Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMR5K7TFY3XC5FE2Y613SQD

Run Details

Duration:
1m 33s
Cost:
$0.008935
Provider:
Inceptron

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain in Soho didn’t wash the streets clean; it merely slicked the grime into a reflective sheen, catching the distorted neon glow of the Raven’s Nest sign. Inside, the bar was quiet, the kind of heavy, expectant silence that settles in after the last drunk has stumbled out and before the cleaning begins. Aurora Carter stood behind the mahogany, a rag in her hand. She wasn’t cleaning, just squeezing the fabric over and over, watching the water drip onto her boots. She was twenty-five, but tonight, staring at the rows of inverted bottles, she felt ancient. The flat above the shop—her flat—felt too empty, the silence up there accusatory rather than peaceful. Down here, at least, the ghosts had names. The bell above the door chimed, a sharp, discordant note that sliced through the hum of the refrigerator. Rory didn’t look up immediately. "Last call was an hour ago, love. You’ll have to find your sleep somewhere else." "Have I really been gone that long that you’ve forgotten the key?" The voice was a low rumble, textured like gravel and whiskey, but thinner than she remembered. It carried an exhaustion that went beyond bone-deep. Rory froze. The rag dropped to the floor. She looked up, her bright blue eyes widening against the dim light. He stood in the doorway, framed by the foggy glass and the streetlights beyond. Silas Blackwood. He looked like a photograph left too long in the sun—faded at the edges, the colors less vibrant. He wore a trench coat that was heavy with rain, his hair—once just a distinguished dusting of grey—now a thorough silver-streaked auburn that hung limp around his face. The neatly trimmed beard was shaggy now, hiding the sharp angle of his jaw. He took a step forward, and his left leg dragged. The limp was no longer a "slight" thing; it was a pronounced hitch, a heavy anchor that dragged at his posture. "Silas?" The name felt foreign in her mouth, a word from a life she had boxed up and shelved three years ago. "In the flesh." He gripped the back of a chair, his knuckles white. On his right hand, the silver signet ring caught the light, a familiar anchor in a sea of changes. "Although, judging by the look on your face, I’m a bit more of it than you remember." He had vanished. One Tuesday, the bar was closed, a note in the window reading *Back in five*. Five days turned into five weeks, then months. No texts, no calls. The rent on the flat above stopped being collected, the bank account attached to the bar kept running on autopilot, managed by some silent partner in the shadows. Rory had kept the place running, not out of loyalty to the memory of a man who might be dead, but because she needed the floorboards under her feet after she fled Cardiff. She walked around the bar, her movements cautious, as if approaching a wounded animal. "You’ve been gone three years, Silas." "Has it been that long?" He grimaced, sinking into the chair. "Time gets... elastic. In my line of work." "Your line of work is retired," she shot back, her voice tighter than she intended. The cool-headed intelligence she prided herself on was fracturing under the sudden resurgence of old anger. "That was the deal. The Prague op went south, you took the knee injury, and you bought a pub. That was the story." "Stories have sequels, Rory. Usually bad ones." He gestured vaguely at the empty bar. "You look well. You’re running the place?" "I'm living here. I pay the utilities out of the till." She stopped a few feet away from him. She wanted to reach out, to touch his shoulder, to verify he was real and not a projection of her own loneliness. But the distance between them wasn't physical; it was the accumulation of a thousand days of unanswered questions. "Where were you?" He looked at the wall, studying the black-and-white photographs of old Soho that lined the room. He looked smaller in the chair, his six-foot-one frame collapsed inward. "Does it matter?" "It matters to the woman who spent three years wondering if your body was floating in the Thames." Silas let out a short, dry chuckle that turned into a cough. He rubbed his chest, a reflexive motion. "I was in Brussels. Then Ankara. Then a hole in the ground in Macedonia that doesn't appear on any map. I didn't mean to stay away this long. But coming back... coming back required a few loose ends to be tied." "Like a noose?" Rory asked, crossing her arms. She felt the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist itch—a phantom sensation from her childhood, a reminder that pain lingered long after the wound healed. Silas finally looked her in the eye. His hazel gaze was clouded, the sharp, observant edge dulled by things he had seen—or done. "You’ve changed. You’re harder. The scared girl who ran from Cardiff wouldn't talk to me like this." "That girl didn't have a landlord who abandoned her property and disappeared into the ether," she countered. She uncorked a bottle of scotch, pouring two fingers into a heavy tumbler. She didn't ask if he wanted it; she just slid it across the table toward him. Silas wrapped his fingers around the glass. The signet ring clinked against the crystal. He took a sip, closing his eyes as the burn hit his throat. "I heard about the ex. Evan. Before I left. I was going to have a word with him." "I handled it," Rory said simply. "I know. I checked the police reports. And the hospital records." He opened his eyes. "I taught you well." "You taught me how to pick locks and spot a tail, Silas. I learned to survive on my own." Silas swirled the amber liquid. "I wanted to protect you, Rory. That’s why I left when the call came. The people I was going after... they don't respect boundaries. If they knew I cared about anyone, cared about this place, they would have burned it down." "So you left me as the lightning rod?" Rory leaned against the edge of the table, looking down at him. "I’ve been living above the bar, Silas. If they wanted to find you, they would have come here." "They did." The words hung in the air, displacing the smell of stale beer with the cold scent of adrenaline. Rory went still. "When?" "Six months ago. Two men. Broke in downstairs." Silas nodded toward the bar. "They didn't find anything. The safe was empty. You were asleep upstairs." Rory remembered a night months ago. A storm, loud thunder that had woken her. She had come down to check the back door and found it unlocked. She’d assumed the wind had blown the latch. She had locked it and gone back to bed, chalking it up to an old building settling. "You didn't come back then," she said, her voice barely a whisper. "I couldn't. I was watching. I was across the street. I saw you check the lock. I saw you go back up." Silas’s voice cracked. "If I had come in, if I had made contact, they would have come back. And they wouldn't have just searched the next time. I had to lead them away. I had to make them chase me." The anger in Rory’s chest began to cool, replaced by a heavy, hollow ache. She looked at the limp in his leg, the way he favored his right side, the deep lines etched around his mouth. He hadn't just run away. He had drawn the fire. He had spent three years in the wilderness to keep the roof over her head safe. "You could have told me," she said, though she knew the answer. "No. If you knew, you would have been worried. If you were worried, you would have made mistakes. You were safer thinking I was just a flake who skipped out on rent." He finished the scotch in one swallow and set the glass down hard. "I'm not the man who owned this bar, Rory. I'm not the mentor. I'm just the thing that goes bump in the night now." He moved to stand up, wincing as he put weight on his left knee. Rory reached out, her hand covering his on the table. Her fingers were warm, his were cold and clammy. "Sit down." "Rory—" "Sit down, Silas." She walked to the other side of the table and sat in the chair opposite him. For the first time in years, they were on equal footing. No teacher, no student. Just two people sitting in the dark. "You're right," she said, looking at the map of the world framed on the wall behind him, a map that was outdated, showing borders that no longer existed. "The girl from Cardiff is gone. But she didn't just turn into stone. I know how to take care of myself now. I know how to handle trouble." Silas looked at her, really looked at her, perhaps for the first time since he walked in. He saw the set of her shoulders, the directness of her gaze. She wasn't the delivery girl he remembered. She was the woman who had kept his sanctuary safe while he burned his own life down to keep the embers away from her. "Whatever you're running from," Rory said, "or whatever is running from you... you can't sleep on the street. And you can't keep running forever." "I don't sleep much anymore." "Neither do I." She stood up and walked behind the bar, grabbing a bottle of water and a key. She tossed the key onto the table in front of him. It was the spare key to the upstairs flat. The one she had made when she thought she might lose the original. Silas stared at the brass key. "I can't stay. The longer I'm here, the more the—" "The more the what?" She cut him off, her voice hardening. "The more the danger follows? I told you, I’m not that scared girl. Besides, look at the place. It’s a dump. Who would look for a retired spook in a dump like this?" A faint, genuine smile touched Silas’s lips. It was a ghost of the man he used to be, but it was there. "It is a dump. I really need to redo the floors." "You’re not allowed to do the floors," Rory said. "You’re a guest. You’re just... you’re just a friend who stayed away too long." Silas picked up the key, the metal warm from where she had held it. He rubbed his thumb over the ridged teeth. "Three years is a long time." "It’s a lifetime," she agreed. "But it’s just Tuesday night here." The neon sign outside buzzed, a low, electric hum that vibrated through the floorboards. Outside, the rain continued to fall, washing the city, but inside, the gap was finally closing. Silas didn't stand up immediately. He stayed in the chair, his hand resting on the key, and for the first time in a long time, he didn't feel the need to look over his shoulder.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
33.3333% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Rory said simply [simply]"
1"she said, her voice barely a whisper [barely]"
2"she said, looking at the map of the world framed on the wall behind him, a map that was outdated, showing borders that no longer existed [no longer]"
84.1186% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1889
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"really"
count3
highlights
0"really"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
84.1186% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1889
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"sanctuary"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"sanctuary"
1"weight"
2"etched"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences102
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences102
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences134
matches
0"gone that long"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean33.45
std21.57
cv0.645
sampleLengths
054
167
218
320
412
524
620
776
831
922
1049
1191
1220
1319
1454
1521
1662
1727
183
1918
2060
2134
2240
2346
2445
256
2619
2719
2846
2938
302
3118
324
3325
3452
3512
3662
3762
3812
3969
4014
4121
421
4341
4456
4560
4624
475
4852
4916
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences102
matches
0"was closed"
1"being collected"
2"was clouded"
3"was outdated"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs213
matches
0"wasn’t cleaning"
1"was fracturing"
88.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1237
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"thorough silver-streaked auburn"
1"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.030719482619240096
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.008084074373484237
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences134
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences134
mean13.98
std8.6
cv0.615
sampleLengths
028
126
211
317
415
516
68
718
85
915
1012
1116
128
132
146
1512
1614
172
1818
1928
2014
2110
2221
2322
2413
2519
2617
273
2815
298
304
3128
3233
3314
346
3511
368
3715
3816
3923
4014
417
4219
4322
4418
453
4616
4711
483
4918
42.2886% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.3208955223880597
totalSentences134
uniqueOpeners43
25.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"she shot back, her voice tighter than she intended (shoot back, intend)"
1"she countered (counter)"
2"Rory said simply (say simply)"
3"she said, though she knew the answer (say, know)"
4"she said, looking at the map of the world framed on the wall behind him, a map that was outdated, showing borders that no longer existed (say, look frame outdate, show no longer exist)"
5"she agreed (agree)"
85.6976%