| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 25 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "He leaned back [back]" | | 1 | "he said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 57 | | tagDensity | 0.439 | | leniency | 0.877 | | rawRatio | 0.08 | | effectiveRatio | 0.07 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1398 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 42.78% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1398 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | word | "carried the weight" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "traced" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "scanned" | | 3 | "trembled" | | 4 | "measured" | | 5 | "flicked" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "tension" | | 10 | "glinting" | | 11 | "eyebrow" | | 12 | "flickered" | | 13 | "carried the weight" | | 14 | "unspoken" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 128 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1387 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 899 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.45 | | worstName | "Silas" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Silas" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Soho | 1 | | Silas | 13 | | Blackwood | 1 | | Rory | 9 | | Evan | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Raven" | | 2 | "Nest" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Blackwood" | | 5 | "Rory" | | 6 | "Evan" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.777 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1387 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 128 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 47 | | mean | 29.51 | | std | 18.52 | | cv | 0.628 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 81 | | 1 | 54 | | 2 | 56 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 64 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 61 | | 10 | 39 | | 11 | 28 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 33 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 34 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 69 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 34 | | 20 | 28 | | 21 | 45 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 47 | | 24 | 26 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 48 | | 27 | 26 | | 28 | 36 | | 29 | 42 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 35 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 43 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 25 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 34 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 30 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 59 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 179 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 128 | | ratio | 0.07 | | matches | | 0 | "She lifted one hand to the scar on her left wrist—a pale crescent she traced as though it might guide her inside." | | 1 | "Rory’s boots thudded across the worn floorboards; she scanned the bar, heart thundering against her ribs." | | 2 | "For a moment, neither spoke—an ocean of years and unsaid words brimming between them." | | 3 | "He rubbed the back of his neck, the movement betraying an ache beyond his limp—yet the limp was there too, a slight hitch in his left leg as he rose." | | 4 | "Rory hesitated, then clasped it; his grip was as solid as she remembered, like an anchor she’d drifted away from." | | 5 | "Silas stilled, and Rory felt his memory dredge up that chapter—Evan." | | 6 | "Inside, the bar exhaled with them—worn benches, scuffed floorboards, the haunted maps and photographs that had watched them grow up and scatter like birds." | | 7 | "Then he turned and grabbed a bottle from the shelf—nothing marked, the label peeled." | | 8 | "And in the hush that followed, Rory understood the shape of time—how it pressed until it broke you, and how it might still bend toward grace if you had the courage to return." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 912 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.02631578947368421 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.003289473684210526 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 128 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 128 | | mean | 10.84 | | std | 8.09 | | cv | 0.746 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 34 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 30 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 36 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 46.35% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.3203125 | | totalSentences | 128 | | uniqueOpeners | 41 | |
| 78.43% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "Then he picked up a" | | 1 | "Then he turned and grabbed" |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 49 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "She lifted one hand to" | | 1 | "His grey-streaked auburn hair caught" | | 2 | "He straightened, caught the glass" | | 3 | "His voice carried the same" | | 4 | "She inhaled, lifting her chin." | | 5 | "She closed the distance in" | | 6 | "He rubbed the back of" | | 7 | "She brushed a strand of" | | 8 | "She shook her head." | | 9 | "She slid onto it, half-expecting" | | 10 | "He poured two measures of" | | 11 | "He set one glass before" | | 12 | "She managed a crooked smile." | | 13 | "He nodded once." | | 14 | "He swirled the whiskey" | | 15 | "She stared at the glass" | | 16 | "Her voice shook" | | 17 | "He leaned back on the" | | 18 | "Her throat tightened." | | 19 | "She managed to meet his" |
| | ratio | 0.576 | |
| 24.71% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 74 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter paused beneath the" | | 1 | "The Raven’s Nest looked smaller" | | 2 | "She lifted one hand to" | | 3 | "Rory’s boots thudded across the" | | 4 | "The low light revealed faces" | | 5 | "Every stool was taken except" | | 6 | "His grey-streaked auburn hair caught" | | 7 | "He straightened, caught the glass" | | 8 | "His voice carried the same" | | 9 | "She inhaled, lifting her chin." | | 10 | "The name felt raw on" | | 11 | "She closed the distance in" | | 12 | "He rubbed the back of" | | 13 | "Rory hesitated, then clasped it;" | | 14 | "She brushed a strand of" | | 15 | "Silas’s eyes flicked to the" | | 16 | "She shook her head." | | 17 | "The words tumbled free, rusty" | | 18 | "The bar fell silent except" | | 19 | "Silas gestured to the stool" |
| | ratio | 0.871 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 99.57% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "She let herself absorb the bar’s low lamplight, the smell of malt and lemon rind, the hush of laughter from patrons who parted to give them space." | | 1 | "They drank together, two old friends who had carried the weight of unspoken years between them, finally setting it down like a burden surrendered at last." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 25 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 57 | | tagDensity | 0.105 | | leniency | 0.211 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.035 | |