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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMQY01MNZV0GY6PVGK2QXZJ
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Model:
Qwen 3.5 397B A17B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
2m 36s
Cost:
$0.024499
Provider:
Alibaba
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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Meta
AI
The green neon sign above the entrance buzzed with a low, insectile hum, casting a sickly emerald glow over the wet pavement of Soho. Inside,
the air was thick with
the scent of aged wood, polished brass, and the faint, metallic tang of rain clinging to coats. Aurora Carter sat in her usual corner booth, the one shadowed by a large-scale map of the London Underground from 1948. She traced the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist with her thumb, a nervous tic she had never
managed to
unlearn. The skin there was pale, raised
slightly
against the rest of her hand, a permanent reminder of a childhood accident that felt like it belonged to someone else entirely. She was off the clock. The delivery bag from the Golden Empress
was stowed
under the seat, smelling faintly of sesame oil and soy. At twenty-five, Rory felt older than the reflection in the darkened window suggested. Her straight, shoulder-length black hair
was tucked
behind her ears, exposing the sharp line of her jaw. Her eyes, bright blue and often too observant for her own good, scanned the room without
really
seeing it. She
was waiting
for no one, which was why her stomach tightened when the door opened and the bell chimed. The man who stepped out of the London drizzle shook his umbrella with a familiarity that suggested he belonged here. He wore a suit that cost more than Rory made in three months of delivery shifts. When he turned, the overhead light caught his face, and the air left Rory's lungs in a sharp hiss. It was Rhys. They had studied Pre-Law together at Cardiff University, back when she was still Brendan and Jennifer Carter's daughter, back before Evan, before the flight to London. They hadn't seen each other in three years. Rhys spotted her instantly. There was no moment of uncertainty, no squinting against the dim light. He walked over, his shoes clicking on the floorboards, and stopped at the edge of the booth. He
look
ed exactly as he should have: successful, polished, unbroken. Rory, he said. His voice was warm, but it carried the
weight
of a question. Rhys, she replied. She didn't stand. Standing felt like an admission that she needed to measure herself against him, and at five foot six, she knew she would come up short. Sit. He slid into the booth opposite her. The leather creaked. Up close, she could see the fine lines around his eyes, the only evidence that time had passed for him too. You
look
well, he said. London suits you. It was a polite lie. They both knew it. Rory
was wearing
a black turtleneck and jeans, her delivery jacket draped over the seat beside her. She
look
ed like someone who spent her nights
navigating
traffic on a moped, not someone who
was destined
for the barristers' chambers her father had envisioned. And you
look
like you're running the place, Rory said, nodding at his suit. Chambers, actually. Junior barrister. He paused, swirling the condensation on his pint glass. I heard you dropped out. I left. Right. Left. He took a sip of his beer. Your father asked about you. At the Christmas party. Last year. Rory felt a cold knot tighten in her stomach. Her father, Brendan, with his Irish brogue and rigid expectations. Her mother, Jennifer, worrying in Welsh. They thought she was still studying. They thought she was safe. I've been busy, she said. Busy enough to hide? Rhys didn't say it with malice. He said it with the gentle curiosity of someone who genuinely wanted to understand the puzzle she had become. We all heard rumors, Rory. About Evan. About why you ran. I didn't run. I relocated. Semantics. He leaned forward, his elbows on the table. You were going to be brilliant. You were the sharpest mind in our year. Now you're... here. Here was a dimly lit bar in Soho called The Raven's Nest. Here was a flat above the bar where the pipes clanked at night and the landlord watched everything with hazel eyes that missed nothing. Here was safety, bought at the price of her old life. Here is quiet, Rory said. Before Rhys could respond, a shadow fell over the table. Silas Blackwood approached from the bar, moving with the deliberate, measured pace of a man who conserves energy. He wore a crisp white shirt with the sleeves rolled up, revealing forearms that
look
ed like they had seen more than just pouring drinks. There was a slight limp in his left leg, the result of an old knee injury that never quite healed right, but he carried himself with a quiet authority that made the room
feel
smaller. He placed a fresh glass of water in front of Rory without
being asked
. His silver signet ring glinted on his right hand as he set it down. His grey-streaked auburn hair was neatly trimmed, matching the beard that framed a face lined with secrets. Everything alright, Rory? Silas asked. His voice was low, a rumble that barely traveled beyond the booth. His hazel eyes
flicked
to Rhys, assessing, cataloging. Everything's fine, Si, Rory said. Old friend from university. Silas held Rhys's gaze for a second longer than was comfortable. It was the
look
of a former MI6 agent evaluating a potential threat. Then he nodded, once. Let me
know
if you need anything. He turned and walked back toward the bar, the limp visible only if you
were looking
for it. Rhys watched him go. He seems protective, Rhys noted. He's the landlord. And a friend. He
look
s like he's seen things. We all have, Rory said. She picked up the water glass. The condensation was cold against her palm. You didn't come here to talk about my father, Rhys. Or my career. No. He sighed, the sound heavy in the quiet space between them. I came here because I'm in London for a case. And I wanted to see if you were real. Real. The word
hung in the air
, mingling with the dust motes
dancing
in the light from the old black-and-white photographs on the walls. Photos of spies and soldiers, people who had lived lives of consequence and danger. Rory
look
ed at her reflection in the water. She saw the bright blue eyes that had once
look
ed at case law textbooks and now
look
ed at street maps to find the fastest delivery route. She saw the scar on her wrist. She saw the woman who had fled an abusive ex named Evan to find
sanctuary
in a spymaster's bar. I'm real, she said
softly
. You're different. People change. Not like this. Not overnight. He reached across the table, his hand hovering over hers before pulling back. I missed you, Rory. We all did. The law firm... it wasn't the same without you challenging us. Regret is a heavy thing. It sits in the chest like a stone. Rory thought about the life she had left in Cardiff. The safety of expectation. The predictable trajectory. Then she thought about Evan's hands, the shouting, the fear that had driven her to Eva's phone call, the desperate flight to London. She thought about Silas, who had given her a roof and no questions asked. I can't go back, Rhys. I
know
. He finished his beer and set the glass down. I just wanted you to
know
that you're not forgotten. He stood up, buttoning his suit jacket. He
look
ed like a man returning to a world of order and rules, a world Rory had voluntarily exited. He paused,
look
ing down at her. Take care of yourself, Rory. You too, Rhys. He walked out into the night, the bell chiming again as the door closed. The green neon sign buzzed outside, casting its emerald glow over the empty booth. Rory sat alone, the silence of the bar rushing back in to fill the space he had occupied. Silas
was wiping
down the counter, the cloth moving in steady, rhythmic circles. He didn't
look
at her, but she knew he
was waiting
. She traced the scar on her wrist again,
feel
ing the raised skin under her thumb. The
weight
of time was there, in the quiet, in the dust, in the life she had built from the ashes of the one she had lost. It was enough. It had to be.
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2/17/2026, 2:50:13 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
0
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
78.6629%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1406
totalAiIsmAdverbs
3
found
0
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
1
adverb
"softly"
count
1
2
adverb
"really"
count
1
highlights
0
"slightly"
1
"softly"
2
"really"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
57.3257%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1406
totalAiIsms
6
found
0
word
"sanctuary"
count
1
1
word
"flicked"
count
1
2
word
"weight"
count
2
3
word
"dancing"
count
1
4
word
"navigating"
count
1
highlights
0
"sanctuary"
1
"flicked"
2
"weight"
3
"dancing"
4
"navigating"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
2
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"air was thick with"
count
1
1
label
"hung in the air"
count
1
highlights
0
"the air was thick with"
1
"hung in the air"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
146
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
5
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
146
filterMatches
0
"look"
1
"feel"
2
"know"
hedgeMatches
0
"managed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
146
matches
0
"know that you're"
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
41
mean
34.12
std
32.39
cv
0.949
sampleLengths
0
118
1
93
2
92
3
43
4
15
5
32
6
39
7
52
8
14
9
18
10
2
11
20
12
41
13
40
14
5
15
26
16
47
17
5
18
87
19
45
20
25
21
9
22
35
23
22
24
5
25
6
26
6
27
31
28
31
29
1
30
97
31
5
32
2
33
2
34
36
35
67
36
5
37
21
38
37
39
3
40
119
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
4
totalSentences
146
matches
0
"was stowed"
1
"was tucked"
2
"was destined"
3
"being asked"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
5
totalVerbs
256
matches
0
"was waiting"
1
"was wearing"
2
"were looking"
3
"was wiping"
4
"was waiting"
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1407
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
47
adverbRatio
0.033404406538734895
lyAdverbCount
16
lyAdverbRatio
0.011371712864250177
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
146
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
146
mean
9.58
std
7.48
cv
0.78
sampleLengths
0
24
1
23
2
21
3
21
4
29
5
5
6
19
7
13
8
17
9
19
10
20
11
20
12
16
13
19
14
3
15
26
16
8
17
4
18
12
19
17
20
10
21
3
22
12
23
3
24
3
25
25
26
1
27
7
28
3
29
21
30
5
31
3
32
5
33
4
34
17
35
26
36
14
37
2
38
2
39
9
40
5
41
2
42
1
43
1
44
7
45
5
46
4
47
2
48
9
49
10
37.2146%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
24
diversityRatio
0.3219178082191781
totalSentences
146
uniqueOpeners
47
100.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
0
fancyCount
0
fancyTags
(empty)
92.5414%