| 82.35% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Rory finally asked [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.353 | | leniency | 0.706 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.118 | |
| 73.19% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1119 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "tightly" | | 2 | "softly" | | 3 | "warmly" | | 4 | "suddenly" | | 5 | "sharply" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1119 | | totalAiIsms | 31 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "perfect" | | 2 | "enigmatic" | | 3 | "comforting" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "familiar" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "surreal" | | 8 | "shimmered" | | 9 | "crystal" | | 10 | "footsteps" | | 11 | "glinting" | | 12 | "tracing" | | 13 | "pristine" | | 14 | "flicked" | | 15 | "silence" | | 16 | "pulse" | | 17 | "pulsed" | | 18 | "stomach" | | 19 | "pounding" | | 20 | "desire" | | 21 | "beacon" | | 22 | "echoing" | | 23 | "echoed" | | 24 | "unreadable" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes widened" | | 1 | "clenched her fists" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 80.75% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1108 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 42 | | wordCount | 943 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 0.85 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Nyx" | | discoveredNames | | Nyx | 7 | | Veil | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 2 | | Aurora | 8 | | Isolde | 8 | | Hel | 1 | | Prince | 1 | | Belphegor | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Rory | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Prince" | | 4 | "Belphegor" | | 5 | "Pendant" | | 6 | "Rory" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 29.03% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "gaze that seemed to pierce through the Veil itself" | | 1 | "as if watching them with quiet hunger" | | 2 | "as if offering a silent invitation" |
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| 19.49% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.805 | | wordCount | 1108 | | matches | | 0 | "not with me, but with the Grove itself" | | 1 | "not just for food, but for desire" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 40 | | mean | 27.7 | | std | 15.76 | | cv | 0.569 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 48 | | 1 | 55 | | 2 | 39 | | 3 | 65 | | 4 | 43 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 62 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 29 | | 9 | 46 | | 10 | 38 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 30 | | 16 | 42 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 42 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 34 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 38 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 36 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 33 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 42 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 31 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 32 | | 37 | 35 | | 38 | 30 | | 39 | 7 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 175 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 80 | | ratio | 0.175 | | matches | | 0 | "Around her, wildflowers glowed with unreal colors — soft blues and iridescent purples — blooming thick on the forest floor despite the season." | | 1 | "A breeze stirred, but it carried no scent of earth or leaf—something else lingered, a faint trace of smoke and spice." | | 2 | "The familiar weight of the Fae-Forged Blade against her hip reassured her—a cold, steady presence in a place that felt too fluid, too surreal." | | 3 | "The very air shimmered with latent magic; dust motes sparkled like tiny stars suspended in golden mist." | | 4 | "Trees bore fruit in impossible shapes—twisting spirals of crystal and petals that shimmered like stained glass." | | 5 | "The Grove was beautiful, yes—too beautiful." | | 6 | "The ground was bare here, save for dozens of tiny sparkling footprints — impossibly precise, like those left by a creature walking on air." | | 7 | "She knelt to touch the carvings; the stone was warm beneath her palm and thrummed with a pulse that matched the pendant at her throat." | | 8 | "The world blurred and twisted; the distant trees stretched and warped as if caught in a reflection cracking beneath the surface of a pond." | | 9 | "The air smelled of rich earth, ripe fruit, and something darker—overripe sweetness." | | 10 | "This was Hel—gluttony’s realm." | | 11 | "The trees—fruit-laden boughs heavy with forbidden delicacies—glistened." | | 12 | "Something glimmered from the ground near the vineyard’s edge—a silver chain glinting faintly in the amber light." | | 13 | "The warning from Nyx echoed again in her mind—some doors once opened demand debts paid in full." |
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| 97.43% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 955 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 41 | | adverbRatio | 0.04293193717277487 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.016753926701570682 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 80 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 80 | | mean | 13.85 | | std | 6.95 | | cv | 0.502 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 23 | | 37 | 22 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 25 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 24 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 63.75% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.4125 | | totalSentences | 80 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 11 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Their glowing violet eyes barely" | | 1 | "They had entered the Fae" | | 2 | "Their footsteps sank into a" | | 3 | "She hated being the cautious" | | 4 | "It pulled at the edges" | | 5 | "They seemed to shift unnaturally," | | 6 | "They gestured with a long" | | 7 | "She knelt to touch the" | | 8 | "She had heard the stories" | | 9 | "She rushed forward, fingers closing" | | 10 | "Their eyes burned with a" |
| | ratio | 0.167 | |
| 28.18% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 57 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora felt the pendant’s faint" | | 1 | "The air shifted as they" | | 2 | "Isolde moved ahead with ethereal" | | 3 | "The beauty was almost too" | | 4 | "Isolde murmured, voice low, weaving" | | 5 | "Nyx hovered at the edge" | | 6 | "Their glowing violet eyes barely" | | 7 | "A breeze stirred, but it" | | 8 | "Aurora clenched her fists, the" | | 9 | "The familiar weight of the" | | 10 | "They had entered the Fae" | | 11 | "The world inside twisted with" | | 12 | "The very air shimmered with" | | 13 | "Trees bore fruit in impossible" | | 14 | "Their footsteps sank into a" | | 15 | "Isolde glanced back once, eyes" | | 16 | "Nyx’s voice, barely audible but" | | 17 | "She hated being the cautious" | | 18 | "The Grove was beautiful, yes—too" | | 19 | "It pulled at the edges" |
| | ratio | 0.864 | |
| 75.76% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Before them stretched an endless" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 15.87% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx hovered at the edge of the circle of light, their vague, shifting silhouette melding with the shadows that pooled beneath the heavy boughs." | | 1 | "The familiar weight of the Fae-Forged Blade against her hip reassured her—a cold, steady presence in a place that felt too fluid, too surreal." | | 2 | "Trees bore fruit in impossible shapes—twisting spirals of crystal and petals that shimmered like stained glass." | | 3 | "Their footsteps sank into a soft moss that was warmer than it should be, cushioning their path like a living carpet." | | 4 | "It pulled at the edges of her mind, whispers threading through her thoughts, promising secrets and dangers in the same breath." | | 5 | "The symbols pulsed faintly with residual magic, as if offering a silent invitation." | | 6 | "The world blurred and twisted; the distant trees stretched and warped as if caught in a reflection cracking beneath the surface of a pond." | | 7 | "The warm amber sky pulsed as if alive, and the thick air pressed down with the weight of unseen watchers." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory finally asked, voice sharp against the silence" | | 1 | "the figure demanded, voice echoing like a song sung through glass" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Aurora murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "the figure demanded (demand)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.353 | | leniency | 0.706 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.471 | |