| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 87.74% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1223 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 1.88% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1223 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "throb" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "comforting" | | 5 | "familiar" | | 6 | "footsteps" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "rhythmic" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "measured" | | 11 | "could feel" | | 12 | "perfect" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 136 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 136 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 136 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1213 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 96.37% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 24 | | wordCount | 1212 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 1.07 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Isolde | 4 | | Fae | 2 | | March | 1 | | Rory | 13 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.964 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 84.21% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Something that seemed to swallow her light" | | 1 | "as though hitting a wall of black water" |
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| 35.12% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.649 | | wordCount | 1213 | | matches | | 0 | "not unpleasant, exactly, but out of place" | | 1 | "Not the ordinary darkness of night in a forest, but something thicker" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 136 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 33.69 | | std | 21.22 | | cv | 0.63 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 54 | | 1 | 58 | | 2 | 58 | | 3 | 61 | | 4 | 48 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 55 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 30 | | 9 | 29 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 42 | | 12 | 60 | | 13 | 30 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 60 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 67 | | 18 | 34 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 43 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 70 | | 24 | 37 | | 25 | 48 | | 26 | 37 | | 27 | 35 | | 28 | 36 | | 29 | 33 | | 30 | 49 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 42 | | 33 | 31 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 2 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 136 | | matches | | 0 | "were supposed" | | 1 | "being circled" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 189 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 136 | | ratio | 0.059 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant at her throat pulsed once—a single throb of warmth against her skin—then went cold and still." | | 1 | "A smell, first—not unpleasant, exactly, but out of place." | | 2 | "She should have heard something—the scuff of her trainers, the crunch of scattered twigs." | | 3 | "The tree was exactly as she remembered it—the trunk split cleanly down the middle, the two halves leaning away from each other like dancers frozen mid-step." | | 4 | "But the footsteps continued—crunch, pause, crunch—growing louder." | | 5 | "She jerked the phone toward it and caught—something." | | 6 | "Wildflowers bloomed between them—impossible flowers in impossible colors, glowing faintly in the dark." | | 7 | "As she crossed the threshold, she heard them behind her—the things that wore the sound of footsteps like masks." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1224 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 47 | | adverbRatio | 0.03839869281045752 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012254901960784314 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 136 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 136 | | mean | 8.92 | | std | 6.97 | | cv | 0.782 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 33 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 27 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 26 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 56.37% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.38235294117647056 | | totalSentences | 136 | | uniqueOpeners | 52 | |
| 59.52% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "Probably a fox." | | 1 | "Of course it was." |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "She pulled her jacket tighter" | | 1 | "She'd walked this route three" | | 2 | "She'd know it when she" | | 3 | "She pulled up her mental" | | 4 | "She chose left because left" | | 5 | "She waited, counting her breaths." | | 6 | "She kept walking." | | 7 | "Her footsteps made no sound" | | 8 | "She should have heard something—the" | | 9 | "She stopped walking." | | 10 | "It had to be." | | 11 | "She swept the phone's torch" | | 12 | "She could hear the rhythm" | | 13 | "Her voice came out smaller" | | 14 | "She fumbled with her free" | | 15 | "She jerked the phone toward" | | 16 | "She spun again, sweeping the" | | 17 | "She was being circled." | | 18 | "She ran forward, through the" | | 19 | "They stopped at the boundary." |
| | ratio | 0.205 | |
| 98.39% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 81 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "The taxi dropped her at" | | 1 | "Rory stood on the empty" | | 2 | "The pendant at her throat" | | 3 | "The text from Isolde had" | | 4 | "Midnight could mean the stroke" | | 5 | "Rory should have asked for" | | 6 | "She pulled her jacket tighter" | | 7 | "The park gates were locked," | | 8 | "The pendant hung quiet against" | | 9 | "The path into the park" | | 10 | "The moon hung thin and" | | 11 | "Rory used her phone's torch," | | 12 | "The trees pressed close on" | | 13 | "She'd walked this route three" | | 14 | "The standing stones that marked" | | 15 | "She'd know it when she" | | 16 | "The path forked." | | 17 | "Rory stopped, playing her light" | | 18 | "Neither looked familiar." | | 19 | "She pulled up her mental" |
| | ratio | 0.723 | |
| 44.64% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant hung quiet against her sternum, a small weight that should have been comforting." | | 1 | "The trees pulled back, creating a corridor of space that felt deliberate, designed." | | 2 | "As she crossed the threshold, she heard them behind her—the things that wore the sound of footsteps like masks." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |