Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMR0WVMTNS05BBRT8HZ2YWF

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Duration:
51.9s
Cost:
$0.005764
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign flickered above the entrance, casting an ethereal glow over the wet pavement of Soho. Rory pulled her jacket tighter against the London drizzle, the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist tingling—a superstition she'd picked up from her grandmother about scar tissue sensing changes in weather or fortune. She'd been delivering food for Golden Empress in the neighborhood when the rain had started, and she'd ducked into the first establishment that offered shelter. The Raven's Nest. The name meant nothing to her. Inside, the air was thick with the ghosts of conversations past, the kind of place where secrets felt at home. Dim lighting illuminated walls covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs, creating an atmosphere that hovered between nostalgic and mysterious. She slid onto a barstool, shaking raindrops from her shoulder-length black hair. "Just a tea, please," she told the bartender, her bright blue eyes scanning the room with the detached curiosity that had become her shield since leaving Cardiff. The bartender nodded and moved away, leaving Rory to trace the wood grain of the bar with her fingertips. Five years in London had changed her—hardened edges that hadn't existed at twenty, a wariness in her gaze that hadn't been there when she'd been a Pre-Law student with a brilliant future ahead. Or what her parents had considered brilliant, anyway. "You always did prefer tea when the weather turned." The voice came from behind her, low and gravelly with age but unmistakable. Rory turned slowly, her breath catching in her throat. Silas Blackwood stood there, his grey-streaked auburn hair and neatly trimmed beard more distinguished than she remembered. He was taller than her by half a foot, still carrying that quiet authority that had intimidated her when she'd first met him as a teenager. His hazel eyes crinkled at the corners as he smiled, but the slight limp in his left leg was new—something she hadn't seen in the man who used to move with the fluid grace of a predator. "Silas," she breathed, the name foreign on her tongue after all these years. "I didn't know you owned this place." He settled onto the stool beside her, the silver signet ring on his right hand catching the low light as he gestured around the bar. "The Raven's Nest. Retirement project of sorts." He signaled the bartender. "Two of your special teas, Michael. And add a splash of whiskey to mine." "You never liked whiskey," Rory said, the words escaping before she could stop them. Silas's laugh lines deepened. "People change, Rory. Or have you gone back to Aurora now?" "Rory's fine. Most people don't even know my real name anymore." She studied his face, the new lines around his eyes, the way he held himself as if protecting his left side. "What happened to your leg?" The bartender delivered their drinks, and Silas took a slow sip before answering. "Prague. Six years ago now. Botched extraction." He tapped his knee. "Tore everything to hell. MI6's way of telling me it was time to retire." Rory's fingers tightened around her tea mug. She'd been nineteen when Silas disappeared from her life, just after she'd met Evan. He'd warned her about that one, in that careful, roundabout way he had of offering advice without directly interfering. "I'm sorry," she said, and she meant it. "I heard you were in intelligence, but I never..." "Never what?" He turned his body slightly toward hers, his gaze intense. "Never thought I'd be the one to get hurt?" "No," she shook her head. "Never thought they'd let you go. You were the best at whatever it was you actually did for them." His eyes softened. "You were always too perceptive for your own good. How's Cardiff? How are your parents?" "I haven't been back in three years. Not since..." She trailed off, not needing to finish the sentence. Silas had been the one she'd called that night, the one who'd arranged for her to get the train to London with nothing but a backpack and the clothes she was wearing. "And Evan?" "Gone. Permanently." Her voice was flat, the cool-headedness she was known for kicking in. "Last I heard, he was in Bristol with someone new. Someone hopefully less inclined to put up with his nonsense." Silas reached across the bar, his fingers briefly brushing her wrist where the scar was. "I should have interfered more. Should have made you listen." "You couldn't have stopped me. Nobody could." She pulled her hand back gently. "I needed to figure it out for myself." They sat in silence for a moment, the weight of years between them. A group of young people laughed loudly in the corner, oblivious to the history being unpacked at the bar. "You look different," Silas said finally. "Older." "Twenty-five will do that to you." Rory managed a small smile. "You look like you've been through a war." "Close enough." He took another sip of his tea and whiskey. "The knee was just the beginning. Everything changes when you're forced to retire at fifty-two. Suddenly you're not the person you've been for thirty years." "You're still Silas. Just with a bar instead of a gun." "Is that what you think I carried? A gun?" His eyes twinkled with mischief. "Some things never change, I suppose. You always did see the world in black and white." "And you always saw it in fifty shades of grey," she countered, surprising herself with how easily their old dynamic returned. "What are you doing in London, Rory? Last I heard, you were delivering Chinese food to survive." "I am. But I'm also taking night classes. Computer science this time. Pre-Law was my father's dream, not mine." She straightened her shoulders. "I'm figuring out what I actually want to do with my life. Now that I actually have a life to figure out." "Good." Silas's approval was simple, unadorned. "You were always too smart to waste your time in a courtroom." "And you were always too smart to die in some foreign country." The words hung between them, an acknowledgment of all the times they hadn't said what they meant, all the warnings they'd given and ignored, all the paths not taken. "I should get going," Rory said, though she made no move to leave. "My flat's just upstairs. Eva will wonder where I am." "Eva's still here? I thought she'd moved to Manchester." "She did. Came back last month." Rory hesitated. "You could come up. For a proper drink. We could catch up properly." Silas studied her face for a long moment, his expression unreadable. "I'd like that. But not tonight." He slid off the barstool, his limp more pronounced now that he'd been sitting. "I have some... business to attend to." He gestured vaguely toward the back of the bar, where a bookshelf seemed to serve no purpose except to hold dusty atlases. Rory followed his gaze, understanding dawning. "The Nest isn't just a bar, is it?" "Some things don't change, even in retirement." He reached into his pocket and pulled out a business card with nothing but a phone number on it. "Call me tomorrow. We'll have that proper drink." As he turned to leave, Rory caught his arm. "Silas?" He paused, looking back at her. "I'm glad I found you here. Even if it was just because of the rain." His eyes crinkled at the corners again. "Some things are meant to be found, Rory. Or should I say, some people?" He walked away with that slight limp, disappearing through a door behind the bar that Rory had assumed led to a storage room. The bartender materialized beside her. "Another tea?" Rory shook her head, leaving money on the bar. "No, thank you. But tell Silas... tell him I'll call tomorrow." As she stepped back out into the rain-soaked streets of London, the green neon sign of The Raven's Nest reflected in puddles at her feet. Five years ago, she had run away from her life with nothing but the clothes on her back and the phone number of a man she hadn't seen in years. Tonight, she had found him again, and in his weathered face and limping stride, she had seen the passage of time not as a thief, but as a sculptor—carving new contours into familiar landscapes, creating something new from what had been there all along. The rain had softened to a mist as she walked the short distance to her flat above the bar. Tomorrow, she would call Silas. Tomorrow, she would begin to rebuild a connection that had been broken by time and circumstance. But tonight, she would simply fall asleep to the muffled sounds from the bar below, comforted by the knowledge that some friendships, like some scars, never truly fade. They simply become part of who you are.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
8.3333% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"she told the bartender, her bright blue eyes scanning the room with the detached curiosity that had become her shield since leaving Cardiff [bright]"
1"Silas said finally [finally]"
2"she countered, surprising herself with how easily their old dynamic returned [easily]"
66.4204% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1489
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
4
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"slightly"
2"slowly"
3"suddenly"
4"truly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
73.1363% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1489
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"ethereal"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"unreadable"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"ethereal"
1"flickered"
2"unreadable"
3"weight"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"the air was thick with"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences68
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences68
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"begin to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences68
matches
0"called that night"
1"like that. But"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs1
mean0
std0
cv0
sampleLengths
01476
94.1176% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences68
matches
0"been nineteen"
1"was known"
2"being unpacked"
3"been broken"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs163
matches
0"was wearing"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount984
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.02540650406504065
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.014227642276422764
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences68
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences68
mean21.71
std11.58
cv0.533
sampleLengths
018
133
225
33
46
520
620
712
827
919
1033
118
1222
139
1417
1526
1637
1713
1832
1911
2028
214
2243
2318
2411
2521
2614
2719
288
2921
3014
3122
3233
3332
3416
3535
3623
3721
3819
396
4012
4119
4250
4337
4440
4528
4653
4713
4827
4924
69.6078% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.47058823529411764
totalSentences68
uniqueOpeners32
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"she told the bartender, her bright blue eyes scanning the room with the detached curiosity that had become her shield since leaving Cardiff (tell scan detach become leave)"
1"she breathed, the name foreign on her tongue after all these years (breathe)"
2"Rory said, the words escaping before she could stop them (say, escape stop)"
3"she said, and she meant it (say, mean)"
4"she shook her head (shake)"
5"Silas said finally (say finally)"
6"she countered, surprising herself with how easily their old dynamic returned (counter, surprise return)"
7"Rory said, though she made no move to leave (say, make leave)"
83.0362%