Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMR44BETQW5QM10ASVNVSA9

Run Details

Duration:
19.4s
Cost:
$0.002768
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots echoed sharply against the chipped tiles as she descended the narrow stairs into the heart of the abandoned Camden Tube station. Fluorescent lights flickered overhead, casting everything in pulses of sickly yellow and shadow. The stale air smelled of dust and damp rust—a smell that had become all too familiar with her years on the force, but something about this place felt wrong, different. Official reports called it “the scene of the crime,” but Quinn's instincts told her it was a stage, a carefully set panorama designed to fool anyone who wasn’t looking closely. She adjusted the collar of her coat and took in the scene with military precision. The body lay sprawled near the edge of the old platform, half-lit by the harsh glow of a temporary lamp. A young man, early thirties, face pale beneath the grime, blood seeping from a single sharp wound to his chest. His clothes were fashionable but worn—designer leather jacket, jeans scuffed from wear. A telltale bone token clutched in one hand gleamed faintly—crudely carved, and yet precise. It was a grim invitation to one of the city’s lesser-known shadows. Eva Kowalski stood nearby, her green eyes magnified behind round glasses, cheeks flushed from the cold. The soft curl of red hair that always threatened to curl free from her hastily tied bun framed a face tense with nervous energy. She had a battered leather satchel slung over one shoulder—equipment that seemed almost comically out of place amongst the police tape, markers, and evidence bags. "Morning, Harlow," Eva said, voice a low whisper, as if afraid to disturb the brittle silence. She tucked a stray tendril of hair behind her left ear — a nervous habit Quinn had seen enough times to know it meant Eva wanted to say something but feared the wrong word. Quinn nodded briskly but didn’t waste breath on pleasantries. "Might as well get straight to it. Looks like a stabbing. Clean entry. Quick death. What’s your read?" Eva blew out a breath, stepping closer to the body. "If this were just common street violence, maybe. But something’s off." "Off how?" Quinn’s sharp jaw tensed, brown eyes narrowing. "The wound," Eva said, raising a finger to hover above the man’s chest wound without touching it. "No residue from any weapon. No fibers, no traces of blade metal. I ran initial scans with the forensic app on my phone. Nothing consistent with a physical weapon." Quinn frowned, her gaze roaming the platform’s cracked walls and scattered debris. “What do you mean, no weapon? Then what caused the wound?” Eva glanced at Quinn, then at the bone token in the victim’s hand, turning it over reverently. “This ‘bone token’ isn’t just a key for entry. It’s a marker of ritual. This entire scene feels like more than a random act—it’s a message.” Detective Quinn exhaled slowly, allowing the taut muscles in her throat to loosen. She crouched beside the body, fingertips feeling the cold grit of the pavement. “And yet,” she said softly, “no witnesses, no signs of a struggle. Just this guy, dead on an abandoned platform, clutching something that landed him wherever we are right now.” Eva nodded, her freckles almost glowing under the pale light. “That token is a gateway pass to The Veil Market. You know what that place is, Harlow—a black market for things that don’t belong in the daylight.” “I know the rumors.” Quinn’s voice was low but hard. “Fairy tales for the cops on graveyard shift.” She bit back the bitterness. After Morris—her old partner—disappeared leaving behind only cryptic clues that led down dark rabbit holes, Quinn had learned how much of the supernatural world bled into their streets. She didn’t believe easily, but she didn't reject evidence. Eva pulled a small brass object from her satchel, cradling it carefully. “Look at this.” She held the compass, its worn casing glinting green with verdigris. “The Veil Compass. Crafted by a Shade artisan. It points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal. I guess you wouldn’t have seen one before.” Quinn’s gaze sharpened. “No, but I don’t doubt it exists.” She looked down at the compass face, tracing the etched protective sigils with a fingertip. The needle quivered slightly. “So someone was here for this. Or running from it.” “Or worse—caught in it.” Eva’s voice dropped to a whisper. “If the compass points to supernatural portals, then the wound might not be physical. It might be—something else.” A shadow shifted in the far corner of the platform. Quinn tensed, eyes darting. A uniformed forensics officer was crouched, bagging evidence—a fragment of torn fabric, maybe. Quinn stood abruptly, the old instinct flaring. “What are we missing?” Eva hesitated before responding. “The time frame. This body—if you look at the lividity and rigor, he’s been dead here for about six hours.” She flipped open a worn notebook, scribbling notes quickly. “But no record of any missing person matches this description. Not in our police logs. It’s like he appeared out of nowhere.” Quinn's mind ran through the possibilities. No witnesses, no struggle, no weapon, a mysterious token, a compass tuned to supernatural currents. Three years ago, her partner Morris disappeared under circumstances just as elusive—tangled in a case involving precisely this kind of shadow market and unknown forces. Quinn had kept her distance from the supernatural since then, but here, right now, every piece fit into a puzzle she thought she'd buried long ago. She glanced back at the compass again. The needle spun erratically, then settled, pointing toward the far side of the platform, beyond the rusted tracks. “That direction,” Eva said softly, “leads to the sealed service tunnels. No one’s been there since the station was decommissioned.” Quinn’s eyes flicked to the crumbling sign for Camden Road—the last glimmer of familiar civilization buried beneath a maze of forgotten transit. “Then that’s where we find our next clue.” What no one else noticed was the faint shimmer along the jagged edges of the tunnel entrance, barely visible beneath the peeling paint and grime: the thin, quivering veil of a portal, invisible to most but detectable to those who knew where—and how—to look. Quinn reached into her jacket and produced a small, worn leather watch from her left wrist. She tapped the face three times, revealing a hidden inscription Morris had once whispered about—one that hinted at a shield against forces beyond mortal reckoning. “This isn’t just a murder scene,” she said, voice low, almost reverent. “It’s a battleground. And we’re standing on the edge of something far older than any of us.” Eva met her gaze, the fire in her green eyes steady. “Then let’s not waste time.” Together, they stepped toward the tunnel, the compass needle unwavering now, pointing like a lodestar into the darkness. Between the fading echoes of the abandoned station and the weight of unseen worlds pressing close, Harlow Quinn felt the familiar stir of something she thought she had lost: purpose.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"Official reports called it but Quinn's instincts told her it was a stage, a carefully set panorama designed to fool anyone who wasn’t looking closely. [carefully closely]"
1"she said softly [softly]"
2"Eva said softly [softly]"
3"she said, voice low, almost reverent [almost]"
23.8579% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1182
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count2
1
adverb"precisely"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
3
adverb"sharply"
count1
4
adverb"slightly"
count1
5
adverb"slowly"
count1
6
adverb"softly"
count2
highlights
0"carefully"
1"precisely"
2"quickly"
3"sharply"
4"slightly"
5"slowly"
6"softly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
23.8579% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1182
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"flicked"
count1
2
word"glinting"
count1
3
word"quivered"
count1
4
word"unwavering"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"echoes"
count1
8
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"flicked"
2"glinting"
3"quivered"
4"unwavering"
5"weight"
6"echoed"
7"echoes"
8"etched"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences56
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences56
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
97.7234% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean43.11
std21.21
cv0.492
sampleLengths
098
193
265
350
427
521
69
746
823
943
1056
1137
1260
1351
1439
1528
1638
1755
1872
1925
2020
2130
2244
2341
2429
2516
2648
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences56
matches
0"was crouched"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs138
matches
0"wasn’t looking"
90.2344% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount839
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.04410011918951132
lyAdverbCount23
lyAdverbRatio0.027413587604290822
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences70
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences70
mean16.63
std8.52
cv0.512
sampleLengths
025
113
230
330
415
520
620
712
814
912
1016
1124
1225
1316
1434
159
1618
1710
1811
199
2017
2129
2212
2311
2417
2526
2613
2713
2830
2910
3027
3110
3213
3328
349
3512
3614
3725
383
3922
404
4110
4210
4318
4410
454
4613
477
484
494
71.4286% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.42857142857142855
totalSentences70
uniqueOpeners30
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Official reports called it but Quinn's instincts told her it was a stage, a carefully set panorama designed to fool anyone who wasn’t looking closely. (call tell be carefully set design fool does not look closely)"
1"Eva said, voice a low whisper, as if afraid to disturb the brittle silence (say, voice disturb)"
2"Eva said, raising a finger to hover above the man’s chest wound without touching it (say, raise touch)"
3"she said softly (say softly)"
4"Eva said softly (say softly)"
5"she said, voice low, almost reverent (say, voice)"
76.8884%