| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 89.07% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1372 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "lazily" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 5.25% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1372 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "rhythmic" | | 1 | "searing" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "racing" | | 4 | "sense of" | | 5 | "stomach" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "constructed" | | 8 | "pulsed" | | 9 | "warmth" | | 10 | "beacon" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "tracing" | | 13 | "scanning" | | 14 | "echo" | | 15 | "vibrated" | | 16 | "footfall" | | 17 | "navigated" | | 18 | "chaotic" | | 19 | "dancing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "t with warmth" | | 1 | "a jolt of horror" |
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| 70.71% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 99 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 100 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1369 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 36 | | wordCount | 1357 | | uniqueNames | 17 | | maxNameDensity | 0.74 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 6 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | London | 2 | | November | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Hel | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Welsh | 1 | | Irish | 1 | | Aurora | 10 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Evan" | | 2 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "London" | | 5 | "November" | | 6 | "Hel" | | 7 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | glossingSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "oranges that seemed to vibrate under the moonlight, their petals unfurled with a hunger that felt less botanical and more predatory" | | 1 | "draft that seemed to originate from inside her own bones" | | 2 | "weight that seemed to drain the heat from her skin" | | 3 | "looked like a hand reaching up from the g" | | 4 | "sounded like her own voice, but stripped o" | | 5 | "quite hold them together" | | 6 | "looked like an arm, a limb of solidified" |
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| 53.91% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.461 | | wordCount | 1369 | | matches | | 0 | "not with warmth, but with an icy burn" | | 1 | "not to a portal, but to the presence standing before her" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "suggested that whatever" |
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| 87.01% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 23 | | mean | 59.52 | | std | 27.06 | | cv | 0.455 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 94 | | 1 | 99 | | 2 | 93 | | 3 | 120 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 44 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 46 | | 8 | 81 | | 9 | 66 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 69 | | 12 | 56 | | 13 | 42 | | 14 | 52 | | 15 | 68 | | 16 | 60 | | 17 | 45 | | 18 | 56 | | 19 | 76 | | 20 | 58 | | 21 | 55 | | 22 | 57 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | |
| 46.39% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 217 | | matches | | 0 | "were spinning" | | 1 | "was wandering" | | 2 | "was painting" | | 3 | "were lengthening" | | 4 | "were marking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 6 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 100 | | ratio | 0.09 | | matches | | 0 | "They pushed up through the grass in violent bursts of color—impossible blues and searing oranges that seemed to vibrate under the moonlight, their petals unfurled with a hunger that felt less botanical and more predatory." | | 1 | "Time moved differently here; an hour inside could be minutes or days outside." | | 2 | "The movement had been sharp, distinct—the snap of a twig or the brush of fabric." | | 3 | "The sound hadn't been the scramble of claws; it had been deliberate." | | 4 | "They didn't stretch away from the light source; they pooled around the bases of the oak stones, thick and viscous, seeming to detach themselves from the objects that cast them." | | 5 | "Yet, the air displaced by the movement brushed against her cheek, carrying a scent that cut through the floral sweetness—the metallic tang of old blood and wet soil." | | 6 | "It didn't come from the air; it vibrated directly against the back of her skull, intimate and invasive." | | 7 | "They weren't just absence of light anymore; they were substance." | | 8 | "She was cool-headed; that was who she was." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 237 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 9 | | adverbRatio | 0.0379746835443038 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008438818565400843 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 100 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 100 | | mean | 13.69 | | std | 8.76 | | cv | 0.64 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 35 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 32 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 37 | | 12 | 33 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 30 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 25 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 31 | | 46 | 19 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 42.67% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.34 | | totalSentences | 100 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "Usually, it pulsed with a" | | 1 | "Then she heard the breathing." | | 2 | "Instead, the breathing grew louder," |
| | ratio | 0.031 | |
| 74.17% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "They pushed up through the" | | 1 | "She wrapped her coat tighter" | | 2 | "It was a draft that" | | 3 | "She checked her watch, a" | | 4 | "She had come for silence." | | 5 | "She needed to think, to" | | 6 | "Its silence suggested that whatever" | | 7 | "she called out" | | 8 | "Her voice sounded flat, absorbed" | | 9 | "It didn't echo." | | 10 | "It just died." | | 11 | "She forced herself to walk" | | 12 | "She reached the center of" | | 13 | "They didn't stretch away from" | | 14 | "It rippled, independent of the" | | 15 | "She blinked hard, rubbing her" | | 16 | "Her brain was painting monsters" | | 17 | "It wasn't hers." | | 18 | "It was slow, wet, and" | | 19 | "It matched the cadence of" |
| | ratio | 0.365 | |
| 48.54% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 79 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "The air inside the Fae" | | 1 | "Here, the air was too" | | 2 | "They pushed up through the" | | 3 | "Aurora Carter stopped just inside" | | 4 | "She wrapped her coat tighter" | | 5 | "It was a draft that" | | 6 | "She checked her watch, a" | | 7 | "Time moved differently here; an" | | 8 | "The uncertainty of it made" | | 9 | "She had come for silence." | | 10 | "That was the reason she" | | 11 | "She needed to think, to" | | 12 | "The Heartstone pendant lay cold" | | 13 | "Tonight, it was inert, a" | | 14 | "Aurora touched it with her" | | 15 | "The stone remained dark." | | 16 | "That was wrong." | | 17 | "Its silence suggested that whatever" | | 18 | "A rustle came from her" | | 19 | "Aurora froze, her bright blue" |
| | ratio | 0.823 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "If the Grove was a" | | 1 | "Yet, the air displaced by" |
| | ratio | 0.021 | |
| 62.21% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "They pushed up through the grass in violent bursts of color—impossible blues and searing oranges that seemed to vibrate under the moonlight, their petals unfurl…" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter stopped just inside the perimeter, her boots sinking into turf that felt spongy, almost like flesh." | | 2 | "They didn't stretch away from the light source; they pooled around the bases of the oak stones, thick and viscous, seeming to detach themselves from the objects…" | | 3 | "The lingering trauma of fleeing Cardiff, of starting over in London with nothing but the clothes on her back and a job delivering noodles to people who didn't k…" | | 4 | "They coalesced, forming shapes that hinted at human proportions but lacked definition, blurring at the edges as if reality couldn't quite hold them together." | | 5 | "Instead, the breathing grew louder, a chorus now, overlapping whispers that murmured in a language she almost recognized, a distortion of Welsh and Irish, the t…" | | 6 | "She stood frozen in the center of the impossible garden, the crimson light of the pendant casting long, dancing shadows that looked too much like hands reaching…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora demanded, her voice trembling despite her effort to keep it steady" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "the reason she had (have)" | | 1 | "a voice whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Aurora demanded (demand)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.75 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |