| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 84.80% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1316 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "truly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "completely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 16.41% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1316 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "comforting" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "otherworldly" | | 6 | "scanned" | | 7 | "loomed" | | 8 | "sentinels" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "whisper" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "sense of" | | 13 | "predator" | | 14 | "scanning" | | 15 | "treacherous" | | 16 | "could feel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 113 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 79.65% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 113 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 114 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 3 | | totalWords | 1313 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | |
| 41.67% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a fox, she told herself." |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 1311 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.46 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Rory | 6 | | Park | 3 | | Grove | 5 | | Heartstone | 1 | | South | 1 | | Bank | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Richmond | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Carter" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Richmond" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 88 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like cage bars" | | 1 | "depth that seemed to drink the faint light from the flowers" | | 2 | "as if trying to hold her in place" | | 3 | "whisper that seemed to come from right beside her ear, though the thing was still twenty feet away" | | 4 | "felt like a violation, a claim being st" | | 5 | "It was as if it had never been" |
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| 47.68% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.523 | | wordCount | 1313 | | matches | | 0 | "Not a gentle, comforting heat, but a persistent, thrumming warmth" | | 1 | "not just to life, but to warmth, to memory, to existence itself" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 26 | | mean | 50.5 | | std | 27.84 | | cv | 0.551 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 93 | | 1 | 108 | | 2 | 80 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 71 | | 5 | 55 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 70 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 79 | | 10 | 89 | | 11 | 40 | | 12 | 77 | | 13 | 48 | | 14 | 62 | | 15 | 33 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 40 | | 18 | 59 | | 19 | 44 | | 20 | 41 | | 21 | 26 | | 22 | 61 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 53 | | 25 | 34 |
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| 86.63% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "get murdered" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "being dragged" | | 3 | "being staked" | | 4 | "was gone" | | 5 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 214 | | matches | | 0 | "was happening" | | 1 | "was keeping" | | 2 | "was going" |
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| 92.73% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 114 | | ratio | 0.018 | | matches | | 0 | "Richmond Park was a different world after dark, the familiar paths turned to alien ribbons of black, but this place—the Grove—was something else entirely." | | 1 | "The city sounds returned—the distant wail of a siren, the hum of traffic on the A3." |
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| 82.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1321 | | adjectiveStacks | 3 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "silent, moss-covered sentinels." | | 1 | "was right behind her" | | 2 | "damp, leaf-strewn ground" |
| | adverbCount | 45 | | adverbRatio | 0.03406510219530658 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010598031794095382 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 114 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 114 | | mean | 11.52 | | std | 6.92 | | cv | 0.601 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 29 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 28.95% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 24 | | diversityRatio | 0.2543859649122807 | | totalSentences | 114 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, the stone had pulsed," | | 1 | "Just a fox, she told" | | 2 | "Even the flowers seemed to" | | 3 | "Only the wind, sighing through" | | 4 | "Maybe it was never there." | | 5 | "Then came the voice." |
| | ratio | 0.056 | |
| 57.04% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 44 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | 0 | "It was a pocket of" | | 1 | "She hadn’t come here for" | | 2 | "It was the same heat" | | 3 | "She scanned the clearing, her" | | 4 | "They had always felt protective," | | 5 | "Her head whipped toward the" | | 6 | "It had been slow, deliberate." | | 7 | "She held her breath, listening." | | 8 | "she called out, her voice" | | 9 | "It was a stupid thing" | | 10 | "They drooped instantly, their vibrant" | | 11 | "She stared, her mind refusing" | | 12 | "It wasn’t frost." | | 13 | "It was a void, a" | | 14 | "Its crimson glow brightened, casting" | | 15 | "It was a physical pressure," | | 16 | "It was the same feeling" | | 17 | "Her muscles coiled, ready to" | | 18 | "She forced herself to turn" | | 19 | "It was in one of" |
| | ratio | 0.407 | |
| 34.07% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 92 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | 0 | "The London air, thick with" | | 1 | "Richmond Park was a different" | | 2 | "It was a pocket of" | | 3 | "The air here tasted of" | | 4 | "Wildflowers, a riot of colour" | | 5 | "She hadn’t come here for" | | 6 | "The Heartstone pendant, resting against" | | 7 | "It was the same heat" | | 8 | "Something was happening." | | 9 | "Something that had its roots" | | 10 | "Rory pulled the silver chain" | | 11 | "The thumbnail-sized crimson gem glowed" | | 12 | "The heat against her fingertips" | | 13 | "She scanned the clearing, her" | | 14 | "The ancient standing stones that" | | 15 | "They had always felt protective," | | 16 | "Tonight, they felt like cage" | | 17 | "A twig snapped." | | 18 | "Her head whipped toward the" | | 19 | "Richmond Park was full of" |
| | ratio | 0.852 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 60.89% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers, a riot of colour that had no business existing in the autumn chill, carpeted the clearing in a soft, luminescent haze." | | 1 | "She scanned the clearing, her cool-headed intelligence warring with a primal instinct that screamed this was a bad idea." | | 2 | "The ancient standing stones that marked the Grove’s boundary loomed like silent, moss-covered sentinels." | | 3 | "It was the same feeling she used to get with Evan, that sense of a predator’s gaze lingering just out of sight, waiting for her to make a mistake." | | 4 | "A shape that was taller and thinner than any man, unfolding itself from behind a trunk." | | 5 | "The ground seemed to shift under her feet, the soft carpet of flowers feeling spongy and treacherous, as if trying to hold her in place." | | 6 | "For a moment, she just lay there, gasping, her heart hammering against her ribs like a trapped bird." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she called out, her voice steadier than she felt" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she called out (call out)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |