| 86.79% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 21 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Silas said quietly [quietly]" | | 1 | "Rory gestured around [around]" | | 2 | "she said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 53 | | tagDensity | 0.396 | | leniency | 0.792 | | rawRatio | 0.143 | | effectiveRatio | 0.113 | |
| 70.70% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1536 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "truly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "quickly" | | 3 | "really" | | 4 | "softly" | | 5 | "slowly" | | 6 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 38.15% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1536 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "scanned" | | 1 | "methodical" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "unreadable" | | 5 | "unspoken" | | 6 | "tracing" | | 7 | "potential" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "comfortable" | | 10 | "charged" | | 11 | "traced" | | 12 | "whisper" | | 13 | "constructed" | | 14 | "tangible" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 107 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1529 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 26 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 49 | | wordCount | 967 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.96 | | worstName | "Silas" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Silas" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 2 | | Nest | 2 | | Aurora | 2 | | Carter | 2 | | Tuesday | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Silas | 19 | | Blackwood | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Rory | 15 | | Prague | 1 | | Evan | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Nest" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Carter" | | 4 | "Silas" | | 5 | "Blackwood" | | 6 | "Rory" | | 7 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Golden" | | 1 | "Cardiff" | | 2 | "Prague" |
| | globalScore | 0.518 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 20.69% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a lifetime" | | 1 | "As if sensing her presence, Silas looked up" | | 2 | "as if reading her mind" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1529 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 48 | | mean | 31.85 | | std | 16.92 | | cv | 0.531 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 64 | | 1 | 79 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 74 | | 4 | 30 | | 5 | 39 | | 6 | 37 | | 7 | 31 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 29 | | 10 | 25 | | 11 | 66 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 59 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 27 | | 19 | 41 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 48 | | 25 | 28 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 39 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 36 | | 32 | 41 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 25 | | 36 | 23 | | 37 | 46 | | 38 | 34 | | 39 | 28 | | 40 | 49 | | 41 | 48 | | 42 | 38 | | 43 | 47 | | 44 | 41 | | 45 | 22 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 38 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 176 | | matches | | |
| 36.05% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 107 | | ratio | 0.037 | | matches | | 0 | "Her feet ached in their worn trainers, and the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist tingled—a phantom sensation that sometimes surfaced when she was tired." | | 1 | "But it was the way he moved that truly caught her attention—a pronounced limp in his left leg that hadn't been there before, or at least hadn't been so apparent." | | 2 | "They had parted on strange terms—her leaving Cardiff in a hurry, him understanding more than he had let on about her reasons for fleeing." | | 3 | "Rory watched him work, amazed at how seamlessly he shifted between the man she knew—the one with secrets and shadows in his eyes—and the friendly barkeep greeting customers." |
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| 94.66% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 976 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 45 | | adverbRatio | 0.04610655737704918 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017418032786885244 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 107 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 107 | | mean | 14.29 | | std | 8.09 | | cv | 0.566 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 30 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 31 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 35 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 25 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 69.16% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.4485981308411215 | | totalSentences | 107 | | uniqueOpeners | 48 | |
| 45.66% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 93.97% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "It was Tuesday, early enough" | | 1 | "She had just finished her" | | 2 | "Her feet ached in their" | | 3 | "He stood behind the bar," | | 4 | "He looked older, wearier, and" | | 5 | "They had parted on strange" | | 6 | "His hazel eyes met hers" | | 7 | "he called out, his voice" | | 8 | "he said, pouring her a" | | 9 | "she said, sliding onto the" | | 10 | "She accepted the wine and" | | 11 | "He paused, studying her face" | | 12 | "she asked, knowing she was" | | 13 | "He lowered his voice" | | 14 | "she said softly" | | 15 | "She wondered how many other" | | 16 | "He leaned on the bar," | | 17 | "She had expected small talk," | | 18 | "she admitted, surprising herself with" | | 19 | "She traced the scar on" |
| | ratio | 0.315 | |
| 35.34% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 62 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "The green neon sign of" | | 1 | "The bar was dimly lit," | | 2 | "The air smelled of old" | | 3 | "Rory shook the water from" | | 4 | "It was Tuesday, early enough" | | 5 | "She had just finished her" | | 6 | "Her feet ached in their" | | 7 | "The grey in his auburn" | | 8 | "He stood behind the bar," | | 9 | "He looked older, wearier, and" | | 10 | "They had parted on strange" | | 11 | "His hazel eyes met hers" | | 12 | "A ghost of a smile" | | 13 | "he called out, his voice" | | 14 | "Rory managed a smile and" | | 15 | "he said, pouring her a" | | 16 | "Some things never changed." | | 17 | "she said, sliding onto the" | | 18 | "She accepted the wine and" | | 19 | "Silas leaned against the back" |
| | ratio | 0.849 | |
| 68.49% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "As if sensing her presence," |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 48.87% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The bar was dimly lit, as always, the walls covered with yellowed maps and black-and-white photographs of places and people who seemed to belong to another era." | | 1 | "But it was the way he moved that truly caught her attention—a pronounced limp in his left leg that hadn't been there before, or at least hadn't been so apparent…" | | 2 | "The same map that had been there the first time they met, when she was just nineteen and he was the mysterious older friend of her father who had taken an inter…" | | 3 | "Rory could see the weight of his own regrets in the lines of his face, the way his hand occasionally drifted to his knee as if to soothe an old ache." | | 4 | "Silas nodded slowly, as if she had confirmed something he had long suspected." |
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| 5.95% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 21 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Silas said, his fingers tracing the rim of his own glass" | | 1 | "Silas said, his voice dropping to a near whisper" | | 2 | "He paused, his gaze intense" | | 3 | "she said, the admission costing her more than she expected" | | 4 | "Silas said, as if reading her mind" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he called out (call out)" | | 1 | "she admitted (admit)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 53 | | tagDensity | 0.245 | | leniency | 0.491 | | rawRatio | 0.154 | | effectiveRatio | 0.075 | |