Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMR5GTECGXW2ZBJMY00KYYG

Run Details

Duration:
14.2s
Cost:
$0.006868
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The raven’s neon glow bled through the Soho drizzle, painting the slick pavement a sickly green. Aurora pushed through the heavy oak door of The Raven’s Nest, shaking the damp from her shoulder-length black hair. The scent of stale beer, old wood, and something vaguely metallic—Silas’ favorite disinfectant—hit her first. It was a familiar, comforting smell, the scent of home. The bar was sparsely populated for a Tuesday night. A couple huddled in a booth, their hushed voices barely audible over the low thrum of a blues tune from the jukebox. A lone man nursed a pint at the counter, his back to the door. Rory made her way to the bar, intending to grab a quick soda before heading upstairs to her flat. “Evening, Rory,” Silas Blackwood’s voice rumbled, deep and even, as he slid a coaster across the polished mahogany. His neatly trimmed beard, streaked grey with auburn, caught the dim light. He leaned against the back bar, his silver signet ring gleaming on his right hand as he wiped down a glass. A subtle shift in his weight reminded her of the slight limp in his left leg. “Rough delivery run?” Rory sighed, running a hand over her blue eyes. “Just cold. And the traffic on Oxford Street was a nightmare.” She leaned against the cool wood. “Just a coke, please, Silas.” He nodded, moving with the quiet authority that always seemed to impress her. As he turned to retrieve her drink, the man at the counter shifted, his back still mostly to her. Something in the way he moved, the set of his shoulders, pricked at a memory. It was an old memory, one she usually kept locked away. Silas placed a sweating glass of cola in front of her. “Anything else, Rory? You look like you’ve been through it.” She shook her head, her gaze still snagged on the man fifty feet away. He was still. Too still. “No, just tired.” Before she could dismiss the feeling, the man tilted his head, catching the reflection of the bar in the mirror behind the bottles. And then he turned. Rory’s breath hitched. Time seemed to warp, the blues music fading into a distant hum. Those eyes. A shade of startling green she had seen only once before, a lifetime ago. A jawline that used to be soft, now chiseled and sharp. The boyish curve of his mouth, now a taut, unfamiliar line. Evan. The name, unspoken, felt like a physical blow. Her hand flew to her left wrist, her fingers tracing the small crescent-shaped scar there, a phantom ache blooming in its wake. He saw her. Recognition, slow and dawning, flickered in those green eyes. A ghost of a smile, almost a wince, touched his lips. “Rory?” he said, his voice deeper, rougher than she remembered. It was a question, an accusation. She couldn't speak, her throat suddenly dry. She gripped the cold glass tighter. Silas, sensing the shift in the air, glanced between them, his hazel eyes narrowing. He was an expert at reading people, at sensing trouble. Evan pushed off the bar stool, a studied casualness in his movements. He walked towards her, each step a deliberate invasion of her carefully constructed peace. He was taller, broader than she remembered. His clothes were expensive, tailored. Not the threadbare jumpers and faded jeans of the boy she’d known. He stopped a foot away, close enough for her to feel the subtle heat radiating from him, close enough for the faint scent of an unfamiliar cologne to reach her. It was sharp, expensive, nothing like the cheap aftershave he used to wear. “Aurora Carter,” he said, the full name a hammer blow. “It really is you. I heard… well, I heard you’d disappeared.” Her voice, when it came, was a whisper. “Evan. What are you doing here?” He gave a short, humourless laugh. “London. That’s what I’m doing here. What are *you* doing here? Last I heard, you were set to be Queen of the Law Courts back in Cardiff.” The bitter edge to his voice was unmistakable. It cut through the years, through the layers of healing she had built. “Things change,” she said, her voice growing steadier, a coolness seeping into it. It was the detached, calm voice she used when facing down a difficult delivery or navigating a heated argument. “Clearly.” His gaze swept over her, taking in her practical delivery uniform, the plainness of her appearance. His eyes lingered on her face, searching, as if for the girl he’d known. But that girl was long gone. “You’ve changed too,” she said, the words slipping out before she could stop them. He looked… harder. The softness in his features was gone, replaced by an angular sharpness. His eyes, though still that striking green, held a guarded intensity she didn't recognize. “Life does that.” He shrugged, a negligent gesture designed to project indifference. “So, this is your life now? Delivering takeout from a Chinese place? Above a bar?” A trace of derision entered his voice. Rory felt a familiar heat rise in her cheeks, but she pushed it down. “It’s honest work. And it’s mine. I don’t owe you any explanations, Evan.” “No, you don’t.” He took another step closer, his gaze fixed on hers. “But I think you owe me an apology.” The words hung in the air, heavy and loaded. Silas, from behind the bar, stopped wiping a glass. The couple in the booth had ceased their murmuring. Even the blues music seemed to hold its breath. Rory stared at him, bright blue eyes unwavering. “An apology? You’re joking.” “You left without a word, Rory. Just vanished. No call, no note, no explanation to anyone. Eva just told me you’d gone to London. You think that was okay?” His voice was low, but the anger was palpable. Her old anger, dormant for so long, flared. “You think *that’s* what this is about, Evan? You think I owe *you* an apology for leaving after all you did?” The words, once so impossible to say, now poured out, fueled by years of unspoken hurt. “You think I should have lingered to explain why I left the man who… who nearly broke me?” A subtle flicker in his eyes. For a moment, just a fraction of a second, the mask of indifference slipped. A flash of something akin to shame, quickly suppressed. “I made mistakes,” he said, his voice flat. “We both did. But you just cut me out, Rory. Like I was nothing. After everything we went through.” “Everything *you* put me through.” She gripped the glass so hard her knuckles turned white. “I left because I had to. Because I was afraid. Afraid of what you would do next, afraid of who I was becoming with you.” He was silent for a long moment, his gaze unreadable. He looked around the bar, as if assessing an opponent, his eyes briefly sweeping over Silas. Then he brought his gaze back to her. “Look, Rory,” he began, his voice surprisingly gentle, a resonance of the boy she had once loved. “I’m not the same person I was. I’ve grown up. I’ve… learned.” The word hung in the air, empty, without supporting evidence. Rory scoffed, a short, sharp sound. “Have you? Or have you just learned to hide it better?” His jaw tightened. The trace of vulnerability vanished, replaced by a cold, hard glare. “You always were stubborn, Aurora. Always jumped to conclusions.” “And you were always good at twisting things.” She met his stare, her resolve hardening. “I’m not that naive girl anymore, Evan. I’m not the one who lets herself be walked all over.” He leaned closer, lowering his voice. “I heard you were living in London with Eva. She said you reinvented yourself. ‘Laila,’ she called you. What, was Aurora not good enough anymore?” The casual mention of her new name, a name only Eva and a few close friends used, felt like a violation. “It’s none of your business. And Eva doesn’t know everything.” “No, I suppose not. She still pines for you, you know. Worries about you.” He said it like a threat, a weapon. Rory felt a surge of protectiveness for her friend. “Leave Eva out of this. She had nothing to do with any of it.” “Didn’t she? She was always in your ear, wasn’t she? Always telling you I was no good.” A bitter laugh escaped him. “Maybe she was right.” The admission, however grudging, was a shock. She watched him, searching for sincerity in his eyes, but found only a well-practiced blankness. “What do you want, Evan?” She kept her voice even, controlled. “Why are you here? This isn’t a coincidence, is it?” He hesitated, then pulled a small, engraved silver card from his inner jacket pocket and slid it across the bar. It landed with a soft click. “I’m here on business. For Blackwood & Sons. We’re expanding our London presence. And I… I wanted to see you.” Rory glanced at the card. Blackwood & Sons. A major investment firm. The name of the company sent a chill down her spine. The boy who couldn’t hold down a part-time job now worked for a high-powered company. “Funny,” she said, looking up at him, her bright blue eyes cold. “I don’t remember you ever wanting to see me unless you wanted something.” His face flushed, a flicker of the old Evan. “That’s not fair.” “Isn’t it?” She pushed the card back towards him with her fingertip. “You want to apologize? For everything? Then say it. Truly. Not this half-hearted performance.” He picked up the card, his fingers drumming lightly against the polished wood. The drumming stopped. He met her gaze, and for a fleeting moment, she saw a shadow of genuine pain in his green eyes. “I am sorry, Rory,” he said, his voice softer now, stripped of its defensive edge. “For everything. For how I treated you. For the fear… I know I hurt you. I really am sorry.” The words, so long imagined, so long yearned for, now sounded hollow, too little, too late. The weight of time, of unspoken regret, hung between them, a tangible third presence. Rory looked at him, truly looked at him, and saw not the boy she had once loved, nor the monster she had fled, but a stranger. A man shaped by choices, just as she had been. “I hear you,” she said, her voice quiet. “It doesn’t change anything.” She took a slow sip of her coke, the cold liquid doing little to quench the fire in her gut. He had apologized. And it meant nothing. Not anymore. He studied her for another moment, then a slow nod. “I suppose not.” He slid the signet ring on his right hand, a nervous habit. “Well. It was… unexpected, seeing you.” “Unexpected,” she echoed, the word flat. He gave a small, almost imperceptible bow of his head. “Goodnight, Rory.” He turned and walked towards the door, his measured steps now carrying a definitive air of departure. The green neon glow of The Raven’s Nest swallowed him whole a moment later. Silence descended, thicker than before. Silas finally broke it, his voice calm. “Everything alright, Rory?” She took another sip, the ice clinking against the glass. “As alright as it can be, Silas. As alright as it can be.” Her gaze drifted to the empty space where Evan had stood, then to her wrist, the crescent-shaped scar faintly visible in the dim light. She ran her thumb over it, feeling nothing but her own skin. No phantom ache. Just a scar.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
50.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Silas Blackwood’s voice rumbled, deep and even, as he slid a coaster across the polished mahogany [deep]"
1"he began, his voice surprisingly gentle, a resonance of the boy she had once loved [surprisingly once]"
2"she said, looking up at him, her bright blue eyes cold [bright]"
58.9533% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1949
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"lightly"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
4
adverb"really"
count2
5
adverb"truly"
count2
highlights
0"carefully"
1"lightly"
2"quickly"
3"suddenly"
4"really"
5"truly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
17.9066% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1949
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"palpable"
count1
1
word"tangible"
count1
2
word"resonance"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"flicker"
count2
5
word"gleaming"
count1
6
word"unwavering"
count1
7
word"unspoken"
count3
8
word"unreadable"
count1
9
word"weight"
count2
10
word"echoed"
count1
11
word"navigating"
count1
highlights
0"palpable"
1"tangible"
2"resonance"
3"flickered"
4"flicker"
5"gleaming"
6"unwavering"
7"unspoken"
8"unreadable"
9"weight"
10"echoed"
11"navigating"
0.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches4
maxInWindow4
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count2
2
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
1"hung in the air"
2"sent a chill down"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences134
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences134
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences163
matches
0"does that.” He"
87.4203% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs62
mean31.29
std14.27
cv0.456
sampleLengths
060
164
270
344
445
521
622
727
853
91
1030
1123
1216
1313
1424
1550
1643
1721
1814
1933
2021
2132
2237
2343
2434
2527
2621
2736
2812
2938
3063
3129
3227
3340
3434
3529
3627
3723
3833
3931
4031
4122
4223
4326
4422
4521
4646
4738
4825
4912
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences134
matches
0"was gone"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs227
matches(empty)
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1425
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount56
adverbRatio0.03929824561403509
lyAdverbCount19
lyAdverbRatio0.013333333333333334
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences163
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences163
mean11.9
std6.97
cv0.586
sampleLengths
016
119
215
310
49
522
614
719
818
912
1021
1116
123
139
1417
1518
1619
1715
1811
1911
2010
2114
223
232
243
2523
264
273
2812
292
3014
3111
3211
331
348
3522
363
379
3811
3910
406
417
426
4314
4410
4512
4614
477
485
4912
50.7157% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3374233128834356
totalSentences163
uniqueOpeners55
50.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Silas Blackwood’s voice rumbled, deep and even, as he slid a coaster across the polished mahogany (rumble, slide)"
1"she said, her voice growing steadier, a coolness seeping into it (say, grow seep)"
2"she said, the words slipping out before she could stop them (say, slip out stop)"
3"he began, his voice surprisingly gentle, a resonance of the boy she had once loved (begin, once love)"
4"she said, looking up at him, her bright blue eyes cold (say, look up)"
5"she echoed, the word flat (echo)"
77.3527%