of a knee injury sustained during his MI6 days in Prague. The silver signet ring on his right hand glinted in the low light as he set the glass down. The door creaked open, and Aurora Carter stepped inside, shaking rain from her straight shoulder-length black hair. Her bright blue eyes swept across the room before landing on Silas. At 25, she carried herself with a confidence that belied her age, though the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist was a visible reminder of her past. "Evening, Silas," she said, sliding onto a stool. "Rory," he nodded, a rare smile touching his lips. "The usual?" "Please," she replied, watching as he poured her a whiskey. "Slow night?" "Always is before the rush." He studied her face. "You look tired." "Long day of deliveries. Yu-Fei had me running all over London." As they talked, the door opened again, and a man stepped in, removing his coat with deliberate slowness. He was tall, with an expensive suit and a carefully cultivated air of success that seemed too studied for the casual atmosphere of The Raven's Nest. His eyes scanned the room before landing on Rory with a flicker of recognition. "Rory Carter?" he asked, approaching the bar. "It's been what, five years?" Rory turned, and her cool demeanor faltered for just a second. "Evan." Evan Davis had been her boyfriend during her university days in Cardiff, and the reason she had fled to London with Eva's help. He'd always been ambitious, but the man before her was far removed from the charming law student she'd once known. His features were sharper, his eyes colder, and the expensive watch on his wrist screamed of new money. "Small world," Evan said, taking the seat next to her. "Can I buy you a drink?" "I'm fine, thanks," Rory replied, her voice carefully neutral. Silas watched the interaction, his body tense. He knew Rory's history with Evan, knew about the abuse that had sent her running from Cardiff. His hand moved subtly to rest near the phone below the bar. "I heard you dropped out of law school," Evan said, signaling to Silas for a whiskey. "Such a waste. Your father was devastated." Rory's jaw tightened. "I didn't drop out. I changed paths." "To what? Delivering food for a Chinese restaurant?" Evan laughed, a harsh sound that drew attention from the other patrons. "Come on, Rory. You were destined for better things." "I'm happy," she said, her fingers tracing the scar on her wrist unconsciously. "That's more than I can say for when we were together." Evan's smile tightened. "People change. I've changed." "Have you?" Rory met his gaze directly, her bright blue eyes challenging him. "Or have you just gotten better at hiding who you really are?" The tension between them was palpable, thick with years of unspoken words and unresolved history. Silas subtly shifted his position, ready to intervene if needed. "I heard about your father," Evan said, his tone softening. "I'm sorry about the heart attack." Rory's expression softened slightly. "Thank you. He's recovering well." "And your mother? Still teaching in Cardiff?" Rory nodded. "Yes. She's good." Silas watched as the conversation shifted, seeing the way Evan's carefully constructed facade began to crack, revealing glimpses of the man Rory had once known—the one who had made her laugh, who had shared her dreams before ambition had twisted him into someone else. "I think about you sometimes," Evan said, his voice lowering. "About what might have been." "Nothing would have been," Rory replied quietly. "We wanted different things." "Did we? Or were you just afraid?" Evan leaned closer, his eyes searching hers. "Afraid of being ordinary? Afraid that you'd never live up to your father's expectations?" Rory flinched as if struck. "You don't know anything about me anymore." "Don't I?" Evan challenged. "I see you still run when things get difficult. Still hiding in London rather than facing your life." Silas cleared his throat pointedly. "Another drink, sir?" Evan glanced at Silas, taking in the older man's imposing presence and the silver signet ring that seemed to carry an unspoken warning. "No, I should be going." He stood, pulling out a business card. "In case you ever want to talk. Or if you reconsider your career path. I know people at top firms who'd be interested in someone with your background." Rory took the card without looking at it. "Goodbye, Evan." After he left, the bar felt different, charged with the energy of the confrontation. Silas refilled Rory's glass without asking. "Are you alright?" he asked, his voice gentle. Rory stared at the amber liquid in her glass. "He was right about one thing. I am hiding." "Everyone hides from something," Silas replied, his hand resting on the bar near hers. "The question is whether you're hiding from something outside or something inside." Rory looked up at him, her bright blue eyes meeting his hazel ones. In that moment, she saw not just Silas the bar owner, but Silas the former intelligence operative, the man who understood secrets and the weight they carried. "I left Cardiff to escape him," she admitted, her voice barely above a whisper. "But sometimes I wonder if I escaped anything at all." Silas nodded slowly. "Time doesn't heal all wounds, Rory. It just changes how we carry them." As the evening crowd began to filter in, Rory sat at the bar, the business card from Evan lying discarded beside her glass. The weight of five years pressed down on her shoulders, and for the first time since fleeing Cardiff, she wondered what it would take to truly stop running.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
44.4444% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"Rory replied, her voice carefully neutral [carefully]"
1"she said, her fingers tracing the scar on her wrist unconsciously [unconsciously]"
2"Rory replied quietly [quietly]"
3"she admitted, her voice barely above a whisper [barely]"
23.9544% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1052
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count3
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
4
adverb"really"
count1
5
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"slightly"
2"slowly"
3"barely above a whisper"
4"really"
5"truly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
14.4487% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1052
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"palpable"
count1
1
word"facade"
count1
2
word"flicker"
count1
3
word"imposing"
count1
4
word"methodical"
count1
5
word"unspoken"
count2
6
word"weight"
count2
highlights
0"palpable"
1"facade"
2"flicker"
3"imposing"
4"methodical"
5"unspoken"
6"weight"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"a flicker of recognition"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences59
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences59
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean23.75
std17.32
cv0.729
sampleLengths
061
173
257
38
411
512
612
711
858
912
1012
1161
1216
139
1436
1523
1610
1729
1824
197
2025
2125
2216
239
247
255
2644
2715
2811
2928
3012
3122
328
3328
3435
3510
3620
378
3818
3926
4040
4124
4216
4351
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs132
matches(empty)
91.7273% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount748
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.034759358288770054
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.022727272727272728
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences89
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences89
mean11.74
std7.74
cv0.659
sampleLengths
018
125
218
314
421
519
619
717
812
928
108
119
122
1310
142
159
163
1711
1818
1926
2014
217
225
2311
241
2523
2620
2718
2810
296
309
317
3217
3312
3416
357
363
377
3820
399
4013
4111
423
434
4413
4512
4615
4710
4810
496
80.8989% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.5056179775280899
totalSentences89
uniqueOpeners45
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount12
fancyTags
0"she said, sliding onto a stool (say, slide)"
1"he nodded, a rare smile touching his lips (nod, touch)"
2"she replied, watching as he poured her a whiskey (reply, watch pour)"
3"Evan said, taking the seat next to her (say, take)"
4"Evan said, signaling to Silas for a whiskey (say, signal)"
5"laughed (laugh)"
6"she said, her fingers tracing the scar on her wrist unconsciously (say, trace)"
7"Evan said, his tone softening (say, soften)"
8"Evan said, his voice lowering (say, lower)"
9"Rory replied quietly (reply quietly)"
10"Silas replied, his hand resting on the bar near hers (reply, rest)"
11"she admitted, her voice barely above a whisper (admit)"
79.7337%