| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.8 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.75% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1333 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 24.98% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1333 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "rhythmic" | | 1 | "resolved" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "fractured" | | 4 | "footsteps" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "searing" | | 7 | "beacon" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "depths" | | 10 | "perfect" | | 11 | "familiar" | | 12 | "warmth" | | 13 | "crystalline" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 97 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 48 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 6 | | totalWords | 1319 | | ratio | 0.005 | | matches | | 0 | "When it burns, find the stones." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 27 | | wordCount | 1296 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 0.62 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 8 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Evan | 4 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | London | 2 | | English | 1 | | Jennifer | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Cardiff | 2 | | Eva | 3 | | Croydon | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Evan" | | 2 | "Empress" | | 3 | "Jennifer" | | 4 | "Carter" | | 5 | "Eva" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Cardiff" | | 4 | "Croydon" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like an anchor dragging her past t" | | 1 | "as if catching their breath" | | 2 | "seemed protective and later became a cage" | | 3 | "sounded like Jennifer Carter's voice calli" | | 4 | "felt like a missing tooth" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 5 | | per1kWords | 3.791 | | wordCount | 1319 | | matches | | 0 | "not by fire but by age" | | 1 | "not frantic, but eager" | | 2 | "not toward her flat where he knew to look, but into the sprawl of London, letting the stone guide her until" | | 3 | "not in law school, not in the self-defense classes Eva had forced her to take, but in the three years with Evan" | | 4 | "not in the self-defense classes Eva had forced her to take, but in the three years with Evan" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 43.97 | | std | 29.49 | | cv | 0.671 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 82 | | 1 | 90 | | 2 | 63 | | 3 | 58 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 66 | | 6 | 102 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 64 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 63 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 77 | | 13 | 77 | | 14 | 54 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 63 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 61 | | 19 | 70 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 27 | | 22 | 49 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 53 | | 25 | 48 | | 26 | 26 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 44 | | 29 | 14 |
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| 94.30% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "been frozen" | | 1 | "been summoned" | | 2 | "been made" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 225 | | matches | | 0 | "was searing" | | 1 | "were dying" | | 2 | "was beating" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 97 | | ratio | 0.144 | | matches | | 0 | "She pulled her coat tighter, her left hand instinctively finding the crescent scar on her right wrist—a childhood habit that surfaced when the ground felt unstable beneath her feet." | | 1 | "The note that had accompanied the pendant—unsigned, dropped through the mail slot of her flat above Silas' bar three days prior—had simply read: *When it burns, find the stones.*" | | 2 | "Between them, wildflowers carpeted the ground—bluebells and foxgloves and something white and star-shaped that shouldn't have existed in late autumn." | | 3 | "Her trainers sank into loam that shouldn't have been soft; the ground had been frozen concrete on the path, yet here her soles disappeared into moss that squelched with the sound of wet wool." | | 4 | "She pressed her palm against it, feeling the rhythm accelerate—not frantic, but eager." | | 5 | "The sound came from the bluebells, or perhaps from the spaces between them—a susurrus that resolved into syllables, then words." | | 6 | "Not the wind—there was none." | | 7 | "It pulsed now in warning, a deep crimson glow visible in her peripheral vision, and she understood with horrible clarity that the grove existed in a pocket—that the boundary marked by these stones was permeable, and something had been waiting for the gem to bring her here." | | 8 | "The whispers coalesced into footsteps—bare feet on moss, circling the clearing." | | 9 | "Behind her, the footsteps matched her pace exactly—when she sprinted, they sprinted; when she stumbled, they waited, patient as geology." | | 10 | "She had trained for this, she realized—not in law school, not in the self-defense classes Eva had forced her to take, but in the three years with Evan." | | 11 | "In the silence, she heard breathing that was not her own—low, rhythmic, originating from inside the standing stone she had leaned against." | | 12 | "The granite face shifted, mineral grains rearranging into features: a mouth, wide and lipless; eyes like knots in wood, opening to reveal depths where stars were dying." | | 13 | "The air pressure dropped, her ears popped, and the London night—the distant traffic, the reassuring glow of civilization—faded into a silence so complete she could hear the individual beats of her own heart." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 164 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 5 | | adverbRatio | 0.03048780487804878 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006097560975609756 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 97 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 97 | | mean | 13.6 | | std | 10.35 | | cv | 0.761 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 29 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 32 | | 6 | 29 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 34 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 46 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 24 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 20 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 21 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 26 |
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| 35.09% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 15 | | diversityRatio | 0.30526315789473685 | | totalSentences | 95 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 94.70% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "She pulled her coat tighter," | | 1 | "She shouldn't have come." | | 2 | "She checked again." | | 3 | "She pocketed the device, her" | | 4 | "They released a fragrance too" | | 5 | "Her trainers sank into loam" | | 6 | "She pressed her palm against" | | 7 | "She had come because of" | | 8 | "She had run, not toward" | | 9 | "Her mother's tongue, butchered and" | | 10 | "She backed toward the nearest" | | 11 | "She covered it with her" | | 12 | "It had known since she'd" | | 13 | "It pulsed now in warning," | | 14 | "She blinked, and the moon" | | 15 | "She saw nothing, but the" | | 16 | "It came from everywhere and" | | 17 | "She pushed off from the" | | 18 | "Her trainers slipped on moss" | | 19 | "She had trained for this," |
| | ratio | 0.313 | |
| 26.27% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 72 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant had been warm" | | 1 | "November air bit at her" | | 2 | "She pulled her coat tighter," | | 3 | "She shouldn't have come." | | 4 | "That thought cycled through her" | | 5 | "The chain was silver, thin" | | 6 | "The note that had accompanied" | | 7 | "The stones appeared at midnight," | | 8 | "Rory checked her phone." | | 9 | "She checked again." | | 10 | "The digital numbers shivered, flickering" | | 11 | "She pocketed the device, her" | | 12 | "They released a fragrance too" | | 13 | "The temperature dropped ten degrees." | | 14 | "Her trainers sank into loam" | | 15 | "The pendant flared, crimson light" | | 16 | "She pressed her palm against" | | 17 | "She had come because of" | | 18 | "The pendant had begun to" | | 19 | "She had run, not toward" |
| | ratio | 0.867 | |
| 60.24% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "Because three nights ago, standing" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | technicalSentenceCount | 14 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant had been warm against her sternum for three miles, a steady thrum like a second heartbeat that intensified as Rory passed through the gates of Richm…" | | 1 | "November air bit at her cheeks, but the gemstone remained hot, almost uncomfortable, pulsing in rhythmic intervals that matched no biological function she under…" | | 2 | "She pulled her coat tighter, her left hand instinctively finding the crescent scar on her right wrist—a childhood habit that surfaced when the ground felt unsta…" | | 3 | "The digital numbers shivered, flickering backward by a minute, then held steady as if catching their breath." | | 4 | "She pocketed the device, her breath misting in silver clouds that lingered too long in the air, hanging suspended like ectoplasm." | | 5 | "Her trainers sank into loam that shouldn't have been soft; the ground had been frozen concrete on the path, yet here her soles disappeared into moss that squelc…" | | 6 | "Same hooded jacket, same stance that had once seemed protective and later became a cage." | | 7 | "She had run, not toward her flat where he knew to look, but into the sprawl of London, letting the stone guide her until she stood here, shivering in a lawyer's…" | | 8 | "Welsh, she realized with a jolt that tightened her throat." | | 9 | "The shadows lengthened independently of the moonlight, stretching toward her in attenuated fingers that melted the wildflowers where they touched." | | 10 | "Blinked again, and her breath froze mid-exhalation, crystallizing into a hovering cloud that did not fall." | | 11 | "Her trainers slipped on moss that had grown wet with something darker than dew." | | 12 | "The pendant cooled abruptly, leaving a cold spot above her heart that felt like a missing tooth." | | 13 | "The scar on her wrist split open, blood welling in a perfect crescent that dripped onto the bluebells." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |