| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "a whisper swallowed instantly [instantly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.4 | |
| 91.77% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1215 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 17.70% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1215 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "shattered" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "gloom" | | 4 | "perfect" | | 5 | "reminder" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "sense of" | | 10 | "navigate" | | 11 | "scanning" | | 12 | "throbbed" | | 13 | "lurched" | | 14 | "familiar" | | 15 | "vibrated" | | 16 | "wavering" | | 17 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 121 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 121 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "tried to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "seemed to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 124 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 6 | | markdownWords | 7 | | totalWords | 1210 | | ratio | 0.006 | | matches | | 0 | "snap" | | 1 | "Eva." | | 2 | "Ssssskrrrt." | | 3 | "Snap." | | 4 | "Open," | | 5 | "Open now." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 20 | | wordCount | 1200 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 0.33 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Hel" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Hel | 3 | | Silas | 2 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Brendan | 1 | | Aurora | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Silas" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Brendan" | | 4 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Hel" | | 4 | "Fae" | | 5 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 59.64% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "smelled like sugar and rot" | | 1 | "looked like a faint, starless smudge on t" | | 2 | "shrub that seemed to lunge at her as she passed" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1210 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 124 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 33.61 | | std | 26.34 | | cv | 0.784 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 118 | | 1 | 75 | | 2 | 77 | | 3 | 62 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 83 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 47 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 58 | | 12 | 35 | | 13 | 45 | | 14 | 48 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 55 | | 17 | 27 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 43 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 45 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 37 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 36 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 41 | | 33 | 40 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 26 |
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| 87.86% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 121 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "were gone" | | 3 | "been moved" | | 4 | "was obscured" | | 5 | "were elongated" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 7 | | totalVerbs | 217 | | matches | | 0 | "was hammering" | | 1 | "were doing" | | 2 | "was shifting" | | 3 | "was opening" | | 4 | "was stalking" | | 5 | "was sweating" | | 6 | "was standing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 124 | | ratio | 0.056 | | matches | | 0 | "She had tried to leave ten minutes ago, or perhaps an hour—it was impossible to tell." | | 1 | "Time here didn’t tick; it bled." | | 2 | "Aurora stepped carefully, her left wrist throbbing—a reminder of the childhood accident that had given her the crescent-shaped scar." | | 3 | "The warmth was no longer a pulse; it was a steady, agonizing ember." | | 4 | "She looked down and saw her own reflection in a small pool of water—a distorted, elongated blur." | | 5 | "She vaulted over a fallen log—old wood, wet and slick with sap—and landed hard, catching herself on her hands." | | 6 | "The door hadn't just closed; it had been moved." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1209 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 45 | | adverbRatio | 0.03722084367245657 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009925558312655087 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 124 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 124 | | mean | 9.76 | | std | 6.61 | | cv | 0.678 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 33 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 30 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 19 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 29.84% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 25 | | diversityRatio | 0.23387096774193547 | | totalSentences | 124 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 42.61% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 51 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boots crunched on gravel" | | 1 | "She checked her phone, her" | | 2 | "She had tried to leave" | | 3 | "She clutched the small, rough" | | 4 | "It was warm, radiating a" | | 5 | "They looked too perfect, too" | | 6 | "She rubbed it absentmindedly, grounding" | | 7 | "She was here for Silas." | | 8 | "It was close." | | 9 | "Her voice was a whisper," | | 10 | "It came from somewhere behind" | | 11 | "She knew this clearing." | | 12 | "She knew this clearing." | | 13 | "She stopped, turning in a" | | 14 | "She remembered the dip in" | | 15 | "She remembered the grey rock" | | 16 | "It was Eva’s voice." | | 17 | "She thought about her father," | | 18 | "She forced her breathing to" | | 19 | "She wasn't a victim." |
| | ratio | 0.443 | |
| 46.96% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 95 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter pulled her collar" | | 2 | "Her boots crunched on gravel" | | 3 | "She checked her phone, her" | | 4 | "She had tried to leave" | | 5 | "She clutched the small, rough" | | 6 | "It was warm, radiating a" | | 7 | "The codex had warned of" | | 8 | "The wildflowers that should have" | | 9 | "They looked too perfect, too" | | 10 | "Aurora stepped carefully, her left" | | 11 | "She rubbed it absentmindedly, grounding" | | 12 | "She was here for Silas." | | 13 | "The pendant in her hand" | | 14 | "The warmth was no longer" | | 15 | "A Hel portal." | | 16 | "It was close." | | 17 | "Her voice was a whisper," | | 18 | "A dry, slithering sound followed" | | 19 | "It came from somewhere behind" |
| | ratio | 0.826 | |
| 86.96% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | | 0 | "To her left, the dense" | | 1 | "If a Hel portal was" |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 58.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "It was warm, radiating a deep, rhythmic heat that felt less like a battery and more like a living thing pressed against her skin." | | 1 | "Right now, it was hammering against her bones, demanding she move." | | 2 | "The wildflowers that should have been dormant in the late autumn mist bloomed in violent profusion, their petals a neon shock of purple and gold against the glo…" | | 3 | "Aurora stepped carefully, her left wrist throbbing—a reminder of the childhood accident that had given her the crescent-shaped scar." | | 4 | "She was a delivery girl who could navigate a three-dimensional labyrinth." | | 5 | "The flame cast a wavering cone of orange light that refused to illuminate more than a two-foot radius." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "the figure whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.4 | |