| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.545 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 87.17% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1169 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "utterly" | | 1 | "really" | | 2 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1169 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "profound" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "trembled" | | 5 | "scanned" | | 6 | "oppressive" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "racing" | | 9 | "echoed" | | 10 | "weight" | | 11 | "anticipation" | | 12 | "could feel" | | 13 | "pounding" | | 14 | "footsteps" | | 15 | "tracing" | | 16 | "chilled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 102 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 86.83% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 102 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 107 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1158 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.50% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 32 | | wordCount | 1120 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.25 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Aurora | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Grove | 6 | | Heartstone | 2 | | November | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Rory | 14 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Empress" | | 3 | "Heartstone" | | 4 | "Pendant" | | 5 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Golden" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "November" |
| | globalScore | 0.875 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 87.50% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed benign even friendly" | | 1 | "looked like something else entirely—hungr" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1158 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 93.59% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 41 | | mean | 28.24 | | std | 13.49 | | cv | 0.478 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 67 | | 1 | 48 | | 2 | 46 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 51 | | 5 | 27 | | 6 | 34 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 48 | | 9 | 32 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 26 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 28 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 37 | | 20 | 40 | | 21 | 25 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 40 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 31 | | 26 | 27 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 31 | | 29 | 27 | | 30 | 31 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 30 | | 33 | 44 | | 34 | 28 | | 35 | 30 | | 36 | 40 | | 37 | 31 | | 38 | 39 | | 39 | 26 | | 40 | 19 |
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| 94.94% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "being dragged" | | 1 | "was joined" | | 2 | "been awakened" |
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| 91.30% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 184 | | matches | | 0 | "was being" | | 1 | "was practically burning" | | 2 | "were gaining" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 107 | | ratio | 0.103 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the strap of her backpack and checked her watch—11:47 PM." | | 1 | "But the dreams had been getting worse—whispers in a language she almost understood, shadows that moved with purpose." | | 2 | "That was the thing about the Grove—nature didn't follow normal rules here." | | 3 | "Another sound, this time from the opposite direction—a soft, scraping noise, like something being dragged across the ground." | | 4 | "Now, in the moonlight, they looked like something else entirely—hungry, watchful, waiting." | | 5 | "It had never reacted this strongly before, not even when—" | | 6 | "And yet she could feel them—multiple presences, watching her from the shadows." | | 7 | "A figure emerged from between the trees—tall, slender, its form indistinct in the darkness." | | 8 | "The figure tilted its head, a gesture of curiosity or mockery—she couldn't tell which." | | 9 | "It was joined by other sounds—whispers, sighs, the soft padding of footsteps following her." | | 10 | "The night air felt cold against her skin, and the sounds of the city—distant traffic, the barking of a dog—were a welcome relief." |
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| 95.65% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1134 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 51 | | adverbRatio | 0.04497354497354497 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012345679012345678 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 107 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 107 | | mean | 10.82 | | std | 5.46 | | cv | 0.505 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 27 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 46.42% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.3177570093457944 | | totalSentences | 107 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a profound, heavy quiet" | | 1 | "Just shadows and stillness." | | 2 | "Of course there wasn't." |
| | ratio | 0.031 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 1 | "She passed between the standing" | | 2 | "She reached beneath her sweater," | | 3 | "It was warmer than before," | | 4 | "she whispered to herself" | | 5 | "she called out, her voice" | | 6 | "She took a deep breath," | | 7 | "She was being paranoid." | | 8 | "She dropped it, letting it" | | 9 | "she said, her voice steadier" | | 10 | "She whipped her head around," | | 11 | "She approached the ancient tree" | | 12 | "It had never reacted this" | | 13 | "It was impossible, utterly impossible." | | 14 | "she called out, her voice" | | 15 | "She should never have come" | | 16 | "She yelped, stumbling backward." | | 17 | "she warned, backing away slowly" | | 18 | "It was joined by other" | | 19 | "She risked a glance backward." |
| | ratio | 0.247 | |
| 78.56% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 74 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "The moon hung high over" | | 1 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "Another delivery shift at Golden" | | 3 | "The pendant beneath her sweater" | | 4 | "Rory hadn't planned to return" | | 5 | "She passed between the standing" | | 6 | "The air shifted, grew thick" | | 7 | "That was the thing about" | | 8 | "Rory pulled a flashlight from" | | 9 | "The beam cut through the" | | 10 | "Everything looked as it should:" | | 11 | "The silence was too complete." | | 12 | "She reached beneath her sweater," | | 13 | "It was warmer than before," | | 14 | "The deep crimson gemstone pulsed" | | 15 | "she whispered to herself" | | 16 | "The pendant had been reacting" | | 17 | "Yu-Fei had noticed it during" | | 18 | "Rory moved deeper into the" | | 19 | "The wildflowers seemed to lean" |
| | ratio | 0.763 | |
| 51.55% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, in the moonlight, they" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 83.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant beneath her sweater grew warm against her skin as she approached the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary." | | 1 | "The pendant had been reacting strangely for weeks, its warmth growing stronger, its glow more persistent." | | 2 | "The pendant pulsed against her chest, a steady rhythm that matched her own racing heart." | | 3 | "The pendant was practically burning now, its heat spreading through her chest like a fever." | | 4 | "More figures emerged behind it, their forms shifting and blurring at the edges of her vision." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "she called out, her voice too loud in the oppressive silence" | | 1 | "she said, her voice steadier than she felt" | | 2 | "she called out, her voice trembling despite her efforts to remain calm" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she called out (call out)" | | 2 | "she called out (call out)" | | 3 | "she warned (warn)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.455 | | leniency | 0.909 | | rawRatio | 0.8 | | effectiveRatio | 0.727 | |