| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 71.45% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1401 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "carefully" | | 3 | "perfectly" | | 4 | "suddenly" | | 5 | "tightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.07% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1401 | | totalAiIsms | 28 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "vibrated" | | 1 | "whisper" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "profound" | | 4 | "scanned" | | 5 | "etched" | | 6 | "familiar" | | 7 | "tinged" | | 8 | "oppressive" | | 9 | "footfall" | | 10 | "comforting" | | 11 | "traced" | | 12 | "rhythmic" | | 13 | "methodical" | | 14 | "echoed" | | 15 | "measured" | | 16 | "stark" | | 17 | "warmth" | | 18 | "flickered" | | 19 | "lurching" | | 20 | "raced" | | 21 | "predator" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 126 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.51% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 126 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 126 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 11 | | totalWords | 1398 | | ratio | 0.008 | | matches | | 0 | "Scrape. Pause. Scrape." | | 1 | "Scrape. Pause. Scrape." | | 2 | "Scrape. Click. Scrape. Click." | | 3 | "Aurora." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Probably just time settling, she told herself, the strangeness of the Grove playing tricks." |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 24 | | wordCount | 1393 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.43 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 6 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | London | 2 | | Grove | 4 | | Fae | 2 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Hel | 2 | | Fae-touched | 1 | | Like | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "Fae" | | 5 | "Fae-touched" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a block of ice against her he" |
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| 56.94% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.431 | | wordCount | 1398 | | matches | | 0 | "Not just cool, but a deep, biting ice" | | 1 | "not through her ears but directly into her skull" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 26 | | mean | 53.77 | | std | 28.61 | | cv | 0.532 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 76 | | 1 | 61 | | 2 | 88 | | 3 | 47 | | 4 | 83 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 62 | | 7 | 56 | | 8 | 72 | | 9 | 61 | | 10 | 57 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 55 | | 13 | 96 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 74 | | 16 | 68 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 95 | | 19 | 44 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 57 | | 22 | 80 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 59 | | 25 | 64 |
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| 96.91% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | | 0 | "being pulled" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "was trapped" |
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| 74.80% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 213 | | matches | | 0 | "was looking" | | 1 | "wasn't pulsing" | | 2 | "was recoiling" | | 3 | "was coming" |
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| 29.48% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 126 | | ratio | 0.04 | | matches | | 0 | "One moment she was in Richmond Park, the London night smelling of damp earth and distant traffic; the next, she was in the Grove." | | 1 | "Here, the air was different—cloying and sweet with the scent of wildflowers that bloomed unnaturally out of season, under a moon that seemed too large, too close." | | 2 | "The flowers here glowed with a faint luminescence of their own—violets and primrose and foxglove in impossible cobalt and phantasmal white." | | 3 | "Time moved differently here; maybe it made odd noises as it bent." | | 4 | "Rory’s cool-headed logic scrambled for an explanation—an animal sharpening its claws, rocks settling." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1401 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 51 | | adverbRatio | 0.03640256959314775 | | lyAdverbCount | 23 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01641684511063526 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 126 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 126 | | mean | 11.1 | | std | 7.44 | | cv | 0.67 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 28 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 22 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 45.77% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.3412698412698413 | | totalSentences | 126 | | uniqueOpeners | 43 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "Usually, a quiet hum of" | | 1 | "Probably just time settling, she" | | 2 | "Just the ancient, unmoving oak." | | 3 | "Impossibly, unnaturally tall and thin," | | 4 | "Then, from that featureless head," |
| | ratio | 0.045 | |
| 52.14% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 47 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "She scanned the ring of" | | 1 | "she muttered, the words sounding" | | 2 | "She was here for a" | | 3 | "She pulled a small canvas" | | 4 | "Her gaze swept the ground," | | 5 | "Their familiar beauty felt alien" | | 6 | "She listened, straining her ears" | | 7 | "She slowly straightened, turning in" | | 8 | "She traced the crescent-shaped scar" | | 9 | "She found a patch near" | | 10 | "It was a faint, dragging" | | 11 | "It came from the edge" | | 12 | "Her fingers stilled over a" | | 13 | "She stayed perfectly still, listening." | | 14 | "It wasn't the wind." | | 15 | "It set her teeth on" | | 16 | "She rose slowly, her movements" | | 17 | "It wasn't a trick of" | | 18 | "It moved, a deeper black" | | 19 | "It was impossibly fast, unnaturally" |
| | ratio | 0.42 | |
| 49.29% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 92 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "The air shifted, growing thick" | | 1 | "Here, the air was different—cloying" | | 2 | "A silver disc leaking cold" | | 3 | "A thrum of energy that" | | 4 | "Tonight, there was only silence." | | 5 | "A profound, listening silence that" | | 6 | "The crickets were quiet." | | 7 | "The wind held its breath." | | 8 | "Rory’s hand went to the" | | 9 | "The stone itself was inert," | | 10 | "That wasn't the kind of" | | 11 | "She scanned the ring of" | | 12 | "Nothing seemed out of place," | | 13 | "she muttered, the words sounding" | | 14 | "She was here for a" | | 15 | "Eva needed moondew for a" | | 16 | "She pulled a small canvas" | | 17 | "Her gaze swept the ground," | | 18 | "The flowers here glowed with" | | 19 | "Their familiar beauty felt alien" |
| | ratio | 0.821 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 60.89% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Here, the air was different—cloying and sweet with the scent of wildflowers that bloomed unnaturally out of season, under a moon that seemed too large, too clos…" | | 1 | "A thrum of energy that vibrated just beneath the surface of hearing, the whisper of Fae magic coiled in the ancient oaks." | | 2 | "A profound, listening silence that pressed in on her, muffling the sound of her own breathing." | | 3 | "She slowly straightened, turning in a full circle, her eyes probing the deep shadows pooled at the base of the oak stones." | | 4 | "Not just cool, but a deep, biting ice that seeped through her shirt, a stark contrast to its usual faint warmth." | | 5 | "It paused, tilting that blank expanse in her direction as if it could see her, as if it could smell the frantic terror pouring off her." | | 6 | "The one in front of her began to unfold a limb, reaching for her with fingers that were too long, too thin, like the bare branches of a dying tree." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she muttered, the words sounding flat and intrusive in the dead air" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |