| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.462 | | leniency | 0.923 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1294 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 26.58% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1294 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "fractured" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "furrowed" | | 4 | "chill" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "throb" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "absolutely" | | 10 | "silk" | | 11 | "silence" | | 12 | "flicked" | | 13 | "could feel" | | 14 | "flickered" | | 15 | "perfect" | | 16 | "crystalline" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 103 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.38% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 103 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 110 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 17 | | totalWords | 1298 | | ratio | 0.013 | | matches | | 0 | "midnight, the grove, come alone if you want answers about your mother" | | 1 | "...waiting... so long... finally..." | | 2 | "Run." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 1204 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Grove | 1 | | Silas | 2 | | Eva | 3 | | Jennifer | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 12 | | October | 1 | | Isolde | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Hel | 1 | | Roman | 1 | | Empire | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Grove" | | 1 | "Silas" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Jennifer" | | 4 | "Carter" | | 5 | "Rory" | | 6 | "October" | | 7 | "Isolde" | | 8 | "Heartstone" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 9.15% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed taller now, their bark darker and more deeply furrowed" | | 1 | "seemed obscenely loud in the stillness" | | 2 | "seemed closer" | | 3 | "Not quite walking — their movement held the quality of shadows when the light source shifts, a gliding discontinuity that made her eyes ache to follow" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 5 | | per1kWords | 3.852 | | wordCount | 1298 | | matches | | 0 | "Not a crack but a slow, deliberate scraping, like stone against stone" | | 1 | "Not just watching from one direction but from all around, from the spaces between the trees, from the" | | 2 | "Neither male nor" | | 3 | "neither young nor" | | 4 | "no longer pulsing but" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 40 | | mean | 32.45 | | std | 24.99 | | cv | 0.77 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 51 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 79 | | 3 | 60 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 78 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 72 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 40 | | 10 | 1 | | 11 | 38 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 65 | | 14 | 63 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 53 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 57 | | 21 | 50 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 59 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 70 | | 27 | 31 | | 28 | 22 | | 29 | 33 | | 30 | 43 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 55 | | 34 | 41 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 26 | | 37 | 53 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 26 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 200 | | matches | | 0 | "was watching" | | 1 | "were rolling" | | 2 | "was circling" | | 3 | "was looking" |
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| 64.94% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 110 | | ratio | 0.027 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground between them — foxgloves and nightshade and things she couldn't name — blooming in defiance of October's chill." | | 1 | "Not the sustained heat that meant a Hel portal was near — just a single throb, like a heartbeat." | | 2 | "Not quite walking — their movement held the quality of shadows when the light source shifts, a gliding discontinuity that made her eyes ache to follow." |
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| 98.60% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1202 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 50 | | adverbRatio | 0.04159733777038269 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014143094841930116 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 110 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 110 | | mean | 11.8 | | std | 8.78 | | cv | 0.744 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 32 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 28 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 22 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 24 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 21 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 62.26% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.42452830188679247 | | totalSentences | 106 | | uniqueOpeners | 45 | |
| 75.76% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "Even the wind had died." | | 1 | "Then another to her left." |
| | ratio | 0.023 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd been here three times" | | 1 | "They'd warned her about coming" | | 2 | "They swayed without wind, a" | | 3 | "She moved to the center" | | 4 | "Her voice sounded thin and" | | 5 | "She cleared her throat, tried" | | 6 | "She strained to hear actual" | | 7 | "They were trees, ancient ones," | | 8 | "They couldn't move." | | 9 | "She'd watched Silas shift into" | | 10 | "She'd seen Eva manipulate shadows" | | 11 | "She'd delivered food to customers" | | 12 | "She turned toward it, her" | | 13 | "she said, aiming for confidence" | | 14 | "She could hear her own" | | 15 | "She could feel it, a" | | 16 | "Her breath came faster now," | | 17 | "It hadn't walked into view." | | 18 | "It was simply there, as" | | 19 | "She couldn't make out features," |
| | ratio | 0.261 | |
| 73.64% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 68 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "The oaks loomed against the" | | 1 | "Rory pushed through the last" | | 2 | "The Grove looked different at" | | 3 | "She'd been here three times" | | 4 | "They'd warned her about coming" | | 5 | "The standing stones formed their" | | 6 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground between" | | 7 | "They swayed without wind, a" | | 8 | "Rory checked her phone." | | 9 | "She moved to the center" | | 10 | "The Heartstone pendant beneath her" | | 11 | "The sensation made her press" | | 12 | "A branch cracked somewhere behind" | | 13 | "Rory spun, hand dropping to" | | 14 | "The trees stood motionless, their" | | 15 | "The sound had been sharp" | | 16 | "Her voice sounded thin and" | | 17 | "She cleared her throat, tried" | | 18 | "The wildflowers whispered among themselves." | | 19 | "She strained to hear actual" |
| | ratio | 0.773 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 68.45% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The oaks loomed against the night sky like skeletal sentries, their branches forming a lattice that filtered the moonlight into fractured silver coins on the fo…" | | 1 | "The standing stones formed their familiar ring around the clearing's perimeter, but the ancient oaks that comprised them seemed taller now, their bark darker an…" | | 2 | "Not the sustained heat that meant a Hel portal was near — just a single throb, like a heartbeat." | | 3 | "Rory's heart kicked against her ribs, a rapid staccato that seemed obscenely loud in the stillness." | | 4 | "An impossible adjustment of distance without motion, as though the space between them had simply contracted." |
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| 41.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory kept, fingers wrapped around the knife's handle" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.154 | | leniency | 0.308 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |