Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMR6EV8YJB402P11MDS08HW

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Duration:
1m 24s
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$0.004113
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Fae Grove lay quiet under the weight of a pale moon, as if it hadn’t decided whether night really existed here at all. Auroras’ breath fogged in pale ribbons, curling through the air and snagging on the copper scent of damp earth. She stood a cautious distance from the boundary—an ancient oak standing stones arrangement that looked less like markers and more like a mouth half-formed, waiting to swallow the unwary. The grove itself felt stitched together from whispers and memory, a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm where the ordinary laws loosened their belts and pretended to be helpful. Rory—if one asked her whom she was, she would answer with a measured shrug and a name that tasted like rain—took a measured step forward. She wore her street clothes as though they could offer her any real shield. A delivery jacket hung unused over her shoulders, the sleeves damp with the night air and a stubborn odor of fried garlic from the day’s last stop. She wore the Heartstone Pendant on a silver chain against her chest, the crimson gemstone catching the moonlight in dull, patient pulses. It was roughly the size of a thumbnail, and it felt almost warm now, as if it remembered a different room with a different temperature. She pulled her scarf tighter, though the night gave nothing away to warmth or cold. The pendant’s glow—a faint inner glow—hinted at life inside the stone, a heartbeat of some old place she hadn’t learned to name yet. The unknown benefactor who’d pressed it into her palm, during a moment she had once believed to be ordinary, had never spoken aloud what this artifact would demand of her. Only the warm pulse, and the reminder that the stone thrummed when a Hel portal drew near, remained. Time here behaved like a stubborn rumor—true in whispers, false in practice. The time behavior of The Fae Grove, as the locals would warn if they ever spoke aloud, was that time moved differently—an hour inside could be minutes or days outside. Rory had learned to count rather than to wait, to measure a breath or a step as though they were coins tossed into a stagnant swimming pool that would someday spill into a different world. The air carried a scent of wet bark and wildflowers that bloomed year-round—an absurd luxury for a night that looked so ordinary, as if the world had pressed pause just long enough to pretend nothing lived here but moonlight and trees. In the undergrowth, something thin and metallic rasped against pine needles—some forgotten animal or maybe the sense of one. She hadn’t come here for what most people would consider a night visit. She’d come for a reason that felt more like a confession than a plan. The pendant’s warmth—an almost human warmth, which made her nerves claim their own quiet chorus—had tugged her here, to the Grove’s edge, to the boundary where the stones met the compost of time and memory and something else, something with a name she hadn’t learned to pronounce, and perhaps never would. There was always a sound that shouldn’t be there when a person walked into the Grove—at least, not the sound of a place. Tonight, it was a clockwork creak that seemed to come from nowhere and everywhere all at once. It sounded like a door far away, a door that had never existed in Cardiff or London or anywhere Rory had ever visited in the waking hours of her life, but felt almost sure was here, just beyond the reach of the trees. She paused and felt the ground breathe under her boots. The earth was a quiet thing here, but quiet didn’t mean still; it meant prepared, patient, certain of its ability to catch a careless step and turn it into something else entirely. The grove had a memory for those who paid attention, which Rory had learned to do with a kind of stubborn tenderness that bordered on reverence. The Standing Stones rose to her left and right like a chorus of blunt commandments, each one heavy with the weathering of centuries. The ancient oak that marked the boundary stood taller than any man’s despair of time. Its roots dug into dark soil that smelled faintly of iron, the kind of scent that unsettled the teeth if you inhaled it too long. Where the stones met, the air became thick, as though fabric had been draped across space, making a seam where the two worlds pressed together and refused to let go. She set the heels of her boots into a pause that looked like hesitation but was probably calculation. The Heartstone Pendant hummed against her sternum, a little tremor that wasn’t audible to the ear but could be felt in the way her ribs rose and fell, the breath catching for the barest of moments before resuming its even cadence. The pendant’s glow wavered, a flicker of crimson in the reflection of a puddle not far from the boundary’s shadow, and Rory thought of the unknown benefactor in the same breath she thought of the day she’d left Evan behind: both people who handed her something with a trust she didn’t feel she deserved. A bird broke the night with a note that was almost a knife-edge of sound, and Rory almost smiled at the irony that even a simple bird could slice the silence as cleanly as a blade. It wasn’t an expected violence, not the kind that showed up in the daylight; it was the violence of expectation, of the mind trying to slip through the door of a place that preferred to exist in a different hour. “Rory,” she whispered, testing the name on her own lips as if it might define her anew. The moniker carried a different meaning in the mouth of someone who’d never heard her specified by a dozen nicknames—Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora—each a thread in a larger tapestry she kept folded away for safekeeping. Her left wrist bore a crescent scar—a small crescent-shaped mark earned years ago in a childhood accident when fate had decided to teach her something about the shape of danger. She pressed her fingers to it now as if to confirm it still belonged to her and not to the Grove that pressed in from the edges of the world with its patient, hungry quiet. Her gaze moved along the boundary line, along the gnarled roots and the way the moss clung to stone in a damp, forgiving way. The grove preferred to take its visitors slowly, as if the slow pace of the place would coax them into forgetting how quickly a life could unravel when one heavy truth shifted into the light. The time here didn’t necessarily stall; it simply rearranged. Her breath slowed, then found its pace again, as though the night itself wanted to see what the next breath would do. She came here for something she hadn’t spoken to anyone about in days—something she hadn’t admitted to Eva, or to herself in a long time. She came to see if the Hel portal, or a door to that half-known place, could be found again by following the glow of a red stone and the warmth in her chest. She came to verify the story she had been told in whispers: that a hel portal, something ancient and dangerous, might be coaxed open again by a person who carried the right warmth within and a heart stubborn enough to believe in it. And so she walked, not toward the inner heart of the grove but toward the boundary itself, where the stones seemed to breathe more heavily, and the air grew heavier with a metallic tang. The wildflowers continued to bloom around her, white and yellow and a sickly violet in the wrong light, their soft petals brushing against her ankles as if to remind her that nothing here was purely delicate, nothing here safe to touch. Then came the sound she had not expected: a sound so close to a whisper that it might have been a branch rubbing against another branch or the edge of a dress brushing a stone. It could have been anything—a trick of wind, a trick of memory, a trick of the heart that insisted she wasn’t alone. She did not jump; she did not retreat. She moved with the patient caution of someone who had learned to value every fraction of a second, because in a place like this, a fraction of a second could be a lifetime. “Hello,” she said softly, the word hanging on the air as though it were a foreign object someone had dropped on the ground. She spoke to no one in particular, to the Grove itself perhaps, or to the mysterious benefactor who had given her the pendant and left her with more questions than receipts to prove anything. Her voice bounced back to her in an echo that wasn’t exactly hers, a muted version of her own timbre that told her she stood within something old enough to remember her voice as a child would remember a bedtime story. There was no response that could be deciphered by a rational mind. The Grove, with its time-bending insistence, played with cause and effect as gently as a mother might play with a curious child who asked too many questions. Rory’s steps slowed further as her breath steadied. The pendant’s glow intensified in the corner of her vision, a small, steady flame in the heart of the crimson stone. The warmth on her chest grew to a stable ache—comforting, then alarming. She studied the boundary where the stones met the ground and the air thickened with something not quite air, something elastic that bent the scent of the wildflowers in a way that suggested memory. It was here that the world thinned, and if she looked too closely, she could see the faint impression of a door—an impossibility by the clock-wound rules of London, but a truth here, on the edge of the Grove. That was when the edge of vision visited her again: a shape, a shadow, a silhouette too neat and too deliberate to be a trick of the light. It did not move like a deer or a fox; it moved like a dancer who had learned to hover slightly above the ground, to pretend gravity wasn’t quite necessary. The figure stood at the far edge of her line of sight, where the ferns curled into themselves and the air carried a metallic tinge. It wasn’t a full person—more a silhouette shaped by a memory of a person. It wore a cloak that looked too still, too precise in the way the fabric lay against itself. It did not breathe. Rory’s breath grew shallow, then even again. She reminded herself of the first rule of being a courier in a city that sometimes forgot what quiet was: trust the body’s instinct but do not surrender to fear. Fear was a thief, and she wasn’t going to hand it over tonight. She took a slower step forward, as if stepping into a doorway she wasn’t sure would hold. The Heartstone Pendant pulsed with warmth against her sternum, and she squeezed her chest to still it, to remind herself that the warmth at least was real. If there was a Hel portal here, the pendant would tell her with its own quiet language, a language more honest than any word a human tongue could summon. She thought of Eva, the friend who had begged her to leave the old life behind and start anew in London, a city of sirens and relentless rain. She had come here after Eva’s last message—two words, a whisper through a phone that never quite sounded awake: Run. Rory hadn’t run; she had walked, drawn to the Grove by a thread of memory and a dare from a benefactor whose name she didn’t know how to pronounce but who had given her a tool with a stubborn will to endure. The strange noise—a soft, sliding rasp that had nothing to do with wind or wood—glided along the edge of Rory’s hearing. She turned her head a fraction, enough to see movement at the corner of her vision. The movement dissolved into the air again, as if someone had been there and decided not to be. Her eyes sought the place where it had appeared, but the Grove offered nothing obvious: only a glistening dew on the grass, the occasional luminous motes of some creature’s passing, and the way the branches moved in a way that suggested someone or something was walking between them when there was no one to be seen. There was another sound—a clock-like tick, quiet but insistent. It did not come from any clock Rory had heard in a city apartment, nor from any natural instrument in this wooded world. It sounded as if the Grove itself were counting down with infinite patience, ticking away the time in a rhythm known only to itself and the shadows that learned to listen. The pendant’s warmth grew; its crimson glow brightened a notch, then settled again. The air around her thickened with a sweetness that was almost cloying—the scent of crushed petals and cinnamon, the way a memory smells when it’s far too loaded with emotion. The kind of scent that makes a person pause and reconsider every choice, even the simple one to blink. Rory took stock, the way a student would inventory a difficult exam: what was asked, what was possible, what would be fatal to pretend not to know. The boundary stones hummed with a sub-audible vibration, a distance-walking music that made her nerves settle just enough to hear the more delicate sounds—the soft, deliberate steps of something that wasn’t human, the whisper of cloaks moving through air that did not want to be still. And then she heard someone sigh, or perhaps it was the grove sighing for her. It was a precise sigh, not weary like a tired person, but a sigh that meant someone had weighed the cost of every breath and found it still worth the risk. It came from somewhere just beyond the edge of her vision, a place where the ferns curved inward in a way that suggested an eye opening, a way of seeing that wasn’t merely sight, but something older and more methodical. “I don’t know what you hope to find here,” she whispered into the night, as if she were speaking to Eva who had once whispered a warning into her ear about the kind of danger a person could never fully prepare for. But the Grove did not respond with words; it offered a sensation, a thinning of the world’s skin, a glimpse into a possibility that wasn’t quite real. The Heartstone Pendant seemed to respond with a faint, orderly throb. It reminded her that the stone was here for a purpose she hadn’t yet uncovered, something more serious than curiosity. The pulse was not the pulse of a friend or a lover; it was a signal, a beacon, a reminder that there were thresholds in this world that a person could not cross without something being drawn out of them, something they could not pretend to have left behind in a past life. She moved a little closer to the boundary, the sense that she was trespassing on something that did not grant become-ness to visitors rising in her chest. The boundary’s air tasted cool and metallic, the way a winter street tastes after you’ve swallowed the cold with a mouthful of hot tea. The trees along the boundary appeared to lean toward her as if listening, and their leaves whispered in a language she could not quite decipher, a language that felt like the memory of a dream you can almost recall when you wake but never quite can. The silhouette reappeared, a movement less than a shadow and more of a decision made by someone who knew the grove intimately enough to use it as a doorway. It did not step fully into the light, merely hovered at the edge where the light and dark met in the same way a rumor might hover between two people who once shared a truth but have now learned to pretend it never existed. Rory’s breath caught, but she did not flinch. She steadied her gaze, held it on that nearly-visible form as if it were a riddle she could solve if she only looked long enough. “Who are you?” she asked, not aloud so the wind might steal her voice and carry it away, but in the way one asks a memory that refuses to stay put and must be coaxed into recognition. The figure did not answer with words. Instead, a thread of something like a scent—floral and copper—drifted toward her, curling around the pendant and starting a quiet, almost ceremonial hum from the stone. The warmth surged a fraction, a hint of a passport stamped and the instruction to proceed rather than retreat. Rory’s gaze shifted to the path beyond the boundary where the wildflowers grew in their stubborn detachment from ordinary clocks. The grove’s flora, a stubbornly perpetual bloom, pressed close around her in a soft, seeping mass that seemed almost to push into her boots and coat. She realized with a small, inward ache that the place wanted to see what she would answer with, not what she would say aloud. There was a small, almost imperceptible tremor in the earth, a heartbeat-like vibration that traveled up the soles of her shoes and into her calves. The tremor did not feel violent; it felt instructive, as if the ground were offering a lesson in the consequences of stepping across the threshold the boundary had formed long before any human whim existed. The grove did not hurry; it only observed, like a patient judge listening to a child’s plea. The silhouette drifted closer, its presence registering in Rory’s peripheral vision as a kind of rumor made form. It wore the color of shadow and the scent of rain-slick stone. Rory watched the edges of its clothing—the way it moved and settled, the way the air displaced at each careful step. It seemed to have learned the grove’s ways, to know where to pause, where to vanish behind a fern as if the plant themselves were actually doors. For a moment, Rory forgot the world outside the Grove—the city’s sirens, the late-night hum of the traffic on Westminster Bridge, the restaurant’s kitchen doors squealing as a new order came in. Here, outside of time, those noises dissolved into something that could be ignored without truly being erased. The Heartstone Pendant glowed brighter in response to the figure’s nearness, a warning or perhaps a greeting inscribed in a language she could not translate but felt in her bones as surely as her own heartbeat. “Show me,” she found herself whispering, the words leaving her mouth with a gentleness that surprised herself. “Show me the doorway you protect and I’ll walk through with caution or not at all, but if you intend harm, I’ll turn away and pretend not to hear you.” The silhouette hesitated, then—if a silhouette can hesitate—relaxed and allowed a broader arc to emerge, as if it had been listening to something too quiet for ordinary ears and decided to reveal its presence by offering a single, careful step forward. It stopped where Rory could see its face, if it could be described as such; the form around the face remained a suggestion rather than a feature. It was a being that did not require a mouth to speak, for its thoughts pressed into the air in a way that felt almost tactile, a pressure that made Rory quiver with the sense of being weighed and found sufficient. The figure did not tell her to leave. It did not tell her to stay. It simply watched, and in that watching Rory learned something else—an understanding that the Grove did not grant favors freely, nor did it discriminate in the way a human would fear. It offered an opportunity, one wrapped in time’s peculiar curvature and the Heartstone’s pulse. The air thickened a little more, and Rory realized that she had moved closer to the boundary than she intended, closer than she had ever moved in a night that demanded more than breath and steps. The stones vibrated, just slightly, in the same rhythm as the pendant’s throbbing. It was almost as if the boundary itself was listening to the pendant’s warmth and calculating what to do next. She thought of the unknown benefactor again, of the man or woman who had pressed the pendant into her hand, who had entrusted her with a piece of a larger puzzle she did not yet understand. The thought offered a kind of stubborn courage, the kind that came from someone who had learned to survive through making quick, precise decisions and then living with the consequences. Her head cleared, and the practical part of her—her pre-law training, her capacity for quick out-of-the-box thinking—took lead. If a doorway existed here, it would be found by listening to the pendant and watching for the signs the Grove offered to those who refused to look away. The signs were small: an extra glisten in a patch of moss, a slightly altered arrangement of the wildflowers in a circle that hadn’t been there a moment before, a soft chime in the air that wasn’t wind, or the way the air around a particular stone felt warmer, almost honeyed. The silhouette drifted again, a hundred tiny fragments of something that might be a presence or might be the Grove merely rehearsing for some longer ritual it kept hidden from human sight. Rory kept her gaze fixed on it and, more importantly, kept her breath steady. The pendant’s pulse intensified as if the stone recognized an approaching threshold and wished to warn her or prepare her or both at once. Then she noticed a shift in the ground beneath her boots—a mere fraction of a step that could have been wind or earth or the careful drag of a creature’s toe. It was enough to tell her she could not pretend time here was linear, not enough to push her into panic. “Why here?” she breathed, addressing the Grove the way a visitor speaks to a wary host, with a voice that’s part question and part invitation. She could feel the weight of her own life pressing on the edges of the moment—scores to settle, debts to acknowledge, choices she had made that now seemed less certain than her instinct. Yet there was something undeniably clean in the decision to stay, to listen, to not run. The silhouette—if indeed it was a silhouette and not simply an impression left by the Grove’s own memory of a person who had stood here long ago—leaned in as though to listen to her. The whisper that followed was not a voice but a collection of tiny, intimate sounds: the creak of a branch shifting in a lazy breeze, the soft rustle of fern fronds, the faint, almost inaudible sigh of the stones themselves when a door in the air edged open and tried to catch its breath. Rory’s eyes tracked the faint shimmer that sometimes slept at the corner of her vision—the way the light here refused to be completely real, the way colors blurred into one another until you could no longer tell where one shade ended and the next began. It was not fear that lent her a tremor in her hands but a stubborn recognition of the weight of this moment: a moment that could be remembered as a mistake or as a turning point, depending on what she chose to do next. She pressed a palm to the pendant again, found its warmth, and drew from it a quiet, stubborn resolve: if a doorway was here, she would locate it and approach it with all the courage she could muster. If the Grove offered a test, she would meet it with the same careful logic she’d applied to every problem she’d solved since she’d learned to think on her feet and trust her own sharp instincts. And then the air did something odd, something that did not occur in London’s night hours. The door the boundary held—if it was a door at all—seemed to tilt, ever so slightly, like a hinge you’d forgotten existed. A thread of glimmering light—thin as a hair but bright as a warning—pushed outward from the space beyond the boundary, curling toward Rory as though inviting her to step inside. The Heartstone Pendant warmed again, so intensely that for a moment she feared it might burn her shirt, and she found herself compelled to look into the space that lay beyond the stones—space that did not resemble anything outwardly familiar but rather a memory of a forest that never existed in the human world, a forest of copper trees and glass leaves, a place where the night was always deeper and the stars burned with a different cadence. Rory did not take a step toward the door. She did not even lean closer. She remained where she was, a student again, noting every sensation—the heat on her chest, the smell of rain on moss, the sound of a single, far-off heartbeat in the earth. The silhouette remained at the edge of her sight, not quite seen, not quite absent, a rumor she could not quite dismiss. The grove’s quiet pressed in again, and with it came something else: a slow, growing certainty that the wrongness she’d felt from the moment she’d set foot in this place was not a mere trick of nerves or the mind’s fear of the unknown. It was a sign of something real and dangerous moving closer, a planned intrusion wearing the cloak of an old ritual. The sense was not of malice at first glance, but of order being restored to a world that had forgotten it once, or perhaps a world trying to remember what it means to be dangerous in a way that a human brain can only begin to understand. A single, small sound cut through the heavy air—the soft chime of something perfectly tuned and not made by metal or glass. It did not come from here; it came through the boundary, as if someone or something were testing the possibility of crossing. The sound was neither weapon nor warning; it was a notification, a reminder that the Grove was not merely an obstacle to be overcome but a corridor to be traversed, and not by every visitor. Rory felt the weight of the pendant in her hand, the chain cool against her fingers where the metal met the skin of her palm. She could feel something else, too: a line of thought that did not belong to her or the person who’d given her the pendant and walked away with a promise that she hadn’t asked for. The thought was a map, though not a map of places she’d been or could travel to; it was a map of choices, of consequences, of how a person could slip from one world to another and find that the old life had not truly released them from its debts. She closed her eyes for a heartbeat, then opened them again with a deliberate control she had learned on the London streets: stay calm, observe, measure. When she looked again toward the boundary, the silhouette had almost vanished, as if the grove allowed it to vanish when it served its purpose. But the boundary’s air still hummed with that same internal music, and the pendant’s red glow glowed a touch more—an almost shy invitation to take the risk that would lead to an answer she could not yet name. “Tell me what I am here to do,” she spoke aloud this time, but not loud enough to break the grove’s intimate hush. The question felt wrong to voice, as if she were asking the grove to reveal something she was not yet prepared to learn. Yet there was a stark, almost imperative honesty in the act of asking—the same honesty that had driven her to leave Cardiff, the honesty that had kept her from turning away when it would have been the easier path to take. For a handful of breaths, nothing happened except for the slow breath of the night and the soft, steady pulse of the pendant. Then, as if finally responding to the question in the language of wind and shadow, the boundary gave a subtle shudder—so faint that it might have been the grove’s way of blinking—and the air between the two worlds thinned, as if something long-held had begun to loosen its grip. Rory’s heart leaned forward in her chest, and she realized that she was not merely following a path into a doorway but stepping onto a thread that could unravel the story of who she had become. She could feel the weight of past choices pressing down on her—decisions not to return to the barrister’s world she’d briefly glimpsed, not to let the old life swallow her whole. And she could feel the pull of something larger, something older, something that looked back through time with the patient eyes of the grove’s centuries. She realized that she could claim a moment here and now—the moment in which the grove offered her a truth she hadn’t allowed herself to admit in years. She could step through, or she could stay and watch what the grove chose to reveal to the patient listener. The Heartstone Pendant’s warmth intensified as though answering a question with a smile, a private, sunless smile that did not reveal its secrets but suggested they were not far. Rory did not move toward the doorway. She did not retreat either. She stood at the edge of the boundary, feeling the heat lighten and then surge again, listening to the grove’s breath and her own. The silhouette’s form reappeared, not as a shape of threat but as a presence, a witness. It did not speak, but the air between them filled with a sense of promise and warning in equal measure. The promise was that something could be learned, a door could be opened, a truth revealed. The warning was that truths carried consequences, and some consequences were not meant to be faced by someone still learning how to bear them. In that moment, Rory decided that she would not force the grove to reveal its answers. She would not push the door open with her own hands and set loose something she could not control. She would wait, and she would watch, and if the grove offered her a way through without forcing her to break, she would take it. If not, she would leave the boundary and return to whatever ordinary life she could find that night—the life of safe distances, the life of “delivery by day, secrets by night.” That would have to be enough for now, she told herself, repeating the thought like a litany more to keep fear from closing in than to promise anything. The grove gave a last, patient sigh—an almost affectionate murmur, as if telling her that it would be here when she was ready, and that patience was the only thing between her and the danger she sought to understand. The wildflowers around her rustled with a soft, approving whisper, the air clearing just a fraction as if the space could breathe again after a long pause. Her eyes found the silhouette again, a quiet decision in its stillness. It offered nothing but the feeling that a door remained available, if she chose to approach with calm certainty rather than with the eagerness of someone who must have answers tonight, as if the night itself would refuse to end until the questions had been laid bare. She lifted her chin in the way she had learned to do when a case demanded patience more than bravado. The pendant’s pulse steadied, and the boundary’s humming settled into a steady, almost apologetic hiss that reminded her of the sea’s distant edge, where waves are never truly gone, only out of reach for a moment. She took a slow, careful step back, then another, and then, with a final, measured breath, she allowed herself to retreat from the boundary—not fleeing, exactly, but choosing a distance that preserved the Grove’s secrets for another hour, another night, another chance. The heartstone’s glow dimmed to a gentle, patient ember, as if satisfied that Rory had chosen the safest course for now. The nocturnal world outside breathed hard for a moment and then settled into a quiet that resembled sleep, though Rory knew sleep would be a stranger tonight. London’s distant sounds—an occasional car, a far-off siren—filtered through the air as if the Grove could not quite keep out the ordinary and would not pretend to try. The boundary’s hum decreased to a shallow murmur, then faded as if the grove itself had closed a door in its own mind and decided to wait for a more careful guest. Rory stood for a long moment, the pendant warm against her chest and the scar on her wrist tingling faintly as though answering the call of a sentiment she’d learned to hide from others. She looked again toward the boundary, toward the place where the line between worlds wore its most delicate edges, and listened for a sound that would tell her she’d chosen wrongly. There was nothing definitive—only the memory of a visitor who would return if she allowed it to, and the sense that the Grove would continue to exist, stubborn, patient, and forever patient with those who approached with care. When she finally turned away, the grove’s quiet seemed to adjust itself around her like a cloak. The wildflowers bent a little farther as she passed, as if they offered a blessing or perhaps a warning to any who would follow in the future. The ancient oak’s shadow stretched long across the ground and covered her like a door she could step through only if she chose to believe in it. The boundary stones remained where they were, rounded and weathered by time, now listening to the world’s ordinary noises again as if nothing had happened. Her steps carried her away along a path that ran behind the boundary, toward Richmond Park’s more open stretch where the fountains darkened into the night’s quiet, and the city’s glare felt distant enough to become part of another life’s story. The pendant’s warmth did not abandon her; it glowed softly, a patient, stubborn glow that promised there would be more nights to come—nights when time would stretch in the Grove’s favor and reveal what lay beyond the door she’d dared not step through tonight. Somewhere behind her, the silhouette did not vanish completely. It remained, a suggestion beyond sight, an almost-friendly reminder that this wasn’t a place where a single hour mattered more than the truth. It was the kind of place where a life could be rearranged by a choice left unsettled, by a doorway left gently ajar. As Rory walked away, the grove’s memory pressed close, not as a threat but as a quiet companion that knew the value of restraint. The Heartstone Pendant rested against her chest with a patient, even heartbeat. It did not demand action; it offered a possibility, a signal, a path through a door that could stay closed a little longer. And Rory, who preferred to think with her head and feel with her heart, walked toward the city’s ordinary glow and the life she could still hold without losing herself entirely to a place that never forgot its old songs. The night kept to itself as she moved, leaving behind the scent of damp earth and a tremor of unease that would not quite surrender to sleep. The Grove remained behind the boundary—an ancient, patient thing that would wait for her again, when she chose to listen more closely and perhaps to speak in a voice that could coax the door to open, not merely to lean in its direction and watch. And somewhere in the depths of that waiting, the Heartstone’s crimson glow settled into a quiet, unfailing spark that promised one truth Rory could not forget: she wasn’t alone. The Grove simply refused to name the other presence, choosing instead to surround her with the kind of watchful, patient presence that felt almost protective and inherently unsettling all at once. She moved on, the park’s night air brushing against her cheeks like a cool hand, the city’s distant hum rising to greet her as if it, too, had waited for this moment of restraint, this choice to hold back, this decision to return to the ordinary world without laying hands on the extraordinary door she’d found at the Grove’s edge. The pendant’s warmth remained, an ever-present little rebellion against fear, a small spark that warned her not to forget what lay at stake—the possibility that a life could be changed not by force but by timing, by patience, by the gentle invitation of a doorway left deliberately unforced. The night pressed on, and Rory walked with it, a courier of a different sort, carrying with her not just packages but a secret map she hoped to read correctly when time allowed her to try again.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"she said softly, the word hanging on the air as though it were a foreign object someone had dropped on the ground [softly]"
1"she whispered into the night, as if she were speaking to Eva who had once whispered a warning into her ear about the kind of danger a person could never fully prepare for [once fully]"
2"she spoke aloud this time, but not loud enough to break the grove’s intimate hush [enough]"
68.4940% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount6348
totalAiIsmAdverbs20
found
0
adverb"completely"
count2
1
adverb"deliberately"
count1
2
adverb"gently"
count2
3
adverb"intensely"
count1
4
adverb"perfectly"
count1
5
adverb"quickly"
count1
6
adverb"slightly"
count4
7
adverb"slowly"
count1
8
adverb"softly"
count2
9
adverb"ever so slightly"
count1
10
adverb"really"
count1
11
adverb"truly"
count3
highlights
0"completely"
1"deliberately"
2"gently"
3"intensely"
4"perfectly"
5"quickly"
6"slightly"
7"slowly"
8"softly"
9"ever so slightly"
10"really"
11"truly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
65.3434% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount6348
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"luminous"
count1
1
word"tapestry"
count1
2
word"beacon"
count1
3
word"tinge"
count1
4
word"throb"
count1
5
word"flicker"
count1
6
word"glistening"
count1
7
word"glided"
count1
8
word"wavered"
count1
9
word"calculating"
count1
10
word"methodical"
count1
11
word"unsettled"
count2
12
word"stark"
count1
13
word"weight"
count5
14
word"echo"
count1
15
word"unravel"
count2
highlights
0"luminous"
1"tapestry"
2"beacon"
3"tinge"
4"throb"
5"flicker"
6"glistening"
7"glided"
8"wavered"
9"calculating"
10"methodical"
11"unsettled"
12"stark"
13"weight"
14"echo"
15"unravel"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of this moment"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences228
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount12
narrationSentences228
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
1"seemed to"
2"tend to"
3"appeared to"
4"tried to"
5"begin to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount12
totalSentences229
matches
0"was that time"
1"understanding that the"
2"realized that she"
3"find that the"
4"realized that she"
5"realized that she"
6"was that something"
7"was that truths"
8"decided that she"
9"find that night"
10"feeling that a"
11"satisfied that Rory"
28.2698% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs76
mean82.49
std20.53
cv0.249
sampleLengths
0102
1113
286
377
460
578
683
768
893
9113
1076
1153
1265
1390
14101
1575
1698
1798
1880
1973
20119
2167
2256
2390
24111
2563
2662
2773
2886
2969
3084
3197
32106
3337
3452
3570
3677
3778
3885
3947
40109
4160
4269
4384
4480
4570
4652
4774
4888
4989
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount9
totalSentences228
matches
0"been draped"
1"been told"
2"was asked"
3"being drawn"
4"being erased"
5"being weighed"
6"being restored"
7"been laid"
8"were, rounded"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount8
totalVerbs993
matches
0"was walking"
1"were counting"
2"were speaking"
3"was trespassing"
4"were offering"
5"was listening"
6"were testing"
7"were asking"
85.2773% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount6286
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped mark"
1"single, far-off heartbeat"
adverbCount271
adverbRatio0.043111676741966275
lyAdverbCount74
lyAdverbRatio0.011772192173083042
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences229
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences229
mean27.38
std11.92
cv0.435
sampleLengths
024
119
229
330
425
514
627
722
825
915
1023
1130
1218
1312
1430
1535
1641
1719
1813
1914
2051
2123
2217
2343
2410
2532
2626
2723
2815
2925
3030
3118
3241
3354
3436
3540
3617
3736
3830
3935
4024
4135
429
4322
4425
4533
4643
4734
4841
4935
31.6594% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats42
diversityRatio0.14847161572052403
totalSentences229
uniqueOpeners34
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she whispered, testing the name on her own lips as if it might define her anew (whisper, test define)"
1"she said softly, the word hanging on the air as though it were a foreign object someone had dropped on the ground (say softly, hang on be drop)"
2"she whispered into the night, as if she were speaking to Eva who had once whispered a warning into her ear about the kind of danger a person could never fully prepare for (whisper speak once whisper does not never fully prepare for)"
3"she found herself whispering, the words leaving her mouth with a gentleness that surprised herself (find leave surprise)"
4"she spoke aloud this time, but not loud enough to break the grove’s intimate hush (speak break be hush)"
75.2379%