Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMR4VGDPS3CMTXN8KY1RV52

Run Details

Duration:
45.5s
Cost:
$0.043742
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The familiar scent of stale beer, lemon polish, and old paper greeted Aurora as she slipped behind the bar. It was the smell of safety. She slid her delivery bag under the counter, the logo for Golden Empress facing the wall, and stretched until her spine gave a satisfying series of cracks. “Long day, Carter?” Silas Blackwood asked without looking up from the glass he was polishing. The light from the green neon sign outside bled through the window, catching the silver of his signet ring and the threads of grey in his auburn hair. “The usual.” Rory pulled a stool over. “Mr. Cheung is convinced the fate of his culinary dynasty rests on a single order of crispy duck being delivered to Kensington in under thirty minutes.” A ghost of a smile touched Silas’s lips. “And did it?” “With two minutes to spare.” She ran a hand through her straight black hair, pushing it from her face. “He can sleep soundly tonight.” Silas set the gleaming glass down and moved toward the gin shelf, his limp more pronounced at the end of the day. He moved with the practiced economy of a man who missed nothing, his quiet authority a constant, grounding presence. The Raven’s Nest was her sanctuary, a dimly lit haven of dark wood and cracked leather, its walls covered in old maps of places she’d never been and black-and-white photos of strangers who felt like ancestors. It was the anchor of her new life, a world away from the grey drizzle and suffocating expectations of Cardiff. He placed a heavy tumbler of ice in front of her and poured a generous measure of gin over it, topping it with tonic and a wedge of lime. He knew her order, her moods, the unspoken things that chased her from one city to another. He never asked. It was why she lived in the flat upstairs, why this bar felt more like home than her own childhood bedroom ever had. Rory took a sip, the cold bitterness a welcome shock. The low hum of Tuesday night conversation washed over her—a couple murmuring in a corner booth, two old men arguing about football near the door. It was a comfortable rhythm. Then the door chimed, admitting a slice of Soho’s evening chill and a man who didn’t belong. He wore a suit that was too sharp, too expensive for a place like the Nest. He paused just inside the door, his eyes adjusting to the gloom, sweeping the room with the casual confidence of someone used to being in charge of any space he entered. For a second, he was just another tourist who’d mistaken this place for a cocktail lounge. Then he turned his head, and the faint light caught the line of his jaw. Ice flooded Rory’s veins, colder than the gin in her glass. It couldn’t be. Not here. Not in her place. But the set of his shoulders was the same, the sandy-brown hair still fell across his forehead in the same studied way. He’d filled out, the lanky frame of his university days replaced by a broader, more substantial build. He looked older. Harder. He approached the bar, his attention on Silas, not her. “Pint of whatever’s local,” he said, his voice a low rumble. And that was it. The sound of it, the familiar cadence that once meant laughter and late-night study sessions and secrets shared over cheap cider, now sent a shard of dread through her. Silas nodded, reaching for a tap. Rory kept her head down, her bright blue eyes fixed on the condensation trailing down her glass. She willed herself to be invisible, a shadow among the other shadows in the bar. Maybe he wouldn’t see her. Maybe he’d drink his pint and leave, and this would just be a phantom limb, a painful memory that briefly twinged. “Just in town for a meeting,” the man said, making small talk with Silas. “The office is just around the corner.” Then he glanced down the bar. His eyes slid past her, then snapped back. They narrowed in disbelief, a slow-dawning recognition that made Rory’s stomach clench. “Rory?” he breathed, the name a foreign object in the comfortable air of the bar. “Rory Carter? Bloody hell.” She looked up, trapping her features in a mask of cool neutrality she’d spent years perfecting. “Leo. What are you doing in London?” Leo stared, a slow smile spreading across his face, but it didn’t reach his eyes. “I work here now. Moved up two years ago. Jesus, what are the odds?” He shook his head, looking her up and down. “You look… different.” “It’s been five years,” she said, her voice flat. She took another sip of gin, the liquid doing nothing to calm the tremor in her hands. She rested her left wrist on the bar, her thumb instinctively finding the small, pale crescent of a scar there, tracing its familiar shape. “Yeah, but… your hair.” He gestured vaguely. “And you just seem… I don’t know.” He trailed off, pulling up the stool beside her. Silas placed his pint on the bar, his gaze lingering on Rory for a fraction of a second before he moved away, giving them space but remaining within earshot. “So, this is where you ended up. I always wondered.” “This is where I work sometimes,” she corrected him smoothly. “I live upstairs.” “Right.” Leo took a long swallow of his beer. The silence stretched, thick with everything he wasn't saying, everything she refused to. The ghosts of their shared history crowded the space between them: rainy afternoons in the university library, drunken nights out, the dark cloud of Evan that had hung over their entire final year. “We were all so worried,” Leo said finally, turning to her. His tie was loosened, his expression earnest. He was playing a part she no longer recognised. The concerned friend. “You just disappeared. No note, no call. Your parents were beside themselves. Evan was…” “Don’t,” Rory said, her voice dangerously quiet. Leo raised his hands in surrender. “Alright. Sorry. Old habits. It’s just… it was a mess after you left. He was a mess.” The words were a subtle jab, a classic rewriting of history that cast her as the agent of chaos, him as the victim. The old Rory would have flinched, would have felt a pang of guilt. The new Rory felt nothing but a cold, clear anger. “He was a mess long before I left, Leo,” she said, meeting his gaze. “You know that.” He had the grace to look away, staring into his pint. “Yeah. Well. It got worse.” He swirled the amber liquid. “He’s married now, you know. To a girl from Swansea. Got a kid on the way.” The information was meant to be a balm, a sign that everyone had moved on, that the past was neatly tidied up. For Rory, it was just another confirmation of the life she’d escaped, a life where Evan got to be the protagonist of a new story while hers was irrevocably fractured. “Good for him,” she said. The words tasted like ash. “Look, Rory…” He leaned closer, his voice dropping. He smelled of expensive cologne and regret, a combination she found suffocating. “I know I was… I should have said something. Done something. We were kids, we didn't know how to handle it.” “You weren’t a kid, Leo. You were twenty. You saw the bruises. You heard the fights. You just found it more convenient to look the other way.” Each word was a precisely placed stone, building a wall between them he could never breach. She wasn’t the frightened girl from Cardiff anymore, the one who made excuses, who hid the marks on her arms. London and the anonymity it offered had forged her into someone else. Someone colder, maybe, but someone who survived. He recoiled as if she’d slapped him. “That’s not fair.” “Isn’t it?” She finally turned fully to face him, letting him see the stillness in her eyes. “Did you ever once ask me if I was okay? Or did you just keep buying him another pint and telling him I’d come around?” He opened his mouth, then closed it. The accusation hung in the air, undeniable. He picked at the label on his bottle, his corporate confidence stripped away, leaving behind the weak, compliant boy she remembered. “I’m sorry,” he mumbled into his chest. “For what it’s worth.” “It’s worth nothing now,” she said, the words devoid of heat, just a simple statement of fact. She finished her gin, the ice clinking against the glass. The sound was loud, final. She pushed the tumbler away. She could feel Silas’s presence at the end of the bar, a silent guardian. Leo sighed, a heavy, theatrical sound. “Well. It was… it’s good to see you, Rory. To see you’re okay.” “I was always okay,” she lied. “I just needed to be somewhere else.” He nodded slowly, finally accepting defeat. He downed the rest of his pint in two large gulps, then stood, pulling a wallet from his jacket. He dropped a twenty-pound note on the bar. “You take care of yourself.” “I do,” she said. He gave her one last, searching look, as if trying to find a trace of the girl he once knew in the face of the woman before him. He found nothing. With a tight, sad smile, he turned and walked out, the chiming of the bell above the door marking his exit. The bar was quiet again. The low murmur of conversation resumed its comfortable rhythm, but the air around Rory felt charged, violated. Her safe space had been breached. Silas ambled over, his slight limp almost imperceptible. He picked up Leo’s empty glass and the twenty-pound note. He didn’t look at her, just wiped down the already clean spot on the bar where Leo had been sitting. “Everything alright, Carter?” he asked, his voice a low, even rumble. Rory stared at the door, at the empty space where the past had stood moments before. She traced the crescent scar on her wrist one last time, a permanent reminder of a fall, of a wound, of a life she had survived. “Fine, Silas,” she said, her voice steady. “Just fine.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"Leo said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.553
leniency1
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.077
94.19% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1721
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"precisely"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
41.89% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1721
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"familiar"
count3
1
word"gleaming"
count1
2
word"sanctuary"
count1
3
word"unspoken"
count1
4
word"comfortable"
count3
5
word"chill"
count1
6
word"gloom"
count1
7
word"stomach"
count1
8
word"tracing"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"pang"
count1
11
word"fractured"
count1
12
word"could feel"
count1
13
word"charged"
count1
14
word"traced"
count1
15
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"gleaming"
2"sanctuary"
3"unspoken"
4"comfortable"
5"chill"
6"gloom"
7"stomach"
8"tracing"
9"silence"
10"pang"
11"fractured"
12"could feel"
13"charged"
14"traced"
15"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences111
matches
0"d in disbelief"
1"a pang of guilt"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences111
filterMatches
0"see"
1"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences132
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1720
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount1394
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.86
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Aurora1
Golden1
Empress1
Blackwood1
Silas9
Raven1
Nest2
Cardiff2
Tuesday1
Soho1
Rory12
Leo7
Evan2
persons
0"Empress"
1"Blackwood"
2"Silas"
3"Raven"
4"Rory"
5"Leo"
6"Evan"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Soho"
globalScore1
windowScore1
91.18% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences85
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like ancestors"
1"as if trying to find a trace of the girl he once knew in the face of the woman before him"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1720
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences132
matches
0"on, that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean35.83
std21.95
cv0.612
sampleLengths
052
143
233
311
424
597
672
757
878
911
109
1143
1254
1364
1421
1526
1619
1723
1841
1950
2062
2113
2255
2344
247
2523
2646
2717
2837
2952
3010
3141
3282
3310
3442
3535
3611
3751
3819
3913
4038
414
4252
4328
4438
4511
4642
479
95.78% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences111
matches
0"was loosened"
1"was meant"
2"been breached"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs223
matches
0"was polishing"
1"wasn't saying"
2"was playing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences132
ratio0.008
matches
0"The low hum of Tuesday night conversation washed over her—a couple murmuring in a corner booth, two old men arguing about football near the door."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1402
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount53
adverbRatio0.037803138373751786
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.009985734664764621
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences132
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences132
mean13.03
std8.44
cv0.648
sampleLengths
019
16
227
315
428
57
626
78
83
919
105
1122
1219
1336
1420
1529
1617
173
1823
1910
2025
215
2217
2316
2431
2516
2615
2711
283
292
304
3122
3217
333
341
3510
3611
374
3829
396
4017
4115
425
4321
4414
457
466
478
4812
4915
39.14% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.32575757575757575
totalSentences132
uniqueOpeners43
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences106
matches
0"Then the door chimed, admitting"
1"Then he turned his head,"
2"Maybe he wouldn’t see her."
3"Maybe he’d drink his pint"
4"Then he glanced down the"
ratio0.047
4.91% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount57
totalSentences106
matches
0"It was the smell of"
1"She slid her delivery bag"
2"She ran a hand through"
3"He moved with the practiced"
4"It was the anchor of"
5"He placed a heavy tumbler"
6"He knew her order, her"
7"He never asked."
8"It was why she lived"
9"It was a comfortable rhythm."
10"He wore a suit that"
11"He paused just inside the"
12"It couldn’t be."
13"He’d filled out, the lanky"
14"He looked older."
15"He approached the bar, his"
16"he said, his voice a"
17"She willed herself to be"
18"His eyes slid past her,"
19"They narrowed in disbelief, a"
ratio0.538
11.89% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount95
totalSentences106
matches
0"The familiar scent of stale"
1"It was the smell of"
2"She slid her delivery bag"
3"Silas Blackwood asked without looking"
4"The light from the green"
5"Rory pulled a stool over"
6"A ghost of a smile"
7"She ran a hand through"
8"Silas set the gleaming glass"
9"He moved with the practiced"
10"The Raven’s Nest was her"
11"It was the anchor of"
12"He placed a heavy tumbler"
13"He knew her order, her"
14"He never asked."
15"It was why she lived"
16"Rory took a sip, the"
17"The low hum of Tuesday"
18"It was a comfortable rhythm."
19"He wore a suit that"
ratio0.896
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
ratio0
35.04% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"He moved with the practiced economy of a man who missed nothing, his quiet authority a constant, grounding presence."
1"The Raven’s Nest was her sanctuary, a dimly lit haven of dark wood and cracked leather, its walls covered in old maps of places she’d never been and black-and-w…"
2"He knew her order, her moods, the unspoken things that chased her from one city to another."
3"He paused just inside the door, his eyes adjusting to the gloom, sweeping the room with the casual confidence of someone used to being in charge of any space he…"
4"They narrowed in disbelief, a slow-dawning recognition that made Rory’s stomach clench."
5"Silas placed his pint on the bar, his gaze lingering on Rory for a fraction of a second before he moved away, giving them space but remaining within earshot."
6"The ghosts of their shared history crowded the space between them: rainy afternoons in the university library, drunken nights out, the dark cloud of Evan that h…"
7"The words were a subtle jab, a classic rewriting of history that cast her as the agent of chaos, him as the victim."
9.62% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags26
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"he said, his voice a low rumble"
1"she said, her voice flat"
2"Rory said, her voice dangerously quiet"
3"He leaned, his voice dropping"
4"he asked, his voice a low, even rumble"
5"she said, her voice steady"
64.89% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"he breathed (breathe)"
1"she corrected (correct)"
2"he mumbled (mumble)"
3"she lied (lie)"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.34
leniency0.681
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.17
79.6174%