Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMR2TGZ1KYN8R82W23B1AK9

Run Details

Duration:
12.1s
Cost:
$0.000656
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter pushed open the heavy door of The Raven’s Nest, the familiar scent of aged whiskey and old paper hitting her immediately—soothing, yet laced with an undercurrent of something darker. The neon sign flickered above, casting an unsteady green glow over the polished oak bar. She hesitated for a moment, her bright blue eyes scanning the dimly lit room before settling on the familiar silhouette behind the counter. Silas. He sat with his back straight, the silver signet ring catching the low light as he poured himself a drink. The limp in his left leg was subtle but noticeable, a ghost of old injury that had never quite vanished. The air around him seemed to pulse with an unreadable calm, a quiet authority that never quite faded, no matter how long the years had stretched between them. Rory hesitated, then approached, her steps tentative. She hadn’t planned to come here tonight, not like this. But somehow, she’d end up in the same room, face to face with a piece of her past she had never fully buried. "Silas," she said softly, her voice breaking the quiet like a whisper. He turned slowly, hazel eyes narrowing in recognition. His gaze flicked over her—shoulder-length black hair now slightly more tousled, sharper than she remembered, as if the years had etched their own stories into her face. The small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist caught the bar’s dim light as she lifted her hand, a silent reminder of childhood accidents and unspoken pain. “Rory,” he greeted, voice gravelly, a hint of surprise lingering beneath the calm. “It’s been a long time.” She took a cautious step closer, shoulders tight but trying to relax. “Too long.” Her lips pressed into a thin line, memories rushing back—of shared secrets, of quiet companionship before the world had pulled them in different directions. Silas pushed aside a mug stained with rings of dried whiskey and gestured to the seat across from him. “Come, sit. You look—different.” Rory sank into the seat, eyeing him carefully. His hair was more streaked with grey now, a distinguished crown that matched the furrow at his brow. The years had carved deep lines around his eyes, but his gaze remained sharp, unreadable, still holding that quiet, commanding energy. “Life,” she said simply, and a faint, bitter smile touched her lips. “You know how it goes.” She fidgeted with the bracelet on her wrist, the scar catching her eye again, as if it wanted to tell her to keep her distance. He studied her, silent for a moment. “You left Cardiff and never looked back,” Silas said softly, almost like he was testing the words, feeling their weight. She nodded never quite meeting his gaze. “London was... necessary. Safer. Somewhere I could breathe.” Her tone wavered, just enough to reveal the truth behind her words. Necessary, yes. But not easy. He took a long sip from his glass, then set it down with deliberate care. “I always wondered what you’d become,” Silas said. “You were always sharp—too sharp for this world. I assumed you’d be somewhere, I don’t know—lawyers, judges, something with clear borders. Not hiding out in Soho, running deliveries for a restaurant.” Her smile was hollow now. “Things change. People change. You know that.” He leaned back slightly, eyeing her over the rim of his glass. “They do. But some things stay buried. Or at least, they try to.” She hesitated, her fingers tracing the rim of her mug. “You’re still here,” she finally said, voice quieter. “In this place no one notices. Still playing the spymaster, I guess.” He chuckled faintly, a sound like gravel. “Retirement suits me. Though I’ve learned that everyone has secrets they hide, even in the light of day.” His gaze drifted to the shelf behind her, lined with old photographs and maps, shadows of a life she’d never fully known. The air between them thickened, weighed down by years they’d tried to forget, by words left unspoken. Rory kept her expression neutral, but her heart thrummed with the ache of these missed years. She’d come here tonight with a clear purpose, but now that she was sitting here, the purpose blurred—replaced by a need to understand how much had been lost. “You’ve always been good at keeping your distance,” Rory said softly, breaking the silence. “Sometimes I wonder if you ever truly let anyone in.” Silas looked at her, a flicker of something unreadable in his eyes—regret, maybe, or longing. “I’ve learned that intimacy is a luxury many can’t afford. In our line of work, trust is heavy baggage. You learn to carry it alone.” She nodded, sucking in a breath. “I know. I’ve been carrying my own, too.” Her voice cracked just enough to betray her, and she quickly masked it. “All these years, I thought I’d left everything behind. But some scars... they’re harder to heal than I thought.” His expression softened, a rare vulnerability slipping through. “We all have scars, Rory. The kind you see and the kind you don’t.” For a moment, neither said anything. The music overhead played softly, a dusty saxophone weaving through the haze of smoke and shadows. Somewhere upstairs, a clock ticked monotonously, marking the passing of years. “Do you ever wonder,” Rory began, hesitating, “what might’ve been if we’d taken a different path? If I’d stayed?” Silas’s gaze lingered on her, steady but contemplative. “No, I think you’re better off here. Somewhere safe. And I—” He paused, lips pressing into a thin line. “I think some things are better left in the past.” She looked down at her hands, trembling slightly. “Maybe so. But I needed to see you again. To remember the person I was—the person I wanted to be.” He reached across the bar, a tentative gesture. “We all need reminders sometimes. Of who we are, or who we used to be. Just don’t forget—what’s left behind sometimes haunts us longer than we expect.” Aurora looked at his outstretched hand, then at the scars that lined her own wrist. A silent acknowledgment of the weight she carried—of all she’d escaped, and all she’d never quite escaped. She reached out, her fingers brushing his in a faint, almost trembling grasp. A fleeting connection between two shadows of their former selves. The neon glow flickered, casting an eerie, unsteady light over everything. And in that quiet, dim room, two old friends sat suspended between what was and what could never be again, their unspoken regrets echoing softly in the space between words.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount6
adverbTags
0"she said softly, her voice breaking the quiet like a whisper [softly]"
1"he greeted, voice gravelly, a hint of surprise lingering beneath the calm [gravelly]"
2"she said simply, and a faint, bitter smile touched her lips [simply]"
3"Silas said softly, almost like he was testing the words, feeling their weight [softly, almost]"
4"she finally said, voice quieter [finally]"
5"Rory said softly, breaking the silence [softly]"
0.0000% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1101
totalAiIsmAdverbs12
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count3
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"softly"
count5
5
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"quickly"
2"slightly"
3"slowly"
4"softly"
5"truly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1101
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"flickered"
count2
1
word"flicker"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"wavered"
count1
4
word"unspoken"
count3
5
word"unreadable"
count3
6
word"weight"
count2
7
word"echoing"
count1
8
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"flicker"
2"flicked"
3"wavered"
4"unspoken"
5"unreadable"
6"weight"
7"echoing"
8"etched"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences59
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences59
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences72
matches
0"learned that everyone"
1"learned that intimacy"
88.6857% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean36.27
std16.7
cv0.46
sampleLengths
069
11
268
340
412
562
618
738
823
947
1042
1127
1232
1354
1412
1525
1630
1747
1861
1924
2040
2146
2222
2333
2419
2537
2628
2735
2855
2941
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences59
matches
0"been lost"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs140
matches
0"was testing"
1"was sitting"
74.8748% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount804
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount46
adverbRatio0.05721393034825871
lyAdverbCount20
lyAdverbRatio0.024875621890547265
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences72
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences72
mean15.11
std8.25
cv0.546
sampleLengths
031
115
223
31
420
520
628
77
810
923
1012
118
1227
1327
1413
155
1612
1726
1819
194
208
2118
2221
2312
2430
257
2620
277
2820
292
303
3115
328
3331
345
357
3612
3713
3810
398
4012
417
4240
4317
4416
4528
4614
4710
4815
4925
70.3704% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.4305555555555556
totalSentences72
uniqueOpeners31
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"she said softly, her voice breaking the quiet like a whisper (say softly, break)"
1"he greeted, voice gravelly, a hint of surprise lingering beneath the calm (greet, voice gravelly, linger)"
2"pressed (pressed)"
3"she said simply, and a faint, bitter smile touched her lips (say simply, touch)"
4"Silas said softly, almost like he was testing the words, feeling their weight (say softly, almost like test feel)"
5"she finally said, voice quieter (finally say, voice)"
6"Rory said softly, breaking the silence (say softly, break)"
7"Rory began, hesitating (begin, hesitate)"
72.5842%