Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMR39AHT4CBFAQGDE1Z83T4

Run Details

Duration:
20.9s
Cost:
$0.010109
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The door to the Raven's Nest swung inward, bringing with it the smell of rain-washed pavement and October cold. Rory shook water from her shoulders, her delivery bag still slung across her chest, the Golden Empress logo faded from a hundred runs through London weather. She'd ducked in to grab a drink before heading home to the flat upstairs—a habit that had become as natural as breathing over the past three years. Silas was behind the bar as always, moving with that economical grace that made his slight limp almost disappear. He was polishing a tumbler when she locked eyes with him in the mirror, and he nodded—their usual wordless greeting. The bar was quiet for a Thursday, just a couple of regulars hunched over their pints in the far corner, their faces lost in the amber glow of the wall sconces. Rory was halfway to the bar when she noticed him. The man sat alone at a corner table, nursing what looked like a Guinness. His back was to her, but something in the set of his shoulders made her freeze. Dark hair, longer than she remembered. A navy jumper worn at the cuffs. For a moment she couldn't place it—couldn't quite pull the name from the tangle of years and distance. Then he turned to set down his glass, and the light caught his profile. "Christ," she whispered. Marcus Webb. All of Marcus Webb—the easy slouch, the crooked nose she'd forgotten he had, the sharp angle of his jaw. Marcus from Cardiff, from the student union bar debates, from that drunken philosophy phase they'd both gone through third year. Marcus who'd promised he'd leave Wales and see the world, who'd written to her twice after she fled to London, both times letters that had gone unanswered because she'd been too wrapped up in the wreckage of Evan to think about old friends. That had been five years ago. "Rory?" Silas called from the bar, his voice carrying that note of gentle concern he reserved for his regulars' off days. "The usual?" She held up one finger—wait—and moved toward Marcus's table. He didn't see her until she was nearly there. When he did, his entire face shifted. Surprise gave way to something more complicated: a smile that didn't quite reach his eyes, followed by a shadow of something that looked like guilt. "Rory Carter," he said, and his accent was softer now, flattened by distance and time. "I didn't think I'd actually—" "Run into me?" She slid into the chair across from him uninvited. "I live upstairs. Bit obvious place to find me, really." The smile became more genuine then, but tentative. "I wasn't looking for you. I was just passing through London and—" He gestured vaguely at the bar. "Saw this place, thought I'd get out of the rain." Rory studied him. There was something different about him, but not in the way she'd expected. She'd imagined Marcus would stay exactly as he was—frozen in her memory as the clever boy who'd debated postmodernism and made her laugh until her ribs hurt in the university library. But this man across from her had a heaviness to him, a weight that didn't belong to twenty-two. "You look well," she said, which was a lie. He looked tired. He looked like someone who'd been carrying something heavy for a very long time. "So do you. Different haircut?" "It's been five years, Marcus. People change their haircuts." He flinched slightly at her tone, but didn't look away. "I know it's been—I tried to stay in touch. I wrote you." "I know you did." She was quiet for a moment, watching him. "I wasn't in a place where I could talk to anyone." Behind the bar, Silas moved with deliberate noise, giving them privacy. The clink of bottles, the rattle of the ice maker—he was good at reading rooms, at knowing when to be present and when to fade into the background. It was one of the things Rory respected about him. Marcus took a drink of his Guinness. "I heard about... what happened. With Evan." Of course he had. The world was small, and the Cardiff bubble even smaller. "Did you?" "One of the lads mentioned it when I was home last year. Said you'd got out, that you were in London. I was glad." He set the glass down carefully. "I was worried about you, after you left. You stopped responding to messages and I didn't know if—" "I needed to disappear," Rory said quietly. "I needed to be someone else for a while." Something in her phrasing seemed to strike him. He leaned back in his chair, studying her as she'd been studying him. When he spoke again, his voice was different. Softer, but also somehow sadder. "And did you? Become someone else?" It was such a simple question, but it opened up something in her chest that she hadn't acknowledged. The transformation from the girl who'd fled Cardiff in panic to the woman sitting here now. The careful reconstruction of herself, piece by piece. The woman who could move through London with purpose, who had Silas and Eva and Yu-Fei Cheung, who'd learned to trust her own instincts again. "I'm not sure yet," she admitted. "Still working on it." Marcus nodded slowly. He was quiet for a long moment, turning his glass in circles on the table. When he looked up again, his eyes were bright with an emotion she couldn't quite name. "I thought about reaching out again," he said. "After the first couple of letters came back marked Return to Sender. But I convinced myself you'd moved on, that you wouldn't want to hear from me." "Would I have?" He opened his mouth, closed it. "I don't know. Probably not." He paused. "I'm not the same person you knew either, you know. I did leave Wales, like I said I would. I've been in Brussels for three years, working for an NGO. I met someone—" He stopped. "I was going to propose. Last month." "Was?" "She said no." He said it matter-of-factly, but she could see the seams in that façade. "Said I was holding onto something I couldn't let go of. That I was still waiting for something to happen instead of making it happen." Rory considered this. "Was she wrong?" Marcus looked at her for a long time. "I don't know. Maybe not entirely." She heard Silas pull a pint, heard the gentle conversational murmur of the regulars in the corner. Outside, London rattled past, indifferent and eternal. In this small pocket of warmth and dim light, two people who had once known each other sat across from each other like strangers, separated not by miles but by the weight of years and choices. "You should probably leave," Rory said finally. "I just—" "Not London. Just... sit somewhere else for a bit. Order another drink. Let it be less strange before we try to fix it." She stood, her delivery bag settling against her hip. "I'm going to get my usual. Then I'm going upstairs. Tomorrow I'll probably second-guess all of this. But tonight I need to process the idea of you existing in the same city as me." Marcus smiled then, genuinely—a flash of the boy she'd known buried in the face of this tired man. "Fair enough." Rory turned toward the bar, where Silas was already pouring her gin and tonic without asking. As he slid it across the polished wood toward her, he caught her eye. In his hazel gaze was the quiet understanding of someone who'd seen many people try to outrun their past and fail. She lifted the glass to her lips and tasted the sharp brightness of redemption, or the beginning of it, or at least the possibility that sometimes the people you left behind were also trying to become someone new.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
59.2593% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Rory said quietly [quietly]"
1"Rory said finally [finally]"
62.4060% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1330
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
4
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"slightly"
2"slowly"
3"really"
4"very"
80.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Marcus"
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
84.9624% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1330
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"weight"
count2
highlights
0"weight"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences74
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences74
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"try to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences98
matches
0"carrying that note"
1"out, that you"
2"on, that you"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean29.86
std23.08
cv0.773
sampleLengths
072
170
210
361
414
53
684
76
823
99
1041
1120
1222
1336
1465
1526
165
179
1822
1923
2049
2114
2216
2348
2416
2534
266
2767
2810
2934
3035
313
3255
331
3441
356
3614
3760
387
392
4066
4120
4251
4338
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"was—frozen"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs165
matches
0"was polishing"
96.4498% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount976
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.04405737704918033
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.010245901639344262
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences98
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences98
mean13.41
std9.45
cv0.705
sampleLengths
019
126
227
319
420
531
610
714
816
96
107
1118
1214
133
142
1519
1620
1743
186
1921
202
219
229
237
2425
2515
265
2712
2810
298
3018
3110
323
3313
3431
3518
369
373
3814
395
409
4110
4212
4312
4411
4511
4628
4710
487
497
59.5238% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.41836734693877553
totalSentences98
uniqueOpeners41
8.3333% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"he said, and his accent was softer now, flattened by distance and time (say, be flatten)"
2"she said, which was a lie (say, be)"
3"Rory said quietly (say quietly)"
4"she admitted (admit)"
5"Rory said finally (say finally)"
85.3491%