Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMR446F1XQR5YPPWN20D1DC

Run Details

Duration:
47.2s
Cost:
$0.046483
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The last of the Tuesday drinkers had trickled out into the Soho night, leaving behind the ghosts of their conversations and the scent of stale beer. Rory ran a damp cloth over the mahogany bar, the motion a familiar, soothing rhythm. She worked the rag in slow circles, erasing the rings left by sweating glasses, the smear of a stray fingerprint. The old wood gleamed under the low lights, reflecting the rows of inverted glasses that hung above her head. From the end of the bar, Silas turned a page of his book, the soft rasp of paper the only sound besides the low hum of the coolers and the quiet melancholy of a jazz piano drifting from the speakers. His signet ring caught the light as he shifted his hand. He hadn't asked her to help close up, but she often did. The quiet ritual was a buffer between the frenetic energy of her delivery shifts and the solitude of her flat upstairs. Here, in the dim, map-lined confines of The Raven’s Nest, the world felt manageable. The bell above the door chimed, a sharp, intrusive sound in the near-silence. Rory didn't look up, just kept wiping. It was probably just one of Silas’s late-night contacts, heading for the hidden room. “Just one, if you’re still serving?” The voice was cultured, carefully modulated, but underneath it lay an accent she hadn’t heard in five years. A Cardiff lilt, ironed out but not quite erased. Rory’s hand stilled on the bar. A cold knot tightened in her stomach. Slowly, she lifted her head. He stood by the entrance, shrugging out of a tailored wool coat that probably cost more than her last three months’ rent. He was taller than she remembered, his shoulders broader under the crisp white shirt. But the set of his jaw, the thick, dark hair that always fell over his forehead—that was the same. Her mind spun, trying to slot the face into the present moment. It was like finding a faded photograph tucked into a new book. Silas glanced from the man to Rory, his hazel eyes missing nothing. “What can I get you?” he asked, his voice calm and even. “Whisky. Macallan, if you have it. Neat.” The man slid onto a stool at the far end of the bar, placing a slim leather briefcase on the floor beside him. He ran a hand through his hair, a gesture so familiar it made Rory’s breath catch. He hadn’t seen her yet. He was looking at the black-and-white photographs on the wall, the ones of old spies and forgotten cityscapes. It was Liam. Liam Rhys. Part of the old crew, the university debate team star, the one everyone said was destined for Parliament. The one who had been Evan’s best friend. Silas placed a heavy crystal tumbler on the bar and poured a measure of whisky. Liam picked it up, swirled the amber liquid, and as he turned back towards the room, his eyes met hers. Recognition dawned, followed by a wave of disbelief that washed over his features. “My God,” he breathed. “Rory? Rory Carter?” Rory gave a tight, thin smile that didn’t reach her eyes. “Hello, Liam.” He stood, leaving his drink untouched, and walked down the length of the bar towards her. He smelled of expensive cologne and damp wool. “I don’t believe it. What are you… what are you doing here?” He gestured around the empty bar as if it were a strange and exotic exhibit. “I work here,” she said. It wasn’t the truth, not really, but it was simpler. She felt Silas’s gaze on her, a quiet, steadying presence. “You work in a bar?” The question wasn’t malicious, just genuinely baffled. He looked at her hands, still clutching the rag. Her nails were short, clean, but unpolished. He was probably used to the perfectly manicured nails of the law clerks and paralegals in his circle. “Sometimes,” she said, dropping the rag into the sink behind the bar. “Mostly I’m a delivery driver.” He blinked. “A courier? For which firm? I’m with Davies & Stern while I’m in town, maybe I could…” “For a Chinese restaurant,” Rory cut in, her voice flat. She watched the information settle behind his eyes. Watched him recalibrate his understanding of who she had become. The star Pre-Law student, daughter of Brendan Carter, QC, now delivered sweet and sour pork on a moped. An awkward silence stretched between them. The jazz piano filled the space, a mournful, meandering tune. “Well,” he finally said, forcing a smile that looked painful. “You look… well, Rory. You really do.” “So do you, Liam. The barrister’s life suits you.” She looked pointedly at his silk tie, the gleam of the gold watch on his wrist when his cuff slid back. He looked exactly like the person they were all supposed to become. He had the grace to look faintly embarrassed. “It’s been good. Busy. I’m up from Cardiff for a case at the Old Bailey.” He took a tentative step closer. “We all wondered what happened to you. You just… vanished. Eva was worried sick.” “Eva knows I’m fine,” Rory said, her tone sharp enough to stop him from taking another step. “She’s the one who told me to come to London.” “Right.” He nodded, processing this. “Of course.” He hesitated, then plunged ahead. “Evan was… he was a wreck when you left. He had no idea why. We all thought…” Rory felt the cold knot in her stomach turn to ice. She picked up a clean glass and began polishing it with a dry cloth, her movements sharp and precise. She could feel the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist tingling, a phantom ache from a childhood fall that suddenly felt new again. “You thought what, Liam?” she asked, her voice dangerously quiet. She didn’t look at him, focusing instead on the perfect, smear-free curve of the glass in her hand. “I don’t know. That it was the pressure. Uni. Your dad’s expectations. Nobody knew what to think.” He lowered his voice. “He said you just packed a bag and left. Changed your number, blockedeveryone. It was… brutal.” Brutal. The word hung in the air between them, obscene. Rory finally stopped polishing the glass and placed it on the shelf with a soft, definitive click. She turned and met his gaze head-on. Her bright blue eyes were like chips of ice. “Evan’s version of the story,” she said, not as a question. “That’s the one you all heard.” Liam shifted his weight from one foot to the other. He looked uncomfortable, trapped between the man he called his friend and the woman standing before him, a ghost from his past who looked at him with a stranger’s eyes. “It was the only one we had, Rory.” “And you never thought to question it?” “He was our friend.” “He was my boyfriend,” she countered, her voice low and steady. “And you were my friend too, Liam. Did you ever, once, pick up the phone and try my parents? Did you ask Eva what really happened?” He looked down at his perfectly polished shoes. The silence was his answer. He had believed the easy story, the one that didn’t force him to look too closely at the darkness hiding behind his friend’s charming smile. Regret, she saw now, flickered in his eyes. The regret of inaction, of willful ignorance. “Look, I’m sorry,” he said, finally meeting her gaze again. “We were young. Stupid. If something was wrong, I wish you’d told us.” Rory laughed, a short, bitter sound. “Told you? Told the people who went for pints with him every Friday while I was at home figuring out how to hide a black eye? What would I have said, Liam? And what would you have done?” He flinched, the colour draining from his face. “A black… Rory, I had no idea. He swore he never…” “Of course he did.” She leaned forward on the bar, her voice dropping to a near-whisper. “That’s what they do. And people like you believe them, because it’s easier. You get to keep your friend, and I get to disappear.” She straightened up, her expression cooling over again. She felt oddly distant, as if she were dissecting a legal argument. “I didn’t just leave, Liam. I escaped.” He stared at her, the confident barrister stripped away, leaving a young, uncertain man in his place. He saw her now, not as the girl he’d known, but as the woman she’d been forced to become. The change wasn’t in the job or the city. It was in her eyes. The cool, appraising way she looked at him held a weight he couldn’t comprehend. “I… I didn’t know,” he stammered. It was a pathetic defense, and they both knew it. “No,” she agreed. “You didn’t.” He fumbled in his pocket, pulling out a business card and placing it on the bar. The crisp white rectangle looked alien on the dark, worn wood. “If you ever need anything,” he said, his voice strained. “A lawyer. Anything. Just call.” Rory looked at the card, at the embossed letters spelling out his name, his success. She didn’t touch it. Liam drained his whisky in one quick, nervous motion, the ice clinking against the glass. He placed the tumbler back down with a thud. “It was… it was good to see you, Rory.” “Was it?” she asked, the question hanging unanswered in the space between them. He gave a jerky nod, grabbed his coat and briefcase, and walked to the door. He paused with his hand on the handle, turned back one last time. The green neon of the bar’s sign washed over him, casting him in a sickly, artificial light. He looked like a stranger. Then he was gone, the chime of the bell a final, lonely note in the quiet room. Rory stood motionless for a long time, staring at the door. The past was a different country, they said. She’d just had her passport stamped at the border. She felt Silas move beside her. He picked up Liam’s business card, held it between his thumb and forefinger for a moment, then dropped it into the rubbish bin behind the bar. He slid a glass of water in front of her. His hand rested on the polished wood for a second, his silver ring a small, solid point of light in the dimness. He didn't say a word. He didn't have to. Rory wrapped her fingers around the cool glass, the condensation a welcome shock against her skin. She took a sip, the water clean and cold, washing away the bitter taste of the past.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
29.79% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"He gestured around [around]"
1"he finally said [finally]"
2"She looked pointedly [pointedly]"
3"He hesitated then [then]"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.489
leniency0.979
rawRatio0.174
effectiveRatio0.17
77.62% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1787
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count3
3
adverb"perfectly"
count2
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"slowly"
2"really"
3"perfectly"
4"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
55.23% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1787
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"silence"
count3
2
word"lilt"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count2
4
word"crystal"
count1
5
word"silk"
count1
6
word"could feel"
count1
7
word"perfect"
count1
8
word"weight"
count2
9
word"flickered"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"silence"
2"lilt"
3"stomach"
4"crystal"
5"silk"
6"could feel"
7"perfect"
8"weight"
9"flickered"
10"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences121
matches
0"a wave of disbelief"
1"looked uncomfortable"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences121
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences144
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1786
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions24
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"The past was a different country, they said."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount1407
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Tuesday1
Soho1
Silas6
Raven1
Nest1
Cardiff1
Rory14
Liam6
Rhys1
Parliament1
Evan1
Pre-Law1
Brendan1
Carter1
Brutal1
persons
0"Silas"
1"Raven"
2"Rory"
3"Liam"
4"Rhys"
5"Evan"
6"Brendan"
7"Carter"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences101
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite erased"
88.02% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.12
wordCount1786
matches
0"not really, but it was simpler"
1"not as the girl he’d known, but as the woman she’d been forced to become"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences144
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean36.45
std22.05
cv0.605
sampleLengths
080
198
234
36
445
579
624
77
862
931
1035
1120
1213
1351
1425
1546
1617
1719
1846
1916
2017
2142
2243
2327
2429
2554
2628
2737
2843
2917
3048
317
324
3337
3453
3523
3644
3719
3867
3964
4016
415
4242
4319
4433
4513
4667
4760
4874
93.66% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences121
matches
0"was cultured"
1"was destined"
2"been forced"
3"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs224
matches
0"was like finding"
1"was looking"
2"were dissecting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences144
ratio0.007
matches
0"But the set of his jaw, the thick, dark hair that always fell over his forehead—that was the same."
88.59% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount563
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"dim, map-lined confines"
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.046181172291296625
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.015985790408525755
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences144
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences144
mean12.4
std7.15
cv0.577
sampleLengths
026
115
220
319
440
511
612
721
814
913
107
1114
126
1318
149
156
167
175
1822
1914
2019
2112
2212
2312
2412
257
2623
2716
285
2918
303
312
3218
338
3415
3520
3613
374
383
3911
402
4116
428
4327
445
4510
4610
4712
489
497
42.36% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.3125
totalSentences144
uniqueOpeners45
58.48% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences114
matches
0"Slowly, she lifted her head."
1"Then he was gone, the"
ratio0.018
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount67
totalSentences114
matches
0"She worked the rag in"
1"His signet ring caught the"
2"He hadn't asked her to"
3"It was probably just one"
4"He stood by the entrance,"
5"He was taller than she"
6"Her mind spun, trying to"
7"It was like finding a"
8"he asked, his voice calm"
9"He ran a hand through"
10"He hadn’t seen her yet."
11"He was looking at the"
12"It was Liam."
13"He stood, leaving his drink"
14"He smelled of expensive cologne"
15"He gestured around the empty"
16"It wasn’t the truth, not"
17"She felt Silas’s gaze on"
18"He looked at her hands,"
19"Her nails were short, clean,"
ratio0.588
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount108
totalSentences114
matches
0"The last of the Tuesday"
1"Rory ran a damp cloth"
2"She worked the rag in"
3"The old wood gleamed under"
4"His signet ring caught the"
5"He hadn't asked her to"
6"The quiet ritual was a"
7"Here, in the dim, map-lined"
8"The bell above the door"
9"Rory didn't look up, just"
10"It was probably just one"
11"The voice was cultured, carefully"
12"A Cardiff lilt, ironed out"
13"Rory’s hand stilled on the"
14"A cold knot tightened in"
15"He stood by the entrance,"
16"He was taller than she"
17"Her mind spun, trying to"
18"It was like finding a"
19"Silas glanced from the man"
ratio0.947
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences114
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences60
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The old wood gleamed under the low lights, reflecting the rows of inverted glasses that hung above her head."
1"He looked uncomfortable, trapped between the man he called his friend and the woman standing before him, a ghost from his past who looked at him with a stranger…"
2"She felt oddly distant, as if she were dissecting a legal argument."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"he asked, his voice calm and even"
1"she asked, her voice dangerously quiet"
2"she countered, her voice low and steady"
3"She leaned, her voice dropping to a near-whisper"
4"She straightened up, her expression cooling over again"
5"he said, his voice strained"
6"she asked, the question hanging unanswered in the space between them"
86.17% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"he breathed (breathe)"
1"he stammered (stammer)"
2"she agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.277
leniency0.553
rawRatio0.231
effectiveRatio0.128
77.3307%