| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 22 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.091 | | effectiveRatio | 0.091 | |
| 65.12% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 860 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "cautiously" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "deliberately" | | 4 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 41.86% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 860 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silk" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "flicker" | | 3 | "peril" | | 4 | "chill" | | 5 | "reminder" | | 6 | "unspoken" | | 7 | "tension" | | 8 | "unreadable" | | 9 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 92.95% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "y with surprise" | | 1 | "was desperate" |
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| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 52 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 851 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 17 | | wordCount | 715 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.84 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 2 | | Lucien | 6 | | Moreau | 1 | | Brick | 2 | | Lane | 2 | | French-accented | 1 | | English | 1 | | Rory | 1 | | Frenchman | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Lucien" | | 2 | "Moreau" | | 3 | "Rory" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 41.30% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if weighing something unseen" | | 1 | "as if sensing the fragile tension" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 851 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 92.92% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 30.39 | | std | 14.44 | | cv | 0.475 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 74 | | 1 | 56 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 58 | | 6 | 54 | | 7 | 28 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 37 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 28 | | 14 | 36 | | 15 | 33 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 28 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 33 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 29 | | 24 | 34 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 33 |
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| 98.52% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 118 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 62 | | ratio | 0.145 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d been halfway through answering an email when the knock came—soft, hesitant, but insistent." | | 1 | "His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—fixed on her through the slight gap in the door as if weighing something unseen." | | 2 | "She noticed the subtle change—Lucien’s jaw was clenched, a shadow behind those impossibly calm eyes." | | 3 | "Their last parting still lingered like smoke in her lungs—half regret, half relief." | | 4 | "She had every right to hold him at arm’s length, but something—maybe the rare vulnerability in those uneven eyes—pulled her forward." | | 5 | "The room felt too small; the air thick with old grudges and unspoken regrets." | | 6 | "She glanced up, finally meeting his eyes—the amber one softened, the black one still unreadable." | | 7 | "Lucien offered a rare, genuine smile—less the polished mask of the Frenchman fixer, more the man who craved a second chance." | | 8 | "Outside, dusk settled over Brick Lane, but inside the cluttered flat, a fragile warmth began to bloom between two people who had once lost each other—and might just find their way back again." |
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| 81.71% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 729 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "stirring half-buried memories" |
| | adverbCount | 39 | | adverbRatio | 0.053497942386831275 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0205761316872428 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 62 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 62 | | mean | 13.73 | | std | 7.5 | | cv | 0.547 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 28 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 23 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 22 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 21 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 22 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 74.73% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.5161290322580645 | | totalSentences | 62 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 49 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 49 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d been halfway through answering" | | 1 | "She thought she knew who" | | 2 | "His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one" | | 3 | "she said, voice clipped, cold" | | 4 | "Her bright blue eyes flashed" | | 5 | "he replied, the ease in" | | 6 | "She swallowed hard, the familiar" | | 7 | "She stepped aside without a" | | 8 | "She noticed the subtle change—Lucien’s" | | 9 | "She hadn’t expected this visit," | | 10 | "Their last parting still lingered" | | 11 | "His gaze slid to a" | | 12 | "She was silent, heartbeat hammering" | | 13 | "She stepped fully inside and" | | 14 | "Her voice was quiet but" | | 15 | "His expression was sharp, pained" | | 16 | "She had every right to" | | 17 | "She scrubbed a hand through" | | 18 | "she said softly" | | 19 | "He winced at the accusation" |
| | ratio | 0.571 | |
| 0.82% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 45 | | totalSentences | 49 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora paused in the cramped" | | 1 | "The late afternoon light filtered" | | 2 | "She’d been halfway through answering" | | 3 | "She thought she knew who" | | 4 | "The silk sheen of his" | | 5 | "His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one" | | 6 | "she said, voice clipped, cold" | | 7 | "Her bright blue eyes flashed" | | 8 | "he replied, the ease in" | | 9 | "She swallowed hard, the familiar" | | 10 | "She stepped aside without a" | | 11 | "Ptolemy, the squat tabby cat" | | 12 | "Lucien crouched smoothly, hand extending" | | 13 | "The cat sniffed, then chose" | | 14 | "Aurora watched, arms crossed, leaning" | | 15 | "She noticed the subtle change—Lucien’s" | | 16 | "She hadn’t expected this visit," | | 17 | "Their last parting still lingered" | | 18 | "Lucien said, standing and brushing" | | 19 | "A flicker of a smile" |
| | ratio | 0.918 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 49 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, standing there in the" |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 71.43% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—fixed on her through the slight gap in the door as if weighing something unseen." | | 1 | "Lucien offered a rare, genuine smile—less the polished mask of the Frenchman fixer, more the man who craved a second chance." | | 2 | "Outside, dusk settled over Brick Lane, but inside the cluttered flat, a fragile warmth began to bloom between two people who had once lost each other—and might …" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "He paused, voice dropping to a murmur" | | 1 | "she whispered, not meeting his gaze" | | 2 | "she said, voice breathless," |
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| 13.64% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she admitted (admit)" | | 2 | "he agreed (agree)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 22 | | tagDensity | 0.364 | | leniency | 0.727 | | rawRatio | 0.375 | | effectiveRatio | 0.273 | |