Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMR6EJ5T40Z79F01GDFZWR9

Run Details

Duration:
1m 4s
Cost:
$0.001645
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The neon sign above the entrance hummed with a frequency just below the threshold of hearing, a sickly, distinct green pulse that promised safety and secrets in equal measure. The bell above the door chimed, a sharp, clarion ring that cut through the low, rumbling murmur of The Raven’s Nest. Aurora Carter, wearing a nondescript leather jacket and carrying the remnants of a rainy Tuesday, stepped inside, shaking the damp from her umbrella before stowing it in the cubby by the door. She was tired. The delivery run to the Golden Empress had been lighter than usual, and the walk back across Soho had left her ankle throbbing in a dull, rhythmic protest. She had intended to grab a bottle of wine and head straight up to her flat, to bury herself in a legal textbook and ignore the world for the evening. Instead, her feet, seemingly of their own volition, turned toward the bar. The Raven’s Nest was a maze of low lighting and dark wood. The walls were a chaotic collage of vintage maps of the city, peeling photographs of people she didn't know, and faded posters from the eighties. It smelled of stale beer, floor wax, and the faint, metallic tang of secrets kept too long. Rory slid onto a stool at the end of the counter, closest to the exit, her movements efficient and practiced. "Whiskey," she said to the bartender, a tall man with a patience that rivaled stone. "Single malt. No ice." "Rough night?" The bartender didn't look up from wiping a glass. "Just a delivery," Rory said, forcing a lightness she didn't feel. "Late shift." The order came swiftly. She took a sip, letting the burn settle in her chest, grounding her against the strange familiarity of the room. This was Silas’s domain. The bar above her flat, the sanctuary she occupied but rarely partook in. She was Rory in the flat, and Rory on the streets, but in the shadow of Silas Blackwood, the owner of this place, she felt the urge to fragment further. She scanned the room. It was half-full, a mix of soot-stained artists and suits looking for a quiet corner. There were two men in the back booth, heads together, hands moving rapidly over a tablet. Two women in the corner, nursing the remains of their drinks and discussing a breakup. Rory watched them with detachment, analyzing body language like a textbook case study, until her gaze snagged on something in the corner booth opposite the window. It was Silas. He hadn't aged gracefully in the way wine ages; he had aged like a storm that had finally lost its direction. The silver-streaked auburn hair that once framed a sharp, youthful jawline was now thinning, pushed back to reveal a scalp that looked pale and vulnerable against the dark mahogany of the booth. His beard was neatly trimmed, a guardrail against the softening of his features, but the lines around his eyes were deep grooves etched by decades of micro-expressions he hadn’t had to hide. Most striking was the limp. It was subtle—a hitch in his left step—but it was there, a constant reminder of the Prague operation he never quite recovered from. As he turned, the streetlamp from the window caught the telltale glint of silver on his right hand. The signet ring. Rory felt a tightening in her chest, a sudden, suffocating pressure that had nothing to do with the alcohol. She had thought, foolishly, that time worked like a eraser. She had thought that by cutting herself off from her past, she had made herself a new person. She stared at him, paralyzed. She was Rory the delivery driver. She was Rory the student, and Rory the survivor. She wasn't "Laila," wasn't "Malphora." She certainly wasn't the girl he had looked after when her father had dragged her to that boarding school in Wales, or the girl he had found hiding in the corner of his bar ten years ago, curled around her knees and shaking with the aftermath of the man who called himself her future. But Silas was not just looking. He was seeing. He set down the glass of amber liquid he had been nursing and turned his head. His hazel eyes, weathered and intelligent, locked onto hers. There was no shock there. No surprise. Just a deep, weary acknowledgment. The bar seemed to shrink, the noise of the patrons fading into a dull buzz in her ears. Rory stood up. Her legs felt heavy, uncooperative. "Moving?" Silas asked. His voice was lower than she remembered, a smooth baritone that had deepened with gravel. "I'm just getting a refill," she lied, turning to face him. She smoothed the front of her leather jacket, a nervous tic she thought she had lost years ago. "You haven't been in here in months," Silas said. He didn't invite her to sit. He didn't gesture to the empty seat across from him. He simply watched her, his posture relaxed but his alertness sharp, like a predator that knew exactly where the boundaries were. "That's a long time for a regular," she countered, her voice steadying as her adrenaline spiked. "And a long time to hear you've been working for a Chinese takeout place," Silas said dryly. "Yu-Fei is a good man, Aurora. A loyal man. I warned you about him once. I suppose you never listen to old advice." The use of her full name stripped the "cool-headed" mask right off her face. She stood there, hands gripping the edge of the counter, her fingernails digging into the wood. The small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist throbbed, a ghost of the childhood accident that had been the first fissure in the facade she had built around herself. "I'm just trying to get by, Silas," she whispered. "You wouldn't understand." "Wouldn't I?" He shifted, the leather of the booth creaking in the silence between them. The limp in his leg gave a tiny, spasmodic twinge, mirroring the pain in her chest. "I spent years in Prague looking for people who were just trying to get by, and I spent even longer in London cleaning up the messes they made when they failed. 'Just trying to get by' is a luxury, Rory. Most of us are just trying to survive what comes next." A heavy silence stretched between them, laden with the ghosts of the years they had skipped. Rory looked at him, really looked at him. He looked tired. He looked smaller, yet somehow more formidable. He was no longer the spymaster she had imagined him to be in her youth; he was just a man who had lost people and missions and parts of himself. And seeing that exposed him in a way that felt almost violent. "I changed," she said, a desperate, jagged admission. "I had to. Evan—he found me. When I came to you, I thought you could fix it. But you just... you sent me away to Eva. I needed to be someone else. Someone who couldn't be hurt." Silas let out a short, incredulous bark of a laugh. He raised his right hand, the one with the signet ring, and ran a thumb over the cold metal. "You think hiding changes the wound? You think changing your name, changing your face, changes who you are?" "I didn't have a choice." "You always do," Silas said softly. The severity of his tone didn't match the kindness in his eyes. He slid a napkin across the scarred wood toward her. "The vulnerability isn't in the past, Rory. It's in the refusal to see it. You're drinking alone in a bar that knows your secrets, and you're pretending I don't know them too." She looked down at the napkin. She knew where this was going. The secret back room, the one accessible only through the shifting bookshelf in the corner where the bar staff kept their stationery. She knew that room. She had been in it once, years ago, when she was too broken to be on the street. He had held her hand there, no words spoken. "You know everything," she said, the accusation fading into resignation. "I know the trajectory of your life better than you do, darling," Silas said. "I watched you leave. I watched you build a wall so high you couldn't see the sky. And now you're standing in front of it, wondering if it's enough." Rory took a breath, the air in the room suddenly feeling thin. She looked at the bottle in her hand—the cheap Scottish whiskey she drank like water—and then at the man who had raised her, technically speaking, when she needed it most. "The Flat," she said, the name of her residence forming a bridge between the Rory she was and the Rory he knew. "The Flat is just a piece of roof over your head," Silas replied, his gaze unwavering. "I have a bottle of something much better in the back. The bookshelf opens in three seconds if you push the third volume of the *History of England*. It’s been a while since you’ve visited the archives." Rory closed her eyes for a moment. She thought of the flat above, the silence, the isolation. She thought of the names she used—Laila, Malphora, Carter—and how they had failed to obscure the truth. "I think," she said, opening her eyes and meeting his gaze, "I could use that bottle." Silas offered a ghost of a smile, a crinkle at the corners of his eyes that made him look years younger. "Just don't get drunk on the way there. The stairs are steep." Rory turned away from the counter, her heart hammering against her ribs. She walked to the back of the room, following the cues he had given her without needing a second thought. As she pushed the third volume of the history book, the bookcase swung inward, revealing the dimly lit, wood-paneled sanctum that lay behind it. It smelled of leather and polish, a sanctuary of old world secrets. She stepped into the room, taking a deep breath of the air that was shared by two lives that had run parallel for a decade without touching. She wasn't "Laila" anymore. She wasn't fully "Rory" either. She was something in between—a survivor carrying the weight of time, standing in the dark with a man who had decided to let the light in.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
70.8333% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"She wasn't wasn't She certainly wasn't the girl he had looked after when her father had dragged her to that boarding school in Wales, or the girl he had found hiding in the corner of his bar ten years ago, curled around her knees and shaking with the aftermath of the man who called himself her future. [certainly around]"
1"Silas said dryly [dryly]"
2"Silas said softly [softly]"
82.8767% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1752
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"suddenly"
2"really"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.3379% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1752
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"sanctuary"
count2
1
word"facade"
count1
2
word"throbbed"
count1
3
word"glint"
count1
4
word"unwavering"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"sanctuary"
1"facade"
2"throbbed"
3"glint"
4"unwavering"
5"weight"
6"etched"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences102
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences102
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
1"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences114
matches
0"knew that room"
1"use that bottle"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean43.43
std25.05
cv0.577
sampleLengths
082
173
274
319
411
513
671
776
83
985
1049
1147
1279
139
1437
1526
1618
1729
1846
1916
2040
2159
2212
2382
2476
2545
2647
275
2860
2965
3010
3143
3242
3322
3453
3534
3616
3733
3868
3962
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences102
matches
0"was shared"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs230
matches
0"was seeing"
1"was going"
88.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1402
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"sickly, distinct green pulse"
1"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount47
adverbRatio0.033523537803138374
lyAdverbCount20
lyAdverbRatio0.014265335235378032
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences114
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences114
mean15.24
std10.35
cv0.679
sampleLengths
029
121
232
33
428
530
612
712
825
917
1020
1115
124
1311
1411
152
164
1720
184
1913
2030
214
2215
2316
2415
2526
263
2721
2832
2932
305
3123
3218
333
3419
3510
3618
375
386
399
4059
416
423
4316
449
455
462
475
4818
493
30.7018% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats22
diversityRatio0.2631578947368421
totalSentences114
uniqueOpeners30
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount12
fancyTags
0"she said to the bartender, a tall man with a patience that rivaled stone (say rivaled)"
1"Rory said, forcing a lightness she didn't feel (say, force does not feel)"
2"She wasn't wasn't She certainly wasn't the girl he had looked after when her father had dragged her to that boarding school in Wales, or the girl he had found hiding in the corner of his bar ten years ago, curled around her knees and shaking with the aftermath of the man who called himself her future. (does not be not does certainly be not look after drag find hiding curl around shake call)"
3"she lied, turning to face him (lie, turn face)"
4"she countered, her voice steadying as her adrenaline spiked (counter, steady spike)"
5"Silas said dryly (say dryly)"
6"she whispered (whisper)"
7"Silas said softly (say softly)"
8"she said, the accusation fading into resignation (say, fade)"
9"she said, the name of her residence forming a bridge between the Rory she was and the Rory he knew (say, form be know)"
10"Silas replied, his gaze unwavering (reply, unwaver)"
11"she said, opening her eyes and meeting his gaze (say, open meet)"
83.9265%