Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMR1HVNR059ADFD99RCSPA5

Run Details

Duration:
49.8s
Cost:
$0.053284
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
rain lashed against the front window of The Raven’s Nest, blurring the Soho streetlights into streaks of fractured luminescence. Inside, the distinctive green neon sign above the entrance cast a sickly, aquatic glow over the empty tables near the door. It was a Tuesday, the dead hour between the after-work rush and the late-night regulars, and the bar smelled of stale hops and lemon floor polish. Aurora Carter sat on a stool at the far end of the mahogany counter, peeling a damp raincoat off her shoulders. Underneath, she wore her work shirt, the embroidered logo of the Golden Empress restaurant just visible beneath a grey hoodie. She smelled like ginger, garlic, and exhaust fumes. "Quiet night," she murmured, tracing the rim of her glass of water. Behind the bar, Silas Blackwood was drying a highball glass with the methodical precision of a man who had once disarmed explosives for a living. The silver signet ring on his right hand clicked rhythmically against the crystal. He didn't look up, but his hazel eyes flicked toward the door as a shadow passed the frosted glass. "Rain keeps the tourists away," Silas said, his voice a low rumble. "And the locals are all drowning their sorrows closer to the tube station. You done for the night, Rory?" "Last delivery was to a fourth-floor walk-up in Covent Garden. No lift, no tip," she said, though her tone lacked real complaint. It was stating a fact, the way a soldier lists inventory. "I’m done." The heavy oak door groaned inward, bringing with it a gust of wind and the frantic rhythm of the downpour. A man stepped inside, shaking a dripping umbrella. He was tall, dressed in a charcoal wool coat that probably cost more than Rory’s bicycle, with polished brogues that were currently soaking up the grimy London puddle water. Silas set the glass down. He shifted his weight, favoring his right leg to spare the left—the one with the bad knee from Prague. He watched the newcomer with a gaze that was polite but entirely predatory. The man turned, brushing wet hair from his forehead, and scanned the room. When his eyes landed on the end of the bar, he froze. Rory felt the recognition hit her like a physical blow to the chest. Her heart hammered a frantic rhythm against her ribs, but her face remained composed, a mask of cool detachment she had perfected over the last year. "Laila?" the man breathed, using the name she hadn’t heard since she crossed the Severn Bridge. Rory stiffened. She didn’t look at Silas, but she could feel the older man’s attention sharpen. She swiveled her stool slowly. "Hello, Julian." Julian numbly collapsed his umbrella and walked toward the bar, his movements hesitant, as if approaching a wild animal. He looked older than she remembered, though it had only been two years. The lines around his eyes were deeper, and he carried himself with the heavy, slumped posture of a junior associate drowning in case files. "I... I didn’t think I’d see you here," Julian said, stopping three feet away. He looked out of place among the black-and-white photographs and the peeling maps of Cold War Europe that lined Silas’s walls. "I heard you were in London. But London’s a big place." "It is," Rory said. Her voice was steady, but her thumb automatically went to her left wrist, rubbing the small crescent-shaped scar there. It was a nervous tic she thought she’d broken. "What are you drinking?" Silas asked. The interruption was smooth, cutting through the tension like a blade. Julian blinked, startled by the bartender’s presence. "Oh. Scotch. Neat. Whatever you have that’s decent." "I have decent," Silas said dryly, turning to the shelves. Julian turned back to Rory, his eyes sweeping over her. He took in the damp black hair plastered to her neck, the worn hoodie, the faint smear of bike grease on her chin. He looked for the Pre-Law student with the perfectly pressed blouses and the annotated textbooks. He found a woman who looked like she’d been in a street fight with the city and was currently holding her ground. "You look different, Laila," he said softly. "It’s Aurora now. Or Rory," she corrected him. "And yes. I suppose I do." "Your mum... Jennifer... she still asks about you at the market," Julian said, the words tumbling out in a rush. "She tells everyone you’re doing a clerkship in the City. She says you’re too verify busy to visit." Rory let out a short, hollow laugh. She picked up her water, the ice clinking. "Is that the story? A clerkship?" "I knew it wasn't true," Julian said. He took the glass Silas slid toward him, drinking half of it in one burn. "I saw Evan last month." The name sucked the air out of the room. Rory’s hand tightened around her glass until her knuckles turned the color of old parchment. "He’s making partner soon," Julian continued, seemingly oblivious to the shift in atmospheric pressure. Or maybe he wasn't. Maybe he wanted to twist the knife to see if the nerve was still live. "He told everyone you had a breakdown. Said the pressure of the exams got to you. Said you ran off to join a circus or something equally mad." "I didn't run off to join a circus, Julian," Rory said, her bright blue eyes cold. "I ran off to stay alive." Julian flinched. He looked down at his drink, swirling the amber liquid. "We all knew he was... intense. But you had a plan, Laila. You were top of the class. You had the internship at Davies & Moore lined up. You threw it all away." He gestured vaguely at her hoodie, at the bar, at the neon gloom. "For this?" "For this," she confirmed. "Is it worth it?" he asked, and there was genuine confusion in his voice. To him, success was linear. It was measured in billable hours, square footage, and the approval of men like Brendan Carter. "Delivering noodles? Living in... where are you living?" "Upstairs," she said. Julian looked at the ceiling, then back at her, his expression curdling into pity. "God, Laila. You were going to be a barrister. You were the smartest person in that lecture hall. Now you’re living above a pub in Soho." "It’s a bar," Silas interjected from the shadows of the register. His voice was soft, but it carried the weight of a gavel. "And she pays her rent on time, which is more than I can say for some of the barristers who come in here." Rory offered Silas a fleeting, grateful glance. She turned back to her old friend. "I have a job, Julian. I have a flat. I have friends who don't care about my father's reputation." She leaned in slightly, her voice dropping. "And when I go home at night, the door locks from the inside. And no one has a key but me." Julian set his glass down. The pity in his eyes shifted to something unreadable—perhaps envy, perhaps discomfort. He adjusted his expensive cuffs. "It’s a waste. That’s all I’m saying. You had brilliance, Laila. You’re squandering it." "I’m using it," she said. "Just not the way you want me to. I solve problems every day. I navigate a city that tries to chew people up. I’m thinking on my feet, not quoting precedent from a hundred years ago." She thought of the logic puzzles she solved to optimize her routes, the way she read people at doorways to know if she should keep her helmet on or take it off, the keen observation she’d picked up from Silas. She wasn't arguing cases, but she was awake. She was present. "If you ever want to come back," Julian said, reaching into his coat pocket and pulling out a business card. "I can make some calls. Smooth things over with the faculty. Even with your dad." Rory looked at the card. It was cream-colored, heavy stock, with raised lettering. It represented safety. It represented a salary, a mortgage, Sundays in Roath Park, and a life mapped out in straight, unbroken lines. It also represented the cage. She didn't take it. "Keep it, Julian," she said gently. "I'm not lost. I don't need to be found." The silence stretched between them, filled only by the hum of the refrigerator and the relentless drumming of the rain. Julian looked at her for a long moment, trying to find the girl who used to sit next to him in Constitutional Law, the girl who wore pearls and worried about grades. He couldn't find her. He realized, with a start, that she was dead. "Right," he said, clearing his throat. He put the card back in his pocket. He placed a ten-pound note on the bar. "Well. Good luck, Rory." "Take care of yourself, Julian." He buttoned his coat, popped his umbrella open before he even hit the door, and stepped back out into the night. The bell chimed, a cheerful sound that seemed at odds with the departure. Rory sat still, staring at the empty space where he had stood. The adrenaline of the encounter began to fade, leaving a dull ache in her limbs. Silas walked over, picked up Julian’s glass, and dropped it into the soapy water of the sink. He didn't ask if she was okay. He knew the question was redundant. Instead, he reached under the counter and pulled out two clean tumblers and a bottle of Irish whiskey—the good stuff he kept for himself. He poured a finger for her, and a finger for himself. "Top of the class, hm?" Silas asked, sliding the glass to her. Rory picked it up, watching the amber liquid catch the green neon light. "Ancient history, Si." "Intelligence is never history," Silas said, leaning against the back bar, his bad leg relieved of duty. "It’s just inventory. You use it where you are." Rory took a sip. The whiskey burned, a clean, sharp heat that chased away the damp chill of the rain and the cold shadow of the past. She looked around the bar—the cryptic maps, the dark wood, the sanctuary Silas had built from the wreckage of his own former life. She realized Julian was wrong. She hadn't fallen. she had climbed down from a burning building and walked away. "He looked miserable," Rory observed quietly. "Men in suits often are," Silas replied. "They confuse the cage for the castle." Rory smiled, a genuine expression that reached her bright blue eyes. She rested her chin on her hand, the scar on her wrist hidden beneath her sleeve, no longer needing to be touched. "I'm glad I wasn't home," she said. "You are home," Silas said. He picked up a rag and went back to polishing the brass rail, his movements rhythmic and sure. Rory turned on her stool to watch the rain streak against the glass, blurring the world outside into abstract art. She took another sip of whiskey, savouring the taste of smoke and survival.
created_at"2026-02-17T02:50:23.867572+00:00" 2/17/2026, 2:50:23 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
46.9136% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags27
adverbTagCount7
adverbTags
0"Julian said, stopping three feet away [away]"
1"Silas said dryly, turning to the shelves [dryly]"
2"he said softly [softly]"
3"Julian continued, seemingly oblivious to the shift in atmospheric pressure [seemingly]"
4"Rory said, her bright blue eyes cold [bright]"
5"she said gently [gently]"
6"Rory observed quietly [quietly]"
73.1183% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1860
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"perfectly"
2"slightly"
3"slowly"
4"softly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
56.9892% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1860
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"sanctuary"
count1
1
word"flicked"
count1
2
word"methodical"
count1
3
word"unreadable"
count1
4
word"fractured"
count1
5
word"weight"
count2
6
word"navigate"
count1
highlights
0"sanctuary"
1"flicked"
2"methodical"
3"unreadable"
4"fractured"
5"weight"
6"navigate"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences119
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences119
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences144
matches
0"\"Is that the"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs57
mean32.4
std18.8
cv0.58
sampleLengths
066
149
212
357
431
535
657
737
825
939
1016
1123
1256
1346
1432
1517
1615
1710
1870
197
2014
2138
2221
2327
2424
2561
2622
2760
284
2943
303
3140
3246
3361
3436
3541
3651
3735
3840
394
4015
4165
4226
435
4434
4527
4654
4711
4812
4916
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences119
matches
0"was measured"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs246
matches
0"was drying"
1"was stating"
2"wasn't arguing"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1388
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.03170028818443804
lyAdverbCount19
lyAdverbRatio0.013688760806916427
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences144
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences144
mean12.83
std8.11
cv0.633
sampleLengths
019
121
226
321
420
58
612
725
813
919
1012
1119
1222
1311
142
1520
168
1729
185
1919
2013
2113
2212
2313
2426
2516
262
2714
285
292
3019
3113
3224
3314
3421
3511
364
3719
389
396
4011
417
428
4310
4410
4523
4615
4722
487
498
42.5926% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.3263888888888889
totalSentences144
uniqueOpeners47
36.1111% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags27
fancyCount15
fancyTags
0"she murmured, tracing the rim of her glass of water (murmur, trace)"
1"she said, though her tone lacked real complaint (say, lack)"
2"Julian said, stopping three feet away (say, stop)"
3"Silas said dryly, turning to the shelves (say dryly, turn)"
4"he said softly (say softly)"
5"she corrected him (correct)"
6"Julian said, the words tumbling out in a rush (say, tumble out)"
7"Julian continued, seemingly oblivious to the shift in atmospheric pressure (continue)"
8"she confirmed (confirm)"
9"Silas interjected from the shadows of the register (interject)"
10"Julian said, reaching into his coat pocket and pulling out a business card (say, reach pull out)"
11"she said gently (say gently)"
12"he said, clearing his throat (say, clear)"
13"Silas said, leaning against the back bar, his bad leg relieved of duty (say, relieve)"
14"Rory observed quietly (observe quietly)"
85.6309%