| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said softly [softly]" | | 1 | "She bit back [back]" | | 2 | "Eva said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.444 | | leniency | 0.889 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.222 | |
| 61.86% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1180 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sharply" | | 1 | "carefully" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "softly" | | 4 | "slightly" | | 5 | "quickly" | | 6 | "precisely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 32.20% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1180 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "echoed" | | 1 | "flickered" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "glinting" | | 6 | "tracing" | | 7 | "etched" | | 8 | "quivered" | | 9 | "flicked" | | 10 | "unwavering" | | 11 | "echoes" | | 12 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 56 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 56 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 46 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1164 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 40 | | wordCount | 826 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 2.18 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Harlow | 2 | | Quinn | 18 | | Camden | 2 | | Tube | 1 | | Kowalski | 1 | | Eva | 12 | | Morris | 3 | | Road | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Kowalski" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Morris" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.41 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1164 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.72% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 27 | | mean | 43.11 | | std | 21.21 | | cv | 0.492 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 98 | | 1 | 93 | | 2 | 65 | | 3 | 50 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 46 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 43 | | 10 | 56 | | 11 | 37 | | 12 | 60 | | 13 | 51 | | 14 | 39 | | 15 | 28 | | 16 | 38 | | 17 | 55 | | 18 | 72 | | 19 | 25 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 30 | | 22 | 44 | | 23 | 41 | | 24 | 29 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 48 |
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| 99.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 138 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 70 | | ratio | 0.157 | | matches | | 0 | "The stale air smelled of dust and damp rust—a smell that had become all too familiar with her years on the force, but something about this place felt wrong, different." | | 1 | "His clothes were fashionable but worn—designer leather jacket, jeans scuffed from wear." | | 2 | "A telltale bone token clutched in one hand gleamed faintly—crudely carved, and yet precise." | | 3 | "She had a battered leather satchel slung over one shoulder—equipment that seemed almost comically out of place amongst the police tape, markers, and evidence bags." | | 4 | "She tucked a stray tendril of hair behind her left ear — a nervous habit Quinn had seen enough times to know it meant Eva wanted to say something but feared the wrong word." | | 5 | "After Morris—her old partner—disappeared leaving behind only cryptic clues that led down dark rabbit holes, Quinn had learned how much of the supernatural world bled into their streets." | | 6 | "A uniformed forensics officer was crouched, bagging evidence—a fragment of torn fabric, maybe." | | 7 | "Three years ago, her partner Morris disappeared under circumstances just as elusive—tangled in a case involving precisely this kind of shadow market and unknown forces." | | 8 | "Quinn’s eyes flicked to the crumbling sign for Camden Road—the last glimmer of familiar civilization buried beneath a maze of forgotten transit." | | 9 | "What no one else noticed was the faint shimmer along the jagged edges of the tunnel entrance, barely visible beneath the peeling paint and grime: the thin, quivering veil of a portal, invisible to most but detectable to those who knew where—and how—to look." | | 10 | "She tapped the face three times, revealing a hidden inscription Morris had once whispered about—one that hinted at a shield against forces beyond mortal reckoning." |
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| 90.23% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 839 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 37 | | adverbRatio | 0.04410011918951132 | | lyAdverbCount | 23 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.027413587604290822 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 70 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 70 | | mean | 16.63 | | std | 8.52 | | cv | 0.512 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 30 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 34 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 29 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 26 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 30 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 27 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 28 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 25 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 22 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 71.43% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.42857142857142855 | | totalSentences | 70 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the collar of" | | 1 | "His clothes were fashionable but" | | 2 | "It was a grim invitation" | | 3 | "She had a battered leather" | | 4 | "She tucked a stray tendril" | | 5 | "She crouched beside the body," | | 6 | "she said softly" | | 7 | "She bit back the bitterness" | | 8 | "She didn’t believe easily, but" | | 9 | "She held the compass, its" | | 10 | "She looked down at the" | | 11 | "She flipped open a worn" | | 12 | "She glanced back at the" | | 13 | "She tapped the face three" | | 14 | "she said, voice low, almost" |
| | ratio | 0.268 | |
| 31.43% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots echoed" | | 1 | "The stale air smelled of" | | 2 | "She adjusted the collar of" | | 3 | "The body lay sprawled near" | | 4 | "A young man, early thirties," | | 5 | "His clothes were fashionable but" | | 6 | "A telltale bone token clutched" | | 7 | "It was a grim invitation" | | 8 | "Eva Kowalski stood nearby, her" | | 9 | "The soft curl of red" | | 10 | "She had a battered leather" | | 11 | "Eva said, voice a low" | | 12 | "She tucked a stray tendril" | | 13 | "Quinn nodded briskly but didn’t" | | 14 | "Eva blew out a breath," | | 15 | "Quinn’s sharp jaw tensed, brown" | | 16 | "Eva said, raising a finger" | | 17 | "Quinn frowned, her gaze roaming" | | 18 | "Eva glanced at Quinn, then" | | 19 | "Detective Quinn exhaled slowly, allowing" |
| | ratio | 0.857 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 79.83% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 34 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The stale air smelled of dust and damp rust—a smell that had become all too familiar with her years on the force, but something about this place felt wrong, dif…" | | 1 | "She had a battered leather satchel slung over one shoulder—equipment that seemed almost comically out of place amongst the police tape, markers, and evidence ba…" | | 2 | "After Morris—her old partner—disappeared leaving behind only cryptic clues that led down dark rabbit holes, Quinn had learned how much of the supernatural world…" |
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| 41.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "She held, its worn casing glinting green with verdigris" | | 1 | "she said, voice low, almost reverent" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.222 | | leniency | 0.444 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |