| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 93.06% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1441 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | 0 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "deliberately" | | 1 | "sharply" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 6.32% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1441 | | totalAiIsms | 27 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "gloom" | | 3 | "scanned" | | 4 | "etched" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "throb" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "footsteps" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "sentinel" | | 11 | "chill" | | 12 | "lurched" | | 13 | "reminder" | | 14 | "pounding" | | 15 | "flicker" | | 16 | "echoed" | | 17 | "trembled" | | 18 | "raced" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "blood ran cold" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 151 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 151 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 154 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1420 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 1412 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.35 | | worstName | "Heartstone" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Heartstone" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 1 | | Heartstone | 5 | | Pendant | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Aurora | 5 | | Rory | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Aurora" | | 5 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 80.56% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 108 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "something like cold iron" | | 1 | "felt like a silent sentinel" | | 2 | "as though trying to guide her somewhere safe" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1420 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 154 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 93.56% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 50.71 | | std | 24.21 | | cv | 0.477 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 82 | | 1 | 71 | | 2 | 78 | | 3 | 72 | | 4 | 73 | | 5 | 39 | | 6 | 59 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 65 | | 9 | 62 | | 10 | 76 | | 11 | 53 | | 12 | 53 | | 13 | 62 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 26 | | 16 | 78 | | 17 | 60 | | 18 | 48 | | 19 | 54 | | 20 | 52 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 51 | | 23 | 54 | | 24 | 62 | | 25 | 61 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 19 |
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| 98.29% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 151 | | matches | | 0 | "was supposed" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "was replaced" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 252 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 21 | | semicolonCount | 5 | | flaggedSentences | 23 | | totalSentences | 154 | | ratio | 0.149 | | matches | | 0 | "She tightened her grip on the Heartstone Pendant resting at the hollow of her throat—its silver chain taut, the tiny crimson gem pulsing faintly against her chest." | | 1 | "The grove lay hidden somewhere in Richmond Park, but when she found it—when she forced her way past brambles and dead ends—the world beyond the stones fell silent behind her." | | 2 | "No distant traffic, no rustle of deer; only the steady whisper of her pulse." | | 3 | "The air tasted of damp earth and something older—wet stone, fallen leaves, and something like cold iron." | | 4 | "She scanned the ring of standing stones—oaken monoliths knotted with lichen, each concentric ring etched into the grass." | | 5 | "She reached out for one—its stem felt damp, almost slick." | | 6 | "Then—soft steps behind her." | | 7 | "She saw the outline of a figure—slender, tall as a tree, and for a moment she thought it was someone waiting to guide her." | | 8 | "Each carried the grooves of centuries; each felt like a silent sentinel." | | 9 | "The mist coalesced into shapes at the periphery of her vision—shadows that lurched and receded." | | 10 | "The scar on her left wrist—her childhood reminder of carelessness—burned hot." | | 11 | "Beneath the melody was a subtle discord—notes barely out of tune, unsettling." | | 12 | "Something shifted beneath the water—an inky ripple that should not have moved." | | 13 | "The flowers bowed, and in their movement she thought she saw tiny faces flicker among the petals—grinning mouths and hollow eyes." | | 14 | "A branch snapped sharply—so near it must have brushed her shoulder." | | 15 | "Its features hidden; a pale flicker where a face might be." | | 16 | "Just that lethal quiet, and then a footstep—slow, deliberate—taking half a pace toward her." | | 17 | "Branches whipped her arms and face; the wildflowers trembled as she crashed past." | | 18 | "The mist thickened until she could taste it—cold and salty, like tears." | | 19 | "She dared not look back, yet felt the pursuit, heard faint laughter rising behind her—childish, mocking." | | 20 | "Only two minutes had passed on her watch, but she knew she’d been inside far longer—lost in a quicksilver nightmare." | | 21 | "Moonlight played through the trees; the stones stood silent, moss-softened." | | 22 | "Yet as her eyes drifted back to the shadow-draped oaks, she thought she saw a flicker at the boundary—an arm, slender and pale, beckoning." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1438 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 50 | | adverbRatio | 0.03477051460361613 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009040333796940195 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 154 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 154 | | mean | 9.22 | | std | 5.83 | | cv | 0.633 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 30 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 24 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 43.51% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.2792207792207792 | | totalSentences | 154 | | uniqueOpeners | 43 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 139 | | matches | | 0 | "Then—soft steps behind her." | | 1 | "Only mist and trees." | | 2 | "Just that lethal quiet, and" | | 3 | "Finally, she burst through the" | | 4 | "Only two minutes had passed" |
| | ratio | 0.036 | |
| 58.85% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 139 | | matches | | 0 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 1 | "Their lavender and white petals" | | 2 | "She had come seeking answers." | | 3 | "She took a careful step" | | 4 | "She scanned the ring of" | | 5 | "She knelt, peered at the" | | 6 | "She stood again, weighed the" | | 7 | "It pulsed more insistently now," | | 8 | "She reached out for one—its" | | 9 | "She dropped it and backed" | | 10 | "Her voice cracked in the" | | 11 | "She cradled the pendant." | | 12 | "She counted to ten, the" | | 13 | "She whirled, but the fog" | | 14 | "She saw the outline of" | | 15 | "It was gone." | | 16 | "She had studied folklore at" | | 17 | "She forced herself forward, toward" | | 18 | "She stepped through." | | 19 | "Her heart thrummed so loud" |
| | ratio | 0.403 | |
| 57.12% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 112 | | totalSentences | 139 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter’s breath came in" | | 1 | "A thin mist curled at" | | 2 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 3 | "Moonlight filtered through knotted branches," | | 4 | "Their lavender and white petals" | | 5 | "She had come seeking answers." | | 6 | "An anonymous note, delivered through" | | 7 | "The grove lay hidden somewhere" | | 8 | "She took a careful step" | | 9 | "The air tasted of damp" | | 10 | "Rory brushed a strand of" | | 11 | "She scanned the ring of" | | 12 | "A pit, or an empty" | | 13 | "She knelt, peered at the" | | 14 | "The hair on her neck" | | 15 | "She stood again, weighed the" | | 16 | "It pulsed more insistently now," | | 17 | "A guide, perhaps, or a" | | 18 | "Aurora moved toward the pebbles," | | 19 | "The moon’s glow dimmed to" |
| | ratio | 0.806 | |
| 35.97% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 139 | | matches | | 0 | "Now she felt their gaze." |
| | ratio | 0.007 | |
| 54.95% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Moonlight filtered through knotted branches, illuminating wildflowers that bloomed in impossible profusion." | | 1 | "A few scattered white pebbles, as if someone had scattered them in a line." | | 2 | "When she lifted it, the blossom drooped as if alive, its stamen curling inward like a wounded bird." | | 3 | "She remembered her mother’s tales of faerie trickery: sweets that mesmerized, blooms that bound unwary souls." | | 4 | "She clutched the Heartstone, the gem’s glow intensifying, illuminating her sweat-darkened face." | | 5 | "The pendant’s warmth surged, as though trying to guide her somewhere safe." | | 6 | "She followed its thrum, weaving through stones, her boot heels skidding on damp grass." | | 7 | "The Heartstone pulsed violently, a quickening drumbeat that echoed around her." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "She stammered (stammer)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.4 | |