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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMR535NWBYMV1GSF0ST6727
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Model:
Qwen 3.5 Plus (2026-02-15)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
31.4s
Cost:
$0.005394
Provider:
Alibaba
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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Meta
AI
The rain in Soho didn't wash things clean; it just made the grime slicker, turning the pavement into a black mirror that reflected the
fractured
霓虹 lights of the street. Aurora Carter pushed through the heavy oak door of The Raven's Nest, shaking the water from her straight, shoulder-length black hair. The distinctive green neon sign above the entrance buzzed with a intermittent
flicker
, casting a sickly emerald glow over the wet cobblestones before she stepped inside and let the darkness swallow her. The air within the bar was thick, a familiar cocktail of stale beer, lemon polish, and the underlying metallic tang of old secrets. It was a dimly lit
sanctuary
where the walls
were papered
with fading black-and-white photographs of people who looked like they knew too much, and maps of cities that no longer existed in the same form. Rory scanned the room, her bright blue eyes adjusting to the low light. She was still wearing her delivery uniform from the Golden Empress, the yellow polyester jacket zipped halfway up, smelling faintly of sesame oil and damp cardboard. Her shift had ended an hour ago, but the adrenaline of dodging traffic and
navigating
the labyrinthine alleys of London hadn't quite faded. She moved toward the bar, her boots clicking
softly
on the floorboards. Behind the counter, Silas Blackwood
was polishing
a glass with a
methodical
, rhythmic motion. He looked older than the last time she'd counted the years, though time
seemed to
treat him differently than it treated everyone else. His grey-streaked auburn hair
was swept
back neatly, matching the trimmed beard that framed a face carved from patience and quiet authority. When he turned, the slight limp in his left leg betrayed the old knee injury from Prague, a ghost of violence that never fully left him. "You're late," Silas said, his voice a low rumble that cut through the murmur of the few patrons scattered at the tables. He didn't look up immediately, finishing the circle of the cloth around the tumbler before setting it down. "Traffic was a nightmare, and Yu-Fei decided to reorganize the entire kitchen inventory five minutes before I was supposed to clock out," Rory replied, sliding onto a stool. She rested her elbows on the polished wood, the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist catching the light as she rubbed her temple. "Besides, I thought you liked keeping me waiting. Builds character." Silas finally looked at her, his hazel eyes narrowing
slightly
. There was a
weight
in that gaze, a scrutiny that went beyond the surface. "Character is built in the fire, Rory. Not in the queue." He reached under the counter and pulled out a bottle of whiskey, pouring two fingers into a fresh glass without asking. He slid it across the bar. "You look tired." "I am tired," she admitted, wrapping her hands around the warm glass. "It's been a long week. A long year, actually." "It has been longer than a year," Silas corrected
softly
. "Three years, four months, and twelve days since you walked out of here and vanished into the ether. No calls. No letters. Just silence." Rory flinched, the sharpness of his precision catching her off guard. She took a sip of the whiskey, the burn grounding her. "I needed to disappear, Si. You know that. Evan was... he was getting closer. I couldn't risk dragging your world into my mess." "And yet, here you are," Silas said, leaning forward. The movement was stiff, guarded. "Back in my world. Or what's left of it." The tension between them tightened, a invisible wire pulled taut. They were two old friends, bound by a history that predated her flight to London, predated the abusive relationship with Evan that had nearly broken her, predated the life she had
tried to
construct out of spare parts and quick thinking. But the person sitting on the stool wasn't the frightened girl who had stumbled into Soho half a decade ago. That girl had been soft edges and wide, terrified eyes. This woman was cool-headed, her posture straight, her expression guarded behind a mask of intelligence and calculation. She had learned to think outside the box because survival demanded it. "I'm not the same person who left, Silas," Rory said, her voice steady despite the tremor in her hands. "I can't be." "No," Silas agreed, his voice dropping an octave. "You aren't. The girl who used to sit here and cry over law textbooks, terrified of disappointing her father, the Irish barrister who wanted nothing but tradition? She's gone." He paused, tracing the rim of his own glass with his right hand, the silver signet ring
glinting
in the dim light. "In her place is someone who delivers food for the Triad's front restaurant and lives above a spy's bar without blinking. Someone who knows how to vanish." "I did what I had to do," Rory said, a defensive edge creeping into her tone. "I survived." "Survival is a low bar, Aurora," Silas countered, using her full name for the first time. It sounded heavy, like a verdict. "Thriving is something else. Living is something else. You've spent three years running so fast you forgot to look at where you were going. You traded one cage for another." Rory stiffened. The accusation stung because it held a kernel of truth she refused to examine. She had fled Cardiff, fled her parents' expectations, fled Evan's violence, and landed here, in the orbit of Silas's
clandestine
network. She told herself she was independent, that her job at the Golden Empress was just a gig, that living above the bar was convenient. But Silas saw the threads she
tried to
ignore. He saw the way she scanned the exits, the way her hand drifted near her pocket where she kept her phone, the way she never
truly
relaxed. "What do you want from me, Si?" she asked, her blue eyes flashing. "An apology for staying alive? For not checking in? I was trying to protect you. Protect this place." "This place doesn't need protection from you," Silas said, his expression softening just a fraction. The anger drained out of him, replaced by a
profound
, weary sadness. "I needed my friend. I needed to know you were okay. Instead, I got radio silence while I
worried that Evan
had finally found you, or that you'd ended up in a ditch somewhere because you were too proud to ask for help." He sighed, the sound rattling in his chest. "Do you have any idea what it does to a man to watch someone he cares about walk into the dark and simply cease to exist? I have contacts everywhere, Rory. I could have helped. I could have fixed it." "You can't fix everything," she whispered, looking down at the scar on her wrist. The memory of the childhood accident that caused it felt distant now, overshadowed by the newer, invisible scars Evan had left. "Some things have to be broken before they can be remade. I had to break, Silas. I had to become someone else to survive him." Silas reached across the bar, his large hand covering hers. His skin was rough, warm. "And who did you become?" Rory looked up, meeting his hazel eyes. She saw the reflection of the green neon sign in them, a splash of unnatural color in the warmth of his gaze. She thought about the law degree she had abandoned, the disappointment in her mother's voice when she stopped calling, the fear that still woke her up some nights. Then she thought about the deliveries she made, the codes she picked up from Yu-Fei's customers, the way she
navigated
the city with a predator's grace. "I became someone who doesn't wait for permission," she said quietly. "Someone who doesn't hope for rescue." Silas nodded
slowly
, withdrawing his hand. "That is a heavy burden to carry alone." "I'm not alone," Rory said, though the words felt fragile. "I'm here now." "For how long?" Silas asked. "Until the next threat appears? Until the next reason to run presents itself?" Rory opened her mouth to answer, but the words died in her throat. The
weight
of the
unspoken
regret hung between them, thick as the smoke that used to fill the bar years ago. They had lost time. Years of shared jokes, of mentorship, of simple friendship, stolen by fear and circumstance. She looked at Silas,
really
looked at him, and saw the lines around his eyes deepened by worry, the grey in his hair more prominent. He had aged while she
was hiding
. He had carried the
weight
of her absence. "I don't know," she admitted, her voice cracking
slightly
. "I don't know how long I can stay. But tonight... tonight I'm staying." Silas picked up the bottle again and refilled her glass, then his own. He raised it in a small, solemn toast. "To tonight, then. And to the hope that tomorrow might be easier." "To tonight," Rory
echoed
, clinking her glass against his. They drank in silence, the ambient noise of the bar filling the space between them—the clink of ice, the low hum of conversation, the rain drumming against the window. The maps on the wall
seemed to
shift in the Shadows, depicting routes to places they might never go. For a moment, the distance of three years shrank, bridged by the shared understanding of what it cost to survive and the quiet, aching regret of the time they couldn't get back. Rory set her glass down, the warmth of the whiskey spreading through her chest, and for the first time in years, she didn't check the exit. She just sat there, in the dim light of the Nest, with the man who had known her before the world
tried to
break her, waiting to see if she could learn to be whole again.
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2/17/2026, 2:52:01 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
54.9020%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
17
adverbTagCount
4
adverbTags
0
"Silas corrected softly [softly]"
1
"Silas said, his expression softening just a fraction [just]"
2
"she said quietly [quietly]"
3
"she admitted, her voice cracking slightly [slightly]"
57.7295%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1656
totalAiIsmAdverbs
7
found
0
adverb
"slightly"
count
2
1
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
2
adverb
"softly"
count
2
3
adverb
"really"
count
1
4
adverb
"truly"
count
1
highlights
0
"slightly"
1
"slowly"
2
"softly"
3
"really"
4
"truly"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
15.4589%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1656
totalAiIsms
14
found
0
word
"sanctuary"
count
1
1
word
"flicker"
count
1
2
word
"glinting"
count
1
3
word
"clandestine"
count
1
4
word
"methodical"
count
1
5
word
"unspoken"
count
1
6
word
"profound"
count
1
7
word
"fractured"
count
1
8
word
"weight"
count
3
9
word
"echoed"
count
1
10
word
"navigated"
count
1
11
word
"navigating"
count
1
highlights
0
"sanctuary"
1
"flicker"
2
"glinting"
3
"clandestine"
4
"methodical"
5
"unspoken"
6
"profound"
7
"fractured"
8
"weight"
9
"echoed"
10
"navigated"
11
"navigating"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
77
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
5
narrationSentences
77
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"tried to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
98
matches
0
"worried that Evan"
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
31
mean
53.13
std
35.84
cv
0.675
sampleLengths
0
82
1
121
2
97
3
40
4
62
5
65
6
21
7
34
8
45
9
23
10
110
11
22
12
86
13
18
14
52
15
97
16
31
17
70
18
48
19
60
20
20
21
83
22
17
23
14
24
13
25
18
26
92
27
22
28
33
29
9
30
142
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
2
totalSentences
77
matches
0
"were papered"
1
"was swept"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
2
totalVerbs
205
matches
0
"was polishing"
1
"was hiding"
94.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1191
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount
36
adverbRatio
0.030226700251889168
lyAdverbCount
17
lyAdverbRatio
0.014273719563392108
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
98
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
98
mean
16.81
std
10.16
cv
0.604
sampleLengths
0
29
1
21
2
32
3
23
4
36
5
13
6
26
7
23
8
12
9
14
10
23
11
22
12
26
13
22
14
18
15
28
16
24
17
10
18
10
19
14
20
32
21
6
22
3
23
12
24
9
25
10
26
24
27
11
28
11
29
23
30
9
31
5
32
9
33
10
34
41
35
20
36
10
37
17
38
12
39
19
40
3
41
8
42
51
43
27
44
16
45
2
46
16
47
6
48
30
49
2
54.4218%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
10
diversityRatio
0.3877551020408163
totalSentences
98
uniqueOpeners
38
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
17
fancyCount
13
fancyTags
0
"Silas said, his voice a low rumble that cut through the murmur of the few patrons scattered at the tables (say, scatter)"
1
"Rory replied, sliding onto a stool (reply, slide)"
2
"she admitted, wrapping her hands around the warm glass (admit, wrap)"
3
"Silas corrected softly (correct softly)"
4
"Silas agreed, his voice dropping an octave (agree, drop)"
5
"Rory said, a defensive edge creeping into her tone (say, creep)"
6
"Silas countered, using her full name for the first time (counter, use)"
7
"Silas said, his expression softening just a fraction (say, soften just)"
8
"she whispered, looking down at the scar on her wrist (whisper, look down)"
9
"she said quietly (say quietly)"
10
"Rory said, though the words felt fragile (say, feel)"
11
"she admitted, her voice cracking slightly (admit, crack slightly)"
12
"Rory echoed, clinking her glass against his (echo, clink)"
80.9713%