| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Quinn said evenly [evenly]" | | 1 | "The other’s smile showed too [too]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.571 | |
| 84.01% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 938 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 938 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "jaw clenched" | | 2 | "glinting" | | 3 | "echoing" | | 4 | "footsteps" | | 5 | "fluttered" | | 6 | "flickered" | | 7 | "glint" | | 8 | "shimmered" | | 9 | "gloom" | | 10 | "resolve" | | 11 | "flicker" | | 12 | "unreadable" | | 13 | "shattered" | | 14 | "electric" | | 15 | "thundered" | | 16 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "jaw/fists clenched" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 66 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 929 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 20 | | wordCount | 901 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.33 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Soho | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 12 | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Morris | 2 | | Veil | 1 | | Market | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Raven" | | 3 | "Morris" | | 4 | "Market" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.834 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 929 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 30.97 | | std | 24.49 | | cv | 0.791 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 87 | | 1 | 77 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 73 | | 4 | 49 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 41 | | 7 | 67 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 39 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 63 | | 12 | 42 | | 13 | 58 | | 14 | 35 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 54 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 32 | | 25 | 32 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 17 |
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| 94.63% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "were lined" | | 1 | "was meant" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 172 | | matches | | 0 | "was weaving" | | 1 | "was holding" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 69 | | ratio | 0.13 | | matches | | 0 | "Three years ago, this chase might have ended differently—Morris would have been beside her, and maybe things wouldn’t have gone so dark." | | 1 | "The suspect glanced back, face half-masked under a soaked hood, eyes glinting with desperation and something else—fear?" | | 2 | "The underground was a different world—cracks in the walls whispered secrets, and the air tasted of mold, old pipes, and something metallic, like blood." | | 3 | "She could hear him—quick, uneven footsteps splashing through small pools ahead, closer now." | | 4 | "The walls were lined with stalls, cluttered and strange, selling artifacts she didn’t recognize—glowing vials, burbling jars filled with unfamiliar herbs and insects, talismans that hummed faintly when passed by." | | 5 | "She had heard whispers about this place—an underground nexus of illicit trade in the supernatural, shifting locations every full moon, accessible only to those who bore the bone tokens." | | 6 | "Faces, human and otherwise, flickered by—a glint of amber eyes, a flash of iridescent skin, lips too sharp, fingers tipped with unnatural nails." | | 7 | "Every training session, every experience screamed at her to abandon this chase—to call for backup, to retreat." | | 8 | "On the other side, the air shifted again—a cold, almost electric charge that pricked at her skin." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 916 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "ancient, graffiti-scarred stairs" |
| | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.03820960698689956 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017467248908296942 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 69 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 69 | | mean | 13.46 | | std | 7.73 | | cv | 0.574 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 32 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 26 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 26 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 30 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 29 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 23 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 23 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 22 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 75.36% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.4782608695652174 | | totalSentences | 69 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "Twice her height, lean, a" | | 1 | "Suddenly, a sharp shout shattered" |
| | ratio | 0.032 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "Her worn leather watch slapped" | | 1 | "she barked, the word lost" | | 2 | "It was impossible to tell" | | 3 | "Her shoes hit damp concrete," | | 4 | "She could hear him—quick, uneven" | | 5 | "She had heard whispers about" | | 6 | "She peeked from behind a" | | 7 | "She couldn’t make out what" | | 8 | "She had to know why" | | 9 | "Her boots clumped more loudly" | | 10 | "They exchanged a glance, a" | | 11 | "They didn’t move." | | 12 | "She had choices: back out" | | 13 | "Her salt-and-pepper hair plastered to" | | 14 | "Her heart thundered, echoing against" |
| | ratio | 0.238 | |
| 86.98% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 47 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain pummeled the narrow" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn’s breath came" | | 2 | "The scent of damp concrete" | | 3 | "Her worn leather watch slapped" | | 4 | "The man turned sharply, almost" | | 5 | "Quinn’s sharp jaw clenched." | | 6 | "The memory stabbed at the" | | 7 | "she barked, the word lost" | | 8 | "The suspect glanced back, face" | | 9 | "It was impossible to tell" | | 10 | "Quinn hesitated only a fraction" | | 11 | "Her shoes hit damp concrete," | | 12 | "The underground was a different" | | 13 | "She could hear him—quick, uneven" | | 14 | "The tunnel forked sharply left," | | 15 | "The metal handrail was cold" | | 16 | "Quinn blinked as her eyes" | | 17 | "The walls were lined with" | | 18 | "The Veil Market." | | 19 | "She had heard whispers about" |
| | ratio | 0.746 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 91.84% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Harlow Quinn’s breath came out sharp and ragged as she sprinted after the figure ahead, her shoes splashing through puddles that reflected shards of g…" | | 1 | "The walls were lined with stalls, cluttered and strange, selling artifacts she didn’t recognize—glowing vials, burbling jars filled with unfamiliar herbs and in…" | | 2 | "Everyone here belonged to a world that walked alongside hers, unseen and dangerous." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 7.14% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.286 | | leniency | 0.571 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.286 | |