Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQWQ1Q5NS56W3V8EYCT1MC

Run Details

Duration:
17.7s
Cost:
$0.006766
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The distinctive green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest hummed with a low-frequency buzz that Rory felt in her teeth. It was a Tuesday, the sort of night where Soho breathed a little slower, the rain slicking the pavement into a dark, oil-slicked mirror. Rory ducked inside, the bells above the door chiming a familiar, flat note. She shook her umbrella, the droplets scattering across the worn floorboards, and inhaled the scent of the place: old mahogany, stale hops, and the faint, medicinal tang of the gin Silas favored. Silas was behind the bar, his grey-streaked auburn hair catching the amber light from the back-shelf lanterns. He was polishing a highball glass with the methodical precision of a man who had once disassembled sidearms in the dark. As Rory approached, he offered a short, practiced nod. The silver signet ring on his right hand caught the light, a silent reminder of the life he’d left behind in Prague. "Quiet night, Silas," Rory said, sliding onto a stool. She leaned her elbows on the wood, the sleeve of her jumper riding up just enough to reveal the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. "The best kind," Silas replied, his voice a low gravel. He moved with that slight, rhythmic hitch in his left leg, a souvenir from a botched operation he never talked about. He set a glass of water down before she could even ask. "You're late for your shift at the Empress tomorrow, Rory. Don’t let Yu-Fei catch you staring at the bottom of a glass tonight." "Just one," she promised, her bright blue eyes scanning the room. The Nest was a tomb of maps and monochrome photographs, a place meant for hiding in plain sight. It was why she lived upstairs. It was why she felt safe here. But as she turned her head toward the corner booth, the safety curdled. A man sat there, half-shrouded in the shadows of the bookshelf that hid Silas’s private office. He was wearing an expensive charcoal overcoat that looked out of place against the peeling wallpaper. He was staring at a glass of whiskey as if it held the secrets to a life he’d lost. Rory froze. The air in her lungs suddenly felt thin, like the oxygen had been sucked out by a vacuum. "Evan?" she whispered. The man looked up. The years had been kind to his face but cruel to his expression. He looked hollowed out, the sharp handsomeness she remembered now blunted by a weary, sagging disappointment. When he saw her, his eyes widened, the recognition hitting him like a physical blow. "Laila?" he said, using the middle name she hadn't touched since she fled Cardiff. She didn't move. She didn't breathe. Silas’s hands stopped moving on the glass. The old spymaster didn't look at them directly, but Rory saw his posture shift—the subtle tightening of his shoulders, the way he shifted his weight off his bad knee, ready to vault the bar if the ghost from her past became a threat. "It's Rory now," she said, her voice steadier than she felt. Evan stood up slowly, his hands held out as if approaching a skittish animal. "I didn't think... I’ve been looking for you. For years. Your father wouldn’t say a word. Eva blocked my number." "They were following instructions," Rory said. She stayed on the stool, wanting the height advantage of the bar. Evan moved closer, stopping a respectful few feet away. In the dim light, he looked smaller than she remembered. The man who had loomed over her life, whose moods had dictated the weather of her soul, was just a person in a coat that cost more than her monthly rent. "You look different," Evan said, his gaze drifting to her straight, shoulder-length black hair. "The blonde is gone. Your face... you look harder." "I grew up," Rory said. "And I left." "I know why you left," he said, and for a second, the old softness returned to his voice, that manipulative velvet that had once kept her trapped in a cycle of apologies. "I deserved it. I know that now. I’ve spent a long time in therapy, Rory. I’ve changed." Rory glanced at Silas. The older man was watching them through the reflection in the mirror behind the bottles. He looked like an owl observing a mouse. Rory looked back at Evan and felt a strange, cold flick of pity. "Everyone changes, Evan. That’s just the passage of time. It’s not necessarily growth." "Can I sit?" he asked, gesturing to the stool beside her. "No," Rory said. The rejection hung in the air, heavy and unyielding. Evan shrank back an inch. He looked around the bar, at the dusty maps of Eastern Europe and the faded photographs of people long dead. "This is where you've been? Delivering Chinese food and living in Soho? Your father wanted you at the bar, Rory. You were the smartest person in the lecture hall. You could have been anything." "I am something," she said. "I’m safe. I’m quiet. I’m not looking over my shoulder every time a door opens—or at least I wasn't, until five minutes ago." Evan ran a hand through his hair, a nervous gesture she remembered. "I didn't come here to cause trouble. I was in London for a meeting. I saw you through the window. I thought... maybe there was a version of us that could at least say hello." "The version of us you’re looking for died in a flat in Cardiff three years ago," Rory said. She reached for her water, her fingers brushed the crescent scar. "How did you find me? Truly? This isn’t a place people stumble into." Evan hesitated. He looked at Silas, who was now leaning against the back bar, arms crossed, the silver ring glinting like a warning light. "I hired someone," Evan admitted, his voice dropping. "Just to find an address. I needed to know you were okay. I had dreams, Rory. Bad ones. I thought maybe I’d broken you so badly you’d disappeared." Rory felt a sharp, crystalline laugh bubble up and die in her throat. "You think you’re that important? That you could break me so well I’d just cease to exist?" She leaned forward, her blue eyes blazing. "I didn't disappear, Evan. I started. This life—the restaurant, Silas, this dusty old bar—it’s mine. Every bit of it. I earned it by surviving you." Silas cleared his throat, a sound like grinding stones. "The gentleman was just leaving, wasn't he, Rory?" Evan looked at Silas, then back at Rory. He saw the way she didn’t flinch. He saw the way she looked at him—not with fear, not even with the white-hot rage that fuels a confrontation, but with the cold, sterile detachment of a scientist looking at a specimen. "You really don't want me here," Evan said, a statement rather than a question. "I want you to be a memory," she said. "I want you to be the thing I grew out of. Nothing more." Evan lingered for a moment, his mouth opening as if to offer one last defense, one final apology that would surely, this time, bridge the chasm. But the silence in The Raven’s Nest was absolute. Even the neon sign seemed to hold its breath. He turned away, his expensive coat swishing against his legs. He walked toward the door, his footsteps heavy. When the bells chimed again, the cold air from the street rushed in for a brief, sharp second before the door clicked shut. Rory didn't move. She watched his shadow pass by the frosted glass of the front window, turning into a blur under the green neon before vanishing into the Soho night. Silas moved slowly down the bar. He took her water glass, which she hadn't touched, and replaced it with a small glass of dark, peat-heavy scotch. "On the house," he said. Rory picked up the glass. Her hand was shaking, just a little. She looked at the crescent scar on her wrist, then at the bookshelf that led to Silas’s world of secrets and shadows. She thought of her father in Cardiff, of the law books she’d left behind, and the woman named Laila who had once believed love was supposed to hurt. "He's smaller than I remembered," she murmured. "They usually are," Silas said, picking up his polishing cloth again. "Time has a way of stripping the paint off people. You see what’s underneath eventually." Rory took a sip of the scotch. It burned, a clean, sharp heat that settled the trembling in her fingers. She looked at her reflection in the mirror—the black hair, the tired eyes, the set of her jaw. She didn't look like a victim. She looked like a resident of the Nest. "I'm not going back, Silas," she said, her voice a promise. "I know," Silas said, his hazel eyes meeting hers in the glass. "You've got a shift tomorrow. Best get some sleep." She nodded, stood up, and walked toward the stairs in the back, her boots clicking firmly on the wood. She didn't look back at the booth where the ghost had sat. The weight of the past was still there, a dull ache in the atmosphere, but as she climbed the stairs toward her flat, she felt the lightness of someone who had finally seen the monster in the light and realized it was only a man.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
72.7273% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"she promised, her bright blue eyes scanning the room [bright]"
1"he said, and for a second, the old softness returned to his voice, that manipulative velvet that had once kept her trapped in a cycle of apologies [once]"
2"Evan said, a statement rather than a question [rather]"
3"Silas said, picking up his polishing cloth again [again]"
68.5732% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1591
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"suddenly"
2"really"
3"truly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
49.7172% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1591
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"crystalline"
count1
1
word"glinting"
count1
2
word"loomed"
count1
3
word"velvet"
count1
4
word"methodical"
count1
5
word"weight"
count2
6
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"crystalline"
1"glinting"
2"loomed"
3"velvet"
4"methodical"
5"weight"
6"footsteps"
66.6667% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"hung in the air"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences94
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences94
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences110
matches(empty)
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean33.51
std20.66
cv0.617
sampleLengths
089
169
235
366
411
544
651
720
83
948
1014
1156
1211
1334
1418
1550
1623
178
1849
1940
2013
2111
223
2334
2434
2528
2647
2742
2824
2936
3062
3117
3248
3314
3422
3544
3641
3730
3826
395
4062
417
4226
4352
4411
4521
4676
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences94
matches
0"been sucked"
1"was supposed"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs200
matches
0"was polishing"
1"was wearing"
2"was staring"
3"was watching"
4"was shaking"
94.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1197
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.028404344193817876
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.007518796992481203
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences110
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences110
mean14.32
std8.89
cv0.621
sampleLengths
020
124
213
332
417
521
69
722
89
926
1010
1121
1212
1323
1411
1518
166
177
1813
1916
2016
2119
222
2318
243
254
2613
2716
2815
2914
303
313
327
3343
3411
3514
3620
376
3812
399
4010
4131
4214
439
445
453
4632
4717
484
4915
36.3636% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.2545454545454545
totalSentences110
uniqueOpeners28
61.3636% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags22
fancyCount10
fancyTags
0"Rory said, sliding onto a stool (say, slide)"
1"she promised, her bright blue eyes scanning the room (promise, scan)"
2"whispered (whisper)"
3"she said, her voice steadier than she felt (say, feel)"
4"Evan said, his gaze drifting to her straight, shoulder-length black hair (say, drift)"
5"he said, and for a second, the old softness returned to his voice, that manipulative velvet that had once kept her trapped in a cycle of apologies (say, return once keep)"
6"Evan admitted, his voice dropping (admit, drop)"
7"she murmured (murmur)"
8"Silas said, picking up his polishing cloth again (say, pick up polish)"
9"she said, her voice a promise (say, voice)"
85.2595%